Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
Where Do The Lonely People Go
sorenbarrett said:
You found it indeed a most clever write bringing the reader back to the begining of the poem and answering the question without directly answering it. Very nice.
January 11th, 2025 05:06
sorenbarrett said:
You found it indeed a most clever write bringing the reader back to the begining of the poem and answering the question without directly answering it. Very nice.
January 11th, 2025 05:06
As The Clouds Gently Roll On By
Dan Williams said:
What would we do without clouds to express ourselves? \"I’m in desperate need of a blue sunlit sky. As the clouds gently roll on by\" sums it up nicely.
January 11th, 2025 01:38
Dan Williams said:
What would we do without clouds to express ourselves? \"I’m in desperate need of a blue sunlit sky. As the clouds gently roll on by\" sums it up nicely.
January 11th, 2025 01:38
I Might Be A Lunatic
NafisaSB said:
i don\'t think it is being a lunatic - but definitely over optimistic - and i second all your beliefs - they are worth working for
beautifully expressed
January 11th, 2025 01:07
NafisaSB said:
i don\'t think it is being a lunatic - but definitely over optimistic - and i second all your beliefs - they are worth working for
beautifully expressed
January 11th, 2025 01:07
As The Clouds Gently Roll On By
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice One Tobani, Sweet Imagery
January 11th, 2025 00:33
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice One Tobani, Sweet Imagery
January 11th, 2025 00:33
As The Clouds Gently Roll On By
Confia.En.Tu.Corazon 87 said:
I love the passion you put into this. I can relate to how life is always changing, but without change, we can\'t grow. I love the read.
January 10th, 2025 16:23
Confia.En.Tu.Corazon 87 said:
I love the passion you put into this. I can relate to how life is always changing, but without change, we can\'t grow. I love the read.
January 10th, 2025 16:23
As The Clouds Gently Roll On By
David Wakeling said:
This is quite a plee.A man alone bargaining with a life that will not negotiate.He eventually gives in to the Master, Time.I enjoyed this
January 10th, 2025 15:25
David Wakeling said:
This is quite a plee.A man alone bargaining with a life that will not negotiate.He eventually gives in to the Master, Time.I enjoyed this
January 10th, 2025 15:25
Love and Hate
Princess Osariemen Aihie said:
Yh very difficult to seperate. Well written
January 10th, 2025 14:01
Princess Osariemen Aihie said:
Yh very difficult to seperate. Well written
January 10th, 2025 14:01
As The Clouds Gently Roll On By
Princess Osariemen Aihie said:
What a melancholic poetry. I love it.well written
January 10th, 2025 13:59
Princess Osariemen Aihie said:
What a melancholic poetry. I love it.well written
January 10th, 2025 13:59
As The Clouds Gently Roll On By
Bella Shepard said:
You so eloquently portray the journey of life, however brief for us, we are that tiny imprint upon nature. Beautiful!
January 10th, 2025 10:49
Bella Shepard said:
You so eloquently portray the journey of life, however brief for us, we are that tiny imprint upon nature. Beautiful!
January 10th, 2025 10:49
As The Clouds Gently Roll On By
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Melancholic and lyrical, this is truly a beautiful poem, my dear friend. Well done! 🌹👏
January 10th, 2025 10:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Melancholic and lyrical, this is truly a beautiful poem, my dear friend. Well done! 🌹👏
January 10th, 2025 10:29
As The Clouds Gently Roll On By
arqios said:
Both a journey and a mantra-like melody… and all the while “the clouds gently roll on by…”
January 10th, 2025 08:07
arqios said:
Both a journey and a mantra-like melody… and all the while “the clouds gently roll on by…”
January 10th, 2025 08:07
As The Clouds Gently Roll On By
Cassie58 said:
Really lovely stanzas and the repetition works so well. Slightly melancholic yet beautiful as well Tobani. All good wishes.
January 10th, 2025 07:55
Cassie58 said:
Really lovely stanzas and the repetition works so well. Slightly melancholic yet beautiful as well Tobani. All good wishes.
January 10th, 2025 07:55
As The Clouds Gently Roll On By
sorenbarrett said:
This could easily be a song with the chorus. Reflections on one\'s life and musings while on the journey. Lovely
January 10th, 2025 04:55
sorenbarrett said:
This could easily be a song with the chorus. Reflections on one\'s life and musings while on the journey. Lovely
January 10th, 2025 04:55
Love and Hate
Thad Wilk said:
👍👍
Two thumbs up,
great poem on the
difference \'tween
love and hate
I must say!! 💯👌
Brilliantly composed
in every way! 🙏 🤩
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
January 9th, 2025 23:10
Thad Wilk said:
👍👍
Two thumbs up,
great poem on the
difference \'tween
love and hate
I must say!! 💯👌
Brilliantly composed
in every way! 🙏 🤩
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
January 9th, 2025 23:10
Love and Hate
Mutley Ravishes said:
Great question (and reply). Clearly what many of us believe to be \"love\" isn\'t love. There is unconditional love. Is there such a thing as unconditional hate?!
