Comments received on poems by AuburnScribbler
The Morning After
orchidee said:
Erm, I got it mixed up. I had me dinner in bed, before going to sleep. Doh! lol.
August 19th, 2023 13:13
orchidee said:
Erm, I got it mixed up. I had me dinner in bed, before going to sleep. Doh! lol.
August 19th, 2023 13:13
The Morning After
Bella Shepard said:
Sometimes I think we need to rework what we call the \"work ethic\". In many ways it\'s come to mean how much time you have to put in on the job, rather than the quality of work. I wish quality could trump quantity, perhaps more would get done in a shorter, smarter way, giving quality of life a more prominent role. You\'ve hit the proverbial nail on the head my friend with this poem, great write!
August 19th, 2023 12:04
Bella Shepard said:
Sometimes I think we need to rework what we call the \"work ethic\". In many ways it\'s come to mean how much time you have to put in on the job, rather than the quality of work. I wish quality could trump quantity, perhaps more would get done in a shorter, smarter way, giving quality of life a more prominent role. You\'ve hit the proverbial nail on the head my friend with this poem, great write!
August 19th, 2023 12:04
Quid\'s on the Bench
Goldfinch60 said:
Pub quizzes can certainly be fun Ben, I used to be in a pub quiz team.
Andy
August 18th, 2023 02:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Pub quizzes can certainly be fun Ben, I used to be in a pub quiz team.
Andy
August 18th, 2023 02:17
Poor Man\'s Throne
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words are so meaningful in the way the world is at the moment Ben.
Andy
August 16th, 2023 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words are so meaningful in the way the world is at the moment Ben.
Andy
August 16th, 2023 01:51
Barred
Bobby O said:
I like this piece a lot The symbolism you chose really transferred the story and THE REAL to the reader. Nice write hood read
August 14th, 2023 13:20
Bobby O said:
I like this piece a lot The symbolism you chose really transferred the story and THE REAL to the reader. Nice write hood read
August 14th, 2023 13:20
Sting When You’re Pinning
Teddy.15 said:
LoL 🤣 I\'m immensely offended you gonna get rid of me from The 70\'s lol
August 12th, 2023 16:29
Teddy.15 said:
LoL 🤣 I\'m immensely offended you gonna get rid of me from The 70\'s lol
August 12th, 2023 16:29
Sting When You’re Pinning
Bella Shepard said:
Sharing this little mishap is so delightful, although I\'m sure not for Pa. How nice that such a project is a family affair. Great pic! What a lovely space to enjoy, as I have enjoyed this poem dear friend.
August 12th, 2023 11:53
Bella Shepard said:
Sharing this little mishap is so delightful, although I\'m sure not for Pa. How nice that such a project is a family affair. Great pic! What a lovely space to enjoy, as I have enjoyed this poem dear friend.
August 12th, 2023 11:53
Cue to Make a Return
Parisab said:
‘For a life full lived, is both sweet and rotten’ untying the grasp of the ego through acceptance of nothing is being all good or bad-sounds so personal and universal: thanks for the good write! Immaculate!
August 11th, 2023 20:53
Parisab said:
‘For a life full lived, is both sweet and rotten’ untying the grasp of the ego through acceptance of nothing is being all good or bad-sounds so personal and universal: thanks for the good write! Immaculate!
August 11th, 2023 20:53
Cue to Make a Return
Teddy.15 said:
I say to hell with the past and say hello to the new. My sympathies for the band but it wouldn\'t be a true band without a bit of drama people grow people go! This is fab and I particularly absolutely love the last stanza. 💖
August 11th, 2023 10:32
Teddy.15 said:
I say to hell with the past and say hello to the new. My sympathies for the band but it wouldn\'t be a true band without a bit of drama people grow people go! This is fab and I particularly absolutely love the last stanza. 💖
August 11th, 2023 10:32
Pewter Pot
Parisab said:
Salud sir! This is an authentically masculine poem! It brought back the memory of certain object of my father he brought over and used from many oceans! It is universal and personal, thought of the Viking artifacts and throughly American in spirit! Thanks for sharing!
