Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Seize Now
dusk arising said:
The past surely is a bounty, a treasure which brought is to here and we may finger its jewels as we allow them to twinkle in our eyes reflecting the light of today and tomorrow when it comes. Yes, a treasure we share along the way with those who will draw near to us.
October 6th, 2020 07:32
dusk arising said:
The past surely is a bounty, a treasure which brought is to here and we may finger its jewels as we allow them to twinkle in our eyes reflecting the light of today and tomorrow when it comes. Yes, a treasure we share along the way with those who will draw near to us.
October 6th, 2020 07:32
Seize Now
orchidee said:
Doh! That\'s me problem then. I always opt for \'too late\'. heehee. Such is life. As I say, by the time I found out what \'Carpe Diem\' meant, there was only \'too late\' left. If only I had improved my French (??) lol.
October 6th, 2020 06:20
orchidee said:
Doh! That\'s me problem then. I always opt for \'too late\'. heehee. Such is life. As I say, by the time I found out what \'Carpe Diem\' meant, there was only \'too late\' left. If only I had improved my French (??) lol.
October 6th, 2020 06:20
Seize Now
Lorna said:
So optimistic Fay but sometimes the past just looks better than Now.........
October 6th, 2020 04:35
Lorna said:
So optimistic Fay but sometimes the past just looks better than Now.........
October 6th, 2020 04:35
Wished-For
Goldfinch60 said:
Friendship is so important in our lives Fay.
Andy
October 5th, 2020 23:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Friendship is so important in our lives Fay.
Andy
October 5th, 2020 23:57
Wished-For
Suresh said:
As you have so poetically expressed,
symbolisim of pale sun n grey, dawn n hope, quite exquisite
October 5th, 2020 15:20
Suresh said:
As you have so poetically expressed,
symbolisim of pale sun n grey, dawn n hope, quite exquisite
October 5th, 2020 15:20
Wished-For
Neville said:
You can beat an egg can\'t ya .. but you just cant beat a really good friend
... You say so much here and so well in just a few words ...
I am now trying to remember the words of an ancient sampler made by a distant relative of mine going back to the ? century ..
True friendship is a gordian knot which angel hands have tied etc etc
lovely my luverly ....
October 5th, 2020 10:11
Neville said:
You can beat an egg can\'t ya .. but you just cant beat a really good friend
... You say so much here and so well in just a few words ...
I am now trying to remember the words of an ancient sampler made by a distant relative of mine going back to the ? century ..
True friendship is a gordian knot which angel hands have tied etc etc
lovely my luverly ....
October 5th, 2020 10:11
Wished-For
Michael Edwards said:
I\'d like to be more understanding and, better still, to be more overstanding. Fine write Fay.
October 5th, 2020 08:19
Michael Edwards said:
I\'d like to be more understanding and, better still, to be more overstanding. Fine write Fay.
October 5th, 2020 08:19
Wished-For
dusk arising said:
Concern over a friends wellbeing and one\'s joy on learning of their good news is truly a measure of friendship given. When we allow someone into our aura of care we truly share their existence with our own and our loved ones.
October 5th, 2020 06:46
dusk arising said:
Concern over a friends wellbeing and one\'s joy on learning of their good news is truly a measure of friendship given. When we allow someone into our aura of care we truly share their existence with our own and our loved ones.
October 5th, 2020 06:46
Wished-For
Lorna said:
Your empathy shines through to us every day Fay.......... lovely thoughts here.
October 5th, 2020 04:55
Lorna said:
Your empathy shines through to us every day Fay.......... lovely thoughts here.
October 5th, 2020 04:55
Wished-For
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, we live as much in the shared sorrow and joy of those who grace our lives with their flavourful presence,
a sweet dedication
October 5th, 2020 03:07
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, we live as much in the shared sorrow and joy of those who grace our lives with their flavourful presence,
a sweet dedication
October 5th, 2020 03:07
Wished-For
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. In a hymn, it says: \'Help me.... not so much to be understood and to understand\'.
Yet we all need to be understood by others, or they won\'t know what we\'re on about. We\'ll be all in a mess, and not able to understand anyone else either!
October 5th, 2020 02:15
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. In a hymn, it says: \'Help me.... not so much to be understood and to understand\'.
