Comments received on poems by AuburnScribbler
Gainsborough Rose (for Rosemary Macandrew, Rest in Peace)
Cassie58 said:
A beautiful tribute and memorial for Rose who lost her life in tragic circumstances. Condolences to you and her loved ones. Your stanzas moved me poet.
July 10th, 2024 11:20
Cassie58 said:
A beautiful tribute and memorial for Rose who lost her life in tragic circumstances. Condolences to you and her loved ones. Your stanzas moved me poet.
July 10th, 2024 11:20
Gainsborough Rose (for Rosemary Macandrew, Rest in Peace)
Tony36 said:
Awesome write
July 10th, 2024 09:59
Tony36 said:
Awesome write
July 10th, 2024 09:59
Times of Then, Times of Now (recited in whisper, in a hospital bed in A&E in QMC, inspired by my ward neighbour, who had a fall, and suffers with Alzheimer’s, who talked relentlessly to her daughter, of losing “the cart” two and a half weeks ago)
Goldfinch60 said:
That perpetual stream will always take you to a fine place Ben.
glad you are getting better.
Andy
May 25th, 2024 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
That perpetual stream will always take you to a fine place Ben.
glad you are getting better.
Andy
May 25th, 2024 01:50
Times of Then, Times of Now (recited in whisper, in a hospital bed in A&E in QMC, inspired by my ward neighbour, who had a fall, and suffers with Alzheimer’s, who talked relentlessly to her daughter, of losing “the cart” two and a half weeks ago)
Teddy.15 said:
Oh my, dear poet, I\'m sorry to hear of your recent adventure, may you now stay very well, the silver lining you got great material and kudos on the compassion because when we are in these places it\'s sometimes hard to concentrate on others. Bravo. 🌹
May 25th, 2024 00:55
Teddy.15 said:
Oh my, dear poet, I\'m sorry to hear of your recent adventure, may you now stay very well, the silver lining you got great material and kudos on the compassion because when we are in these places it\'s sometimes hard to concentrate on others. Bravo. 🌹
May 25th, 2024 00:55
Times of Then, Times of Now (recited in whisper, in a hospital bed in A&E in QMC, inspired by my ward neighbour, who had a fall, and suffers with Alzheimer’s, who talked relentlessly to her daughter, of losing “the cart” two and a half weeks ago)
2781 said:
I like your poem, not your situation!
May 24th, 2024 16:40
2781 said:
I like your poem, not your situation!
May 24th, 2024 16:40
Upon Overactivity
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Ben, that silence in life can be a great healer to us all.
Andy
April 23rd, 2024 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Ben, that silence in life can be a great healer to us all.
Andy
April 23rd, 2024 01:43
Despatch Box’s Lament (A Town Shanty)
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Ben and yes I was singing along to it.
Andy
April 21st, 2024 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Ben and yes I was singing along to it.
Andy
April 21st, 2024 01:27
Click Track
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Ben.
Take seven, all is well
A hit it has become
Top of the charts once more
A time to be thankful in life.
Andy
April 9th, 2024 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Ben.
Take seven, all is well
A hit it has become
Top of the charts once more
A time to be thankful in life.
Andy
April 9th, 2024 01:12
Click Track
Bella Shepard said:
I love the metaphor of music, click track the pulse of life, in perfect sync. You take us through ages and stages, a wonderfully inspired and oh so clever write my friend.
April 8th, 2024 15:05
Bella Shepard said:
I love the metaphor of music, click track the pulse of life, in perfect sync. You take us through ages and stages, a wonderfully inspired and oh so clever write my friend.
April 8th, 2024 15:05
Dream-Day-Dream
Goldfinch60 said:
Such good words Ben, our lives will be better, mine certainly has changed for the better and I wish the same to all.
Andy
April 8th, 2024 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Such good words Ben, our lives will be better, mine certainly has changed for the better and I wish the same to all.
Andy
April 8th, 2024 01:20
Dream-Day-Dream
Bella Shepard said:
I love the mirror image of your title.
We can simply accept, or dare to dream, for when we do such good, positive things can happen in our brains. Your last stanza begs such a wonderful question, that anyone would be hard pressed to answer, \"what if?\" A poem to feast upon my friend!
April 7th, 2024 12:02
Bella Shepard said:
I love the mirror image of your title.
We can simply accept, or dare to dream, for when we do such good, positive things can happen in our brains. Your last stanza begs such a wonderful question, that anyone would be hard pressed to answer, \"what if?\" A poem to feast upon my friend!
April 7th, 2024 12:02
Escaping Jim
orchidee said:
It\'s terrible when something gets into our minds like this.
Meanwhile - will ya follow, Oh I dunno, Fred or Bill, or Joe Bloggs instead?! heehee.
April 5th, 2024 02:12
orchidee said:
It\'s terrible when something gets into our minds like this.
Meanwhile - will ya follow, Oh I dunno, Fred or Bill, or Joe Bloggs instead?! heehee.
April 5th, 2024 02:12
Escaping Jim
Goldfinch60 said:
The person who walks against the throng of people is often the wisest of them all.
I will quite happily share a glass of wine with you Ben. Cheers!
Andy
April 5th, 2024 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
The person who walks against the throng of people is often the wisest of them all.
I will quite happily share a glass of wine with you Ben. Cheers!
Andy
April 5th, 2024 01:11
Escaping Jim
Bella Shepard said:
I had to read this aloud. Your point carried beautifully in rhymed verse, outstanding. It puts me in mind of Plato\'s \"Myth of the cave\", how people can blindly follow, when they know no better. What pains me to see is a generation of parents, vying to keep their children ignorant of the truths of life, it is a breeding ground for ignorance, and ignorance is a dangerous thing in the wrong hands. Fantastic write my friend!!
