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Not Built for Maintenance
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful

November 21st, 2023 15:03

IOUA!
Goldfinch60 said:

Unfortunately respect seems to have flown from our life and apologising for wrongdoing doesn\'t happen Ben.
All each of us individuals can do is the best we can, I have been taught to be respectful and hope that through my long life I have always been that way and if I make a mistake I will always apologise. This way of life is not taught anymore which is a primal cause of the troubles in our world.
Good words Ben.

Andy

November 21st, 2023 01:50

IOUA!
l1a_09 said:

so beautiful

November 20th, 2023 13:50

Eleven (A Poem on Armistice 2023)
Teddy.15 said:

So very beautiful, I cannot get a poppy because I\'m in Italy however my parents put one on me every year when I was a child. A great thank you to the courageous men and women who faught for all our freedom, and lost their own. Kudos
❤️ 🤍 💙

November 12th, 2023 15:33

Eleven (A Poem on Armistice 2023)
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true Ben, we were in our coffee house yesterday, 11th, and they had a sign saying that they would have a 2 minute silence at 11.00.
It happened and I stood up at attention as many others did but there were some there that showed no respect at all and this annoyed me.
\"WE WILL REMEMBER THEM.\"

Andy

November 12th, 2023 01:58

Eleven (A Poem on Armistice 2023)
Superqueen said:

This is a beautiful remembrance. Thank you for sharing.

November 11th, 2023 17:16

Eleven (A Poem on Armistice 2023)
Bella Shepard said:

Thank you dear poet for this beautiful and fitting poem, on this day of remembrance, \"lest we forget\".

November 11th, 2023 14:38

Eleven (A Poem on Armistice 2023)
orchidee said:

A fine write AS. Great minds think.....? I too posted the roses pic today.

November 11th, 2023 13:16

If My Emblem Could Talk
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful and poignant. Great job.

November 11th, 2023 09:03

If My Emblem Could Talk
Goldfinch60 said:

Such strong and true words Ben, i do sincerely hope that we can change for the better soon otherwise the earth will be empty.

Andy

November 11th, 2023 02:16

If My Emblem Could Talk
Teddy.15 said:

I\'ve been to zoo\'s like that and I\'m living in times like these. I find your poetic heart so very empathetic always dear friend. 🩷

November 10th, 2023 13:34

A Carving on the Broken Bench of Humanity
Goldfinch60 said:

True words Dan, if only people could learn to do good individually the world would become a much better place.

Andy

November 8th, 2023 02:02

There Always is an Odd Sock, When Doing the Laundry
Sunsetmet said:

I love the title and what is truly behind the words this is lovely just what I needed to hear life is full of mistakes and also keeping on track a sock or two LOL

November 7th, 2023 07:16

There Always is an Odd Sock, When Doing the Laundry
Goldfinch60 said:

Yes we all make mistakes Ben and have to do things again but that is life and we just have to accept it.

Andy

November 7th, 2023 02:29

There Always is an Odd Sock, When Doing the Laundry
Teddy.15 said:

I have two they have been on my drawers for a week now, what a wonderful write. Your metaphor is brilliant. Let\'s hope we all find our missing socks. 🤗

November 7th, 2023 01:14

There Always is an Odd Sock, When Doing the Laundry
Bella Shepard said:

The odd sock is the bane of my life. I also spent the last 30 minutes backspacing, deleting and editing, and still haven\'t come up with a finished product, so it\'s out there somewhere with that sock. When something goes wrong in what we think is a perfect life it is a reality check, if we\'re wise. Unfortunately, in evades too many who claim perfection, when their flaws are on display. A very timely write my friend, we\'re going through this right now in our political forum, and it is very toxic. Kudos for your thoughts and voice!

November 6th, 2023 14:52

47 (A Poem in Homage to Adam Johnson, former Nottingham Panthers Ice Hockey Player)
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful tribute Ben. So young to have passed from this world.

Andy

November 5th, 2023 02:11

47 (A Poem in Homage to Adam Johnson, former Nottingham Panthers Ice Hockey Player)
Bella Shepard said:

A beautifuliful elegy. Sadly a life cut short, and a destiny denied. You have done him great honor.

November 2nd, 2023 14:46

Health Questionnaire
Bella Shepard said:

It seems that \"integrity\" is on life support these days my friend. The Health Questionnaire in my U.S. points to dismal failure in those who are elected to office, and sadly to those who have no idea what they are voting for. I certainly commiserate with you as to the state of things, and sincerely agree that those found guilty should have their just place, they could do with a heavy dose of humility. Good and very timely write!

November 1st, 2023 13:13

Dear, Mother Nature (A Letter)
Thomas W Case said:

Great work. Very creative.

October 25th, 2023 10:01

Here’s Your Two Bloody Knocks (A Ghost’s Response)
peto said:

Excellent write scribbler
I\'m also a fan of the season and day
My young sis was born on the 31st
Wee witch
Thoroughly enjoyed reading

October 22nd, 2023 11:22

Vow of Oblivion
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent.

October 21st, 2023 11:10

Ballad of the Boogeyman
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful and it has that gothic macabre feel to it. Great job.

October 20th, 2023 11:57

List
Goldfinch60 said:

Sharing bread is just within the purview of those who have it Ben.

I make my own bread and will share it with all and have done but that is the way I am and do what I can, I wish all could be like that.

Andy

October 18th, 2023 01:54

List
LonPoet(Pseudonym) said:

So beautiful poem.Your words have touched my heart.

October 16th, 2023 12:26

List
Pop64 said:

Get better? With the leaders of today not demonstrating power for the people, rather power over people, it just doesn\'t seem possible. One can speak of your rhyme and imagery you used in this, but it\'s the message that you put forth, that lets this reader appreciate it. Well done!

October 16th, 2023 12:24

Buying (An Acrostic)
Parisab said:

Those trolls are waiting at every door and gate and even under bridges! Love the word play of buy vs purchase…

October 13th, 2023 12:04

Buying (An Acrostic)
Goldfinch60 said:

Those trolls are increasing ion number and need to be contained some time soon Ben.

Andy

October 11th, 2023 02:34

Buying (An Acrostic)
Bella Shepard said:

Love the form you\'ve chosen, and your words certainly hit the mark. The price of life itself is high indeed, how will we survive this maelstrom?

October 10th, 2023 13:57

I Ate Raw Spaghetti
Teddy.15 said:

Well as I live in the land of spaghetti I can say (yuck) 🤣 lol although this poem is truly wonderful, yes it\'s good to be different and we should never be shy to show it, my best friend eats raw pasta though I always look at her funny 🤣 🤣 even I\'m not from Rome. A wonderful enjoyable read. ❤️

October 8th, 2023 14:41

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