Comments received on poems by AuburnScribbler
Bluebottle
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Ben, yes they do not seem to know how to escape as we try to escape from the horrors of the world in a similar way.
Andy
September 11th, 2024 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Ben, yes they do not seem to know how to escape as we try to escape from the horrors of the world in a similar way.
Andy
September 11th, 2024 01:51
Bluebottle
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that well could be a nursery rhyme and with a message too. Nicely written
September 10th, 2024 13:19
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that well could be a nursery rhyme and with a message too. Nicely written
September 10th, 2024 13:19
Potboy
Neilton said:
Such an interesting and beautifully written poem! Your analysis makes it even more unique!
September 10th, 2024 06:41
Neilton said:
Such an interesting and beautifully written poem! Your analysis makes it even more unique!
September 10th, 2024 06:41
Potboy
Goldfinch60 said:
That hope will always be with you Ben and it will become reality.
Andy
September 10th, 2024 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
That hope will always be with you Ben and it will become reality.
Andy
September 10th, 2024 01:52
Potboy
sorenbarrett said:
A great play on words and yes hope is the end of all. Nicely written
September 9th, 2024 15:22
sorenbarrett said:
A great play on words and yes hope is the end of all. Nicely written
September 9th, 2024 15:22
Potboy
Teddy.15 said:
Most entertaining, pot boy turned dish-hand, all grown up! š¤£
September 9th, 2024 14:59
Teddy.15 said:
Most entertaining, pot boy turned dish-hand, all grown up! š¤£
September 9th, 2024 14:59
Starmerās Pyjamas (A āDirePunkā Song)
Cheeky Missy said:
Aha! The Holiday being one of my favorites, I declare but you bring back bits and pieces of that here! Thank you for sharing. I\'ve enjoyed attempting to see how to sing it, which is fun to do.
September 6th, 2024 09:06
Cheeky Missy said:
Aha! The Holiday being one of my favorites, I declare but you bring back bits and pieces of that here! Thank you for sharing. I\'ve enjoyed attempting to see how to sing it, which is fun to do.
September 6th, 2024 09:06
No Way to Cotham
Cheeky Missy said:
My la! What a ramble through the fabled English countryside indeed! Nothing like the difficulties of modern roadwork and the like. Your place names threw me off, whence I thank you all the more for the explanation/translation in your notes. Thank you very much for sharing. Beautifully detailed with a delightful poignancy. Me loves!
September 6th, 2024 05:47
Cheeky Missy said:
My la! What a ramble through the fabled English countryside indeed! Nothing like the difficulties of modern roadwork and the like. Your place names threw me off, whence I thank you all the more for the explanation/translation in your notes. Thank you very much for sharing. Beautifully detailed with a delightful poignancy. Me loves!
September 6th, 2024 05:47
No Way to Cotham
Neilton said:
I\'m glad you had a nice walk that day ! This poem is beautiful in every way !!Your talent is truly unique
September 6th, 2024 04:05
Neilton said:
I\'m glad you had a nice walk that day ! This poem is beautiful in every way !!Your talent is truly unique
September 6th, 2024 04:05
No Way to Cotham
Dan Williams said:
OK I admit I had to look up Cotham, was well worth it. Nice work.
September 4th, 2024 00:49
Dan Williams said:
OK I admit I had to look up Cotham, was well worth it. Nice work.
September 4th, 2024 00:49
No Way to Cotham
sorenbarrett said:
Often detours in life have their own blessings. A fun right in itself take this poem for a metaphor lovely.
September 3rd, 2024 05:22
sorenbarrett said:
Often detours in life have their own blessings. A fun right in itself take this poem for a metaphor lovely.
September 3rd, 2024 05:22
No Way to Cotham
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine walk Ben, I hope those fish and chips were tasty.
Andy
September 3rd, 2024 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine walk Ben, I hope those fish and chips were tasty.
Andy
September 3rd, 2024 01:25
No Way to Cotham
Bella Shepard said:
Memory can take us to so many different places. And yet how often when we revisit, the memory is challenged by change. This is a lovely poem, and so glad that it turned out well in the end. A fine write dear friend!
