Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
Natures S.O.S.
Doggerel Dave said:
What percentage of the population deserves to go anyway? You have clearly diagnosed the sickness, but how many listen? I do even as it makes me feel impotent.
As usual Tobani, you have clear vision, and for that I must thank you.
June 2nd, 2025 19:47
Doggerel Dave said:
What percentage of the population deserves to go anyway? You have clearly diagnosed the sickness, but how many listen? I do even as it makes me feel impotent.
As usual Tobani, you have clear vision, and for that I must thank you.
June 2nd, 2025 19:47
Natures S.O.S.
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your poem powerfully captures nature’s despair and humanity’s reckless destruction. The raw emotion and urgent message strike deep, demanding reflection. A heartbreaking yet necessary call to action before it’s too late.
June 2nd, 2025 13:57
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your poem powerfully captures nature’s despair and humanity’s reckless destruction. The raw emotion and urgent message strike deep, demanding reflection. A heartbreaking yet necessary call to action before it’s too late.
June 2nd, 2025 13:57
Natures S.O.S.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This reads like one of the judgments being poured out in Revelation. Most people miss it, but that book is highly ecological—God’s grief and anger are deeply tied to the way humanity has ravaged the earth. That’s part of why there’s a new creation in Revelation 21.Your poem is totally in that spirit. I highly approve. This is a very, very important ecological, and I would even say spiritual, work. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
June 2nd, 2025 07:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This reads like one of the judgments being poured out in Revelation. Most people miss it, but that book is highly ecological—God’s grief and anger are deeply tied to the way humanity has ravaged the earth. That’s part of why there’s a new creation in Revelation 21.Your poem is totally in that spirit. I highly approve. This is a very, very important ecological, and I would even say spiritual, work. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
June 2nd, 2025 07:29
Natures S.O.S.
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful point made Tobani it is hard not to stomp out flowers in the path of a riot. The balance of nature is overturned when the population of a species outgrows its controls. Answer that no one wants to see is (Too many people) a fave for the message my friend
June 2nd, 2025 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful point made Tobani it is hard not to stomp out flowers in the path of a riot. The balance of nature is overturned when the population of a species outgrows its controls. Answer that no one wants to see is (Too many people) a fave for the message my friend
June 2nd, 2025 04:31
Natures S.O.S.
David Wakeling said:
This is an important poem with an important message.The amount of destruction is alarming especial of the extinction of species.Sad but true.
June 2nd, 2025 04:14
David Wakeling said:
This is an important poem with an important message.The amount of destruction is alarming especial of the extinction of species.Sad but true.
June 2nd, 2025 04:14
Natures S.O.S.
arqios said:
When we listen and heed nature we survive in harmony together 🕊️🙏🏻
June 2nd, 2025 03:07
arqios said:
When we listen and heed nature we survive in harmony together 🕊️🙏🏻
June 2nd, 2025 03:07
Jolly Fun!!!
RSM0812 said:
Lol I\'m not sure if I feel soor for Mary or I want to tell her to quit eating so much food.
June 1st, 2025 23:33
RSM0812 said:
Lol I\'m not sure if I feel soor for Mary or I want to tell her to quit eating so much food.
June 1st, 2025 23:33
Broken Dreams.
Cirawrites01 said:
It really hurts when your dreams break apart and all the things you hold deep in, you can\'t even express it cause it\'d hurt everyone around you, I really love this short verse and I relate a lot to it
June 1st, 2025 22:41
Cirawrites01 said:
It really hurts when your dreams break apart and all the things you hold deep in, you can\'t even express it cause it\'d hurt everyone around you, I really love this short verse and I relate a lot to it
June 1st, 2025 22:41
Jolly Fun!!!
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re hilarious. So this is Harry\'s princess, eh?! La dee. Poor girl. I hope he and she manage to live happily ever after despite these minor incidents. Charming and beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
June 1st, 2025 11:09
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re hilarious. So this is Harry\'s princess, eh?! La dee. Poor girl. I hope he and she manage to live happily ever after despite these minor incidents. Charming and beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
June 1st, 2025 11:09
Jolly Fun!!!
arqios said:
Yes, now it\'s Mary\'s turn; unless of course I missed something.🙏🏻🕊️
June 1st, 2025 01:46
arqios said:
Yes, now it\'s Mary\'s turn; unless of course I missed something.🙏🏻🕊️
June 1st, 2025 01:46
Jolly Fun!!!
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Tobani.
Don\'t mention Greggs, we cannot walk passed the shops without going in. LOL
Andy
June 1st, 2025 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Tobani.