August 10th, 2023 11:37
Parisab said:
Salud sir! This is an authentically masculine poem! It brought back the memory of certain object of my father he brought over and used from many oceans! It is universal and personal, thought of the Viking artifacts and throughly American in spirit! Thanks for sharing!
August 10th, 2023 11:37
No Top Trump
Doggerel Dave said:
Australia had a similar: the three of them came out of the same mould with just marginally different paintwork.
A well targeted piece, Ben; the choice of sketch a perfect accompaniment - I only hope it comes to pass.
August 9th, 2023 23:15
Doggerel Dave said:
Australia had a similar: the three of them came out of the same mould with just marginally different paintwork.
A well targeted piece, Ben; the choice of sketch a perfect accompaniment - I only hope it comes to pass.
August 9th, 2023 23:15
What Do We Own?
peto said:
Always thought provoking
Always socially aware and very relatable
Enjoyed every word though have to agree with Bella
The 2nd verse is special
Tremendous writing
August 9th, 2023 16:48
peto said:
Always thought provoking
Always socially aware and very relatable
Enjoyed every word though have to agree with Bella
The 2nd verse is special
Tremendous writing
August 9th, 2023 16:48
Smelly Socks
Teddy.15 said:
LOL this is another magnificent poem from you, yes in some places dark but only because my own father was a coal miner in Yorkshire when he was about 8/9 years old how times have changed my worst fear is the cell phone and the tablet and so on, children of today if left to their own devices can truly lose the will to even walk let alone run, or ride a bike I\'ve seen it. Yes your last lines bring a fabulous chuckle 🤭❤️
August 9th, 2023 15:36
Teddy.15 said:
LOL this is another magnificent poem from you, yes in some places dark but only because my own father was a coal miner in Yorkshire when he was about 8/9 years old how times have changed my worst fear is the cell phone and the tablet and so on, children of today if left to their own devices can truly lose the will to even walk let alone run, or ride a bike I\'ve seen it. Yes your last lines bring a fabulous chuckle 🤭❤️
August 9th, 2023 15:36
Smelly Socks
Bella Shepard said:
My friend, I grew up in an age when children were in fact children. We do seem to condition them these days to be productive workers and consumers. Children, whose parents plan their days and weekends from infancy, teachers who plan their evenings filled with homework, coaches who stress that winning is everything. Where is the freedom to just enjoy being a child? In doing they are deprived of one of the most important stages of growing up. And as they are trained, so they grow up to be, and teach their children. The industrious gears of life roll on. Would that those smelly socks came from a long day of playing, exploring and learning about life. I applaud your intuitive verse dear poet, so very well done!
August 9th, 2023 13:26
Bella Shepard said:
My friend, I grew up in an age when children were in fact children. We do seem to condition them these days to be productive workers and consumers. Children, whose parents plan their days and weekends from infancy, teachers who plan their evenings filled with homework, coaches who stress that winning is everything. Where is the freedom to just enjoy being a child? In doing they are deprived of one of the most important stages of growing up. And as they are trained, so they grow up to be, and teach their children. The industrious gears of life roll on. Would that those smelly socks came from a long day of playing, exploring and learning about life. I applaud your intuitive verse dear poet, so very well done!
August 9th, 2023 13:26
What Do We Own?
Bella Shepard said:
You capture the conondrum of human existence in this eloquent poem, especially the second stanza. We are the maker\'s of our own destiny, for better or worse, not really knowing who we are. \"Brilliant\"!
August 8th, 2023 14:50
Bella Shepard said:
You capture the conondrum of human existence in this eloquent poem, especially the second stanza. We are the maker\'s of our own destiny, for better or worse, not really knowing who we are. \"Brilliant\"!
