Comments received on poems by AuburnScribbler
Behind the Sofa
Teddy.15 said:
I absolutely love this brilliant rhyming and oh so entertaining š¹ brilliant š¹
August 10th, 2024 19:27
Teddy.15 said:
I absolutely love this brilliant rhyming and oh so entertaining š¹ brilliant š¹
August 10th, 2024 19:27
Behind the Sofa
Doggerel Dave said:
A tale complete unto itself. Thanks AS. Good fun.
My partner has a cat. You could think that would be sufficient to keep her mouse free. Not a bit of it. Cat brings in live mice and presents. When I\'m there, the next half hour is spent chasing and finally ejecting both.
August 10th, 2024 19:25
Doggerel Dave said:
A tale complete unto itself. Thanks AS. Good fun.
My partner has a cat. You could think that would be sufficient to keep her mouse free. Not a bit of it. Cat brings in live mice and presents. When I\'m there, the next half hour is spent chasing and finally ejecting both.
August 10th, 2024 19:25
Behind the Sofa
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely done very entertaining and put to good verse.
August 10th, 2024 15:51
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely done very entertaining and put to good verse.
August 10th, 2024 15:51
Olympic Games (An Acrostic)
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful acrostic Ben and so true.
Andy
August 10th, 2024 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful acrostic Ben and so true.
Andy
August 10th, 2024 01:12
Olympic Games (An Acrostic)
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and fun to read celebrating the current Olympics
August 8th, 2024 10:53
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and fun to read celebrating the current Olympics
August 8th, 2024 10:53
Blackcurrant Squash
jarcher54 said:
For some reason currants (not the little raisins but the fruit) have never caught on here in the states... but I do see them in specialty markets sometimes. Next time I see them, I am gonna pop them into a blender and join you.
August 8th, 2024 04:20
jarcher54 said:
For some reason currants (not the little raisins but the fruit) have never caught on here in the states... but I do see them in specialty markets sometimes. Next time I see them, I am gonna pop them into a blender and join you.
August 8th, 2024 04:20
Blackcurrant Squash
Teddy.15 said:
Very nicely done, when I was a child, my mother and father would take me to east lane a market in south London, there was a stool that serves hot raspberry juice it had a name that I cannot remember, you brought back some childhood moments with this thank you. š¹
August 7th, 2024 06:00
Teddy.15 said:
Very nicely done, when I was a child, my mother and father would take me to east lane a market in south London, there was a stool that serves hot raspberry juice it had a name that I cannot remember, you brought back some childhood moments with this thank you. š¹
August 7th, 2024 06:00
Blackcurrant Squash
Goldfinch60 said:
Mary drinks a lot of blackcurrent squash Ben and thoroughly enjoys it.
Andy
August 7th, 2024 02:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Mary drinks a lot of blackcurrent squash Ben and thoroughly enjoys it.
Andy
August 7th, 2024 02:00
Blackcurrant Squash
Bella Shepard said:
How \"Cordial\' of you dear poet. I had to google Blackcurrent Squash, and alas, we cannot partake of this wonderful elixer in the USA. So I will be happy for you in your reverie, it certainly inspired a juicy and delectable poem.
August 6th, 2024 12:47
Bella Shepard said:
How \"Cordial\' of you dear poet. I had to google Blackcurrent Squash, and alas, we cannot partake of this wonderful elixer in the USA. So I will be happy for you in your reverie, it certainly inspired a juicy and delectable poem.
August 6th, 2024 12:47
Standard Class (A Town Shanty)
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words Ben, I just do not understand why this is happening.
Andy
August 5th, 2024 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words Ben, I just do not understand why this is happening.
Andy
August 5th, 2024 01:48
Standard Class (A Town Shanty)
sorenbarrett said:
A song indeed of war, loss and its meaninglessness. Haunting thoughts
August 4th, 2024 09:52
sorenbarrett said:
A song indeed of war, loss and its meaninglessness. Haunting thoughts
August 4th, 2024 09:52
Capital Punishment
sorenbarrett said:
Cleverly disguised in images with ambiguous meanings this carries a powerful message. Nicely done
July 29th, 2024 13:15
sorenbarrett said:
Cleverly disguised in images with ambiguous meanings this carries a powerful message. Nicely done
July 29th, 2024 13:15
Capital Punishment
Bella Shepard said:
āFor the love of money is a root of all kinds of evil\", even the bible has something to say on the subject. I think you\'ve captured it wonderfully in this poem. The three words \"cost of living\" you hear so often, comes to mind in the context of what is a human life worth? Bravo, excellent write!
July 29th, 2024 11:54
Bella Shepard said:
āFor the love of money is a root of all kinds of evil\", even the bible has something to say on the subject. I think you\'ve captured it wonderfully in this poem. The three words \"cost of living\" you hear so often, comes to mind in the context of what is a human life worth? Bravo, excellent write!
