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I Ate Raw Spaghetti
NinjaGirl said:
Funny and creative! Raw spaghetti is a little safer than what I enjoyed, which was snacking on paper!
October 8th, 2023 13:05
NinjaGirl said:
Funny and creative! Raw spaghetti is a little safer than what I enjoyed, which was snacking on paper!
October 8th, 2023 13:05
To Write a Nightmare
Bella Shepard said:
When have we all not wanted to strangle the neck, or crack the head of ignorance, in a fantasy of retribution. Your nightmare give release to this mental exercise, perhaps for our sanity. Superb!
October 5th, 2023 14:30
Bella Shepard said:
When have we all not wanted to strangle the neck, or crack the head of ignorance, in a fantasy of retribution. Your nightmare give release to this mental exercise, perhaps for our sanity. Superb!
October 5th, 2023 14:30
To Write a Nightmare
Teddy.15 said:
Yeh I absolutely love this talk about mix it up.kid.
pastiche on Dante echoes,
fake loves and bullies cry,
them perpetual bedfellows,
not to reach the sky,
Simply wonderful
, ps I feel.lime ringing a few necks some days too. LoL 🤣 ❤️
October 5th, 2023 12:31
Teddy.15 said:
Yeh I absolutely love this talk about mix it up.kid.
pastiche on Dante echoes,
fake loves and bullies cry,
them perpetual bedfellows,
not to reach the sky,
Simply wonderful
, ps I feel.lime ringing a few necks some days too. LoL 🤣 ❤️
October 5th, 2023 12:31
Every Drop
Parisab said:
The water crisis is universal and now we are more aware about the stream next door-it is hard to imagine that this is the state of developed countries as well-May you and your country be well
October 5th, 2023 00:13
Parisab said:
The water crisis is universal and now we are more aware about the stream next door-it is hard to imagine that this is the state of developed countries as well-May you and your country be well
October 5th, 2023 00:13
Every Drop
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true words Ben, hopefully somebody sometime will realise and do something about it.
Andy
October 4th, 2023 01:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true words Ben, hopefully somebody sometime will realise and do something about it.
Andy
October 4th, 2023 01:00
Pat on the Back
Teddy.15 said:
I absolutely love this it\'s a song my dear friend, we have to stay unique right. ❤️
September 28th, 2023 12:58
Teddy.15 said:
I absolutely love this it\'s a song my dear friend, we have to stay unique right. ❤️
September 28th, 2023 12:58
Pat on the Back
Pop64 said:
The rhyme and flow in this is perfect as you provide the truth of us, the whole world\'s population, just putting in the effort. We\'d then be unstoppable. Awesome read!
September 28th, 2023 10:04
Pop64 said:
The rhyme and flow in this is perfect as you provide the truth of us, the whole world\'s population, just putting in the effort. We\'d then be unstoppable. Awesome read!
September 28th, 2023 10:04
Please Don\'t Skip This Ad
Teddy.15 said:
LOL 😂 this is wonderful, I was offered a book deal this week and it was most entertaining to say the least, I\'m still in a bit of a grump but hey your words about how the world is always makes me chuckle 🤭 ❤️ thanks dear friend.
September 27th, 2023 11:17
Teddy.15 said:
LOL 😂 this is wonderful, I was offered a book deal this week and it was most entertaining to say the least, I\'m still in a bit of a grump but hey your words about how the world is always makes me chuckle 🤭 ❤️ thanks dear friend.
September 27th, 2023 11:17
Stuffed Tiger on the Goblet
Goldfinch60 said:
I too have a lifelong teddy who has always sat next to my bed Ben, they are part of our life.
Andy
September 22nd, 2023 01:03
Goldfinch60 said:
I too have a lifelong teddy who has always sat next to my bed Ben, they are part of our life.
Andy
September 22nd, 2023 01:03
Hall of Shame
Parisab said:
We’re all in the hall of shame, with noone to throw the first stone, which is the whole plan I believe. Thank you for tackling the conflicts of all ages…
September 21st, 2023 21:15
Parisab said:
We’re all in the hall of shame, with noone to throw the first stone, which is the whole plan I believe. Thank you for tackling the conflicts of all ages…
September 21st, 2023 21:15
Stuffed Tiger on the Goblet
Teddy.15 said:
I\'m a tiger too you know, born in 74 hey this is just what I needed a bit of light relief to read something warm and humbling, I have all my son\'s cuddly toys I always tell him, when he leaves home, I shall cuddle them every night. lol 🐻 a gorgeous poem to make teddy chuckle. 💖
September 21st, 2023 11:21
Teddy.15 said:
I\'m a tiger too you know, born in 74 hey this is just what I needed a bit of light relief to read something warm and humbling, I have all my son\'s cuddly toys I always tell him, when he leaves home, I shall cuddle them every night. lol 🐻 a gorgeous poem to make teddy chuckle. 💖
September 21st, 2023 11:21
The Art of Being Calm
Goldfinch60 said:
Being calm is the way I react to many situations as reacting in an oppressing way can create even more disharmony. Showing apathy can be a wonderful weapon Ben.
