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Behind the Sofa
Goldfinch60 said:

Those mice can get everywhere Ben.

Andy

August 11th, 2024 01:38

Behind the Sofa
Teddy.15 said:

I absolutely love this brilliant rhyming and oh so entertaining 🌹 brilliant 🌹

August 10th, 2024 19:27

Behind the Sofa
Doggerel Dave said:

A tale complete unto itself. Thanks AS. Good fun.
My partner has a cat. You could think that would be sufficient to keep her mouse free. Not a bit of it. Cat brings in live mice and presents. When I\'m there, the next half hour is spent chasing and finally ejecting both.

August 10th, 2024 19:25

Behind the Sofa
sorenbarrett said:

Nicely done very entertaining and put to good verse.

August 10th, 2024 15:51

Olympic Games (An Acrostic)
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful acrostic Ben and so true.

Andy

August 10th, 2024 01:12

Olympic Games (An Acrostic)
sorenbarrett said:

Clever and fun to read celebrating the current Olympics

August 8th, 2024 10:53

Blackcurrant Squash
jarcher54 said:

For some reason currants (not the little raisins but the fruit) have never caught on here in the states... but I do see them in specialty markets sometimes. Next time I see them, I am gonna pop them into a blender and join you.

August 8th, 2024 04:20

Blackcurrant Squash
Teddy.15 said:

Very nicely done, when I was a child, my mother and father would take me to east lane a market in south London, there was a stool that serves hot raspberry juice it had a name that I cannot remember, you brought back some childhood moments with this thank you. 🌹

August 7th, 2024 06:00

Blackcurrant Squash
Goldfinch60 said:

Mary drinks a lot of blackcurrent squash Ben and thoroughly enjoys it.

Andy

August 7th, 2024 02:00

Blackcurrant Squash
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

August 6th, 2024 17:30

Blackcurrant Squash
Bella Shepard said:

How \"Cordial\' of you dear poet. I had to google Blackcurrent Squash, and alas, we cannot partake of this wonderful elixer in the USA. So I will be happy for you in your reverie, it certainly inspired a juicy and delectable poem.

August 6th, 2024 12:47

Blackcurrant Squash
sorenbarrett said:

A delicious write. Nicely done.

August 6th, 2024 11:32

Standard Class (A Town Shanty)
Goldfinch60 said:

Emotive words Ben, I just do not understand why this is happening.

Andy

August 5th, 2024 01:48

Standard Class (A Town Shanty)
sorenbarrett said:

A song indeed of war, loss and its meaninglessness. Haunting thoughts

August 4th, 2024 09:52

Capital Punishment
sorenbarrett said:

Cleverly disguised in images with ambiguous meanings this carries a powerful message. Nicely done

July 29th, 2024 13:15

Capital Punishment
Bella Shepard said:

ā€œFor the love of money is a root of all kinds of evil\", even the bible has something to say on the subject. I think you\'ve captured it wonderfully in this poem. The three words \"cost of living\" you hear so often, comes to mind in the context of what is a human life worth? Bravo, excellent write!

July 29th, 2024 11:54

At the Graveside
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good words Ben, I have walked through cemeteries in the past and had some strange thoughts causing many emotions.

Andy

July 26th, 2024 01:19

At the Graveside
Raghav Sharma said:

nicely written

July 25th, 2024 12:04

Measures
Goldfinch60 said:

Great words about things in your life Ben, I am sure that all will be well and you will always play your music.

Andy

July 14th, 2024 01:41

Measures
Bella Shepard said:

I can relate wholly to the sentiment of this poem. You phrase so well the pain and difficulty of your physical situation, and yet your last stanza stands as a firm resolution of hope for the future. Kudos my friend!

July 13th, 2024 11:25

Measures
2781 said:

For the grave cannot praise thee, death cannot celebrate thee: those that go down into to the pit cannot hope for thy truth.

July 13th, 2024 09:29

Measures
Tony36 said:

Great write

July 13th, 2024 09:16

Look Out! Eagle!
Goldfinch60 said:

We all progress in differing ways Ben hopefully we are progressing along the right path.

Andy

July 12th, 2024 01:14

Gainsborough Rose (for Rosemary Macandrew, Rest in Peace)
Teddy.15 said:

Life is certainly a rollercoaster sending you all my love. 🌹

July 11th, 2024 03:43

Gainsborough Rose (for Rosemary Macandrew, Rest in Peace)
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful caring words full of love and tenderness for an obviously wonderful lady in your life Ben. May she Rest In Peace.

Andy

July 11th, 2024 01:23

Gainsborough Rose (for Rosemary Macandrew, Rest in Peace)
Cassie58 said:

A beautiful tribute and memorial for Rose who lost her life in tragic circumstances. Condolences to you and her loved ones. Your stanzas moved me poet.

July 10th, 2024 11:20

Gainsborough Rose (for Rosemary Macandrew, Rest in Peace)
Tony36 said:

Awesome write

July 10th, 2024 09:59


Times of Then, Times of Now (recited in whisper, in a hospital bed in A&E in QMC, inspired by my ward neighbour, who had a fall, and suffers with Alzheimer’s, who talked relentlessly to her daughter, of losing ā€œthe cartā€ two and a half weeks ago)
Teddy.15 said:

Oh my, dear poet, I\'m sorry to hear of your recent adventure, may you now stay very well, the silver lining you got great material and kudos on the compassion because when we are in these places it\'s sometimes hard to concentrate on others. Bravo. 🌹

May 25th, 2024 00:55


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