Comments received on poems by TobaniNataiella
Christmas May Pass Them By
sorenbarrett said:
You have hit on the head the very issue of Christmas. It should be a time of giving not receiving and yet in our consumer society all we think of is what we can get. A lovely poem that expresses the true spirit of Christmas.
December 3rd, 2024 06:02
sorenbarrett said:
You have hit on the head the very issue of Christmas. It should be a time of giving not receiving and yet in our consumer society all we think of is what we can get. A lovely poem that expresses the true spirit of Christmas.
December 3rd, 2024 06:02
Christmas May Pass Them By
arqios said:
A highly compelling piece that challenges readers to look beyond their immediate surroundings and act with compassion and generosity.. After all it is all too easy to forget what Christmas is really all about. Thanks for sharing.
December 3rd, 2024 05:33
arqios said:
A highly compelling piece that challenges readers to look beyond their immediate surroundings and act with compassion and generosity.. After all it is all too easy to forget what Christmas is really all about. Thanks for sharing.
December 3rd, 2024 05:33
Memories of the 70`s (Music Fans)
David Wakeling said:
WOW this is quite a list. It took me on a trip down amnesia lane. Wonderful memories here. Well done.
December 2nd, 2024 21:42
David Wakeling said:
WOW this is quite a list. It took me on a trip down amnesia lane. Wonderful memories here. Well done.
December 2nd, 2024 21:42
Memories of the 70`s (Music Fans)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful write! I have a very eclectic ear and, truth be told, was listening to a lot of 60s and 70s music back in July. The Doors, Pink Floyd, Led Zeppelin, David Bowie, ABBA, Donna Sommer, The Carpenters, Donovan, The Beatles, The Stones, Queen, Black Sabbath (of course), Neil Diamond, Chic, The Young Rascals, etc...had a whole playlist going! All this to say, well done my friend and thank you for bringing back my own memories of the summer and great music!
December 2nd, 2024 14:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful write! I have a very eclectic ear and, truth be told, was listening to a lot of 60s and 70s music back in July. The Doors, Pink Floyd, Led Zeppelin, David Bowie, ABBA, Donna Sommer, The Carpenters, Donovan, The Beatles, The Stones, Queen, Black Sabbath (of course), Neil Diamond, Chic, The Young Rascals, etc...had a whole playlist going! All this to say, well done my friend and thank you for bringing back my own memories of the summer and great music!
December 2nd, 2024 14:05
She Says Goodbye
teardrop said:
I am a huge fan of rhyming poetry and yours was a pleasure to read. Loved the story it told and your rhyming did not feel forced but relaxed as your story unfolded. I am looking forward to reading more of your writtings....
December 2nd, 2024 13:57
teardrop said:
I am a huge fan of rhyming poetry and yours was a pleasure to read. Loved the story it told and your rhyming did not feel forced but relaxed as your story unfolded. I am looking forward to reading more of your writtings....
December 2nd, 2024 13:57
Memories of the 70`s (Music Fans)
Teddy.15 said:
Oh yes ever last one you brought me on a memory journey to when I used to live it up in London at all the best disco\'s thank you!!!! 💜
December 2nd, 2024 12:59
Teddy.15 said:
Oh yes ever last one you brought me on a memory journey to when I used to live it up in London at all the best disco\'s thank you!!!! 💜
December 2nd, 2024 12:59
Memories of the 70`s (Music Fans)
sorenbarrett said:
Many memories of the past. I remember them all and many more thanks for the memory trip
December 2nd, 2024 09:45
sorenbarrett said:
Many memories of the past. I remember them all and many more thanks for the memory trip
December 2nd, 2024 09:45
She Says Goodbye
Cassie58 said:
So very hard to let go. You have penned those emotions so well here. A heart felt write. Well done.
December 2nd, 2024 08:59
Cassie58 said:
So very hard to let go. You have penned those emotions so well here. A heart felt write. Well done.
December 2nd, 2024 08:59
Memories of the 70`s (Music Fans)
Neville said:
Now that brought back quite a few memories .. not all to my personal taste but you got just enough to keep me going for the best part of a night .. with much respect, this proved to be an enjoyable introduction to your ink my friend .. Neville
December 2nd, 2024 08:40
Neville said:
Now that brought back quite a few memories .. not all to my personal taste but you got just enough to keep me going for the best part of a night .. with much respect, this proved to be an enjoyable introduction to your ink my friend .. Neville
December 2nd, 2024 08:40
Memories of the 70`s (Music Fans)
cellinic said:
A nice emotionally and culturally motivated write. Many thanks)
December 2nd, 2024 05:49
cellinic said:
A nice emotionally and culturally motivated write. Many thanks)
December 2nd, 2024 05:49
Memories of the 70`s (Music Fans)
arqios said:
What what a songlist, gotta make a mixtape of this oh but perhaps just use Spotify or Youtube now... lol
December 2nd, 2024 05:42
arqios said:
What what a songlist, gotta make a mixtape of this oh but perhaps just use Spotify or Youtube now... lol
December 2nd, 2024 05:42
She Says Goodbye
Tristan Robert Lange said:
It’s so hard to let go and say behind and you have expressed that so well in this poem! Well done! 🌹👏
December 1st, 2024 13:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
It’s so hard to let go and say behind and you have expressed that so well in this poem! Well done! 🌹👏
December 1st, 2024 13:15
She Says Goodbye
arqios said:
Okay, so I double backed and went to the previous poem and our conversation about it. Boy, this feels like there is a bit of a step back moment, still emotional but more in control (sorry for this unencompassing word, ironic to its meaning, in this context) but still exudes the evocative expression.
