Comments received on poems by AuburnScribbler
Blackcurrant Squash
Goldfinch60 said:
Mary drinks a lot of blackcurrent squash Ben and thoroughly enjoys it.
Andy
August 7th, 2024 02:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Mary drinks a lot of blackcurrent squash Ben and thoroughly enjoys it.
Andy
August 7th, 2024 02:00
Blackcurrant Squash
Bella Shepard said:
How \"Cordial\' of you dear poet. I had to google Blackcurrent Squash, and alas, we cannot partake of this wonderful elixer in the USA. So I will be happy for you in your reverie, it certainly inspired a juicy and delectable poem.
August 6th, 2024 12:47
Bella Shepard said:
How \"Cordial\' of you dear poet. I had to google Blackcurrent Squash, and alas, we cannot partake of this wonderful elixer in the USA. So I will be happy for you in your reverie, it certainly inspired a juicy and delectable poem.
August 6th, 2024 12:47
Standard Class (A Town Shanty)
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words Ben, I just do not understand why this is happening.
Andy
August 5th, 2024 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words Ben, I just do not understand why this is happening.
Andy
August 5th, 2024 01:48
Standard Class (A Town Shanty)
sorenbarrett said:
A song indeed of war, loss and its meaninglessness. Haunting thoughts
August 4th, 2024 09:52
sorenbarrett said:
A song indeed of war, loss and its meaninglessness. Haunting thoughts
August 4th, 2024 09:52
Capital Punishment
sorenbarrett said:
Cleverly disguised in images with ambiguous meanings this carries a powerful message. Nicely done
July 29th, 2024 13:15
sorenbarrett said:
Cleverly disguised in images with ambiguous meanings this carries a powerful message. Nicely done
July 29th, 2024 13:15
Capital Punishment
Bella Shepard said:
“For the love of money is a root of all kinds of evil\", even the bible has something to say on the subject. I think you\'ve captured it wonderfully in this poem. The three words \"cost of living\" you hear so often, comes to mind in the context of what is a human life worth? Bravo, excellent write!
July 29th, 2024 11:54
Bella Shepard said:
“For the love of money is a root of all kinds of evil\", even the bible has something to say on the subject. I think you\'ve captured it wonderfully in this poem. The three words \"cost of living\" you hear so often, comes to mind in the context of what is a human life worth? Bravo, excellent write!
July 29th, 2024 11:54
At the Graveside
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words Ben, I have walked through cemeteries in the past and had some strange thoughts causing many emotions.
Andy
July 26th, 2024 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words Ben, I have walked through cemeteries in the past and had some strange thoughts causing many emotions.
Andy
July 26th, 2024 01:19
Measures
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words about things in your life Ben, I am sure that all will be well and you will always play your music.
Andy
July 14th, 2024 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words about things in your life Ben, I am sure that all will be well and you will always play your music.
Andy
July 14th, 2024 01:41
Measures
Bella Shepard said:
I can relate wholly to the sentiment of this poem. You phrase so well the pain and difficulty of your physical situation, and yet your last stanza stands as a firm resolution of hope for the future. Kudos my friend!
July 13th, 2024 11:25
Bella Shepard said:
I can relate wholly to the sentiment of this poem. You phrase so well the pain and difficulty of your physical situation, and yet your last stanza stands as a firm resolution of hope for the future. Kudos my friend!
July 13th, 2024 11:25
Measures
2781 said:
For the grave cannot praise thee, death cannot celebrate thee: those that go down into to the pit cannot hope for thy truth.
July 13th, 2024 09:29
2781 said:
For the grave cannot praise thee, death cannot celebrate thee: those that go down into to the pit cannot hope for thy truth.
July 13th, 2024 09:29
Look Out! Eagle!
Goldfinch60 said:
We all progress in differing ways Ben hopefully we are progressing along the right path.
Andy
July 12th, 2024 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
We all progress in differing ways Ben hopefully we are progressing along the right path.
Andy
July 12th, 2024 01:14
Gainsborough Rose (for Rosemary Macandrew, Rest in Peace)
Teddy.15 said:
Life is certainly a rollercoaster sending you all my love. 🌹
July 11th, 2024 03:43
Teddy.15 said:
Life is certainly a rollercoaster sending you all my love. 🌹
July 11th, 2024 03:43
Gainsborough Rose (for Rosemary Macandrew, Rest in Peace)
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful caring words full of love and tenderness for an obviously wonderful lady in your life Ben. May she Rest In Peace.
Andy
July 11th, 2024 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful caring words full of love and tenderness for an obviously wonderful lady in your life Ben. May she Rest In Peace.
Andy
July 11th, 2024 01:23
Gainsborough Rose (for Rosemary Macandrew, Rest in Peace)
Cassie58 said:
A beautiful tribute and memorial for Rose who lost her life in tragic circumstances. Condolences to you and her loved ones. Your stanzas moved me poet.
