Comments received on poems by AuburnScribbler
Climbing to Coddington
Cheeky Missy said:
You Brits have Paddington Bear and the very name of this hamlet or village [pardon my United Stated ignorance, please] is reminiscent of that character while the details scattered to taste throughout this charming rendition add to its appeal. The tone of reminiscence and the tale itself are the reason longish poems with quatrain stanzas have their standing and charm. Very lovely and winsome. Thank you so much for sharing!
August 29th, 2024 09:02
Cheeky Missy said:
You Brits have Paddington Bear and the very name of this hamlet or village [pardon my United Stated ignorance, please] is reminiscent of that character while the details scattered to taste throughout this charming rendition add to its appeal. The tone of reminiscence and the tale itself are the reason longish poems with quatrain stanzas have their standing and charm. Very lovely and winsome. Thank you so much for sharing!
August 29th, 2024 09:02
The Gigger at Balderton
Goldfinch60 said:
More wonderful words Ben, and hearing music as well makes life even better.
Andy
August 27th, 2024 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
More wonderful words Ben, and hearing music as well makes life even better.
Andy
August 27th, 2024 01:24
The Gigger at Balderton
Bella Shepard said:
I can certainly understand how the gigger must tire of the same old playlist over and over. But I can also understand, at the same time he willingly plays for the crowd the songs they know by heart and love to sing, the need to have variety to keep it fresh for the muscian. Such a balance to strike. A wonderful poem my friend, hoping the warming sun is a good sign.
August 26th, 2024 14:11
Bella Shepard said:
I can certainly understand how the gigger must tire of the same old playlist over and over. But I can also understand, at the same time he willingly plays for the crowd the songs they know by heart and love to sing, the need to have variety to keep it fresh for the muscian. Such a balance to strike. A wonderful poem my friend, hoping the warming sun is a good sign.
August 26th, 2024 14:11
The Gigger at Balderton
sorenbarrett said:
Such a classical feel to this poem it leaves an older feel. Nicely done
August 26th, 2024 09:32
sorenbarrett said:
Such a classical feel to this poem it leaves an older feel. Nicely done
August 26th, 2024 09:32
Pinecones of Winthorpe
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words and a wonderful walk Ben, I hope that you enjoy many more of them.
Andy
August 26th, 2024 01:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words and a wonderful walk Ben, I hope that you enjoy many more of them.
Andy
August 26th, 2024 01:53
Pinecones of Winthorpe
Cheeky Missy said:
Charming and quite enchanting. Me likes. Thank you very much for sharing both the poem and the notes explaining it.
August 25th, 2024 16:33
Cheeky Missy said:
Charming and quite enchanting. Me likes. Thank you very much for sharing both the poem and the notes explaining it.
August 25th, 2024 16:33
Farndon on a Friday
Goldfinch60 said:
Walking in some villages can bring wonder and harmony to us Ben, as this one has with you.
Andy
August 25th, 2024 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Walking in some villages can bring wonder and harmony to us Ben, as this one has with you.
Andy
August 25th, 2024 01:10
Farndon on a Friday
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful scenery set with great images. A feeling of peace pervades this poem
August 24th, 2024 12:39
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful scenery set with great images. A feeling of peace pervades this poem
August 24th, 2024 12:39
The Tiny Jug of Water on a TV Panel Show
Goldfinch60 said:
They seem to say so many words but do not say many meaningful ones Ben.
Andy
August 21st, 2024 00:45
Goldfinch60 said:
They seem to say so many words but do not say many meaningful ones Ben.
Andy
August 21st, 2024 00:45
The Tiny Jug of Water on a TV Panel Show
Bella Shepard said:
Good write my friend, pegged it really well. Talk shows end up being just that, a lot of talk but too often very little substance. Give me an episode of Fawlty Towers any day. You rule!
August 20th, 2024 13:03
Bella Shepard said:
Good write my friend, pegged it really well. Talk shows end up being just that, a lot of talk but too often very little substance. Give me an episode of Fawlty Towers any day. You rule!
August 20th, 2024 13:03
The Tiny Jug of Water on a TV Panel Show
Teddy.15 said:
Did you ever watch countdown? Or question of sport? Or Mrs Brown? LoL 🤣
August 20th, 2024 12:39
Teddy.15 said:
Did you ever watch countdown? Or question of sport? Or Mrs Brown? LoL 🤣
August 20th, 2024 12:39
The Tiny Jug of Water on a TV Panel Show
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely worded and with a good message this one strikes to the heart of what most have to say. Lovely
August 20th, 2024 08:25
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely worded and with a good message this one strikes to the heart of what most have to say. Lovely
August 20th, 2024 08:25
Oh, Pony, Oh, Pony, Down Millgate
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Ben, we should all take after that pony and be happy in our lives.
