Comments received on poems by AuburnScribbler
Oh, Pony, Oh, Pony, Down Millgate
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful write about being who you are and enjoying it. Nicely done
August 19th, 2024 14:36
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful write about being who you are and enjoying it. Nicely done
August 19th, 2024 14:36
Those Cyclists on the Road
Bella Shepard said:
Beautifully versed in rhyming stanzas. I love the stages of the poem, from achy feet to the wonderful memory evoked by the cyclists. I\'ve seen them biking along the highways as we\'ve traveled through Utah and Colorado, wishing I were young enough to do the same, they amaze me. Thank you for this poem that reminds me of those travels. Fantastic write!
August 19th, 2024 09:09
Bella Shepard said:
Beautifully versed in rhyming stanzas. I love the stages of the poem, from achy feet to the wonderful memory evoked by the cyclists. I\'ve seen them biking along the highways as we\'ve traveled through Utah and Colorado, wishing I were young enough to do the same, they amaze me. Thank you for this poem that reminds me of those travels. Fantastic write!
August 19th, 2024 09:09
Those Cyclists on the Road
Teddy.15 said:
This is beautiful, my last memories before I left London were going to work on my mountain bike, you just brought it all back 🌹
August 19th, 2024 07:41
Teddy.15 said:
This is beautiful, my last memories before I left London were going to work on my mountain bike, you just brought it all back 🌹
August 19th, 2024 07:41
Those Cyclists on the Road
Goldfinch60 said:
I too used to cycle, I even cycled to work sometimes but we tired to follow the rule of the road unlike many cyclists nowadays.
Andy
August 19th, 2024 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
I too used to cycle, I even cycled to work sometimes but we tired to follow the rule of the road unlike many cyclists nowadays.
Andy
August 19th, 2024 01:23
Those Cyclists on the Road
jarcher54 said:
I am 70 but still cycle 5 miles to work every day, rain or shine. I swear that and my wife\'s cooking have kept me young. On a weekend or morning off I run errands all over town on a bicycle. It is by far the most efficient and healthy way to get around. It\'s easy on the joints and soles. But good for the soul! Thanks for the thoughtful observation!
August 18th, 2024 11:37
jarcher54 said:
I am 70 but still cycle 5 miles to work every day, rain or shine. I swear that and my wife\'s cooking have kept me young. On a weekend or morning off I run errands all over town on a bicycle. It is by far the most efficient and healthy way to get around. It\'s easy on the joints and soles. But good for the soul! Thanks for the thoughtful observation!
August 18th, 2024 11:37
Those Cyclists on the Road
sorenbarrett said:
When younger I used to cycle a great deal and enjoyed it. As to this poem the last stanza is brilliant! Loved it.
August 18th, 2024 07:06
sorenbarrett said:
When younger I used to cycle a great deal and enjoyed it. As to this poem the last stanza is brilliant! Loved it.
August 18th, 2024 07:06
Waist or Waste?
sorenbarrett said:
So true a second is harder than first. A play on words and a question, Nicely done.
August 17th, 2024 13:35
sorenbarrett said:
So true a second is harder than first. A play on words and a question, Nicely done.
August 17th, 2024 13:35
TV Judge
Goldfinch60 said:
Groucho Marx once said:
\"I find television most educational as when it is switched on I go into another room and read a book.\"
Andy
August 17th, 2024 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Groucho Marx once said:
\"I find television most educational as when it is switched on I go into another room and read a book.\"
Andy
August 17th, 2024 01:23
TV Judge
sorenbarrett said:
The power of News and TV a one way conversation that molds public opinion to focus on the negative and ignore the positive. So nicely done
August 16th, 2024 06:35
sorenbarrett said:
The power of News and TV a one way conversation that molds public opinion to focus on the negative and ignore the positive. So nicely done
August 16th, 2024 06:35
Overr1de
sorenbarrett said:
A short poem that speaks to reactions to the odd. Well done
August 15th, 2024 10:18
sorenbarrett said:
A short poem that speaks to reactions to the odd. Well done
August 15th, 2024 10:18
Broken Broom
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Ben, we need all these things to work for us as long as they can.
Andy
August 14th, 2024 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Ben, we need all these things to work for us as long as they can.
Andy
August 14th, 2024 01:43
Broken Broom
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful metaphor and tribute to a valued item. I remember my grandfather\'s shovel mended with a pipe for a handle. Nicely written.
August 13th, 2024 10:48
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful metaphor and tribute to a valued item. I remember my grandfather\'s shovel mended with a pipe for a handle. Nicely written.
