Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
SOLO-CHILL.
Neville said:
An emotionally charged lament if ever there was.. a dirge played along some wild and windswept shoreline immediately springs to mind.... a sadness lingers after the initial read... N
April 2nd, 2019 04:47
Neville said:
An emotionally charged lament if ever there was.. a dirge played along some wild and windswept shoreline immediately springs to mind.... a sadness lingers after the initial read... N
April 2nd, 2019 04:47
SOLO-CHILL.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FOR THIS FAY : Angela here 9pm in Auckland : chance to catch up on MPS ~ I\'m posting my poem soon ! Love the picture can I use it ? It pictures me waiting on the Auckland BEACH waiting : waiting for Brians Plane to come in (it takes weeks for the Boat !) Love the pathos in your Poem. Brian & I are Bereavment Councellors in the Church especially for the under 40s who had been bereaved. It is hard to lose your Partner at any age but even worse when you are Young. Brian and I are qualified Councellors for our Work. The worst situation is suicide because the bereaved ones always blame themselves. What your poem illustrates is : However beautiful the surroundings and the weather : the loss NEVER goes away. Thank you it inspires Brian & I to cherish each other more each day while we have each other. I am sitting on the Shore waiting : but I KNOW BRIAN WILL BE WITH ME on Saturday 20th APRIL : AMEN
Thank you for awakening our senses
Blessings & love in the Spirit
Your ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
April 2nd, 2019 03:16
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FOR THIS FAY : Angela here 9pm in Auckland : chance to catch up on MPS ~ I\'m posting my poem soon ! Love the picture can I use it ? It pictures me waiting on the Auckland BEACH waiting : waiting for Brians Plane to come in (it takes weeks for the Boat !) Love the pathos in your Poem. Brian & I are Bereavment Councellors in the Church especially for the under 40s who had been bereaved. It is hard to lose your Partner at any age but even worse when you are Young. Brian and I are qualified Councellors for our Work. The worst situation is suicide because the bereaved ones always blame themselves. What your poem illustrates is : However beautiful the surroundings and the weather : the loss NEVER goes away. Thank you it inspires Brian & I to cherish each other more each day while we have each other. I am sitting on the Shore waiting : but I KNOW BRIAN WILL BE WITH ME on Saturday 20th APRIL : AMEN
Thank you for awakening our senses
Blessings & love in the Spirit
Your ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
April 2nd, 2019 03:16
I AM BREEZE - (A Series)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening FAY : Its 8am Tuesday in NZ ! As BREEZE you seem to be in a very mischievious mood which I like ! Yoou have morphed into a Naughty Schoolgirl. Thirteen negative appelations onlucky for those in its Path.
Shuffling Leaves : Scuttling Boats ; Scattering Clouds
Smokey Fumes : Shutters Banging : Scary Creakings
Stirring Rooks : Storming Roofs : Stripping Trees
Storming Cliffs : Savaging Power Boats : Sun Superceded
Spring Surrended ! There is a lot of intentional alliteration here !
The \"S\" sound mimics the soughing of the BREEZE !
You set the Poetic Bar very high FAY enabling us to learn & enjoy but never to emulate !
Blessings and LOVE in the SPIRIT
Your Good Friend ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check our FUSION on COLOURS : Thanks A & B !
April 1st, 2019 14:33
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening FAY : Its 8am Tuesday in NZ ! As BREEZE you seem to be in a very mischievious mood which I like ! Yoou have morphed into a Naughty Schoolgirl. Thirteen negative appelations onlucky for those in its Path.
Shuffling Leaves : Scuttling Boats ; Scattering Clouds
Smokey Fumes : Shutters Banging : Scary Creakings
Stirring Rooks : Storming Roofs : Stripping Trees
Storming Cliffs : Savaging Power Boats : Sun Superceded
Spring Surrended ! There is a lot of intentional alliteration here !
The \"S\" sound mimics the soughing of the BREEZE !
You set the Poetic Bar very high FAY enabling us to learn & enjoy but never to emulate !
Blessings and LOVE in the SPIRIT
Your Good Friend ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check our FUSION on COLOURS : Thanks A & B !
