Comments received on poems by AuburnScribbler



Arm Chair
Jerry Reynolds said:

Fun write, A.S. An idea there is enough material to shape the poem into the shape of the chair.

March 29th, 2021 08:21

Hand in Hand
L. B. Mek said:

wonderful eloquence as the spine anchoring your natural flow..
\'of electricity within skin conversations
your words remind, nudging
us back to our binary DNA
of instinctive language
where eyes and fingers whisper
those truth\'s that resonate, best\'


March 25th, 2021 04:03

Hand in Hand
orchidee said:

It\'s a nod or a wink or a wave for now, or a monk-like greeting with hands together and small bow to each other. Summat like that anyway.

March 24th, 2021 02:43

Hand in Hand
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true Ben. As you say even the simple handshake is missed so much.

Touching people creates a memory within us that can reach the core of our bodies and is so much missed.
It will come back soon though.

Andy

March 24th, 2021 01:33

Centurion
Brimelow said:

Delightful! Love a tightly structured poem with meaning, and this definitely fits the bill. Thanks for sharing.

March 18th, 2021 17:25

Centurion
L. B. Mek said:

\'thus, please; continue to play, but do not be caught,
have it in your mind, that at least you have fought,
fought for your right, to wear an enduring smile,
to have loved, and been loved; for a little while.”..
Brilliant!
happy hundredth dear poet! 🍾πŸ₯‚πŸ™Œ

March 18th, 2021 05:25

Centurion
Fay Slimm. said:

Filled with reasons for retaining our inner-child this well-rhymed write made me shine up my armour and stand a bit taller - many thanks Ben for sharing the benefits from Centurion action.

March 18th, 2021 03:53

Centurion
Goldfinch60 said:

Strength instilled into children will help to show them the right way in their lives.

Andy

March 18th, 2021 01:34

Peepers
Doggerel Dave said:

Don\'t hesitate Auburn S - the relief (albeit temporary) from irritation and soreness makes even the repetitive nature of the exercise worthwhile.
Take care, of both yourself and those eyes....

March 17th, 2021 18:00

Centurion
orchidee said:

Good write AS.

March 17th, 2021 10:29

Peepers
Doggerel Dave said:

Drops every couple of hours...heavier grade oil at night..wish I could weep for the world\'s sorrows - but I can\'t.
You have that one covered - Thanks.

March 13th, 2021 19:46

Peepers
L. B. Mek said:

a timely and important write, in my humble opinion
thank you for sharing dear poet

March 12th, 2021 05:54

Peepers
Goldfinch60 said:

Good words Ben, we must take care of \"them there eyes\". At my last eye test the optician told me that my eyes were in a better state than they were the previous year - that surprised me.

Andy

March 12th, 2021 02:59

Peepers
orchidee said:

A fine write AS.

March 12th, 2021 02:52

Peepers
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good watchful write, A.S.

March 11th, 2021 18:01

Studio (An Acrostic)
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful therapy is always there when going back to that place where you love to be.

Andy

March 6th, 2021 01:37

Studio (An Acrostic)
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write, A.S. Studios are a wonderful place for sure.

March 5th, 2021 08:17

Studio (An Acrostic)
orchidee said:

Have to swoon at this at the end! lol. Me imaginary dog, Fido, won\'t let me have much \'excitement\'. heehee.

March 5th, 2021 06:35

In Sleep, I Will Trust
Poetic Dan said:

I am so chuffed to read your words as they truly rung out and grounded me back to earth!

Fantastic work

March 3rd, 2021 16:04

In Sleep, I Will Trust
Goldfinch60 said:

Good words Ben, we can struggle with a regular sleep pattern but in my case I seem to have found a rhythm to my sleep and dream all day.πŸ˜‚

Andy

February 28th, 2021 01:40

In Sleep, I Will Trust
dusk arising said:

As a reader whose body clock is malfunctioning through lockdown\'s lack of activity, I am with you all the way through this.
Falling asleep in a chair and unable to sleep in bed are situations i find myself in very often.....
..... oh for a return to normal... -... whatever that was.

February 27th, 2021 11:11

In Sleep, I Will Trust
AlitaOpal said:

Sleep is something our body thanks us for,.. I really enjoyed reading.. 🌹

Fellow dreamer Alita

February 27th, 2021 10:14

In Sleep, I Will Trust
orchidee said:

Good write Auburn.
If we nap too much in the day or evening, we may find we are wide awake when we go to bed. Doh!

February 27th, 2021 02:51

Of Shoots and Man
L. B. Mek said:

some poetry transcends words and flow, it resides deep in those corridors we seldom prioritise, maybe a glimpsed sway of yellow petals - that tease Winter\'s ensuing surrender..
some will, look - hardly register and move busily along, while other\'s, like you dear Poet
will sing that moment a song, reminding us all: we too once took note of Nature\'s venerable majesty..
a brilliant and Important write!
thank you for sharing

February 16th, 2021 06:04

Of Shoots and Man
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true words Ben, to make this world work we must work with each other and with Nature.

Andy

February 16th, 2021 02:23

Of Shoots and Man
FredPeyer said:

Well said, AS!

February 15th, 2021 20:03

Of Shoots and Man
dusk arising said:

Yep! I do wish everyone could see it like that too.

February 15th, 2021 16:22

\"Tom Moore\" (An Acrostic in Honour of Sir Captain (Colonel) Tom Moore)
L. B. Mek said:

what a wonderful dedication!
thank you for sharing dear Poet

February 5th, 2021 04:49


\"Tom Moore\" (An Acrostic in Honour of Sir Captain (Colonel) Tom Moore)
orchidee said:

A fine tribute Tom.
Whoops, a former Vicar of ours had been in the military. Fairly young, but visions of little old ladies marching and standing to attention! With an old \'war wound\' he sadly lost a leg about 40 years later.

February 4th, 2021 06:25

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