Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
LOVE\'S TUNE.
Neville said:
What a splendid little poem this is.. one that will undoubtedly be more relevant to some, than to others, but.. will nevertheless appeal to everyone that finds it here.... Neville
March 31st, 2019 05:30
Neville said:
What a splendid little poem this is.. one that will undoubtedly be more relevant to some, than to others, but.. will nevertheless appeal to everyone that finds it here.... Neville
March 31st, 2019 05:30
LOVE\'S TUNE.
dusk arising said:
Your first verse made me guffaw. So apt..... so much conveyed in four short lines......
I believe the first verse is a stand alone masterpiece.
The whole is a fine write as per your norm .... but yes that first verse.... is so terse.
Goes into my favs.
March 31st, 2019 05:04
dusk arising said:
Your first verse made me guffaw. So apt..... so much conveyed in four short lines......
I believe the first verse is a stand alone masterpiece.
The whole is a fine write as per your norm .... but yes that first verse.... is so terse.
Goes into my favs.
March 31st, 2019 05:04
LOVE\'S TUNE.
orchidee said:
A lovely write Fay. A pity I used to ruin my mum\'s Mothers Day every year, by singing to her! lol. I wondered why dad bought her ear-plugs every Christmas. Hmmm?
March 31st, 2019 04:22
orchidee said:
A lovely write Fay. A pity I used to ruin my mum\'s Mothers Day every year, by singing to her! lol. I wondered why dad bought her ear-plugs every Christmas. Hmmm?
March 31st, 2019 04:22
LOVE\'S TUNE.
Poetic Dan said:
That it does, beautifully done! Love never stops, even if we think it\'s done.
March 31st, 2019 03:38
Poetic Dan said:
That it does, beautifully done! Love never stops, even if we think it\'s done.
March 31st, 2019 03:38
TROUBLE.
dusk arising said:
If i put on my rain gear in Cornwall then i know the wind will get me instead.
Brave men who put to sea under those leadened skies.
Brrrrrrrrr !
March 30th, 2019 23:57
dusk arising said:
If i put on my rain gear in Cornwall then i know the wind will get me instead.
Brave men who put to sea under those leadened skies.
Brrrrrrrrr !
March 30th, 2019 23:57
TROUBLE.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FAY FOR A LOVELY PIC \'N POEM ! I loved te POEM based not only on colour but also culinary delights ! I teach Catering Science but there are not many Poems on Food ! The food you worked into your Poetic Tapestry were some of my Favourites ! Macaroons ~ Merangue Pie ~ Crumble ~ Rye (Bread) and Stew (Irish !) A Poem never tasted so so good !
Blessings & Love in the Spirit
Brian & Angela 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 30th, 2019 19:03
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FAY FOR A LOVELY PIC \'N POEM ! I loved te POEM based not only on colour but also culinary delights ! I teach Catering Science but there are not many Poems on Food ! The food you worked into your Poetic Tapestry were some of my Favourites ! Macaroons ~ Merangue Pie ~ Crumble ~ Rye (Bread) and Stew (Irish !) A Poem never tasted so so good !
Blessings & Love in the Spirit
Brian & Angela 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 30th, 2019 19:03
TROUBLE.
MendedFences27 said:
Picture and poem, one and the same, captured in word form just as beautiful and also threatening. A great write Fay. Enjoyed it immensely.
- Phil A.
March 30th, 2019 11:57
MendedFences27 said:
Picture and poem, one and the same, captured in word form just as beautiful and also threatening. A great write Fay. Enjoyed it immensely.
- Phil A.
March 30th, 2019 11:57
TROUBLE.
Neville said:
this is absolutely superb.. a little sea gem and true .. more salt than a saxa factory and why not.... you certainly paint some amazing pictures with your pen dear friend...... N
March 30th, 2019 07:34
Neville said:
this is absolutely superb.. a little sea gem and true .. more salt than a saxa factory and why not.... you certainly paint some amazing pictures with your pen dear friend...... N
March 30th, 2019 07:34
TROUBLE.