Don\'t mention Greggs, we cannot walk passed the shops without going in. LOL
Andy
June 1st, 2025 01:24
Jolly Fun!!!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A lot of fun! Thanks for the laugh! Good to see Mary out on her own, and to know it\'s not just Harry! LOL! Wonderful job! 🌹👏
May 31st, 2025 07:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A lot of fun! Thanks for the laugh! Good to see Mary out on her own, and to know it\'s not just Harry! LOL! Wonderful job! 🌹👏
May 31st, 2025 07:26
Jolly Fun!!!
sorenbarrett said:
Another fun read Tobani keep those smiles coming.
May 31st, 2025 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
Another fun read Tobani keep those smiles coming.
May 31st, 2025 04:13
Jolly Fun!!!
David Wakeling said:
That Mary she is her own worst enemy. Yet another fall from grace. Fun read mi amigo
May 31st, 2025 04:04
David Wakeling said:
That Mary she is her own worst enemy. Yet another fall from grace. Fun read mi amigo
May 31st, 2025 04:04
Convert To Peace.
sorenbarrett said:
I loved not only the message of this poem but the way it was said. Everything was stated in a positive manner. The wording was in balance in all directions, stanza to stanza, line to line, meaning to inverted meaning it came across as a yin and yang so perfect and yet on the positive side a fave
May 30th, 2025 04:24
sorenbarrett said:
I loved not only the message of this poem but the way it was said. Everything was stated in a positive manner. The wording was in balance in all directions, stanza to stanza, line to line, meaning to inverted meaning it came across as a yin and yang so perfect and yet on the positive side a fave
May 30th, 2025 04:24
Convert To Peace.
David Wakeling said:
A wonderful sentiment and prayer. I have always been a pacifist so this music to my ears. Well done
May 30th, 2025 04:03
David Wakeling said:
A wonderful sentiment and prayer. I have always been a pacifist so this music to my ears. Well done
May 30th, 2025 04:03
Success Of Lies.
Goldfinch60 said:
He obviously became a politician then Tobani.
Andy
May 30th, 2025 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
He obviously became a politician then Tobani.
Andy
May 30th, 2025 01:18
Success Of Lies.
Cheeky Missy said:
That twist in concluding, the entire sarcastic discussion is so deliciously rendered it simply drips with burning hot sarcasm. Oh! How gorgeously rendered with excellent imagery and a subtly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing. Superb.
May 29th, 2025 11:24
Cheeky Missy said:
That twist in concluding, the entire sarcastic discussion is so deliciously rendered it simply drips with burning hot sarcasm. Oh! How gorgeously rendered with excellent imagery and a subtly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing. Superb.
May 29th, 2025 11:24
Success Of Lies.
Damaso said:
I feel a poem in the form of a slap that awakens, a perfect discourse that leaves us with more questions than before, but with a very clear reflection that we are very distracted. It\'s always a pleasure to read you, sir.
May 29th, 2025 09:45
Damaso said:
I feel a poem in the form of a slap that awakens, a perfect discourse that leaves us with more questions than before, but with a very clear reflection that we are very distracted. It\'s always a pleasure to read you, sir.
May 29th, 2025 09:45
Success Of Lies.
Doggerel Dave said:
An oblique view of the state the world is in. Lies and cons everywhere.
Very much enjoyed this for it\'s irony.
May 29th, 2025 09:14
Doggerel Dave said:
An oblique view of the state the world is in. Lies and cons everywhere.
Very much enjoyed this for it\'s irony.
May 29th, 2025 09:14
Success Of Lies.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Man, I have read this three times now. This is so subversive, I LOVE IT and find my home in it. Thank you for writing this my friend! 🌹🌹🌹🌹👏👏👏👏
May 29th, 2025 08:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Man, I have read this three times now. This is so subversive, I LOVE IT and find my home in it. Thank you for writing this my friend! 🌹🌹🌹🌹👏👏👏👏
May 29th, 2025 08:21
Success Of Lies.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Spoken like a prophet of plainness! And the funny thing is, even now, the Son\'s followers will still fall mostly deaf to its message! Not a judgment toward anyone, just an observation. I am a believer so this could apply to me too, but I hear it\'s message loud and clear, my friend. I hope and pray, fuck that, I will shout it out along with you. This is why the Jesus Facepalm meme was created! Because even plain speech and common sense gets ignored by the ones who supposedly hold \"The way, the truth, and the life\". 🌹👏
May 29th, 2025 08:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Spoken like a prophet of plainness! And the funny thing is, even now, the Son\'s followers will still fall mostly deaf to its message! Not a judgment toward anyone, just an observation. I am a believer so this could apply to me too, but I hear it\'s message loud and clear, my friend. I hope and pray, fuck that, I will shout it out along with you. This is why the Jesus Facepalm meme was created! Because even plain speech and common sense gets ignored by the ones who supposedly hold \"The way, the truth, and the life\". 🌹👏
May 29th, 2025 08:20
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