July 29th, 2024 11:54
At the Graveside
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words Ben, I have walked through cemeteries in the past and had some strange thoughts causing many emotions.
Andy
July 26th, 2024 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words Ben, I have walked through cemeteries in the past and had some strange thoughts causing many emotions.
Andy
July 26th, 2024 01:19
Measures
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words about things in your life Ben, I am sure that all will be well and you will always play your music.
Andy
July 14th, 2024 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words about things in your life Ben, I am sure that all will be well and you will always play your music.
Andy
July 14th, 2024 01:41
Measures
Bella Shepard said:
I can relate wholly to the sentiment of this poem. You phrase so well the pain and difficulty of your physical situation, and yet your last stanza stands as a firm resolution of hope for the future. Kudos my friend!
July 13th, 2024 11:25
Bella Shepard said:
I can relate wholly to the sentiment of this poem. You phrase so well the pain and difficulty of your physical situation, and yet your last stanza stands as a firm resolution of hope for the future. Kudos my friend!
July 13th, 2024 11:25
Measures
2781 said:
For the grave cannot praise thee, death cannot celebrate thee: those that go down into to the pit cannot hope for thy truth.
July 13th, 2024 09:29
2781 said:
For the grave cannot praise thee, death cannot celebrate thee: those that go down into to the pit cannot hope for thy truth.
July 13th, 2024 09:29
Look Out! Eagle!
Goldfinch60 said:
We all progress in differing ways Ben hopefully we are progressing along the right path.
Andy
July 12th, 2024 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
We all progress in differing ways Ben hopefully we are progressing along the right path.
Andy
July 12th, 2024 01:14
Gainsborough Rose (for Rosemary Macandrew, Rest in Peace)
Teddy.15 said:
Life is certainly a rollercoaster sending you all my love. š¹
July 11th, 2024 03:43
Teddy.15 said:
Life is certainly a rollercoaster sending you all my love. š¹
July 11th, 2024 03:43
Gainsborough Rose (for Rosemary Macandrew, Rest in Peace)
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful caring words full of love and tenderness for an obviously wonderful lady in your life Ben. May she Rest In Peace.
Andy
July 11th, 2024 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful caring words full of love and tenderness for an obviously wonderful lady in your life Ben. May she Rest In Peace.
Andy
July 11th, 2024 01:23
Gainsborough Rose (for Rosemary Macandrew, Rest in Peace)
Cassie58 said:
A beautiful tribute and memorial for Rose who lost her life in tragic circumstances. Condolences to you and her loved ones. Your stanzas moved me poet.
July 10th, 2024 11:20
Cassie58 said:
A beautiful tribute and memorial for Rose who lost her life in tragic circumstances. Condolences to you and her loved ones. Your stanzas moved me poet.
July 10th, 2024 11:20
Gainsborough Rose (for Rosemary Macandrew, Rest in Peace)
Tony36 said:
Awesome write
July 10th, 2024 09:59
Tony36 said:
Awesome write
July 10th, 2024 09:59
Times of Then, Times of Now (recited in whisper, in a hospital bed in A&E in QMC, inspired by my ward neighbour, who had a fall, and suffers with Alzheimerās, who talked relentlessly to her daughter, of losing āthe cartā two and a half weeks ago)
Goldfinch60 said:
That perpetual stream will always take you to a fine place Ben.
glad you are getting better.
Andy
May 25th, 2024 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
That perpetual stream will always take you to a fine place Ben.
glad you are getting better.
Andy
May 25th, 2024 01:50
Times of Then, Times of Now (recited in whisper, in a hospital bed in A&E in QMC, inspired by my ward neighbour, who had a fall, and suffers with Alzheimerās, who talked relentlessly to her daughter, of losing āthe cartā two and a half weeks ago)
Teddy.15 said:
Oh my, dear poet, I\'m sorry to hear of your recent adventure, may you now stay very well, the silver lining you got great material and kudos on the compassion because when we are in these places it\'s sometimes hard to concentrate on others. Bravo. š¹
May 25th, 2024 00:55
Teddy.15 said:
Oh my, dear poet, I\'m sorry to hear of your recent adventure, may you now stay very well, the silver lining you got great material and kudos on the compassion because when we are in these places it\'s sometimes hard to concentrate on others. Bravo. š¹
May 25th, 2024 00:55
Times of Then, Times of Now (recited in whisper, in a hospital bed in A&E in QMC, inspired by my ward neighbour, who had a fall, and suffers with Alzheimerās, who talked relentlessly to her daughter, of losing āthe cartā two and a half weeks ago)
2781 said:
I like your poem, not your situation!
May 24th, 2024 16:40
2781 said:
I like your poem, not your situation!
May 24th, 2024 16:40
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