Poetic Dan said:
Glad I have blue sky over head, but I\'ll think of you next time it\'s like this! Won\'t be long in sure ;)
March 30th, 2019 04:03
Poetic Dan said:
Glad I have blue sky over head, but I\'ll think of you next time it\'s like this! Won\'t be long in sure ;)
March 30th, 2019 04:03
LEVELS.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good evening FAY ! Love the quote \"To be at one with Nature : Is to be at one with Yourself !\" V 1. Indicates that you appreciate Nature : and are at one with Nature : You are Nature ! V 2. Nature becomes You ! V 3. You admit this oneness is a transient state : but that it is still to be relished : AMEN.
Blessings & Spiritual love
Angela & Brian 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 29th, 2019 19:09
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good evening FAY ! Love the quote \"To be at one with Nature : Is to be at one with Yourself !\" V 1. Indicates that you appreciate Nature : and are at one with Nature : You are Nature ! V 2. Nature becomes You ! V 3. You admit this oneness is a transient state : but that it is still to be relished : AMEN.
Blessings & Spiritual love
Angela & Brian 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 29th, 2019 19:09
LEVELS.
MendedFences27 said:
\'When one tugs at a single thing in Nature, he finds it attached to the rest of the world\" - John Muir
Your poem seems to echo that sentimental truth. Yes we can be awed by its beauty, or spurred to empathize with its creatures, and it can excite or imaginations. As someone once said, \"Curiosity is Nature\'s school of learning\", to the poet, it is a treasure trove of inspiration. Loved your poem. - Phil A.
March 29th, 2019 14:44
MendedFences27 said:
\'When one tugs at a single thing in Nature, he finds it attached to the rest of the world\" - John Muir
Your poem seems to echo that sentimental truth. Yes we can be awed by its beauty, or spurred to empathize with its creatures, and it can excite or imaginations. As someone once said, \"Curiosity is Nature\'s school of learning\", to the poet, it is a treasure trove of inspiration. Loved your poem. - Phil A.
March 29th, 2019 14:44
LEVELS.
dusk arising said:
Reading your joy of being able to detach from your physical and morph into the mindset of a homeward fox, or another living being, is a joy itself.
March 29th, 2019 06:50
dusk arising said:
Reading your joy of being able to detach from your physical and morph into the mindset of a homeward fox, or another living being, is a joy itself.
March 29th, 2019 06:50
LEVELS.
Poetic Dan said:
Gasp! That I did at the end of this, what thoughtful writing. Eyes wide open now, thank you very much!
March 29th, 2019 06:06
Poetic Dan said:
Gasp! That I did at the end of this, what thoughtful writing. Eyes wide open now, thank you very much!
March 29th, 2019 06:06
LEVELS.
Neville said:
here in the most wonderful world of words, there are no level playing fields..
these words, tho of this world are but of a different plain....... an ethereal journey and surrounded by nature in all its guises.. what more could a guy wish for...... Neville
March 29th, 2019 06:05
Neville said:
here in the most wonderful world of words, there are no level playing fields..
these words, tho of this world are but of a different plain....... an ethereal journey and surrounded by nature in all its guises.. what more could a guy wish for...... Neville
March 29th, 2019 06:05
ANTICIPATION.
Michael Edwards said:
An elegant burgeoning of love expressed in your own unique way. Another masterclass dear Fay.
March 28th, 2019 15:49
Michael Edwards said:
An elegant burgeoning of love expressed in your own unique way. Another masterclass dear Fay.
March 28th, 2019 15:49
ANTICIPATION.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FAY : FOR AN ELEGANT LOVE POEM ! It is presented in a gossamer vocabulary that precludes an \"18\" and excludes the Bark of Fido. It stirred our yearnings for each other and the shared intimacy of a Camper Van might just enable us to act out all three STANZAS !
