Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
HAVENS.
Neville said:
Caw.. stone the crows.. would ya just credit that.... a great observation and of course, very much a real fact of life, in more ways than one .... enjoyed... yes of course & muchly crow.... N
March 27th, 2019 07:02
Neville said:
Caw.. stone the crows.. would ya just credit that.... a great observation and of course, very much a real fact of life, in more ways than one .... enjoyed... yes of course & muchly crow.... N
March 27th, 2019 07:02
HAVENS.
dusk arising said:
Jeez, if this is true i will life a life of enforced celibacy for my home is a mess.
It\'s difficult to think of a crow as a sexual being Fay. You\'ve certainly ruffled my feathers here tho. I shall be mighty wary next time i see an old crow at my gate eyeing up my possibilities.
March 27th, 2019 05:02
dusk arising said:
Jeez, if this is true i will life a life of enforced celibacy for my home is a mess.
It\'s difficult to think of a crow as a sexual being Fay. You\'ve certainly ruffled my feathers here tho. I shall be mighty wary next time i see an old crow at my gate eyeing up my possibilities.
March 27th, 2019 05:02
COURAGE.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
O hear us while we cry to Thee
For those in Peril on the Sea !
Thanks for caring & sharing FAY ! Those of us in the UK who live on the Coast ~ know just how powerful and relentless the Sea can be. This has been exemplified this week by the stricken Viking Cruise Liner that almost capsized off Norway and had to be evacuted ! We were in the BALTIC on a Liner and the Sea was very rough and furniture was sailing across the lounge ! We were revented (by the stormy Sea) from docking in Copenhagen !
Deep Sea Fishing is one of the Worlds most hazadous Jobs. A Friend of from Lowestoft works for the Seamans Mission and his talk is \"The Price of Fish & Chips\" He supports retired & injured DS Fishermen and the Widows of deceased Fishermen. Your excellent Poem highlights the dangers faced 24/7 by Sailors & Deep Sea Fishermen ! We must always treat the SEA with the greatest respect ~ AMEN !
Love the Turneresque Painting you posted : scary !
Blessings & Love in the Spirit
Brian & Angela 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 26th, 2019 19:01
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
O hear us while we cry to Thee
For those in Peril on the Sea !
Thanks for caring & sharing FAY ! Those of us in the UK who live on the Coast ~ know just how powerful and relentless the Sea can be. This has been exemplified this week by the stricken Viking Cruise Liner that almost capsized off Norway and had to be evacuted ! We were in the BALTIC on a Liner and the Sea was very rough and furniture was sailing across the lounge ! We were revented (by the stormy Sea) from docking in Copenhagen !
Deep Sea Fishing is one of the Worlds most hazadous Jobs. A Friend of from Lowestoft works for the Seamans Mission and his talk is \"The Price of Fish & Chips\" He supports retired & injured DS Fishermen and the Widows of deceased Fishermen. Your excellent Poem highlights the dangers faced 24/7 by Sailors & Deep Sea Fishermen ! We must always treat the SEA with the greatest respect ~ AMEN !
Love the Turneresque Painting you posted : scary !
Blessings & Love in the Spirit
Brian & Angela 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 26th, 2019 19:01
COURAGE.
Jo March said:
It\'s a beautiful poem. It made me think of Hemingway\'s The Old Man and the Sea -- fighting against the waves and the storm, trying desperately to survive. Thank you for the poem. I really enjoyed it!
March 26th, 2019 16:25
Jo March said:
It\'s a beautiful poem. It made me think of Hemingway\'s The Old Man and the Sea -- fighting against the waves and the storm, trying desperately to survive. Thank you for the poem. I really enjoyed it!
March 26th, 2019 16:25
COURAGE.
Suresh said:
Some writes, like this one, bring back the images of one of my favorite movies , THE OLD MAN AND THE SEA with Spencer Tracy.
Thoroughly enjoyed it.
March 26th, 2019 15:37
Suresh said:
Some writes, like this one, bring back the images of one of my favorite movies , THE OLD MAN AND THE SEA with Spencer Tracy.
Thoroughly enjoyed it.
March 26th, 2019 15:37
COURAGE.
MendedFences27 said:
We seem to have an Oceanic wave flowing through this site today.
I live in a coastal town, and was a sailor for a number of years. I have since learned to respect the power of the Sea. Your poem captures that force and power perfectly. The Sea takes whatever it needs. Lovely poem - Phil A.
March 26th, 2019 14:35
MendedFences27 said:
We seem to have an Oceanic wave flowing through this site today.
I live in a coastal town, and was a sailor for a number of years. I have since learned to respect the power of the Sea. Your poem captures that force and power perfectly. The Sea takes whatever it needs. Lovely poem - Phil A.
March 26th, 2019 14:35
COURAGE.
dusk arising said:
Many a wise and courageous life has been lost, overcome by the magestic sea in its boiling maelstrom.
You have written a fitting tribute to those who live by putting to sea for their many reasons.
Turner is my favourite. He captures drama and strength for me. I was rather disappointed with the recent film, though Timothy Spall was excellent as usual.
