Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence



Can You See
Cassie58 said:

So much wisdom in these words Tobani. And so well written, a long time ago too. Much appreciated.

December 19th, 2024 14:19

Comes Life
rebellion_in_sanity said:

An uplifting poem. At times I feel the need of a heavy dose. Thankfully I chanced upon it today. Loved it

December 19th, 2024 10:57

Comes Life
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

December 19th, 2024 10:24

M\"mmm !!!
DreamTiger said:

I can relate!

December 19th, 2024 08:08

Comes Life
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Agreed with our friend, arqios...this has the crescendo of a grand orchestra and leads to life-giving truth. Profound, my friend, and πŸ’― true. Well done and what a timely message...both the year it was written and now! πŸŒΉπŸ‘

December 19th, 2024 08:00

Comes Life
Cassie58 said:

Life long learning. A wonderful reminder Tobani. Thank you.

December 19th, 2024 07:20

Comes Life
Mutley Ravishes said:

Growing pains!
Great write.

December 19th, 2024 05:58

Comes Life
teardrop said:

Wpw! What a great write. Love the thought here. Thanks for the read.

December 19th, 2024 05:45

Comes Life
cellinic said:

It was an interesting and exciting read! Very persuasive! Best wishes. My like

December 19th, 2024 05:20

Comes Life
Michael Edwards said:

Great write and so appropriate in these sad times when the gap between political agendas seems to be coming ever more divisive. .

December 19th, 2024 02:55

Comes Life
arqios said:

What an orchestral Crescendo, layering and overlapping onto each other to a grand finale!

December 19th, 2024 01:56

Can You See
hzugman said:

Now I see. Nice write TN.

December 18th, 2024 19:19

Can You See
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Very impressive, my friend! Seriously love the way you played with the word β€œsee”. Well done! πŸŒΉπŸ‘

December 18th, 2024 17:46

Can You See
Thad Wilk said:

Love it! 😍
A wonderful poem
really thought provoking too! πŸ€”
Learning to write poetry
helped me \"to see\"
more clearly things through! 😊
Thanks for sharing
much enjoyed thank you,!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad

December 18th, 2024 17:10

Can You See
sorenbarrett said:

So well said, if we could only understad others motivation there would be no need for judgement.

December 18th, 2024 14:20

Imagianary Friends (Voices In My Head)
NafisaSB said:

happens to most people, but few have the guts to admit it
wonderful

December 18th, 2024 07:24

Can You See
teardrop said:

I like reading your poetry. You write as I do, experiences and emotions. I too started writting as a child, to me, it was my only release. Thank you for the read. I enjoyed it!

December 18th, 2024 07:00

Can You See
cellinic said:

A very nice and impressive reflection , provokes many thoughts and emotions... Like

December 18th, 2024 05:23

Sorry Santa / The List
Kerry said:

I must admit that I’d be more like the wife 😬 hope I get better with age! Loved the poems, thanks for sharing

December 18th, 2024 03:29

Can You See
Neville said:



Blindingly brilliant .. & no kidding .. exceptionally well done my friend .. Neville πŸ‘

December 18th, 2024 03:26

Can You See
arqios said:

Oh, now here is a mantra of my being! It also sums up quite neatly a major reason why poetry became part of me as a child. thank you for sharing! P.S. the year stamped marks the general time that I began to write as a novice, the early seventies really.

December 18th, 2024 03:08

Time Cannot Heal
Kerry said:

This reads like my life! I totally understand and hope it’s more based on fiction than fact!

December 18th, 2024 03:02

Time Cannot Heal
Neville said:



I enjoyed my visit here today .. and before I go on, just wanted to let you know that .. I also suspect from you avatar, you may follow a Buddhist path or at least be familiar with some of our Princes teachings .. Unfortunately, I am too tired having had a long day and night (hence my late visit here) but had I been more alert may have written some of the more salient points he wrote about pain and suffering, not necessarily for you, but for any others that may follow me here .. Kindest of regards, Neville πŸ˜ŽπŸ‘

December 18th, 2024 01:54

Time Cannot Heal
Dan Williams said:

The myth that \"time heals all wounds\" is a foolish attempt at consolation. At best, sometimes it can mitigate. Oh well. nice work.

December 18th, 2024 01:04

Time Cannot Heal
Thomas W Case said:

Words and actions can hurt. Very brave writing. Great job.

December 17th, 2024 22:51

Time Cannot Heal
Thad Wilk said:

An awesome poem,
poignant 😒 and emotional
and eloquently penned!! πŸ–ŠοΈ
Love the repeated lines!!
Great read my friend!!
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad

December 17th, 2024 16:51

Time Cannot Heal
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:

Someone needed to hear this message today. And released hurt through writing, can be therapeutic. A fine write.

December 17th, 2024 15:50

Time Cannot Heal
David Wakeling said:

You are right.Time does not heal anything.I think that we are meant to suffer for what reason I don\'t know

December 17th, 2024 14:44

Time Cannot Heal
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

December 17th, 2024 10:24

Time Cannot Heal
arqios said:

That brought me to a choice, a summation that should we choose it, Time could bring about a distancing that could parallel healing. The other choice stands as well. Sometimes to remain wounded is for some the only way to feel something ever again.

December 17th, 2024 08:17



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