1. Anticipation !
2. Paricipation ! !
3. Culmination ! ! !
We are both in our Prime (35 & 30) and nearly 8 months separation is too too much ! We both enjoyed the covert nuances in every word of your Love Poem ! Straight from your Heart to Ours !
Blessings & Love in the SPIRIT
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 28th, 2019 10:19
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FAY : FOR AN ELEGANT LOVE POEM ! It is presented in a gossamer vocabulary that precludes an \"18\" and excludes the Bark of Fido. It stirred our yearnings for each other and the shared intimacy of a Camper Van might just enable us to act out all three STANZAS !
1. Anticipation !
2. Paricipation ! !
3. Culmination ! ! !
We are both in our Prime (35 & 30) and nearly 8 months separation is too too much ! We both enjoyed the covert nuances in every word of your Love Poem ! Straight from your Heart to Ours !
Blessings & Love in the SPIRIT
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 28th, 2019 10:19
ANTICIPATION.
orchidee said:
Swoon! Fell off me chair! lol. A swoon\'s as far as I get, as Fido never lets me have anything \'exciting\'. heehee.
March 28th, 2019 05:26
orchidee said:
Swoon! Fell off me chair! lol. A swoon\'s as far as I get, as Fido never lets me have anything \'exciting\'. heehee.
March 28th, 2019 05:26
ANTICIPATION.
Neville said:
That\'s a nice feeling you so eloquently detailed here my very fine literary friend... a real delight that leaves this reader a tingling & salt laden... Neville
March 28th, 2019 05:05
Neville said:
That\'s a nice feeling you so eloquently detailed here my very fine literary friend... a real delight that leaves this reader a tingling & salt laden... Neville
March 28th, 2019 05:05
HAVENS.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay, watching crows and rooks can be most rewarding, they are very intelligent birds .
Have a look at this:
https://youtu.be/WJBwPKDRVU4
March 28th, 2019 01:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay, watching crows and rooks can be most rewarding, they are very intelligent birds .
Have a look at this:
https://youtu.be/WJBwPKDRVU4
March 28th, 2019 01:56
HAVENS.
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
A fascinating and informative read!
I can see how these crow behaviors can be applied to humans!
I consider you a top notch writer!
I enjoyed reading your great poem! I especially liked the line...
“...mass stealing starts war in earnest
to keep robbing beaks away!”
~Laura~
March 27th, 2019 17:47
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
A fascinating and informative read!
I can see how these crow behaviors can be applied to humans!
I consider you a top notch writer!
I enjoyed reading your great poem! I especially liked the line...
“...mass stealing starts war in earnest
to keep robbing beaks away!”
~Laura~
March 27th, 2019 17:47
HAVENS.
MendedFences27 said:
What if all the nest raiders could be colored black? We have Bluejays that are raiders, yet beautifully colored birds.Selection by nest-building happens in humans as wealth weights the balance to he who can provide a Nest-Egg. Corny I know. Loved your poem, and I\'ll be watching the crows this Spring. - Phil A.
March 27th, 2019 16:43
MendedFences27 said:
What if all the nest raiders could be colored black? We have Bluejays that are raiders, yet beautifully colored birds.Selection by nest-building happens in humans as wealth weights the balance to he who can provide a Nest-Egg. Corny I know. Loved your poem, and I\'ll be watching the crows this Spring. - Phil A.
March 27th, 2019 16:43
HAVENS.
Michael Edwards said:
They really are gathering up a head of steam at the moment - circling cawing gathering sticks building nests - they may not be the most attractive of birds but boy would they be missed. The countryside would not be the same without them.
March 27th, 2019 14:59
Michael Edwards said:
They really are gathering up a head of steam at the moment - circling cawing gathering sticks building nests - they may not be the most attractive of birds but boy would they be missed. The countryside would not be the same without them.
March 27th, 2019 14:59
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