August 13th, 2024 10:48
Geoffrey’s Email (based on “Bernard’s Letter” by Dylan Moran)
Tony36 said:
Loved it
August 12th, 2024 15:38
Tony36 said:
Loved it
August 12th, 2024 15:38
Geoffrey’s Email (based on “Bernard’s Letter” by Dylan Moran)
Bella Shepard said:
Watched the video, read the poem, loved it. Gave me such a chuckle. Good work!
August 12th, 2024 15:25
Bella Shepard said:
Watched the video, read the poem, loved it. Gave me such a chuckle. Good work!
August 12th, 2024 15:25
Geoffrey’s Email (based on “Bernard’s Letter” by Dylan Moran)
sorenbarrett said:
A great (cover?) poem as I take it (tongue in cheek) where the tongue is not tied but loosed to whip with many lashes those responsible for a missive. Yours truly for falsely as deem more appropriate. A most fun read
August 12th, 2024 15:20
sorenbarrett said:
A great (cover?) poem as I take it (tongue in cheek) where the tongue is not tied but loosed to whip with many lashes those responsible for a missive. Yours truly for falsely as deem more appropriate. A most fun read
August 12th, 2024 15:20
Behind the Sofa
Teddy.15 said:
I absolutely love this brilliant rhyming and oh so entertaining 🌹 brilliant 🌹
August 10th, 2024 19:27
Teddy.15 said:
I absolutely love this brilliant rhyming and oh so entertaining 🌹 brilliant 🌹
August 10th, 2024 19:27
Behind the Sofa
Doggerel Dave said:
A tale complete unto itself. Thanks AS. Good fun.
My partner has a cat. You could think that would be sufficient to keep her mouse free. Not a bit of it. Cat brings in live mice and presents. When I\'m there, the next half hour is spent chasing and finally ejecting both.
August 10th, 2024 19:25
Doggerel Dave said:
A tale complete unto itself. Thanks AS. Good fun.
My partner has a cat. You could think that would be sufficient to keep her mouse free. Not a bit of it. Cat brings in live mice and presents. When I\'m there, the next half hour is spent chasing and finally ejecting both.
August 10th, 2024 19:25
Behind the Sofa
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely done very entertaining and put to good verse.
August 10th, 2024 15:51
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely done very entertaining and put to good verse.
August 10th, 2024 15:51
Olympic Games (An Acrostic)
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful acrostic Ben and so true.
Andy
August 10th, 2024 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful acrostic Ben and so true.
Andy
August 10th, 2024 01:12
Olympic Games (An Acrostic)
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and fun to read celebrating the current Olympics
August 8th, 2024 10:53
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and fun to read celebrating the current Olympics
August 8th, 2024 10:53
Blackcurrant Squash
jarcher54 said:
For some reason currants (not the little raisins but the fruit) have never caught on here in the states... but I do see them in specialty markets sometimes. Next time I see them, I am gonna pop them into a blender and join you.
August 8th, 2024 04:20
jarcher54 said:
For some reason currants (not the little raisins but the fruit) have never caught on here in the states... but I do see them in specialty markets sometimes. Next time I see them, I am gonna pop them into a blender and join you.
August 8th, 2024 04:20
Blackcurrant Squash
Teddy.15 said:
Very nicely done, when I was a child, my mother and father would take me to east lane a market in south London, there was a stool that serves hot raspberry juice it had a name that I cannot remember, you brought back some childhood moments with this thank you. 🌹
August 7th, 2024 06:00
Teddy.15 said:
Very nicely done, when I was a child, my mother and father would take me to east lane a market in south London, there was a stool that serves hot raspberry juice it had a name that I cannot remember, you brought back some childhood moments with this thank you. 🌹
August 7th, 2024 06:00
Blackcurrant Squash
Goldfinch60 said:
Mary drinks a lot of blackcurrent squash Ben and thoroughly enjoys it.
Andy
August 7th, 2024 02:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Mary drinks a lot of blackcurrent squash Ben and thoroughly enjoys it.
Andy
August 7th, 2024 02:00
Blackcurrant Squash
Bella Shepard said:
How \"Cordial\' of you dear poet. I had to google Blackcurrent Squash, and alas, we cannot partake of this wonderful elixer in the USA. So I will be happy for you in your reverie, it certainly inspired a juicy and delectable poem.
August 6th, 2024 12:47
Bella Shepard said:
How \"Cordial\' of you dear poet. I had to google Blackcurrent Squash, and alas, we cannot partake of this wonderful elixer in the USA. So I will be happy for you in your reverie, it certainly inspired a juicy and delectable poem.
August 6th, 2024 12:47
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