July 10th, 2024 11:20
Cassie58 said:
A beautiful tribute and memorial for Rose who lost her life in tragic circumstances. Condolences to you and her loved ones. Your stanzas moved me poet.
July 10th, 2024 11:20
Gainsborough Rose (for Rosemary Macandrew, Rest in Peace)
Tony36 said:
Awesome write
July 10th, 2024 09:59
Tony36 said:
Awesome write
July 10th, 2024 09:59
Times of Then, Times of Now (recited in whisper, in a hospital bed in A&E in QMC, inspired by my ward neighbour, who had a fall, and suffers with Alzheimer’s, who talked relentlessly to her daughter, of losing “the cart” two and a half weeks ago)
Goldfinch60 said:
That perpetual stream will always take you to a fine place Ben.
glad you are getting better.
Andy
May 25th, 2024 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
That perpetual stream will always take you to a fine place Ben.
glad you are getting better.
Andy
May 25th, 2024 01:50
Times of Then, Times of Now (recited in whisper, in a hospital bed in A&E in QMC, inspired by my ward neighbour, who had a fall, and suffers with Alzheimer’s, who talked relentlessly to her daughter, of losing “the cart” two and a half weeks ago)
Teddy.15 said:
Oh my, dear poet, I\'m sorry to hear of your recent adventure, may you now stay very well, the silver lining you got great material and kudos on the compassion because when we are in these places it\'s sometimes hard to concentrate on others. Bravo. 🌹
May 25th, 2024 00:55
Teddy.15 said:
Oh my, dear poet, I\'m sorry to hear of your recent adventure, may you now stay very well, the silver lining you got great material and kudos on the compassion because when we are in these places it\'s sometimes hard to concentrate on others. Bravo. 🌹
May 25th, 2024 00:55
Times of Then, Times of Now (recited in whisper, in a hospital bed in A&E in QMC, inspired by my ward neighbour, who had a fall, and suffers with Alzheimer’s, who talked relentlessly to her daughter, of losing “the cart” two and a half weeks ago)
2781 said:
I like your poem, not your situation!
May 24th, 2024 16:40
2781 said:
I like your poem, not your situation!
May 24th, 2024 16:40
Upon Overactivity
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Ben, that silence in life can be a great healer to us all.
Andy
April 23rd, 2024 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Ben, that silence in life can be a great healer to us all.
Andy
April 23rd, 2024 01:43
Despatch Box’s Lament (A Town Shanty)
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Ben and yes I was singing along to it.
Andy
April 21st, 2024 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Ben and yes I was singing along to it.
Andy
April 21st, 2024 01:27
Click Track
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Ben.
Take seven, all is well
A hit it has become
Top of the charts once more
A time to be thankful in life.
Andy
April 9th, 2024 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Ben.
Take seven, all is well
A hit it has become
Top of the charts once more
A time to be thankful in life.
Andy
April 9th, 2024 01:12
Click Track
Bella Shepard said:
I love the metaphor of music, click track the pulse of life, in perfect sync. You take us through ages and stages, a wonderfully inspired and oh so clever write my friend.
April 8th, 2024 15:05
Bella Shepard said:
I love the metaphor of music, click track the pulse of life, in perfect sync. You take us through ages and stages, a wonderfully inspired and oh so clever write my friend.
April 8th, 2024 15:05
Dream-Day-Dream
Goldfinch60 said:
Such good words Ben, our lives will be better, mine certainly has changed for the better and I wish the same to all.
Andy
April 8th, 2024 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Such good words Ben, our lives will be better, mine certainly has changed for the better and I wish the same to all.
Andy
April 8th, 2024 01:20
Dream-Day-Dream
Bella Shepard said:
I love the mirror image of your title.
We can simply accept, or dare to dream, for when we do such good, positive things can happen in our brains. Your last stanza begs such a wonderful question, that anyone would be hard pressed to answer, \"what if?\" A poem to feast upon my friend!
April 7th, 2024 12:02
Bella Shepard said:
I love the mirror image of your title.
We can simply accept, or dare to dream, for when we do such good, positive things can happen in our brains. Your last stanza begs such a wonderful question, that anyone would be hard pressed to answer, \"what if?\" A poem to feast upon my friend!
April 7th, 2024 12:02
Escaping Jim
orchidee said:
It\'s terrible when something gets into our minds like this.
Meanwhile - will ya follow, Oh I dunno, Fred or Bill, or Joe Bloggs instead?! heehee.
April 5th, 2024 02:12
orchidee said:
It\'s terrible when something gets into our minds like this.
Meanwhile - will ya follow, Oh I dunno, Fred or Bill, or Joe Bloggs instead?! heehee.
April 5th, 2024 02:12
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