Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
Hang Your Head in Shame
Cassie58 said:
And this is one of the reasons I am no fan of organized religion. It has been sickening what has occurred and what was hidden for so many years and is now known and is still ongoing. A tough read. So many little children suffered abuse at the hands of those who were trusted. Children’s homes too. A brave write Tobani and a very necessary one. Not an easy read, but an essential one. Wishing you a calm and peaceful Tuesday.
March 11th, 2025 05:02
Cassie58 said:
And this is one of the reasons I am no fan of organized religion. It has been sickening what has occurred and what was hidden for so many years and is now known and is still ongoing. A tough read. So many little children suffered abuse at the hands of those who were trusted. Children’s homes too. A brave write Tobani and a very necessary one. Not an easy read, but an essential one. Wishing you a calm and peaceful Tuesday.
March 11th, 2025 05:02
Hang Your Head in Shame
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful and daring write. It is ironic that sex is seen as something dirty and sin by religious people yet happens by those promoting religion to the weakest in their care. Not just in religion but all organizations, social settings, even the family it seems a human condition that is too painful to unearth in order to address. A most heart felt write.
March 11th, 2025 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful and daring write. It is ironic that sex is seen as something dirty and sin by religious people yet happens by those promoting religion to the weakest in their care. Not just in religion but all organizations, social settings, even the family it seems a human condition that is too painful to unearth in order to address. A most heart felt write.
March 11th, 2025 04:51
Hang Your Head in Shame
arqios said:
No, not an easy read. And free moral agency is not something over the centuries that humanity has been able to achieve, attested too by the fact of child abuse and systemic cover ups.
March 11th, 2025 03:25
arqios said:
No, not an easy read. And free moral agency is not something over the centuries that humanity has been able to achieve, attested too by the fact of child abuse and systemic cover ups.
March 11th, 2025 03:25
Hang Your Head in Shame
orchidee said:
It\'s a sweeping statement of me to say \'I blame the [Roman] Catholics\' who some see as an Antichrist, the \'Beast\' in Revelation in the New Testament. Yet they\'re not allowed to marry, by some stupid man-mad rule. We had a secret one near us, bring shame on the community.
March 11th, 2025 03:22
orchidee said:
It\'s a sweeping statement of me to say \'I blame the [Roman] Catholics\' who some see as an Antichrist, the \'Beast\' in Revelation in the New Testament. Yet they\'re not allowed to marry, by some stupid man-mad rule. We had a secret one near us, bring shame on the community.
March 11th, 2025 03:22
Lost In a Snowstorm.
Cassie58 said:
How clever. Have you been rescued yet? An original idea Tobani. Good job I had my glasses on to read you.
March 10th, 2025 22:10
Cassie58 said:
How clever. Have you been rescued yet? An original idea Tobani. Good job I had my glasses on to read you.
March 10th, 2025 22:10
Lost In a Snowstorm.
Neville said:
Bravo PL .. such little flakes of brilliance could not go entirely unnoticed .. Neville
March 10th, 2025 13:15
Neville said:
Bravo PL .. such little flakes of brilliance could not go entirely unnoticed .. Neville
March 10th, 2025 13:15
Lost In a Snowstorm.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Loved the minimalism! Perfect. A fave for sure. 🌹👏
March 10th, 2025 08:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Loved the minimalism! Perfect. A fave for sure. 🌹👏
March 10th, 2025 08:11
Half A Bag Of S... !!!
teardrop said:
I;ll try to carry half for you rif possible. There may be that one friend who mught take it all for a day just for a short release. But those friends are far and few. Nice write, great concept and so very true.
March 10th, 2025 08:05
teardrop said:
I;ll try to carry half for you rif possible. There may be that one friend who mught take it all for a day just for a short release. But those friends are far and few. Nice write, great concept and so very true.
March 10th, 2025 08:05
Lost In a Snowstorm.
Doggerel Dave said:
Loathsome................................................................................
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.......................................................................................................................................... snow.
March 10th, 2025 07:01
Doggerel Dave said:
Loathsome................................................................................
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.......................................................................................................................................... snow.
March 10th, 2025 07:01
Lost In a Snowstorm.
sorenbarrett said:
Now that was clever! Almost missed it and with my poor eyesight had to squint. Reaching across various dimensions you have made your point with an exclamation point. Loved it
March 10th, 2025 04:36
sorenbarrett said:
Now that was clever! Almost missed it and with my poor eyesight had to squint. Reaching across various dimensions you have made your point with an exclamation point. Loved it
March 10th, 2025 04:36
Fun On A Sunnier Sunday
Goldfinch60 said:
Good thoughts Tobani especially the last one, we should build bridges.