Hope all is well with you as it is with me.
Andy
September 21st, 2023 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Being calm is the way I react to many situations as reacting in an oppressing way can create even more disharmony. Showing apathy can be a wonderful weapon Ben.
Hope all is well with you as it is with me.
Andy
September 21st, 2023 01:49
Hall of Shame
Goldfinch60 said:
Good true words Ben, yes \'when will it get better?\'
And
September 20th, 2023 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Good true words Ben, yes \'when will it get better?\'
And
September 20th, 2023 01:44
Hall of Shame
BlessedbyGod said:
So much truth in this piece friend,
Though I disagree with Christianity blaming and shaming, we don\'t do that, well those of us that are true Christians don\'t, granted that there are many that do, our job is just to share God\'s word and not to pressure anyone to anything, we all have free will and choice,
Great piece here friend, 👏 👍
September 19th, 2023 10:44
BlessedbyGod said:
So much truth in this piece friend,
Though I disagree with Christianity blaming and shaming, we don\'t do that, well those of us that are true Christians don\'t, granted that there are many that do, our job is just to share God\'s word and not to pressure anyone to anything, we all have free will and choice,
Great piece here friend, 👏 👍
September 19th, 2023 10:44
Wandersworth
Bella Shepard said:
Where there\'s a will, there\'s a way, and it\'s unfortunate when the bad guys find it. I commiserate with you on this one. Here in the US a two week manhunt was just concluded when authorities tracked down a convicted murder who had escaped from a county prison in Philadelphia. This guy was extremely dangerous and armed, and communities were on high alert with him the loose. Police ended up using thermal heat technology from an aircraft to finally locate him, and a U.S. Border Patrol tactical unit dog fwas able to pin him down. This guy was extremely dangerous and armed, and communities were on high alert while he was on the loose with him the loose. Guess this would be the time to beef up security, after the horse has left the barn. Good write!
September 13th, 2023 15:36
Bella Shepard said:
Where there\'s a will, there\'s a way, and it\'s unfortunate when the bad guys find it. I commiserate with you on this one. Here in the US a two week manhunt was just concluded when authorities tracked down a convicted murder who had escaped from a county prison in Philadelphia. This guy was extremely dangerous and armed, and communities were on high alert with him the loose. Police ended up using thermal heat technology from an aircraft to finally locate him, and a U.S. Border Patrol tactical unit dog fwas able to pin him down. This guy was extremely dangerous and armed, and communities were on high alert while he was on the loose with him the loose. Guess this would be the time to beef up security, after the horse has left the barn. Good write!
September 13th, 2023 15:36
Wandersworth
Parisab said:
It is a delicate balance to address a person ‘unknown’ with multiplicity -job well done-everyone craves for freedom and not all in a gentle way-
September 13th, 2023 13:29
Parisab said:
It is a delicate balance to address a person ‘unknown’ with multiplicity -job well done-everyone craves for freedom and not all in a gentle way-
September 13th, 2023 13:29
Wandersworth
Aktarul Islam said:
\"squared circle was a towpath,
your breaths, were very deep,
off-duty cop, sure did the maths,\"
I have fallen in love with your style of expressing thought so perfectly. Hats off to you, honorable poet.
September 13th, 2023 12:50
Aktarul Islam said:
\"squared circle was a towpath,
your breaths, were very deep,
off-duty cop, sure did the maths,\"
I have fallen in love with your style of expressing thought so perfectly. Hats off to you, honorable poet.
September 13th, 2023 12:50
Wandersworth
Teddy.15 said:
I saw this and I too am from south London it was surely worrying how he could have done it? I also heard the police service isnt to be trusted? What\'s going on in my beloved country? At least he was found in Chiswick! Must have wanted some KFC lol 🤣
September 13th, 2023 11:04
Teddy.15 said:
I saw this and I too am from south London it was surely worrying how he could have done it? I also heard the police service isnt to be trusted? What\'s going on in my beloved country? At least he was found in Chiswick! Must have wanted some KFC lol 🤣
September 13th, 2023 11:04
Space (An Acrostic)
Teddy.15 said:
I believe I could have been an excellent astronomy professor, or astronaut that is my personal belief. Where dreamer\'s dream Hey but space is also becoming crowded dear friend. 💖
September 12th, 2023 11:13
Teddy.15 said:
I believe I could have been an excellent astronomy professor, or astronaut that is my personal belief. Where dreamer\'s dream Hey but space is also becoming crowded dear friend. 💖
September 12th, 2023 11:13
Hat-Man!
