Comments received on poems by AuburnScribbler
There Always is an Odd Sock, When Doing the Laundry
Bella Shepard said:
The odd sock is the bane of my life. I also spent the last 30 minutes backspacing, deleting and editing, and still haven\'t come up with a finished product, so it\'s out there somewhere with that sock. When something goes wrong in what we think is a perfect life it is a reality check, if we\'re wise. Unfortunately, in evades too many who claim perfection, when their flaws are on display. A very timely write my friend, we\'re going through this right now in our political forum, and it is very toxic. Kudos for your thoughts and voice!
November 6th, 2023 14:52
Bella Shepard said:
The odd sock is the bane of my life. I also spent the last 30 minutes backspacing, deleting and editing, and still haven\'t come up with a finished product, so it\'s out there somewhere with that sock. When something goes wrong in what we think is a perfect life it is a reality check, if we\'re wise. Unfortunately, in evades too many who claim perfection, when their flaws are on display. A very timely write my friend, we\'re going through this right now in our political forum, and it is very toxic. Kudos for your thoughts and voice!
November 6th, 2023 14:52
47 (A Poem in Homage to Adam Johnson, former Nottingham Panthers Ice Hockey Player)
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful tribute Ben. So young to have passed from this world.
Andy
November 5th, 2023 02:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful tribute Ben. So young to have passed from this world.
Andy
November 5th, 2023 02:11
47 (A Poem in Homage to Adam Johnson, former Nottingham Panthers Ice Hockey Player)
Bella Shepard said:
A beautifuliful elegy. Sadly a life cut short, and a destiny denied. You have done him great honor.
November 2nd, 2023 14:46
Bella Shepard said:
A beautifuliful elegy. Sadly a life cut short, and a destiny denied. You have done him great honor.
November 2nd, 2023 14:46
Health Questionnaire
Bella Shepard said:
It seems that \"integrity\" is on life support these days my friend. The Health Questionnaire in my U.S. points to dismal failure in those who are elected to office, and sadly to those who have no idea what they are voting for. I certainly commiserate with you as to the state of things, and sincerely agree that those found guilty should have their just place, they could do with a heavy dose of humility. Good and very timely write!
November 1st, 2023 13:13
Bella Shepard said:
It seems that \"integrity\" is on life support these days my friend. The Health Questionnaire in my U.S. points to dismal failure in those who are elected to office, and sadly to those who have no idea what they are voting for. I certainly commiserate with you as to the state of things, and sincerely agree that those found guilty should have their just place, they could do with a heavy dose of humility. Good and very timely write!
November 1st, 2023 13:13
Dear, Mother Nature (A Letter)
Thomas W Case said:
Great work. Very creative.
October 25th, 2023 10:01
Thomas W Case said:
Great work. Very creative.
October 25th, 2023 10:01
Here’s Your Two Bloody Knocks (A Ghost’s Response)
peto said:
Excellent write scribbler
I\'m also a fan of the season and day
My young sis was born on the 31st
Wee witch
Thoroughly enjoyed reading
October 22nd, 2023 11:22
peto said:
Excellent write scribbler
I\'m also a fan of the season and day
My young sis was born on the 31st
Wee witch
Thoroughly enjoyed reading
October 22nd, 2023 11:22
Ballad of the Boogeyman
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful and it has that gothic macabre feel to it. Great job.
October 20th, 2023 11:57
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful and it has that gothic macabre feel to it. Great job.
October 20th, 2023 11:57
List
Goldfinch60 said:
Sharing bread is just within the purview of those who have it Ben.
I make my own bread and will share it with all and have done but that is the way I am and do what I can, I wish all could be like that.
Andy
October 18th, 2023 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Sharing bread is just within the purview of those who have it Ben.
I make my own bread and will share it with all and have done but that is the way I am and do what I can, I wish all could be like that.
Andy
October 18th, 2023 01:54
List
LonPoet(Pseudonym) said:
So beautiful poem.Your words have touched my heart.
October 16th, 2023 12:26
LonPoet(Pseudonym) said:
So beautiful poem.Your words have touched my heart.
