Comments received on poems by AuburnScribbler
Overr1de
sorenbarrett said:
A short poem that speaks to reactions to the odd. Well done
August 15th, 2024 10:18
sorenbarrett said:
A short poem that speaks to reactions to the odd. Well done
August 15th, 2024 10:18
Broken Broom
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Ben, we need all these things to work for us as long as they can.
Andy
August 14th, 2024 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Ben, we need all these things to work for us as long as they can.
Andy
August 14th, 2024 01:43
Broken Broom
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful metaphor and tribute to a valued item. I remember my grandfather\'s shovel mended with a pipe for a handle. Nicely written.
August 13th, 2024 10:48
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful metaphor and tribute to a valued item. I remember my grandfather\'s shovel mended with a pipe for a handle. Nicely written.
August 13th, 2024 10:48
Geoffrey’s Email (based on “Bernard’s Letter” by Dylan Moran)
Tony36 said:
Loved it
August 12th, 2024 15:38
Tony36 said:
Loved it
August 12th, 2024 15:38
Geoffrey’s Email (based on “Bernard’s Letter” by Dylan Moran)
Bella Shepard said:
Watched the video, read the poem, loved it. Gave me such a chuckle. Good work!
August 12th, 2024 15:25
Bella Shepard said:
Watched the video, read the poem, loved it. Gave me such a chuckle. Good work!
August 12th, 2024 15:25
Geoffrey’s Email (based on “Bernard’s Letter” by Dylan Moran)
sorenbarrett said:
A great (cover?) poem as I take it (tongue in cheek) where the tongue is not tied but loosed to whip with many lashes those responsible for a missive. Yours truly for falsely as deem more appropriate. A most fun read
August 12th, 2024 15:20
sorenbarrett said:
A great (cover?) poem as I take it (tongue in cheek) where the tongue is not tied but loosed to whip with many lashes those responsible for a missive. Yours truly for falsely as deem more appropriate. A most fun read
August 12th, 2024 15:20
Behind the Sofa
Teddy.15 said:
I absolutely love this brilliant rhyming and oh so entertaining 🌹 brilliant 🌹
August 10th, 2024 19:27
Teddy.15 said:
I absolutely love this brilliant rhyming and oh so entertaining 🌹 brilliant 🌹
August 10th, 2024 19:27
Behind the Sofa
Doggerel Dave said:
A tale complete unto itself. Thanks AS. Good fun.
My partner has a cat. You could think that would be sufficient to keep her mouse free. Not a bit of it. Cat brings in live mice and presents. When I\'m there, the next half hour is spent chasing and finally ejecting both.
August 10th, 2024 19:25
Doggerel Dave said:
A tale complete unto itself. Thanks AS. Good fun.
My partner has a cat. You could think that would be sufficient to keep her mouse free. Not a bit of it. Cat brings in live mice and presents. When I\'m there, the next half hour is spent chasing and finally ejecting both.
August 10th, 2024 19:25
Behind the Sofa
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely done very entertaining and put to good verse.
August 10th, 2024 15:51
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely done very entertaining and put to good verse.
August 10th, 2024 15:51
Olympic Games (An Acrostic)
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful acrostic Ben and so true.
Andy
August 10th, 2024 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful acrostic Ben and so true.
Andy
August 10th, 2024 01:12
Olympic Games (An Acrostic)
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and fun to read celebrating the current Olympics
August 8th, 2024 10:53
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and fun to read celebrating the current Olympics
August 8th, 2024 10:53
Blackcurrant Squash
jarcher54 said:
For some reason currants (not the little raisins but the fruit) have never caught on here in the states... but I do see them in specialty markets sometimes. Next time I see them, I am gonna pop them into a blender and join you.
August 8th, 2024 04:20
jarcher54 said:
For some reason currants (not the little raisins but the fruit) have never caught on here in the states... but I do see them in specialty markets sometimes. Next time I see them, I am gonna pop them into a blender and join you.
