Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.



NEWNESS..
Goldfinch60 said:

May that regeneration bring that peace, joy and love to us all.

April 11th, 2019 15:20

NEWNESS..
Suresh said:

Regeneration, a product of the cold, preparing for a chance to blossom again.
Feel the Spring again and again

April 11th, 2019 12:28

NEWNESS..
moordykspot2 said:

Being able to provoke thought is a gift and talent. You have both in your writing. A real pleasure to be able to read your work. I look forward to it. Thank you

April 11th, 2019 11:39

NEWNESS..
Michael Edwards said:

The promise of a new beginning and the signs are now everywhere.

April 11th, 2019 04:27

NEWNESS..
Neville said:

Hot off the press and shining like a beacon to guide both lost and wandering pilgrims to safety in the arms of a new and nourishing season we know as spring.... a little delight for sure... a bit like me lol .... Neville

April 11th, 2019 04:26

NEWNESS..
Laura🌻 said:

My Dear Fay,

You say, “...hopefully meaningful”...
I say, “...very meaningful”...
Many signs of New Beginnings are beginning to emerge! Such a wonderful feeling!
Thank you for penning and sharing your beautiful thoughts!

~Laura~

April 11th, 2019 04:19

NEWNESS..
orchidee said:

A fine write Fay.

April 11th, 2019 03:30

LIT.
Goldfinch60 said:

Super sensual write Fay.

April 10th, 2019 15:06

LIT.
moordykspot2 said:

Takes me back to my first girlfriend To this day I am sure I was in love even at 14 Marvellous sentiment really enjoyed mt read thank you

April 10th, 2019 12:10

LIT.
Michael Edwards said:

Oh gosh - I\'m there - that night - what a superb write dear Fay - all I can add is ditto all the previous comments.

April 10th, 2019 11:08

LIT.
Suresh said:

True love is truly love, as portrayed in both the pic and the lit

April 10th, 2019 10:55

LIT.
orchidee said:

Swoon! heehee.

April 10th, 2019 09:31

LIT.
dusk arising said:

What lurks behind the poetic genius whose daily masterpieces leave us trailing in hopeless awe. Well... who knows?.. certainly a lady of many talents and surprises.

What a joyous steamy romp of a blistering sensual love poem you give us today.

I have to say that your piece today gave me a Hieneken moment.... it reached the parts other poems cannot reach.

April 10th, 2019 09:26

GEMS.
moordykspot2 said:

Takes this new reader to another place. Really enjoyable so well composed Thank you

April 10th, 2019 05:49

LIT.
Neville said:

Wow indeed,

this is amazing in its own write and made even more so by the image that accompanies these passionate words throughout, until that most perfect conclusion..... Neville

April 10th, 2019 04:19

GEMS.
Suresh said:

Sitting by the window, watching the rain fall. And then, following the path of a single drop gliding down the window pane - envisioning all that you so poetically framed

April 9th, 2019 23:33

GEMS.
Michael Edwards said:

Another gem Fay

April 9th, 2019 16:18

GEMS.
orchidee said:

Good write Fay.

April 9th, 2019 07:32

GEMS.
dusk arising said:

Delightful little raindrops. Oh where were they when i was literally soaked to the skin last night called out to attend a gas installation. HUGE mental shift created by you here as i appreciate the beauty of each of these little gems which overpowered me last night.

Revoking a soaking.

April 9th, 2019 07:14

GEMS.
Neville said:

As sure as God made little green apples, this must rate among the very top sparkly little gems here @ MPS..... N

April 9th, 2019 04:43

GEMS.
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful Fay, those jewels are wondrous.

April 9th, 2019 02:29

GEMS.
kevin browne said:

Ah, I see you are jewelled with rainbows. A good place to be I guess. What a little gem here you have written. Nice to wake up to.

April 9th, 2019 02:25

ILL-SENT
dusk arising said:

I get the feeling that you have in mind a family or person who has been affected by this land loss. Indeed, huge financial loss, of life changing proportion too.
Amire the way you use words which convey the relentless power of the seas.

April 8th, 2019 11:56

ILL-SENT
Suresh said:

The Brothers, Wind and Water, are in the news everyday, and not in a good way.

Yes, a fine write indeed

April 8th, 2019 11:49

ILL-SENT
Neville said:

Pon my very word, how these words do ring true... Only the other day a massive landslide showered and crushed where I had walked only a few days before, below the cliffs of West Bay... You capture not only the might of the wind and storm and waves, but the devastation that these may leave in their wake....... Neville

April 8th, 2019 04:17

ILL-SENT
Michael Edwards said:

Yes indeed another fine write about a terrible problem.

April 8th, 2019 02:30

ILL-SENT
orchidee said:

You know them more than some of us, being near the coast. A fine write Fay.

April 8th, 2019 02:07

HITHER.
Neville said:

This is so fine.. nay tis grande and I feel so flirtesth with and verrily .. absolutely to die for...A great write as always, but just a little special methinks x

April 7th, 2019 06:07

HITHER.
Goldfinch60 said:

Whimsy away Fay,
Whimsy away.

April 7th, 2019 00:40

HITHER.
Suresh said:

Some know how - and like Michael said - you do.

April 6th, 2019 12:03



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