Comments received on poems by AuburnScribbler
In Search of Bands
Teddy.15 said:
Seems like the world is going through a bad patch, I wish you nothing but the very best for your recovery, take an add out in a local paper or go to any pub that has regular live music, i am sure you will find musicians to help your plite. š¹
September 18th, 2024 15:39
Teddy.15 said:
Seems like the world is going through a bad patch, I wish you nothing but the very best for your recovery, take an add out in a local paper or go to any pub that has regular live music, i am sure you will find musicians to help your plite. š¹
September 18th, 2024 15:39
Dishcloth Wisdom
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words Ben and so true, why can\'t people see the real things that are causing the destruction of our world.
Andy
September 18th, 2024 02:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words Ben and so true, why can\'t people see the real things that are causing the destruction of our world.
Andy
September 18th, 2024 02:00
Dishcloth Wisdom
Dan Williams said:
A big amen and thank you. With the first amendment in shambles this needs to be said.
September 18th, 2024 00:49
Dan Williams said:
A big amen and thank you. With the first amendment in shambles this needs to be said.
September 18th, 2024 00:49
Dishcloth Wisdom
Teddy.15 said:
Are you I jail? Doing the dishes? š¤£ Only joking with you a wonderful poem. š¹ I have one about a dishwasher. Poetry at its best my friend.
September 17th, 2024 13:47
Teddy.15 said:
Are you I jail? Doing the dishes? š¤£ Only joking with you a wonderful poem. š¹ I have one about a dishwasher. Poetry at its best my friend.
September 17th, 2024 13:47
Dishcloth Wisdom
aDarkerMind said:
a very impressive write....
loved the line
\'at a woodworm garden fence\'
one to fave for sure.
September 17th, 2024 13:06
aDarkerMind said:
a very impressive write....
loved the line
\'at a woodworm garden fence\'
one to fave for sure.
September 17th, 2024 13:06
Dishcloth Wisdom
sorenbarrett said:
Any time censorship is employed it overstepsthe bounds of not only freedom but of integrity and truth. Very nicely written.
September 17th, 2024 09:04
sorenbarrett said:
Any time censorship is employed it overstepsthe bounds of not only freedom but of integrity and truth. Very nicely written.
September 17th, 2024 09:04
Whistle and Boot
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that after looking for a long while Ben the suit you have found will make you look handsome but be sure you don\'t dress better than the groom. LOL.
Andy
September 16th, 2024 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that after looking for a long while Ben the suit you have found will make you look handsome but be sure you don\'t dress better than the groom. LOL.
Andy
September 16th, 2024 01:25
Whistle and Boot
Cheeky Missy said:
What\'s so absolutely charming about this winsome rendition of reality is how sweetly you\'ve tricked out the same to effect, which is what I love about this genre, where the mundane is elevated to far loftier status by a little flick of the wrist, so to say. Thank you very much for sharing, and I wish you all success.
September 15th, 2024 18:32
Cheeky Missy said:
What\'s so absolutely charming about this winsome rendition of reality is how sweetly you\'ve tricked out the same to effect, which is what I love about this genre, where the mundane is elevated to far loftier status by a little flick of the wrist, so to say. Thank you very much for sharing, and I wish you all success.
September 15th, 2024 18:32
The Fox at Kelham
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'ve rhymed this charmingly and rendered it too winsomely not to be favourited by yours truly. How delightfully you tender this lovely stroll through your beloved countryside with the glorious joy of watching a fox happily rambling. Thank you so VERY much for sharing!
September 13th, 2024 14:38
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'ve rhymed this charmingly and rendered it too winsomely not to be favourited by yours truly. How delightfully you tender this lovely stroll through your beloved countryside with the glorious joy of watching a fox happily rambling. Thank you so VERY much for sharing!
September 13th, 2024 14:38
The Fox at Kelham
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Ben. You mentioned the A46, it is a road that bypasses Evesham and I use it nearly every day.
I think it is great to see foxes, one of the most wonderful looking animals in our countryside.
Andy
September 12th, 2024 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Ben. You mentioned the A46, it is a road that bypasses Evesham and I use it nearly every day.
I think it is great to see foxes, one of the most wonderful looking animals in our countryside.
Andy
September 12th, 2024 01:26
Bluebottle
Cheeky Missy said:
You hope the fly stays...safe?! For all the yellow, sticky tongues of flypaper hung above our prairie kitchen table in my early teens, loaded up until the fly carcasses dropped on our dinner, I\'ve never wished a fly safety. Interesting concept where I come frae. Beautifully rendered to effect with great imagery and poignancy, despite its dedication to the fly. Thank you for sharing.