March 26th, 2019 13:25
dusk arising said:
Many a wise and courageous life has been lost, overcome by the magestic sea in its boiling maelstrom.
You have written a fitting tribute to those who live by putting to sea for their many reasons.
Turner is my favourite. He captures drama and strength for me. I was rather disappointed with the recent film, though Timothy Spall was excellent as usual.
March 26th, 2019 13:25
COURAGE.
sylviasearcher said:
Oh this left me feeling savaged by the waves.
There was a call in on the radio about a boat being hit be a storm yesterday.
Only your poem took me back to a time I apparently never knew, but rich was your tale!
March 26th, 2019 08:50
sylviasearcher said:
Oh this left me feeling savaged by the waves.
There was a call in on the radio about a boat being hit be a storm yesterday.
Only your poem took me back to a time I apparently never knew, but rich was your tale!
March 26th, 2019 08:50
COURAGE.
Neville said:
One would be hard pushed indeed not to break out in a cold sweat while reading this truly amazing poem Fay... .. whether that is because of my passion for poetry, or my firm belief that I once went down in rough seas, somewhere off the Cornish coast.. would ya believe...... Cheers, your very salty friend, N
March 26th, 2019 05:38
Neville said:
One would be hard pushed indeed not to break out in a cold sweat while reading this truly amazing poem Fay... .. whether that is because of my passion for poetry, or my firm belief that I once went down in rough seas, somewhere off the Cornish coast.. would ya believe...... Cheers, your very salty friend, N
March 26th, 2019 05:38
COURAGE.
orchidee said:
A good write Fay. Thankfully we in our area didn\'t see a snow-bomb storm that was forecast earlier this month.
March 26th, 2019 05:15
orchidee said:
A good write Fay. Thankfully we in our area didn\'t see a snow-bomb storm that was forecast earlier this month.
March 26th, 2019 05:15
COURAGE.
Nicholas Browning said:
A very passionate write, fully fleshed out with a myriad of descriptions.
Lovely read, Fay.
March 26th, 2019 04:39
Nicholas Browning said:
A very passionate write, fully fleshed out with a myriad of descriptions.
Lovely read, Fay.
March 26th, 2019 04:39
CONNECTION.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD EVENING FAY ! SELF AWARENESS (and Self Worth) is a very important human trait exhibited by Children very early in life. Children show awareness that they are Individual & Special ! Schools that foster Self Expression in Music & Writing & Art are often amazed how perceptive children are of themslves - others and the Evironment - Often much more than Adults whose Self Awareness gets dulled by negativity ! This individual Self Expression facilitates \"Growth of the Soul\" ! Doubt (as you indicate) morphs into Faith & Proof ! Time ceases and allows contemplation and Self Awareness & Being become one ! This allow insight resulting in Spiritual Development. These developmental processes of the Soul & Spirit of Man continue (at very different rates) throughout our Adlt Life - AMEN
Thanks for an excellent dip into the BEHAVIORAL SCIENCES
Blessings & love in the Spirit
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 25th, 2019 18:25
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD EVENING FAY ! SELF AWARENESS (and Self Worth) is a very important human trait exhibited by Children very early in life. Children show awareness that they are Individual & Special ! Schools that foster Self Expression in Music & Writing & Art are often amazed how perceptive children are of themslves - others and the Evironment - Often much more than Adults whose Self Awareness gets dulled by negativity ! This individual Self Expression facilitates \"Growth of the Soul\" ! Doubt (as you indicate) morphs into Faith & Proof ! Time ceases and allows contemplation and Self Awareness & Being become one ! This allow insight resulting in Spiritual Development. These developmental processes of the Soul & Spirit of Man continue (at very different rates) throughout our Adlt Life - AMEN
Thanks for an excellent dip into the BEHAVIORAL SCIENCES
Blessings & love in the Spirit
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 25th, 2019 18:25
CONNECTION.
Suresh said:
Let each grow at their own pace and if faith leads you there, then so be it. And leave the door open for new ideas and knowledge
Loved the write
March 25th, 2019 10:55
Suresh said:
Let each grow at their own pace and if faith leads you there, then so be it. And leave the door open for new ideas and knowledge
Loved the write
March 25th, 2019 10:55
CONNECTION.
Michael Edwards said:
Mum used to beat her carpets - she had an old fashioned carpet beater. Anyway I am with Nicholas on this fine write.
March 25th, 2019 07:03
Michael Edwards said:
Mum used to beat her carpets - she had an old fashioned carpet beater. Anyway I am with Nicholas on this fine write.
March 25th, 2019 07:03
CONNECTION.
Nicholas Browning said:
Another lovely write, Fay. It is indeed important for us to be self aware, and be aware that self awareness can either bring much joy or much harm.
March 25th, 2019 05:07
Nicholas Browning said:
Another lovely write, Fay. It is indeed important for us to be self aware, and be aware that self awareness can either bring much joy or much harm.
March 25th, 2019 05:07
CONNECTION.