December 1st, 2024 06:19
arqios said:
Okay, so I double backed and went to the previous poem and our conversation about it. Boy, this feels like there is a bit of a step back moment, still emotional but more in control (sorry for this unencompassing word, ironic to its meaning, in this context) but still exudes the evocative expression.
December 1st, 2024 06:19
She Says Goodbye
sorenbarrett said:
Saying goodbye as often a very difficult thing to do. We form attachments that are not easily broken. This poem emphasizes such feelings. Very nicely written.
December 1st, 2024 05:47
sorenbarrett said:
Saying goodbye as often a very difficult thing to do. We form attachments that are not easily broken. This poem emphasizes such feelings. Very nicely written.
December 1st, 2024 05:47
Tomorrow It Could Be You
Thad Wilk said:
A very touching
and poignant write 😢
Very evocative,
wonderfully woven
and my pleasure to recite!! 👏
Thank you for sharing
best regards ✌️ peace 🕊️. Thad
November 30th, 2024 22:51
Thad Wilk said:
A very touching
and poignant write 😢
Very evocative,
wonderfully woven
and my pleasure to recite!! 👏
Thank you for sharing
best regards ✌️ peace 🕊️. Thad
November 30th, 2024 22:51
Tomorrow It Could Be You
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I 💯 concur with you. Very, very true! Thank you for raising up such an important mirror for all of us to look into. Well done! 🌹🙏
November 30th, 2024 14:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I 💯 concur with you. Very, very true! Thank you for raising up such an important mirror for all of us to look into. Well done! 🌹🙏
November 30th, 2024 14:40
Tomorrow It Could Be You
Cassie58 said:
Homelessness can happen to anyone. We should never forget that and show some compassion. Not wise to give money as that can be spent on addictions. But drinks, food , clothes and blankets a yes yes. Nicely composed stanzas. Lines flow smoothly.
November 30th, 2024 11:59
Cassie58 said:
Homelessness can happen to anyone. We should never forget that and show some compassion. Not wise to give money as that can be spent on addictions. But drinks, food , clothes and blankets a yes yes. Nicely composed stanzas. Lines flow smoothly.
November 30th, 2024 11:59
Tomorrow It Could Be You
arqios said:
So true and so aggravating to the inner spirit. Our empathy levels are quite low for an advanced specie.
November 30th, 2024 07:56
arqios said:
So true and so aggravating to the inner spirit. Our empathy levels are quite low for an advanced specie.
November 30th, 2024 07:56
Tomorrow It Could Be You
Soman Ragavan said:
rrow It Could Be You
My comments on the poem “Tomorrow it could be you” by Tobiani Nataiella
Very touching and apt poem. See my poem “Of banquets and bins” on mypoeticside.com :
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-166622
Soman Ragavan
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November 30th, 2024 06:31
Soman Ragavan said:
rrow It Could Be You
My comments on the poem “Tomorrow it could be you” by Tobiani Nataiella
Very touching and apt poem. See my poem “Of banquets and bins” on mypoeticside.com :
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-166622
Soman Ragavan
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November 30th, 2024 06:31
Hanging On by My Fingertips.
Cassie58 said:
Sad when love is on the downward slope. Can be retrieved with effort, but not everyone has the energy to invest in that outcome. Nicely penned composition. I enjoyed my visit.
November 29th, 2024 12:36
Cassie58 said:
Sad when love is on the downward slope. Can be retrieved with effort, but not everyone has the energy to invest in that outcome. Nicely penned composition. I enjoyed my visit.
November 29th, 2024 12:36
Hanging On by My Fingertips.
arqios said:
This is like that slow motion all happening at once scene where everything begins to take on a cutting edge clarity but we are unable to do anything about it. Ah, life… at least the poetry came out to log this moment in a life.
November 29th, 2024 06:32
arqios said:
This is like that slow motion all happening at once scene where everything begins to take on a cutting edge clarity but we are unable to do anything about it. Ah, life… at least the poetry came out to log this moment in a life.
November 29th, 2024 06:32
Hanging On by My Fingertips.
Doggerel Dave said:
Sad it sounds, but by now a distant memory. Glad to know you survived. I really don\'t think it necessary to lash yourself in this way.
Notifications show you commented on my poem, but for what is some technical reason probably, I have no access to it..... (I have few enough responses, I can\'t afford to miss one...😂)
November 29th, 2024 06:15
Doggerel Dave said:
Sad it sounds, but by now a distant memory. Glad to know you survived. I really don\'t think it necessary to lash yourself in this way.
Notifications show you commented on my poem, but for what is some technical reason probably, I have no access to it..... (I have few enough responses, I can\'t afford to miss one...😂)
November 29th, 2024 06:15
Hanging On by My Fingertips.
sorenbarrett said:
When relationships fade away, it is disturbing. This poem speaks to this, and I can feel the emotion in it. Nicely written.
November 29th, 2024 04:49
sorenbarrett said:
When relationships fade away, it is disturbing. This poem speaks to this, and I can feel the emotion in it. Nicely written.
November 29th, 2024 04:49
The Lunatics are On the Move
Cassie58 said:
Yes, the lunatics are on the move and the world becomes more dangerous by the day. Nuts isn’t it? Half the world hungry while billions is spent on war mongering. Makes you wanna jet off to Mars. Strong piece. I hear you.
November 28th, 2024 09:33
Cassie58 said:
Yes, the lunatics are on the move and the world becomes more dangerous by the day. Nuts isn’t it? Half the world hungry while billions is spent on war mongering. Makes you wanna jet off to Mars. Strong piece. I hear you.
November 28th, 2024 09:33
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