August 8th, 2024 04:20
Blackcurrant Squash
Teddy.15 said:
Very nicely done, when I was a child, my mother and father would take me to east lane a market in south London, there was a stool that serves hot raspberry juice it had a name that I cannot remember, you brought back some childhood moments with this thank you. 🌹
August 7th, 2024 06:00
Teddy.15 said:
Very nicely done, when I was a child, my mother and father would take me to east lane a market in south London, there was a stool that serves hot raspberry juice it had a name that I cannot remember, you brought back some childhood moments with this thank you. 🌹
August 7th, 2024 06:00
Blackcurrant Squash
Goldfinch60 said:
Mary drinks a lot of blackcurrent squash Ben and thoroughly enjoys it.
Andy
August 7th, 2024 02:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Mary drinks a lot of blackcurrent squash Ben and thoroughly enjoys it.
Andy
August 7th, 2024 02:00
Blackcurrant Squash
Bella Shepard said:
How \"Cordial\' of you dear poet. I had to google Blackcurrent Squash, and alas, we cannot partake of this wonderful elixer in the USA. So I will be happy for you in your reverie, it certainly inspired a juicy and delectable poem.
August 6th, 2024 12:47
Bella Shepard said:
How \"Cordial\' of you dear poet. I had to google Blackcurrent Squash, and alas, we cannot partake of this wonderful elixer in the USA. So I will be happy for you in your reverie, it certainly inspired a juicy and delectable poem.
August 6th, 2024 12:47
Standard Class (A Town Shanty)
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words Ben, I just do not understand why this is happening.
Andy
August 5th, 2024 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words Ben, I just do not understand why this is happening.
Andy
August 5th, 2024 01:48
Standard Class (A Town Shanty)
sorenbarrett said:
A song indeed of war, loss and its meaninglessness. Haunting thoughts
August 4th, 2024 09:52
sorenbarrett said:
A song indeed of war, loss and its meaninglessness. Haunting thoughts
August 4th, 2024 09:52
Capital Punishment
sorenbarrett said:
Cleverly disguised in images with ambiguous meanings this carries a powerful message. Nicely done
July 29th, 2024 13:15
sorenbarrett said:
Cleverly disguised in images with ambiguous meanings this carries a powerful message. Nicely done
July 29th, 2024 13:15
Capital Punishment
Bella Shepard said:
“For the love of money is a root of all kinds of evil\", even the bible has something to say on the subject. I think you\'ve captured it wonderfully in this poem. The three words \"cost of living\" you hear so often, comes to mind in the context of what is a human life worth? Bravo, excellent write!
July 29th, 2024 11:54
Bella Shepard said:
“For the love of money is a root of all kinds of evil\", even the bible has something to say on the subject. I think you\'ve captured it wonderfully in this poem. The three words \"cost of living\" you hear so often, comes to mind in the context of what is a human life worth? Bravo, excellent write!
July 29th, 2024 11:54
At the Graveside
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words Ben, I have walked through cemeteries in the past and had some strange thoughts causing many emotions.
Andy
July 26th, 2024 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words Ben, I have walked through cemeteries in the past and had some strange thoughts causing many emotions.
Andy
July 26th, 2024 01:19
Measures
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words about things in your life Ben, I am sure that all will be well and you will always play your music.
Andy
July 14th, 2024 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words about things in your life Ben, I am sure that all will be well and you will always play your music.
Andy
July 14th, 2024 01:41
Measures
Bella Shepard said:
I can relate wholly to the sentiment of this poem. You phrase so well the pain and difficulty of your physical situation, and yet your last stanza stands as a firm resolution of hope for the future. Kudos my friend!
July 13th, 2024 11:25
Bella Shepard said:
I can relate wholly to the sentiment of this poem. You phrase so well the pain and difficulty of your physical situation, and yet your last stanza stands as a firm resolution of hope for the future. Kudos my friend!
July 13th, 2024 11:25
Measures
2781 said:
For the grave cannot praise thee, death cannot celebrate thee: those that go down into to the pit cannot hope for thy truth.
July 13th, 2024 09:29
2781 said:
For the grave cannot praise thee, death cannot celebrate thee: those that go down into to the pit cannot hope for thy truth.
July 13th, 2024 09:29
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