Andy
March 10th, 2025 02:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Good thoughts Tobani especially the last one, we should build bridges.
Andy
March 10th, 2025 02:07
Love Is In The Air
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What\'s love got to do with it? Well, in this poem particularly...EVERYTHING! LOL! Well done, Tobani! Faved. 🌹👏
March 9th, 2025 22:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What\'s love got to do with it? Well, in this poem particularly...EVERYTHING! LOL! Well done, Tobani! Faved. 🌹👏
March 9th, 2025 22:39
Cannot Sleep Again
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh, how very, VERY beautiful! I love it! Pardon me if that\'s unacceptable, please, but I do. How deliciously rendered with a palpable poignancy and such exquisite imagery! Thank you very much for sharing! I\'ve both tinnitus and answers, but only if you truly want them. Thank you again!
March 9th, 2025 16:01
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh, how very, VERY beautiful! I love it! Pardon me if that\'s unacceptable, please, but I do. How deliciously rendered with a palpable poignancy and such exquisite imagery! Thank you very much for sharing! I\'ve both tinnitus and answers, but only if you truly want them. Thank you again!
March 9th, 2025 16:01
The Success Of My Dreams.
RSM0812 said:
It reminds me it takes two to tango. You can\'t let other people bring you down to their level. I think everyone knows a person like that. Lol
March 9th, 2025 15:53
RSM0812 said:
It reminds me it takes two to tango. You can\'t let other people bring you down to their level. I think everyone knows a person like that. Lol
March 9th, 2025 15:53
Half A Bag Of S... !!!
Cheeky Missy said:
Nothing like pseudo friends to leave you to shoulder all, yes, ALL of it, eh? Why must this gorgeous description resonate so firmly?! Suffice it, beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a wickedly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
March 9th, 2025 15:53
Cheeky Missy said:
Nothing like pseudo friends to leave you to shoulder all, yes, ALL of it, eh? Why must this gorgeous description resonate so firmly?! Suffice it, beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a wickedly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
March 9th, 2025 15:53
Fun On A Sunnier Sunday
Friendship said:
Your poem \"Wise Man Says\" conveys wisdom through a series of aphorisms that challenge conventional beliefs about materialism, authority, and personal fulfillment. It emphasizes the importance of perception, contentment, and the dangers of greed and obedience without questioning.nicely done ,Poetic Licence
March 9th, 2025 08:45
Friendship said:
Your poem \"Wise Man Says\" conveys wisdom through a series of aphorisms that challenge conventional beliefs about materialism, authority, and personal fulfillment. It emphasizes the importance of perception, contentment, and the dangers of greed and obedience without questioning.nicely done ,Poetic Licence
March 9th, 2025 08:45
Fun On A Sunnier Sunday
Cassie58 said:
Much fun here Tobani. I do love these little gems you put together for us. All good , but the fourth one has such special appeal in its humour. Have a happy sunny Sunday.
March 9th, 2025 08:33
Cassie58 said:
Much fun here Tobani. I do love these little gems you put together for us. All good , but the fourth one has such special appeal in its humour. Have a happy sunny Sunday.
March 9th, 2025 08:33
Fun On A Sunnier Sunday
Salvia.S said:
Profound wisdom wrapped in simple words.....
March 9th, 2025 06:14
Salvia.S said:
Profound wisdom wrapped in simple words.....
March 9th, 2025 06:14
Fun On A Sunnier Sunday
David Wakeling said:
Some wonderful wisdom here.I always learn so much here.
March 9th, 2025 05:13
David Wakeling said:
Some wonderful wisdom here.I always learn so much here.
March 9th, 2025 05:13
Fun On A Sunnier Sunday
sorenbarrett said:
Fun with wisdom a good combination. Very nicely said as well
March 9th, 2025 03:39
sorenbarrett said:
Fun with wisdom a good combination. Very nicely said as well
March 9th, 2025 03:39
Half A Bag Of S... !!!
Goldfinch60 said:
I would always helpo friends no matter what Tobani.
Andy
March 9th, 2025 02:52
Goldfinch60 said:
I would always helpo friends no matter what Tobani.
Andy
March 9th, 2025 02:52
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