Neville said:
You can beat an egg and you can beat a carpet folks but you just can\'t beat a bit of introspection & self indulgence with of course subsequent blissful results.... Tho my response to these great words is partly writ with tongue in cheek, there is much truth to what you have proposed here Fay and the compliment I pay........A very touching poem my friend... Neville
March 25th, 2019 04:49
Neville said:
You can beat an egg and you can beat a carpet folks but you just can\'t beat a bit of introspection & self indulgence with of course subsequent blissful results.... Tho my response to these great words is partly writ with tongue in cheek, there is much truth to what you have proposed here Fay and the compliment I pay........A very touching poem my friend... Neville
March 25th, 2019 04:49
CONNECTION.
orchidee said:
A lovely write Fay. I got a bit miffed at a leader, who says he goes off on \'retreats\' 4 times a year.
It\'s good to do, but I thought: \'What about the staff under him? It\'s OK for him to swan off when he pleases, and get his \'meditation\' and stuff. When do the real workers get their breaks? Grrr. Doh!
The staff think: \'I should like to have the time to swan off like he does. He\'s in Cuckoo Land\'.
March 25th, 2019 04:24
orchidee said:
A lovely write Fay. I got a bit miffed at a leader, who says he goes off on \'retreats\' 4 times a year.
It\'s good to do, but I thought: \'What about the staff under him? It\'s OK for him to swan off when he pleases, and get his \'meditation\' and stuff. When do the real workers get their breaks? Grrr. Doh!
The staff think: \'I should like to have the time to swan off like he does. He\'s in Cuckoo Land\'.
March 25th, 2019 04:24
NEW.
Nicholas Browning said:
The message accompanying the words is a lovely sight to see.
May we all prosper in aspiring to be better!
A wonderful read, Fay.
March 24th, 2019 19:55
Nicholas Browning said:
The message accompanying the words is a lovely sight to see.
May we all prosper in aspiring to be better!
A wonderful read, Fay.
March 24th, 2019 19:55
NEW.
Michael Edwards said:
Stay as you are and keep writing stuff like this gem.
March 24th, 2019 16:21
Michael Edwards said:
Stay as you are and keep writing stuff like this gem.
March 24th, 2019 16:21
NEW.
Neville said:
Cor blimey how bloomin good is this.. your way with words is amazing dear lady.. am sure a lot of folk around here are gonna be smiling at this little creation...... I know I am.... N
March 24th, 2019 06:31
Neville said:
Cor blimey how bloomin good is this.. your way with words is amazing dear lady.. am sure a lot of folk around here are gonna be smiling at this little creation...... I know I am.... N
March 24th, 2019 06:31
WAVERING.
Neville said:
I am quite sure that even the most outwardly sturdy, fixated and otherwise committed and strong have occasional doubts.. it is part of being who and what we are.... a doubt in time can save more than.... Good Sunday mane Fay x
March 24th, 2019 03:38
Neville said:
I am quite sure that even the most outwardly sturdy, fixated and otherwise committed and strong have occasional doubts.. it is part of being who and what we are.... a doubt in time can save more than.... Good Sunday mane Fay x
March 24th, 2019 03:38
FORTUNE.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening FAY : Thanks for an elegant \"Ode to Spring\" and its pallet of intriguing shades ! Jade : Blue : Saphire : Emerald : White (snowdraop & daisey) : Gold : Topaz & Dun ! Perhaps Autumn does not have the Monopoly ? Your poem invites us all to view Spring with \"Eyes wide Open\" !
Blessings & The JOY of SPRING
Brian & Angela 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 23rd, 2019 16:45
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening FAY : Thanks for an elegant \"Ode to Spring\" and its pallet of intriguing shades ! Jade : Blue : Saphire : Emerald : White (snowdraop & daisey) : Gold : Topaz & Dun ! Perhaps Autumn does not have the Monopoly ? Your poem invites us all to view Spring with \"Eyes wide Open\" !
Blessings & The JOY of SPRING
Brian & Angela 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 23rd, 2019 16:45
FORTUNE.
Goldfinch60 said:
The treasures if Spring are showing all around and in your words Fay.
March 23rd, 2019 16:43
Goldfinch60 said:
The treasures if Spring are showing all around and in your words Fay.
March 23rd, 2019 16:43
FORTUNE.
Neville said:
No king nor queen could possibly bestow upon each of us here.. who watch and look and see and find the richness and riches of spring.. she kindly wove into this brightly hued and scented poetic tapestry... thank you Fay x
March 23rd, 2019 11:16
Neville said:
No king nor queen could possibly bestow upon each of us here.. who watch and look and see and find the richness and riches of spring.. she kindly wove into this brightly hued and scented poetic tapestry... thank you Fay x
March 23rd, 2019 11:16
FORTUNE.
Nicholas Browning said:
This is a truly wonderful piece about a passion that shines so brightly in your mind. Well done, Fay.
You\'re descriptions of nature are a wonder.
March 23rd, 2019 04:05
Nicholas Browning said:
This is a truly wonderful piece about a passion that shines so brightly in your mind. Well done, Fay.
You\'re descriptions of nature are a wonder.
March 23rd, 2019 04:05
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