September 2nd, 2024 13:10
Bella Shepard said:
Memory can take us to so many different places. And yet how often when we revisit, the memory is challenged by change. This is a lovely poem, and so glad that it turned out well in the end. A fine write dear friend!
September 2nd, 2024 13:10
Paralympics (An Acrostic)
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Ben, in spite of their problems they still keep going.
Andy
September 1st, 2024 01:07
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Ben, in spite of their problems they still keep going.
Andy
September 1st, 2024 01:07
Paralympics (An Acrostic)
sorenbarrett said:
A noble and well deserved write about people that choose to overcome obstacles beyond comprehension. Loved it.
August 31st, 2024 09:27
sorenbarrett said:
A noble and well deserved write about people that choose to overcome obstacles beyond comprehension. Loved it.
August 31st, 2024 09:27
Climbing to Coddington
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words and memories Ben.
Andy
August 30th, 2024 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words and memories Ben.
Andy
August 30th, 2024 01:43
Climbing to Coddington
Cheeky Missy said:
You Brits have Paddington Bear and the very name of this hamlet or village [pardon my United Stated ignorance, please] is reminiscent of that character while the details scattered to taste throughout this charming rendition add to its appeal. The tone of reminiscence and the tale itself are the reason longish poems with quatrain stanzas have their standing and charm. Very lovely and winsome. Thank you so much for sharing!
August 29th, 2024 09:02
Cheeky Missy said:
You Brits have Paddington Bear and the very name of this hamlet or village [pardon my United Stated ignorance, please] is reminiscent of that character while the details scattered to taste throughout this charming rendition add to its appeal. The tone of reminiscence and the tale itself are the reason longish poems with quatrain stanzas have their standing and charm. Very lovely and winsome. Thank you so much for sharing!
August 29th, 2024 09:02
The Gigger at Balderton
Goldfinch60 said:
More wonderful words Ben, and hearing music as well makes life even better.
Andy
August 27th, 2024 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
More wonderful words Ben, and hearing music as well makes life even better.
Andy
August 27th, 2024 01:24
The Gigger at Balderton
Bella Shepard said:
I can certainly understand how the gigger must tire of the same old playlist over and over. But I can also understand, at the same time he willingly plays for the crowd the songs they know by heart and love to sing, the need to have variety to keep it fresh for the muscian. Such a balance to strike. A wonderful poem my friend, hoping the warming sun is a good sign.
August 26th, 2024 14:11
Bella Shepard said:
I can certainly understand how the gigger must tire of the same old playlist over and over. But I can also understand, at the same time he willingly plays for the crowd the songs they know by heart and love to sing, the need to have variety to keep it fresh for the muscian. Such a balance to strike. A wonderful poem my friend, hoping the warming sun is a good sign.
August 26th, 2024 14:11
The Gigger at Balderton
sorenbarrett said:
Such a classical feel to this poem it leaves an older feel. Nicely done
August 26th, 2024 09:32
sorenbarrett said:
Such a classical feel to this poem it leaves an older feel. Nicely done
August 26th, 2024 09:32
Pinecones of Winthorpe
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words and a wonderful walk Ben, I hope that you enjoy many more of them.
Andy
August 26th, 2024 01:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words and a wonderful walk Ben, I hope that you enjoy many more of them.
Andy
August 26th, 2024 01:53
Pinecones of Winthorpe
Cheeky Missy said:
Charming and quite enchanting. Me likes. Thank you very much for sharing both the poem and the notes explaining it.
August 25th, 2024 16:33
Cheeky Missy said:
Charming and quite enchanting. Me likes. Thank you very much for sharing both the poem and the notes explaining it.
August 25th, 2024 16:33
Farndon on a Friday
Goldfinch60 said:
Walking in some villages can bring wonder and harmony to us Ben, as this one has with you.
Andy
August 25th, 2024 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Walking in some villages can bring wonder and harmony to us Ben, as this one has with you.
Andy
August 25th, 2024 01:10
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