August 8th, 2023 14:50
No Top Trump
Neville said:
I very much enjoyed my visit here .. and couldn\'t agree more .. thank heaven those two narcissists are no longer in post .. and let\'s pray it stays that way ... Neville
August 7th, 2023 12:07
Neville said:
I very much enjoyed my visit here .. and couldn\'t agree more .. thank heaven those two narcissists are no longer in post .. and let\'s pray it stays that way ... Neville
August 7th, 2023 12:07
No Top Trump
orchidee said:
Ohhh, I told them not to trust anyone with such a dodgy barnet (hairstyle) - Trumpton Barnet! lol.
August 7th, 2023 11:33
orchidee said:
Ohhh, I told them not to trust anyone with such a dodgy barnet (hairstyle) - Trumpton Barnet! lol.
August 7th, 2023 11:33
Mister System
Teddy.15 said:
Superb, such a loss to the music industry a genius who dared to be honest. 💖
August 4th, 2023 05:59
Teddy.15 said:
Superb, such a loss to the music industry a genius who dared to be honest. 💖
August 4th, 2023 05:59
Mister System
Bella Shepard said:
When employees simply become tools of production instead of partners, and their worth is all about results, it is a sad commentary on our society. You have captured this so eloquently dear poet. Keep that strong voice, and keep us attuned. Love your tribute to Sinead. As always, a great write!
August 2nd, 2023 15:28
Bella Shepard said:
When employees simply become tools of production instead of partners, and their worth is all about results, it is a sad commentary on our society. You have captured this so eloquently dear poet. Keep that strong voice, and keep us attuned. Love your tribute to Sinead. As always, a great write!
August 2nd, 2023 15:28
Mister System
peto said:
This is a belter scribbler
Pleasure to read with killer ending
Much enjoyed
August 2nd, 2023 11:45
peto said:
This is a belter scribbler
Pleasure to read with killer ending
Much enjoyed
August 2nd, 2023 11:45
Pincer-Wincers (A Quick Town Shanty, about DIY Dentistry)
Bella Shepard said:
Ouch, my sympathy to all who must suffer so. I sang along to the tune of \"Gilligan\'s Island\", and fit nicely. Fortunately, here in the States, we are rewarded for being old with our Medicare System that provides dental care. I wish you better, hopefully pain free, days. Great poem, but I gotta say I winced all the way through.
July 31st, 2023 15:55
Bella Shepard said:
Ouch, my sympathy to all who must suffer so. I sang along to the tune of \"Gilligan\'s Island\", and fit nicely. Fortunately, here in the States, we are rewarded for being old with our Medicare System that provides dental care. I wish you better, hopefully pain free, days. Great poem, but I gotta say I winced all the way through.
July 31st, 2023 15:55
I’ve Got My Lanyard (A Song) to the rhythm of You Should be Dancing by The Bee Gees
peto said:
I\'ve put furniture and storage in many an office
So have met many of whom you speak
Nicely tied in to the brothers Gibb
Enjoyed your notes as well
Keep scribbling
July 25th, 2023 08:17
peto said:
I\'ve put furniture and storage in many an office
So have met many of whom you speak
Nicely tied in to the brothers Gibb
Enjoyed your notes as well
Keep scribbling
July 25th, 2023 08:17
I’ve Got My Lanyard (A Song) to the rhythm of You Should be Dancing by The Bee Gees
Eugene S. said:
I\'m in a thoroughly good mood because of this. Awesome!
July 25th, 2023 03:09
Eugene S. said:
I\'m in a thoroughly good mood because of this. Awesome!
July 25th, 2023 03:09
EU Factor 5000
Goldfinch60 said:
Such good words Ben and so very true, why cannot those \'powers that be\' realise what is going on, presumably if they do what is right there will be no money in it for them!
Andy
July 21st, 2023 00:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Such good words Ben and so very true, why cannot those \'powers that be\' realise what is going on, presumably if they do what is right there will be no money in it for them!
Andy
July 21st, 2023 00:35
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