September 11th, 2024 14:09
Cheeky Missy said:
You hope the fly stays...safe?! For all the yellow, sticky tongues of flypaper hung above our prairie kitchen table in my early teens, loaded up until the fly carcasses dropped on our dinner, I\'ve never wished a fly safety. Interesting concept where I come frae. Beautifully rendered to effect with great imagery and poignancy, despite its dedication to the fly. Thank you for sharing.
September 11th, 2024 14:09
Bluebottle
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Ben, yes they do not seem to know how to escape as we try to escape from the horrors of the world in a similar way.
Andy
September 11th, 2024 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Ben, yes they do not seem to know how to escape as we try to escape from the horrors of the world in a similar way.
Andy
September 11th, 2024 01:51
Bluebottle
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that well could be a nursery rhyme and with a message too. Nicely written
September 10th, 2024 13:19
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that well could be a nursery rhyme and with a message too. Nicely written
September 10th, 2024 13:19
Potboy
Neilton said:
Such an interesting and beautifully written poem! Your analysis makes it even more unique!
September 10th, 2024 06:41
Neilton said:
Such an interesting and beautifully written poem! Your analysis makes it even more unique!
September 10th, 2024 06:41
Potboy
Goldfinch60 said:
That hope will always be with you Ben and it will become reality.
Andy
September 10th, 2024 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
That hope will always be with you Ben and it will become reality.
Andy
September 10th, 2024 01:52
Potboy
sorenbarrett said:
A great play on words and yes hope is the end of all. Nicely written
September 9th, 2024 15:22
sorenbarrett said:
A great play on words and yes hope is the end of all. Nicely written
September 9th, 2024 15:22
Potboy
Teddy.15 said:
Most entertaining, pot boy turned dish-hand, all grown up! š¤£
September 9th, 2024 14:59
Teddy.15 said:
Most entertaining, pot boy turned dish-hand, all grown up! š¤£
September 9th, 2024 14:59
Starmerās Pyjamas (A āDirePunkā Song)
Cheeky Missy said:
Aha! The Holiday being one of my favorites, I declare but you bring back bits and pieces of that here! Thank you for sharing. I\'ve enjoyed attempting to see how to sing it, which is fun to do.
September 6th, 2024 09:06
Cheeky Missy said:
Aha! The Holiday being one of my favorites, I declare but you bring back bits and pieces of that here! Thank you for sharing. I\'ve enjoyed attempting to see how to sing it, which is fun to do.
September 6th, 2024 09:06
No Way to Cotham
Cheeky Missy said:
My la! What a ramble through the fabled English countryside indeed! Nothing like the difficulties of modern roadwork and the like. Your place names threw me off, whence I thank you all the more for the explanation/translation in your notes. Thank you very much for sharing. Beautifully detailed with a delightful poignancy. Me loves!
September 6th, 2024 05:47
Cheeky Missy said:
My la! What a ramble through the fabled English countryside indeed! Nothing like the difficulties of modern roadwork and the like. Your place names threw me off, whence I thank you all the more for the explanation/translation in your notes. Thank you very much for sharing. Beautifully detailed with a delightful poignancy. Me loves!
September 6th, 2024 05:47
No Way to Cotham
Neilton said:
I\'m glad you had a nice walk that day ! This poem is beautiful in every way !!Your talent is truly unique
September 6th, 2024 04:05
Neilton said:
I\'m glad you had a nice walk that day ! This poem is beautiful in every way !!Your talent is truly unique
September 6th, 2024 04:05
No Way to Cotham
Dan Williams said:
OK I admit I had to look up Cotham, was well worth it. Nice work.
September 4th, 2024 00:49
Dan Williams said:
OK I admit I had to look up Cotham, was well worth it. Nice work.
September 4th, 2024 00:49
No Way to Cotham
sorenbarrett said:
Often detours in life have their own blessings. A fun right in itself take this poem for a metaphor lovely.
September 3rd, 2024 05:22
sorenbarrett said:
Often detours in life have their own blessings. A fun right in itself take this poem for a metaphor lovely.
September 3rd, 2024 05:22
No Way to Cotham
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine walk Ben, I hope those fish and chips were tasty.
Andy
September 3rd, 2024 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine walk Ben, I hope those fish and chips were tasty.
Andy
September 3rd, 2024 01:25
No Way to Cotham
Bella Shepard said:
Memory can take us to so many different places. And yet how often when we revisit, the memory is challenged by change. This is a lovely poem, and so glad that it turned out well in the end. A fine write dear friend!
September 2nd, 2024 13:10
Bella Shepard said:
Memory can take us to so many different places. And yet how often when we revisit, the memory is challenged by change. This is a lovely poem, and so glad that it turned out well in the end. A fine write dear friend!
September 2nd, 2024 13:10
Paralympics (An Acrostic)
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Ben, in spite of their problems they still keep going.
Andy
September 1st, 2024 01:07
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Ben, in spite of their problems they still keep going.
Andy
September 1st, 2024 01:07
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