April 4th, 2024 13:06
Bella Shepard said:
I had to read this aloud. Your point carried beautifully in rhymed verse, outstanding. It puts me in mind of Plato\'s \"Myth of the cave\", how people can blindly follow, when they know no better. What pains me to see is a generation of parents, vying to keep their children ignorant of the truths of life, it is a breeding ground for ignorance, and ignorance is a dangerous thing in the wrong hands. Fantastic write my friend!!
April 4th, 2024 13:06
Choice and Context (Resurrect) (A Poem at Easter 2024)
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever writing Ben.
I hope you have/had a good Easter.
Andy
April 1st, 2024 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever writing Ben.
I hope you have/had a good Easter.
Andy
April 1st, 2024 01:24
Choice and Context (Resurrect) (A Poem at Easter 2024)
Bella Shepard said:
You have very cleverly used elements of the crucifiction to describe the sense of despondency that seems to be creeping over our society. It is certainly becoming more difficult each day to find hope that we can resurrect. Kudos my friend, a fine write!
March 31st, 2024 16:28
Bella Shepard said:
You have very cleverly used elements of the crucifiction to describe the sense of despondency that seems to be creeping over our society. It is certainly becoming more difficult each day to find hope that we can resurrect. Kudos my friend, a fine write!
March 31st, 2024 16:28
Pride Amongst the Gravel
orchidee said:
Yes, some plant bloomed out of our compost heap!
March 20th, 2024 03:30
orchidee said:
Yes, some plant bloomed out of our compost heap!
March 20th, 2024 03:30
Pride Amongst the Gravel
Goldfinch60 said:
At one time in my garden I had a single daffodil that was blooming on Christmas Day every year - so strange but so beautiful.
Andy
March 20th, 2024 02:24
Goldfinch60 said:
At one time in my garden I had a single daffodil that was blooming on Christmas Day every year - so strange but so beautiful.
Andy
March 20th, 2024 02:24
As I Sip Guinness, I See Snakes (written on St. Patrick’s Day 2024)
Goldfinch60 said:
Enjoy your Guiness Ben, as I do mine.
Andy
March 19th, 2024 03:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Enjoy your Guiness Ben, as I do mine.
Andy
March 19th, 2024 03:29
As I Sip Guinness, I See Snakes (written on St. Patrick’s Day 2024)
orchidee said:
You very old, as Goldfinch and I are on here? Did you meet Pat in person?! lol.
March 17th, 2024 12:52
orchidee said:
You very old, as Goldfinch and I are on here? Did you meet Pat in person?! lol.
March 17th, 2024 12:52
Epitaphium Humanitatis
orchidee said:
Bit of French there, in the title?
Anything \'foreign\' is always French to me, being uncultured in languages! lol.
March 16th, 2024 12:10
orchidee said:
Bit of French there, in the title?
Anything \'foreign\' is always French to me, being uncultured in languages! lol.
March 16th, 2024 12:10
The Guy Who Waved
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine write Ben, I will always wave though, and I even smile. LOL
Andy
March 8th, 2024 02:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine write Ben, I will always wave though, and I even smile. LOL
Andy
March 8th, 2024 02:51
The Guy Who Waved
Bella Shepard said:
You\'ve brought attention to something that should be reflexive in us, and sadly too many will ignore these days. A smile and a wave cost nothing, but reap such rewards. Science has proven that a smile is contagious, and a wave is acknowledgement of a fellow human being. I love that you have tackled this dilemma, awareness is the first step. Great write!
March 7th, 2024 14:47
Bella Shepard said:
You\'ve brought attention to something that should be reflexive in us, and sadly too many will ignore these days. A smile and a wave cost nothing, but reap such rewards. Science has proven that a smile is contagious, and a wave is acknowledgement of a fellow human being. I love that you have tackled this dilemma, awareness is the first step. Great write!
March 7th, 2024 14:47
The Guy Who Waved
peto said:
Fantastic read scribbler
A mob I\'m glad I\'m not a part of
The last verse is a stunning finale
Waving back my friend
March 7th, 2024 12:35
peto said:
Fantastic read scribbler
A mob I\'m glad I\'m not a part of
The last verse is a stunning finale
Waving back my friend
March 7th, 2024 12:35
Stir Your Broth in a Helmet (For Dave Myers, A Hairy Biker, Rest in Peace)
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful tribute to Dave Myers Ben, he was so good to watch.
Andy
March 4th, 2024 02:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful tribute to Dave Myers Ben, he was so good to watch.
Andy
March 4th, 2024 02:15
Stir Your Broth in a Helmet (For Dave Myers, A Hairy Biker, Rest in Peace)
Teddy.15 said:
A very kind and warm gentleman, funny and his passion of food and life was like most who leave earth early extraordinary. I saw some clips of him dancing and he made me smile. A kind dedication. 🌹
March 3rd, 2024 13:45
Teddy.15 said:
A very kind and warm gentleman, funny and his passion of food and life was like most who leave earth early extraordinary. I saw some clips of him dancing and he made me smile. A kind dedication. 🌹
March 3rd, 2024 13:45
Pic, Pack, Happy Slap, Gift a Sod a Throne (The B-Side to a Nursery Rhyme)
Goldfinch60 said:
War is created by people too old to fight for those too young to die.
Andy
March 1st, 2024 02:47
Goldfinch60 said:
War is created by people too old to fight for those too young to die.
Andy
March 1st, 2024 02:47
Cajon (An Acrostic)
Goldfinch60 said:
At the jazz sessions I go to I have often seen cajons played Ben they are great fun.
Andy
February 28th, 2024 02:25
Goldfinch60 said:
At the jazz sessions I go to I have often seen cajons played Ben they are great fun.
Andy
February 28th, 2024 02:25
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