Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
HITHER.
orchidee said:
Doh! Woof, woof, woof! Quiet Fido. Too much ardour, he says! heehee. I dunno if I\'m hither or thither, or on foot or horse-back, with all this ardour!
April 6th, 2019 07:05
orchidee said:
Doh! Woof, woof, woof! Quiet Fido. Too much ardour, he says! heehee. I dunno if I\'m hither or thither, or on foot or horse-back, with all this ardour!
April 6th, 2019 07:05
HITHER.
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m currently reading \'Tess of The d\'Urbervilles - (think I\'ve spelt that right)and this reminds me so much of some of the scenes - it\'s a very naive story by today\'s standards but the English is so so good - pity there doesn\'t appear to be any modern writers up to Hardy\'s standards. Which brings me back to this - you should be writing books - your use of the language is par excellence!
April 6th, 2019 05:20
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m currently reading \'Tess of The d\'Urbervilles - (think I\'ve spelt that right)and this reminds me so much of some of the scenes - it\'s a very naive story by today\'s standards but the English is so so good - pity there doesn\'t appear to be any modern writers up to Hardy\'s standards. Which brings me back to this - you should be writing books - your use of the language is par excellence!
April 6th, 2019 05:20
HITHER.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FAY : Lovely picture : Lovely poem ! I can empathise : I lie each night waiting for My Brian and hoping mr Ardour lasts till Easter ! He\'s going along the Eroded Coast next week : I hope & pray he doesn\'t stray too far to the EDGE ! Thanks for sharing
Blessings and a peaceful weekend : its nearly 10pm here
Love & Joy : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
April 6th, 2019 03:45
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FAY : Lovely picture : Lovely poem ! I can empathise : I lie each night waiting for My Brian and hoping mr Ardour lasts till Easter ! He\'s going along the Eroded Coast next week : I hope & pray he doesn\'t stray too far to the EDGE ! Thanks for sharing
Blessings and a peaceful weekend : its nearly 10pm here
Love & Joy : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
April 6th, 2019 03:45
SOUNDS.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FAY ~ Love BARNOWLS a Friend raised one from a BABY and we could aobersve it close up ! In the Winter lots of Country Creatures move into Towns for Food & Shelter (Foxes ~ Birds ~ Rodents etc !). Love Vs 2 & 3 ~ He haunts a deserted Baronial Hall and gets a MOUSE takeaway ! Owls are always a bit spooky and verse 4 reflects that ~ Im glad |J K Rowling introduced an Owl into H Potter !
This Poem is a perfect 4 4 4 2 Sonnet ~ Perfect Mode for the Message !
Love ~ Joy & Peace
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
April 5th, 2019 18:10
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FAY ~ Love BARNOWLS a Friend raised one from a BABY and we could aobersve it close up ! In the Winter lots of Country Creatures move into Towns for Food & Shelter (Foxes ~ Birds ~ Rodents etc !). Love Vs 2 & 3 ~ He haunts a deserted Baronial Hall and gets a MOUSE takeaway ! Owls are always a bit spooky and verse 4 reflects that ~ Im glad |J K Rowling introduced an Owl into H Potter !
This Poem is a perfect 4 4 4 2 Sonnet ~ Perfect Mode for the Message !
Love ~ Joy & Peace
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
April 5th, 2019 18:10
WHISPERINGS.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
WOW FAY ~ You really crossed the Rubicon with this one !
V 1. Real experience of Bliss !
V 2. Foreplay always begins with words
V 3. LIBIDO released from the Mind into the Body !
V 4. Words accompany Desire
V 5. All our senses are involved in LOVE !
V 6/7 WE Men are always open to suggestion !
Blessings ~ Peace & Joy in all things
Love BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
April 5th, 2019 14:30
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
WOW FAY ~ You really crossed the Rubicon with this one !
V 1. Real experience of Bliss !
V 2. Foreplay always begins with words
V 3. LIBIDO released from the Mind into the Body !
V 4. Words accompany Desire
V 5. All our senses are involved in LOVE !
V 6/7 WE Men are always open to suggestion !
Blessings ~ Peace & Joy in all things
Love BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
April 5th, 2019 14:30
SOUNDS.
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
Reading your super write reminded me of the last time I saw an owl. It was at the Healesville Sanctuary in Australia! An experience of a lifetime!
~Laura~
🦉
April 5th, 2019 10:52
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
Reading your super write reminded me of the last time I saw an owl. It was at the Healesville Sanctuary in Australia! An experience of a lifetime!
~Laura~
🦉
April 5th, 2019 10:52
SOUNDS.
dusk arising said:
Yes those beauties hunt easily over our lit up motorways etc nowadays.
Oh to be rural tho and allowed the luxury of burning coal again.
One wonders if, back at home, Mrs Rat is thinking \"where\'s my Fred gotten too. He should have been home hours ago\".
If one of ours was plucked from above in the night we would miss them for a lifetime but.... does Mrs Rat miss Fred in the same way?
A real \'Hoot\' of writing from you today Fay.
April 5th, 2019 08:53
dusk arising said:
Yes those beauties hunt easily over our lit up motorways etc nowadays.
Oh to be rural tho and allowed the luxury of burning coal again.
One wonders if, back at home, Mrs Rat is thinking \"where\'s my Fred gotten too. He should have been home hours ago\".
If one of ours was plucked from above in the night we would miss them for a lifetime but.... does Mrs Rat miss Fred in the same way?
A real \'Hoot\' of writing from you today Fay.
April 5th, 2019 08:53
SOUNDS.
Poetic Dan said:
Owl—standingly done I must say!