April 1st, 2019 14:33
I AM BREEZE - (A Series)
Nafis Light said:
Somehow, the poem reminds me of a poem created by a poet in a video game I played before. It was a beautiful poem about time and skies.
April 1st, 2019 09:18
Nafis Light said:
Somehow, the poem reminds me of a poem created by a poet in a video game I played before. It was a beautiful poem about time and skies.
April 1st, 2019 09:18
I AM BREEZE - (A Series)
dusk arising said:
I know you .. you are the one who stole my hat, you made me cry as a six year old stealing my kite and casting it into the boiling sea. I\'m not sure but i think you ganged up with the electric storm and had my fences down last year too.
On the other hand.. You kept my flag flying and give \'change\' a healthy ride.
All in all, having you around is a breeze in itself.
Really enjoyable fun read from you today.
April 1st, 2019 06:03
dusk arising said:
I know you .. you are the one who stole my hat, you made me cry as a six year old stealing my kite and casting it into the boiling sea. I\'m not sure but i think you ganged up with the electric storm and had my fences down last year too.
On the other hand.. You kept my flag flying and give \'change\' a healthy ride.
All in all, having you around is a breeze in itself.
Really enjoyable fun read from you today.
April 1st, 2019 06:03
I AM BREEZE - (A Series)
Neville said:
These words leave this reader breathless.. crammed full of appropriate blustery observations and then some..
Yes, and as part of a now eagerly awaited series, shall I imagine spill across April and be responsible for creating an abundance of smiles... Neville
April 1st, 2019 05:10
Neville said:
These words leave this reader breathless.. crammed full of appropriate blustery observations and then some..
Yes, and as part of a now eagerly awaited series, shall I imagine spill across April and be responsible for creating an abundance of smiles... Neville
April 1st, 2019 05:10
LOVE\'S TUNE.
Nafis Light said:
Somehow it is perfect it its essence.
The picture adds beauty.
With Love and Laughter,
J44
March 31st, 2019 09:11
Nafis Light said:
Somehow it is perfect it its essence.
The picture adds beauty.
With Love and Laughter,
J44
March 31st, 2019 09:11
LOVE\'S TUNE.
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
A stunning write!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
March 31st, 2019 05:32
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
A stunning write!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
March 31st, 2019 05:32
LOVE\'S TUNE.
Neville said:
What a splendid little poem this is.. one that will undoubtedly be more relevant to some, than to others, but.. will nevertheless appeal to everyone that finds it here.... Neville
March 31st, 2019 05:30
Neville said:
What a splendid little poem this is.. one that will undoubtedly be more relevant to some, than to others, but.. will nevertheless appeal to everyone that finds it here.... Neville
March 31st, 2019 05:30
LOVE\'S TUNE.
dusk arising said:
Your first verse made me guffaw. So apt..... so much conveyed in four short lines......
I believe the first verse is a stand alone masterpiece.
The whole is a fine write as per your norm .... but yes that first verse.... is so terse.
Goes into my favs.
March 31st, 2019 05:04
dusk arising said:
Your first verse made me guffaw. So apt..... so much conveyed in four short lines......
I believe the first verse is a stand alone masterpiece.
The whole is a fine write as per your norm .... but yes that first verse.... is so terse.
Goes into my favs.
March 31st, 2019 05:04
LOVE\'S TUNE.
orchidee said:
A lovely write Fay. A pity I used to ruin my mum\'s Mothers Day every year, by singing to her! lol. I wondered why dad bought her ear-plugs every Christmas. Hmmm?
March 31st, 2019 04:22
orchidee said:
A lovely write Fay. A pity I used to ruin my mum\'s Mothers Day every year, by singing to her! lol. I wondered why dad bought her ear-plugs every Christmas. Hmmm?
March 31st, 2019 04:22
LOVE\'S TUNE.
Poetic Dan said:
That it does, beautifully done! Love never stops, even if we think it\'s done.
March 31st, 2019 03:38
Poetic Dan said:
That it does, beautifully done! Love never stops, even if we think it\'s done.
March 31st, 2019 03:38
TROUBLE.
dusk arising said:
If i put on my rain gear in Cornwall then i know the wind will get me instead.