Andy
August 20th, 2024 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Ben, we should all take after that pony and be happy in our lives.
Andy
August 20th, 2024 01:21
Those Cyclists on the Road
Dan Williams said:
There is a rule that fits here, verified by long personal experience; \"Two cars coming from opposite directions will always meet at the narrowest part of the road\". On a bicycle, you ARE the narrowest part. Safe riding!
August 19th, 2024 23:52
Dan Williams said:
There is a rule that fits here, verified by long personal experience; \"Two cars coming from opposite directions will always meet at the narrowest part of the road\". On a bicycle, you ARE the narrowest part. Safe riding!
August 19th, 2024 23:52
Oh, Pony, Oh, Pony, Down Millgate
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful write about being who you are and enjoying it. Nicely done
August 19th, 2024 14:36
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful write about being who you are and enjoying it. Nicely done
August 19th, 2024 14:36
Those Cyclists on the Road
Bella Shepard said:
Beautifully versed in rhyming stanzas. I love the stages of the poem, from achy feet to the wonderful memory evoked by the cyclists. I\'ve seen them biking along the highways as we\'ve traveled through Utah and Colorado, wishing I were young enough to do the same, they amaze me. Thank you for this poem that reminds me of those travels. Fantastic write!
August 19th, 2024 09:09
Bella Shepard said:
Beautifully versed in rhyming stanzas. I love the stages of the poem, from achy feet to the wonderful memory evoked by the cyclists. I\'ve seen them biking along the highways as we\'ve traveled through Utah and Colorado, wishing I were young enough to do the same, they amaze me. Thank you for this poem that reminds me of those travels. Fantastic write!
August 19th, 2024 09:09
Those Cyclists on the Road
Teddy.15 said:
This is beautiful, my last memories before I left London were going to work on my mountain bike, you just brought it all back 🌹
August 19th, 2024 07:41
Teddy.15 said:
This is beautiful, my last memories before I left London were going to work on my mountain bike, you just brought it all back 🌹
August 19th, 2024 07:41
Those Cyclists on the Road
Goldfinch60 said:
I too used to cycle, I even cycled to work sometimes but we tired to follow the rule of the road unlike many cyclists nowadays.
Andy
August 19th, 2024 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
I too used to cycle, I even cycled to work sometimes but we tired to follow the rule of the road unlike many cyclists nowadays.
Andy
August 19th, 2024 01:23
Those Cyclists on the Road
jarcher54 said:
I am 70 but still cycle 5 miles to work every day, rain or shine. I swear that and my wife\'s cooking have kept me young. On a weekend or morning off I run errands all over town on a bicycle. It is by far the most efficient and healthy way to get around. It\'s easy on the joints and soles. But good for the soul! Thanks for the thoughtful observation!
August 18th, 2024 11:37
jarcher54 said:
I am 70 but still cycle 5 miles to work every day, rain or shine. I swear that and my wife\'s cooking have kept me young. On a weekend or morning off I run errands all over town on a bicycle. It is by far the most efficient and healthy way to get around. It\'s easy on the joints and soles. But good for the soul! Thanks for the thoughtful observation!
August 18th, 2024 11:37
Those Cyclists on the Road
sorenbarrett said:
When younger I used to cycle a great deal and enjoyed it. As to this poem the last stanza is brilliant! Loved it.
August 18th, 2024 07:06
sorenbarrett said:
When younger I used to cycle a great deal and enjoyed it. As to this poem the last stanza is brilliant! Loved it.
August 18th, 2024 07:06
Waist or Waste?
sorenbarrett said:
So true a second is harder than first. A play on words and a question, Nicely done.
August 17th, 2024 13:35
sorenbarrett said:
So true a second is harder than first. A play on words and a question, Nicely done.
August 17th, 2024 13:35
TV Judge
Goldfinch60 said:
Groucho Marx once said:
\"I find television most educational as when it is switched on I go into another room and read a book.\"
Andy
August 17th, 2024 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Groucho Marx once said:
\"I find television most educational as when it is switched on I go into another room and read a book.\"
Andy
August 17th, 2024 01:23
TV Judge
sorenbarrett said:
The power of News and TV a one way conversation that molds public opinion to focus on the negative and ignore the positive. So nicely done
August 16th, 2024 06:35
sorenbarrett said:
The power of News and TV a one way conversation that molds public opinion to focus on the negative and ignore the positive. So nicely done
August 16th, 2024 06:35
Overr1de
sorenbarrett said:
A short poem that speaks to reactions to the odd. Well done
August 15th, 2024 10:18
sorenbarrett said:
A short poem that speaks to reactions to the odd. Well done
August 15th, 2024 10:18
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