October 16th, 2023 12:26
List
Pop64 said:
Get better? With the leaders of today not demonstrating power for the people, rather power over people, it just doesn\'t seem possible. One can speak of your rhyme and imagery you used in this, but it\'s the message that you put forth, that lets this reader appreciate it. Well done!
October 16th, 2023 12:24
Pop64 said:
Get better? With the leaders of today not demonstrating power for the people, rather power over people, it just doesn\'t seem possible. One can speak of your rhyme and imagery you used in this, but it\'s the message that you put forth, that lets this reader appreciate it. Well done!
October 16th, 2023 12:24
Buying (An Acrostic)
Parisab said:
Those trolls are waiting at every door and gate and even under bridges! Love the word play of buy vs purchase…
October 13th, 2023 12:04
Parisab said:
Those trolls are waiting at every door and gate and even under bridges! Love the word play of buy vs purchase…
October 13th, 2023 12:04
Buying (An Acrostic)
Goldfinch60 said:
Those trolls are increasing ion number and need to be contained some time soon Ben.
Andy
October 11th, 2023 02:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Those trolls are increasing ion number and need to be contained some time soon Ben.
Andy
October 11th, 2023 02:34
Buying (An Acrostic)
Bella Shepard said:
Love the form you\'ve chosen, and your words certainly hit the mark. The price of life itself is high indeed, how will we survive this maelstrom?
October 10th, 2023 13:57
Bella Shepard said:
Love the form you\'ve chosen, and your words certainly hit the mark. The price of life itself is high indeed, how will we survive this maelstrom?
October 10th, 2023 13:57
I Ate Raw Spaghetti
Teddy.15 said:
Well as I live in the land of spaghetti I can say (yuck) 🤣 lol although this poem is truly wonderful, yes it\'s good to be different and we should never be shy to show it, my best friend eats raw pasta though I always look at her funny 🤣 🤣 even I\'m not from Rome. A wonderful enjoyable read. ❤️
October 8th, 2023 14:41
Teddy.15 said:
Well as I live in the land of spaghetti I can say (yuck) 🤣 lol although this poem is truly wonderful, yes it\'s good to be different and we should never be shy to show it, my best friend eats raw pasta though I always look at her funny 🤣 🤣 even I\'m not from Rome. A wonderful enjoyable read. ❤️
October 8th, 2023 14:41
I Ate Raw Spaghetti
Bella Shepard said:
I love this little confession, who does not have quirks that satisfy a need. Mine is in the way I ritualisticly eat oyster crackers, but only when I\'m reading a book. You just own it. This was great!
October 8th, 2023 13:20
Bella Shepard said:
I love this little confession, who does not have quirks that satisfy a need. Mine is in the way I ritualisticly eat oyster crackers, but only when I\'m reading a book. You just own it. This was great!
October 8th, 2023 13:20
I Ate Raw Spaghetti
NinjaGirl said:
Funny and creative! Raw spaghetti is a little safer than what I enjoyed, which was snacking on paper!
October 8th, 2023 13:05
NinjaGirl said:
Funny and creative! Raw spaghetti is a little safer than what I enjoyed, which was snacking on paper!
October 8th, 2023 13:05
To Write a Nightmare
Bella Shepard said:
When have we all not wanted to strangle the neck, or crack the head of ignorance, in a fantasy of retribution. Your nightmare give release to this mental exercise, perhaps for our sanity. Superb!
October 5th, 2023 14:30
Bella Shepard said:
When have we all not wanted to strangle the neck, or crack the head of ignorance, in a fantasy of retribution. Your nightmare give release to this mental exercise, perhaps for our sanity. Superb!
October 5th, 2023 14:30
To Write a Nightmare
Teddy.15 said:
Yeh I absolutely love this talk about mix it up.kid.
pastiche on Dante echoes,
fake loves and bullies cry,
them perpetual bedfellows,
not to reach the sky,
Simply wonderful
, ps I feel.lime ringing a few necks some days too. LoL 🤣 ❤️
October 5th, 2023 12:31
Teddy.15 said:
Yeh I absolutely love this talk about mix it up.kid.
pastiche on Dante echoes,
fake loves and bullies cry,
them perpetual bedfellows,
not to reach the sky,
Simply wonderful
, ps I feel.lime ringing a few necks some days too. LoL 🤣 ❤️
October 5th, 2023 12:31
Every Drop
Parisab said:
The water crisis is universal and now we are more aware about the stream next door-it is hard to imagine that this is the state of developed countries as well-May you and your country be well
October 5th, 2023 00:13
Parisab said:
The water crisis is universal and now we are more aware about the stream next door-it is hard to imagine that this is the state of developed countries as well-May you and your country be well
October 5th, 2023 00:13
Every Drop
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true words Ben, hopefully somebody sometime will realise and do something about it.