Brave men who put to sea under those leadened skies.
Brrrrrrrrr !
March 30th, 2019 23:57
dusk arising said:
If i put on my rain gear in Cornwall then i know the wind will get me instead.
Brave men who put to sea under those leadened skies.
Brrrrrrrrr !
March 30th, 2019 23:57
TROUBLE.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FAY FOR A LOVELY PIC \'N POEM ! I loved te POEM based not only on colour but also culinary delights ! I teach Catering Science but there are not many Poems on Food ! The food you worked into your Poetic Tapestry were some of my Favourites ! Macaroons ~ Merangue Pie ~ Crumble ~ Rye (Bread) and Stew (Irish !) A Poem never tasted so so good !
Blessings & Love in the Spirit
Brian & Angela 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 30th, 2019 19:03
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FAY FOR A LOVELY PIC \'N POEM ! I loved te POEM based not only on colour but also culinary delights ! I teach Catering Science but there are not many Poems on Food ! The food you worked into your Poetic Tapestry were some of my Favourites ! Macaroons ~ Merangue Pie ~ Crumble ~ Rye (Bread) and Stew (Irish !) A Poem never tasted so so good !
Blessings & Love in the Spirit
Brian & Angela 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 30th, 2019 19:03
TROUBLE.
MendedFences27 said:
Picture and poem, one and the same, captured in word form just as beautiful and also threatening. A great write Fay. Enjoyed it immensely.
- Phil A.
March 30th, 2019 11:57
MendedFences27 said:
Picture and poem, one and the same, captured in word form just as beautiful and also threatening. A great write Fay. Enjoyed it immensely.
- Phil A.
March 30th, 2019 11:57
TROUBLE.
Neville said:
this is absolutely superb.. a little sea gem and true .. more salt than a saxa factory and why not.... you certainly paint some amazing pictures with your pen dear friend...... N
March 30th, 2019 07:34
Neville said:
this is absolutely superb.. a little sea gem and true .. more salt than a saxa factory and why not.... you certainly paint some amazing pictures with your pen dear friend...... N
March 30th, 2019 07:34
TROUBLE.
Poetic Dan said:
Glad I have blue sky over head, but I\'ll think of you next time it\'s like this! Won\'t be long in sure ;)
March 30th, 2019 04:03
Poetic Dan said:
Glad I have blue sky over head, but I\'ll think of you next time it\'s like this! Won\'t be long in sure ;)
March 30th, 2019 04:03
LEVELS.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good evening FAY ! Love the quote \"To be at one with Nature : Is to be at one with Yourself !\" V 1. Indicates that you appreciate Nature : and are at one with Nature : You are Nature ! V 2. Nature becomes You ! V 3. You admit this oneness is a transient state : but that it is still to be relished : AMEN.
Blessings & Spiritual love
Angela & Brian 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 29th, 2019 19:09
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good evening FAY ! Love the quote \"To be at one with Nature : Is to be at one with Yourself !\" V 1. Indicates that you appreciate Nature : and are at one with Nature : You are Nature ! V 2. Nature becomes You ! V 3. You admit this oneness is a transient state : but that it is still to be relished : AMEN.
Blessings & Spiritual love
Angela & Brian 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 29th, 2019 19:09
LEVELS.
MendedFences27 said:
\'When one tugs at a single thing in Nature, he finds it attached to the rest of the world\" - John Muir
Your poem seems to echo that sentimental truth. Yes we can be awed by its beauty, or spurred to empathize with its creatures, and it can excite or imaginations. As someone once said, \"Curiosity is Nature\'s school of learning\", to the poet, it is a treasure trove of inspiration. Loved your poem. - Phil A.
March 29th, 2019 14:44
MendedFences27 said:
\'When one tugs at a single thing in Nature, he finds it attached to the rest of the world\" - John Muir
Your poem seems to echo that sentimental truth. Yes we can be awed by its beauty, or spurred to empathize with its creatures, and it can excite or imaginations. As someone once said, \"Curiosity is Nature\'s school of learning\", to the poet, it is a treasure trove of inspiration. Loved your poem. - Phil A.
March 29th, 2019 14:44
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