Yet we all need to be understood by others, or they won\'t know what we\'re on about. We\'ll be all in a mess, and not able to understand anyone else either!
October 5th, 2020 02:15
Sweetness.
Neville said:
I was drawn not like a poultice or a pen might draw one ..
.. but by admiration and respect and the ache of a sweet tooth .. near perfect ....on both visits ....
October 4th, 2020 06:12
Neville said:
I was drawn not like a poultice or a pen might draw one ..
.. but by admiration and respect and the ache of a sweet tooth .. near perfect ....on both visits ....
October 4th, 2020 06:12
Tide-Turn.
Dove said:
You must live by the sea! Such beauty in your eyes and words, lovely write as always
October 3rd, 2020 16:32
Dove said:
You must live by the sea! Such beauty in your eyes and words, lovely write as always
October 3rd, 2020 16:32
Tide-Turn.
Goldfinch60 said:
The mystery of tides fascinates us wonders that it can show us in both quietitude and rage is phenomenal.
Andy
October 3rd, 2020 04:47
Goldfinch60 said:
The mystery of tides fascinates us wonders that it can show us in both quietitude and rage is phenomenal.
Andy
October 3rd, 2020 04:47
Tide-Turn.
Neville said:
DA just took the words outa my own mouth .. this is another fine example of your wonderful word weaving Fay ... I wonder how many others will appreciate the accuracy of your opening line .. apart from the obvious of course ..
There is something very special .. beyond compelling about the ocean isn\'t there ... I am so glad it is only just on my door step ....
... Neville
October 3rd, 2020 04:45
Neville said:
DA just took the words outa my own mouth .. this is another fine example of your wonderful word weaving Fay ... I wonder how many others will appreciate the accuracy of your opening line .. apart from the obvious of course ..
There is something very special .. beyond compelling about the ocean isn\'t there ... I am so glad it is only just on my door step ....
... Neville
October 3rd, 2020 04:45
Tide-Turn.
Lorna said:
Such great images and I\'m dismayed that they won\'t answer you........ I love the furry carpet weed and it\'s greeen arms Fay.
October 3rd, 2020 04:25
Lorna said:
Such great images and I\'m dismayed that they won\'t answer you........ I love the furry carpet weed and it\'s greeen arms Fay.
October 3rd, 2020 04:25
Tide-Turn.
Michael Edwards said:
Now this great write has inspired a whimsy - will get it down on paper and pop it on here tomorrow.
October 3rd, 2020 04:01
Michael Edwards said:
Now this great write has inspired a whimsy - will get it down on paper and pop it on here tomorrow.
October 3rd, 2020 04:01
Tide-Turn.
dusk arising said:
Its as if the tides are there to remind us of the permanence of certain rhythms giving us a perspective upon how short our life span is and how insignificant are the problems we bring to contemplate by the breaking waves or the creeping rise of estuary.
Contemplating such \'permanence\' of our surroundings is a drug i shouldnt mind becoming addicted to. For in the end, those question you mention, answer themselves.
October 3rd, 2020 03:55
dusk arising said:
Its as if the tides are there to remind us of the permanence of certain rhythms giving us a perspective upon how short our life span is and how insignificant are the problems we bring to contemplate by the breaking waves or the creeping rise of estuary.
Contemplating such \'permanence\' of our surroundings is a drug i shouldnt mind becoming addicted to. For in the end, those question you mention, answer themselves.
October 3rd, 2020 03:55
Stalled
Goldfinch60 said:
There is life, joy and love for us all as we look ahead in our lives. Fine words Fay.
Andy
October 3rd, 2020 00:10
Goldfinch60 said:
There is life, joy and love for us all as we look ahead in our lives. Fine words Fay.
Andy
October 3rd, 2020 00:10
Stalled
Dove said:
A forlorn maiden hopefully shan’t be denied ! A very pleasant ride of deep thoughts,
October 3rd, 2020 00:05
Dove said:
A forlorn maiden hopefully shan’t be denied ! A very pleasant ride of deep thoughts,
October 3rd, 2020 00:05
Stalled
MendedFences27 said:
One answer to all, and that is NO! \"Stall\" no longer. Engage, Seek happiness. It is why we all are here. The open heart beats faster than the than the reserved one. Love gives meaning to Life.