Bella Shepard said:
I tip my cap to Hat-Man, and his beautiful Fedoras. Perhaps people feel a little threatened by someone who does not fit the common mold, or who bucks the conformity that was instilled in us from childhood. Without the nonconformists it would be a very dull, boring, colorless world. Great Write!
September 11th, 2023 11:32
Bella Shepard said:
I tip my cap to Hat-Man, and his beautiful Fedoras. Perhaps people feel a little threatened by someone who does not fit the common mold, or who bucks the conformity that was instilled in us from childhood. Without the nonconformists it would be a very dull, boring, colorless world. Great Write!
September 11th, 2023 11:32
Gutter Words
Bella Shepard said:
There have been voices that have cried out in the past, and we haven\'t heard. There are voices that cry out in the present, and we do not hear. Somewhere along the way we lost the ability to actually listen, and perhaps, if we had we might be better off. I don\'t know where to look for consolation these days. Perhaps we all just hold hands and take a leap of faith together.
September 8th, 2023 14:06
Bella Shepard said:
There have been voices that have cried out in the past, and we haven\'t heard. There are voices that cry out in the present, and we do not hear. Somewhere along the way we lost the ability to actually listen, and perhaps, if we had we might be better off. I don\'t know where to look for consolation these days. Perhaps we all just hold hands and take a leap of faith together.
September 8th, 2023 14:06
Ticket (An Acrostic)
Bella Shepard said:
So much of the knew phraseology these days is not in tune with these aged ears, and I must rely on those your age to clarify. I do however agree with you as to the state of a world where truth seems to be a relic of the past, and to trust, you must keep your guard up. Great write, keep your finger on the pulse!
September 7th, 2023 13:28
Bella Shepard said:
So much of the knew phraseology these days is not in tune with these aged ears, and I must rely on those your age to clarify. I do however agree with you as to the state of a world where truth seems to be a relic of the past, and to trust, you must keep your guard up. Great write, keep your finger on the pulse!
September 7th, 2023 13:28
Ticket (An Acrostic)
Pop64 said:
Terrific in form, flow and clarity, cleverly conveying the message of the write. Nice work!
September 7th, 2023 13:14
Pop64 said:
Terrific in form, flow and clarity, cleverly conveying the message of the write. Nice work!
September 7th, 2023 13:14
Bleeding in My Room
Bella Shepard said:
Intrusive thoughts come out of nowhere, when you least expect. I find that the eyes of age have helped me gain perspective, and a touch of wisdom in understanding the difficult family relationships that plagued my younger self. I know those thoughts will pop up from time to time, it\'s inevitible. But when they do, I know who I am now, and they can\'t make me feel bad any more, I accept that they are part of me and I can go on. This is such a powerful theme dear friend, one that strikes at the heart of our vulnerabilities, such a brave and thoughtful write.
September 1st, 2023 15:40
Bella Shepard said:
Intrusive thoughts come out of nowhere, when you least expect. I find that the eyes of age have helped me gain perspective, and a touch of wisdom in understanding the difficult family relationships that plagued my younger self. I know those thoughts will pop up from time to time, it\'s inevitible. But when they do, I know who I am now, and they can\'t make me feel bad any more, I accept that they are part of me and I can go on. This is such a powerful theme dear friend, one that strikes at the heart of our vulnerabilities, such a brave and thoughtful write.
September 1st, 2023 15:40
Bleeding in My Room
MissD said:
this poem just shattered my soul...n i loved it
September 1st, 2023 14:44
MissD said:
this poem just shattered my soul...n i loved it
September 1st, 2023 14:44
Bleeding in My Room
Pop64 said:
I read this and as I read I was reminded of my youth, the child of alcoholics who sometimes physically beat but more often emotionally beat down. I was reminded of the human frailty, the fact that we\'re all fallible. Due to the realizations, we can move forward either through suppression (not recommended) or through recognition. Very well written and so thought provoking!
September 1st, 2023 08:59
Pop64 said:
I read this and as I read I was reminded of my youth, the child of alcoholics who sometimes physically beat but more often emotionally beat down. I was reminded of the human frailty, the fact that we\'re all fallible. Due to the realizations, we can move forward either through suppression (not recommended) or through recognition. Very well written and so thought provoking!
September 1st, 2023 08:59
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