Andy
October 4th, 2023 01:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true words Ben, hopefully somebody sometime will realise and do something about it.
Andy
October 4th, 2023 01:00
Pat on the Back
Teddy.15 said:
I absolutely love this it\'s a song my dear friend, we have to stay unique right. ❤️
September 28th, 2023 12:58
Teddy.15 said:
I absolutely love this it\'s a song my dear friend, we have to stay unique right. ❤️
September 28th, 2023 12:58
Pat on the Back
Pop64 said:
The rhyme and flow in this is perfect as you provide the truth of us, the whole world\'s population, just putting in the effort. We\'d then be unstoppable. Awesome read!
September 28th, 2023 10:04
Pop64 said:
The rhyme and flow in this is perfect as you provide the truth of us, the whole world\'s population, just putting in the effort. We\'d then be unstoppable. Awesome read!
September 28th, 2023 10:04
Please Don\'t Skip This Ad
Teddy.15 said:
LOL 😂 this is wonderful, I was offered a book deal this week and it was most entertaining to say the least, I\'m still in a bit of a grump but hey your words about how the world is always makes me chuckle 🤭 ❤️ thanks dear friend.
September 27th, 2023 11:17
Teddy.15 said:
LOL 😂 this is wonderful, I was offered a book deal this week and it was most entertaining to say the least, I\'m still in a bit of a grump but hey your words about how the world is always makes me chuckle 🤭 ❤️ thanks dear friend.
September 27th, 2023 11:17
Stuffed Tiger on the Goblet
Goldfinch60 said:
I too have a lifelong teddy who has always sat next to my bed Ben, they are part of our life.
Andy
September 22nd, 2023 01:03
Goldfinch60 said:
I too have a lifelong teddy who has always sat next to my bed Ben, they are part of our life.
Andy
September 22nd, 2023 01:03
Hall of Shame
Parisab said:
We’re all in the hall of shame, with noone to throw the first stone, which is the whole plan I believe. Thank you for tackling the conflicts of all ages…
September 21st, 2023 21:15
Parisab said:
We’re all in the hall of shame, with noone to throw the first stone, which is the whole plan I believe. Thank you for tackling the conflicts of all ages…
September 21st, 2023 21:15
Stuffed Tiger on the Goblet
Teddy.15 said:
I\'m a tiger too you know, born in 74 hey this is just what I needed a bit of light relief to read something warm and humbling, I have all my son\'s cuddly toys I always tell him, when he leaves home, I shall cuddle them every night. lol 🐻 a gorgeous poem to make teddy chuckle. 💖
September 21st, 2023 11:21
Teddy.15 said:
I\'m a tiger too you know, born in 74 hey this is just what I needed a bit of light relief to read something warm and humbling, I have all my son\'s cuddly toys I always tell him, when he leaves home, I shall cuddle them every night. lol 🐻 a gorgeous poem to make teddy chuckle. 💖
September 21st, 2023 11:21
The Art of Being Calm
Goldfinch60 said:
Being calm is the way I react to many situations as reacting in an oppressing way can create even more disharmony. Showing apathy can be a wonderful weapon Ben.
Hope all is well with you as it is with me.
Andy
September 21st, 2023 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Being calm is the way I react to many situations as reacting in an oppressing way can create even more disharmony. Showing apathy can be a wonderful weapon Ben.
Hope all is well with you as it is with me.
Andy
September 21st, 2023 01:49
Hall of Shame
Goldfinch60 said:
Good true words Ben, yes \'when will it get better?\'
And
September 20th, 2023 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Good true words Ben, yes \'when will it get better?\'
And
September 20th, 2023 01:44
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