I\'m saving your questions for future reference. - Phil A.
October 2nd, 2020 14:05
MendedFences27 said:
One answer to all, and that is NO! \"Stall\" no longer. Engage, Seek happiness. It is why we all are here. The open heart beats faster than the than the reserved one. Love gives meaning to Life.
I\'m saving your questions for future reference. - Phil A.
October 2nd, 2020 14:05
Stalled
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Thanks for sharing FAY an ODE to TRUE LOVE !
What can separate us from TRUE LOVE ? NOTHING !
Strife of Life or Tears or Barriers or Cages of Society
or Dying Ember ? Whatever the Circumstances - The
Blaze of True Love can ALWAYS be fanned into an -
Incandescent Flame !
We le all your poems FAY and love to comment !- However little time we have to compose & contribute ! MPS is essentialy a TWO-WAY process Contibuting & Commenting & replying ! We both appreciate that - and would see 2 or 3 Poems a week reflecting *An Active Member* ! Most of our Poems are COLLABORATIONS - but we dont always say so !
Blessings & Peace & Joy with Love
Angela - Brian & Smokey Cat 💛💛💛
October 2nd, 2020 13:58
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Thanks for sharing FAY an ODE to TRUE LOVE !
What can separate us from TRUE LOVE ? NOTHING !
Strife of Life or Tears or Barriers or Cages of Society
or Dying Ember ? Whatever the Circumstances - The
Blaze of True Love can ALWAYS be fanned into an -
Incandescent Flame !
We le all your poems FAY and love to comment !- However little time we have to compose & contribute ! MPS is essentialy a TWO-WAY process Contibuting & Commenting & replying ! We both appreciate that - and would see 2 or 3 Poems a week reflecting *An Active Member* ! Most of our Poems are COLLABORATIONS - but we dont always say so !
Blessings & Peace & Joy with Love
Angela - Brian & Smokey Cat 💛💛💛
October 2nd, 2020 13:58
Stalled
Neville said:
this is seriously good .. tis ragged and real as they come but with no rough edges ...
alas I fear one or t\'other lover maybe arrived too late to say a proper and meaningful goodbye ..
... left cold wanting and waiting .. that is where these words took me today ...
somewhere off a Cornish coast too, I imagine ....
October 2nd, 2020 08:35
Neville said:
this is seriously good .. tis ragged and real as they come but with no rough edges ...
alas I fear one or t\'other lover maybe arrived too late to say a proper and meaningful goodbye ..
... left cold wanting and waiting .. that is where these words took me today ...
somewhere off a Cornish coast too, I imagine ....
October 2nd, 2020 08:35
Stalled
Lorna said:
A nice hopeful message Fay.........a lot of longing there
October 2nd, 2020 05:22
Lorna said:
A nice hopeful message Fay.........a lot of longing there
October 2nd, 2020 05:22
Stalled
L. B. Mek said:
\'Shall the caged heart\'s talons gnawing at need
not see night\'s silk rise unshackled ?\'
wonderful imagery and effortless flow adding a dreamy feel to this introspective write
October 2nd, 2020 04:34
L. B. Mek said:
\'Shall the caged heart\'s talons gnawing at need
not see night\'s silk rise unshackled ?\'
wonderful imagery and effortless flow adding a dreamy feel to this introspective write
October 2nd, 2020 04:34
Myself
MendedFences27 said:
In the poetic sense, if you meant \"Myself\" to mean you, then this is you growing as a poetess on your way to be a part of the great ocean of poets with \"bottomless singing loaded with lots of littlest notes.\" A beautiful poem Fay.- Phil A
October 1st, 2020 21:43
MendedFences27 said:
In the poetic sense, if you meant \"Myself\" to mean you, then this is you growing as a poetess on your way to be a part of the great ocean of poets with \"bottomless singing loaded with lots of littlest notes.\" A beautiful poem Fay.- Phil A
October 1st, 2020 21:43
Myself
Michael Edwards said:
Late to the table and it\'s all been said - a flow of a wriite dear Fay.
October 1st, 2020 16:06
Michael Edwards said:
Late to the table and it\'s all been said - a flow of a wriite dear Fay.
October 1st, 2020 16:06
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