Thank you so much you\'re magical Fay!
April 5th, 2019 07:10
Poetic Dan said:
Owl—standingly done I must say!
Thank you so much you\'re magical Fay!
April 5th, 2019 07:10
SOUNDS.
Michael Edwards said:
An absolutely wonderful descriptive piece - a real top read.
April 5th, 2019 06:11
Michael Edwards said:
An absolutely wonderful descriptive piece - a real top read.
April 5th, 2019 06:11
SOUNDS.
Neville said:
Cor... or should one say hoot, on occasions such as this.... How atmospheric can ya get.... I love the way you describe the owls new hunting ground on this particular night, I was not expecting that.. I close my eyes and can see those silk clad dancers, in candelabra light...... The owls around my neck of the woods are particularly vocal at the moment.. lovely..... Neville
April 5th, 2019 03:39
Neville said:
Cor... or should one say hoot, on occasions such as this.... How atmospheric can ya get.... I love the way you describe the owls new hunting ground on this particular night, I was not expecting that.. I close my eyes and can see those silk clad dancers, in candelabra light...... The owls around my neck of the woods are particularly vocal at the moment.. lovely..... Neville
April 5th, 2019 03:39
SOUNDS.
Suresh said:
Lays in ruin, what man once kept
Playground for nature, what he left
Enjoyed it Fay
April 5th, 2019 02:39
Suresh said:
Lays in ruin, what man once kept
Playground for nature, what he left
Enjoyed it Fay
April 5th, 2019 02:39
WHISPERINGS.
Suresh said:
As you said, a fun cartoon, but ten times more amusing poem.
Thnx for cheering us all up
April 4th, 2019 11:51
Suresh said:
As you said, a fun cartoon, but ten times more amusing poem.
Thnx for cheering us all up
April 4th, 2019 11:51
WHISPERINGS.
dusk arising said:
Oh such a tender trap.
This must be how it feels to be a drug addict or alcoholic too.
April 4th, 2019 06:40
dusk arising said:
Oh such a tender trap.
This must be how it feels to be a drug addict or alcoholic too.
April 4th, 2019 06:40
WHISPERINGS.
Neville said:
Now who could possibly refuse such an offering... Tongue in cheek maybe.. but my, oh\' my how well you do tongue in cheek..... N
April 4th, 2019 04:15
Neville said:
Now who could possibly refuse such an offering... Tongue in cheek maybe.. but my, oh\' my how well you do tongue in cheek..... N
April 4th, 2019 04:15
WHISPERINGS.
orchidee said:
Woof! Oh no, you\'ve set Fido off. He saw \'amorous\'. A reading dog. Oh yes! heehee.
April 4th, 2019 04:07
orchidee said:
Woof! Oh no, you\'ve set Fido off. He saw \'amorous\'. A reading dog. Oh yes! heehee.
April 4th, 2019 04:07
TORN.
Poetic Dan said:
Wow, I felt so much from this, I\'m not sure what else to say.
It Just what I needed
Thank you in so many ways!
Much peace and love
April 3rd, 2019 08:59
Poetic Dan said:
Wow, I felt so much from this, I\'m not sure what else to say.
It Just what I needed
Thank you in so many ways!
Much peace and love
April 3rd, 2019 08:59
TORN.
Neville said:
A delightful find this fine sunny mane .. despite a hint of chill... it would seem we have been thinking along similar lines... and who yet knows what our tomorrows may bring.... Neville
April 3rd, 2019 03:57
Neville said:
A delightful find this fine sunny mane .. despite a hint of chill... it would seem we have been thinking along similar lines... and who yet knows what our tomorrows may bring.... Neville
April 3rd, 2019 03:57
SOLO-CHILL.
dusk arising said:
The drawing in of the evening can bring sadness and lead us to reflect upon happier \'together\' times.
Your words have encouraged me to reflect upon such times but i\'m too positive to go on a downer. My reflections are upon joyous times I have been so lucky to have had as a part of my existence. I try to encourage this way of looking back in others who i see suffering a loss.
On the other hand, some are simply susceptible to loneliness. Having been a solitary soul for many years i am lucky again not to feel that way.
See what your choices of subject do to me? Or is it the way you present them that gets under my skin and draws reaction? The latter of course,
April 2nd, 2019 12:54
dusk arising said:
The drawing in of the evening can bring sadness and lead us to reflect upon happier \'together\' times.
Your words have encouraged me to reflect upon such times but i\'m too positive to go on a downer. My reflections are upon joyous times I have been so lucky to have had as a part of my existence. I try to encourage this way of looking back in others who i see suffering a loss.
On the other hand, some are simply susceptible to loneliness. Having been a solitary soul for many years i am lucky again not to feel that way.
See what your choices of subject do to me? Or is it the way you present them that gets under my skin and draws reaction? The latter of course,
April 2nd, 2019 12:54
SOLO-CHILL.
MendedFences27 said:
Great write Fay. I loved \"widowed shoreline.\" Very imaginative, and it sets up the tone of the poem. Brilliant.
The connection between widows and the sea , the massive loneliness of the ocean, the loss of the Sun over its horizon all add intensity to this phrase and the entire poem. Just a great poem Fay. A favorite for me. - Phil A.
April 2nd, 2019 11:55
MendedFences27 said:
Great write Fay. I loved \"widowed shoreline.\" Very imaginative, and it sets up the tone of the poem. Brilliant.
The connection between widows and the sea , the massive loneliness of the ocean, the loss of the Sun over its horizon all add intensity to this phrase and the entire poem. Just a great poem Fay. A favorite for me. - Phil A.
April 2nd, 2019 11:55
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