January 9th, 2025 18:29
Mutley Ravishes said:
Great question (and reply). Clearly what many of us believe to be \"love\" isn\'t love. There is unconditional love. Is there such a thing as unconditional hate?!
January 9th, 2025 18:29
Love and Hate
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I have heard hate defined as being distinct from love. That is simply incorrect. In order to know love, one must know hate. In order to know hate, one must know love. They\' are not distinct, but actually complimentary. The opposite sides of the same coin, as your poem rightly concludes. Rather, apathy is the opposite of love. That\'s how I see it, anywho. Well done. Very thought-provoking piece. 🌹👏
January 9th, 2025 09:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I have heard hate defined as being distinct from love. That is simply incorrect. In order to know love, one must know hate. In order to know hate, one must know love. They\' are not distinct, but actually complimentary. The opposite sides of the same coin, as your poem rightly concludes. Rather, apathy is the opposite of love. That\'s how I see it, anywho. Well done. Very thought-provoking piece. 🌹👏
January 9th, 2025 09:48
Love and Hate
RSM0812 said:
Love and hate are the same side of a coin. Emotions caught in verse. Really good read. Thanks. Hopefully love wins over hate and separate when the coin is flipped.
January 9th, 2025 07:44
RSM0812 said:
Love and hate are the same side of a coin. Emotions caught in verse. Really good read. Thanks. Hopefully love wins over hate and separate when the coin is flipped.
January 9th, 2025 07:44
Love and Hate
sorenbarrett said:
It is said that the one that can not hate you can not love you. So true such strong emotions in the jealousy of love and the pity of hate take on new meaning. Strong emotions are chemical explosions often difficult to discern the difference. A wonderful write that is deeply philosophical and scientific at the same time. All put in great rhyme a wonderful poem
January 9th, 2025 06:07
sorenbarrett said:
It is said that the one that can not hate you can not love you. So true such strong emotions in the jealousy of love and the pity of hate take on new meaning. Strong emotions are chemical explosions often difficult to discern the difference. A wonderful write that is deeply philosophical and scientific at the same time. All put in great rhyme a wonderful poem
January 9th, 2025 06:07
Love and Hate
Poetic Licence said:
Thank you for your feedback, much appreciated, what did the last mean?
January 9th, 2025 02:57
Poetic Licence said:
Thank you for your feedback, much appreciated, what did the last mean?
January 9th, 2025 02:57
Love and Hate
arqios said:
So true! You can’t have one without the other. 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻 Now to walk away and rethink this.
January 9th, 2025 02:55
arqios said:
So true! You can’t have one without the other. 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻 Now to walk away and rethink this.
January 9th, 2025 02:55
Which Did You Choose
Thad Wilk said:
With one eye 👁️ good I would see! 👍
One ear 👂 I would hear only good.
One heart, stil i\'d choose the same. 🤔
Awesome poem, mind blowing
my friend!🤩
Thanks for sharing! 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 8th, 2025 19:44
Thad Wilk said:
With one eye 👁️ good I would see! 👍
One ear 👂 I would hear only good.
One heart, stil i\'d choose the same. 🤔
Awesome poem, mind blowing
my friend!🤩
Thanks for sharing! 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 8th, 2025 19:44
Which Did You Choose
Brian Otucho said:
Marvelous, you can\'t choose both at once but only one
January 8th, 2025 09:48
Brian Otucho said:
Marvelous, you can\'t choose both at once but only one
January 8th, 2025 09:48
Which Did You Choose
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Bravo! Profound, pognant, and this will ALWAYS be timely. Well done! 🌹🌹👏👏 You get the double rose and clap on this, dear Tobani!
January 8th, 2025 08:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Bravo! Profound, pognant, and this will ALWAYS be timely. Well done! 🌹🌹👏👏 You get the double rose and clap on this, dear Tobani!
January 8th, 2025 08:14
Which Did You Choose
arqios said:
Bam 💥 that was a one -two combo, so nice to be set up in such poetic manner!
January 8th, 2025 07:18
arqios said:
Bam 💥 that was a one -two combo, so nice to be set up in such poetic manner!
January 8th, 2025 07:18
Which Did You Choose
sorenbarrett said:
With two eyes is see both evil and good, with two ears I hear both evil and good with one heart I may choose only one and it is all or nothing a great message you send and a great illustration you make.
January 8th, 2025 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
With two eyes is see both evil and good, with two ears I hear both evil and good with one heart I may choose only one and it is all or nothing a great message you send and a great illustration you make.
January 8th, 2025 04:33
Hope in Those Smiling Eyes
Dan Williams said:
Sadly, this might all too likely come to pass. What a poor job we humans have done, what a good job you have done detailing it. Nice work.
January 8th, 2025 01:09
Dan Williams said:
Sadly, this might all too likely come to pass. What a poor job we humans have done, what a good job you have done detailing it. Nice work.
January 8th, 2025 01:09
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