Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
FORTUNE.
sylviasearcher said:
A beautiful picture you have created. Like a delightful picnic I can’t wait to indulge in!
March 23rd, 2019 03:10
sylviasearcher said:
A beautiful picture you have created. Like a delightful picnic I can’t wait to indulge in!
March 23rd, 2019 03:10
FORTUNE.
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
No signs of spring where I am!
While reading your poem though, I’ve envisioned...
“the flash of emerald as snowdrop perfection adorns its shy petals”...
Your excellent choice of words have painted the perfect picture in my mind...the picture of new beginnings...the picture of Springtime!
Thank you for sharing !
~Laura~
March 23rd, 2019 02:58
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
No signs of spring where I am!
While reading your poem though, I’ve envisioned...
“the flash of emerald as snowdrop perfection adorns its shy petals”...
Your excellent choice of words have painted the perfect picture in my mind...the picture of new beginnings...the picture of Springtime!
Thank you for sharing !
~Laura~
March 23rd, 2019 02:58
FORTUNE.
Michael Edwards said:
Nature is sure beginning to expose its treasures - it\'s quite stunning looking out and I\'ll soon be out there. Mind you I\'m helping at a charity rummage sale all day today so I\'ll not see so much of it. Such an elegant write Fay.
March 23rd, 2019 02:20
Michael Edwards said:
Nature is sure beginning to expose its treasures - it\'s quite stunning looking out and I\'ll soon be out there. Mind you I\'m helping at a charity rummage sale all day today so I\'ll not see so much of it. Such an elegant write Fay.
March 23rd, 2019 02:20
OMENS.
Neville said:
a magnificent post here we have folks....
I oft stand and stare in awe at some of these giants..scattered around this most beautiful isle of ours.. and boy, do I wonder so... Aint we lucky having so many of them down our neck of the woods eh\' Fay.... only yesterday did I marvel at Stonehenge on passing .... N x
March 22nd, 2019 17:50
Neville said:
a magnificent post here we have folks....
I oft stand and stare in awe at some of these giants..scattered around this most beautiful isle of ours.. and boy, do I wonder so... Aint we lucky having so many of them down our neck of the woods eh\' Fay.... only yesterday did I marvel at Stonehenge on passing .... N x
March 22nd, 2019 17:50
MYSTERY.
Goldfinch60 said:
The sea still hols so many mysteries Fay, I wonder if they will ever be solved.
March 22nd, 2019 15:51
Goldfinch60 said:
The sea still hols so many mysteries Fay, I wonder if they will ever be solved.
March 22nd, 2019 15:51
MYSTERY.
MendedFences27 said:
Empathy for the crab? Truly a poet\'s response. Much so that a poem is written, and mysteries theorized. If we completely understood the Ocean, we might be able to save ourselves. A very nice description and cause for thinking. Thanks for posting this reminder of two thirds of our planet that seems to go unnoticed.- Phil A.
March 22nd, 2019 13:33
MendedFences27 said:
Empathy for the crab? Truly a poet\'s response. Much so that a poem is written, and mysteries theorized. If we completely understood the Ocean, we might be able to save ourselves. A very nice description and cause for thinking. Thanks for posting this reminder of two thirds of our planet that seems to go unnoticed.- Phil A.
March 22nd, 2019 13:33
MYSTERY.
dusk arising said:
Such a last verse to make one sit up and think today. Could the mystery simply be \'harmony\'? A commodity which humanity has grasped in small quantity only to witness it\'s slipping through our fingers time after time.
Earlier, reading, my thoughts painted pictures of the pathetic tragedy a corpse presents as it is rolled and dismembered by a now cruel tide. A once beautiful creation reduced to this. Here i am also mindful of the ruined bodies of roadkill we see all too often.
Vivid pictures today.
March 22nd, 2019 08:18
dusk arising said:
Such a last verse to make one sit up and think today. Could the mystery simply be \'harmony\'? A commodity which humanity has grasped in small quantity only to witness it\'s slipping through our fingers time after time.
Earlier, reading, my thoughts painted pictures of the pathetic tragedy a corpse presents as it is rolled and dismembered by a now cruel tide. A once beautiful creation reduced to this. Here i am also mindful of the ruined bodies of roadkill we see all too often.
Vivid pictures today.
March 22nd, 2019 08:18
MYSTERY.
Nicholas Browning said:
There may very well be the cure for cancer at the bottom of the ocean somewhere.
A lovely write, Fay.
March 22nd, 2019 06:19
Nicholas Browning said:
There may very well be the cure for cancer at the bottom of the ocean somewhere.
A lovely write, Fay.
March 22nd, 2019 06:19
MYSTERY.
Michael Edwards said:
Super salty stuff Fay - and there is so much to learn from exists beneath the waves.
March 22nd, 2019 06:09
Michael Edwards said:
Super salty stuff Fay - and there is so much to learn from exists beneath the waves.
March 22nd, 2019 06:09
VIBRATIONS.
Fay Slimm. said:
Thank you kindly Sunshinefalling for adding my poem to your favourites.
March 21st, 2019 21:21
Fay Slimm. said:
Thank you kindly Sunshinefalling for adding my poem to your favourites.
March 21st, 2019 21:21
VIBRATIONS.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Again FAY you have shared a Poem that is beautiful in both its meter & message ! Irespective of \"Wherever in the World we are : UK or NZ\" : An ear bent to NATURE does become tuned into its \"GOOD VIBRATIONS\" Because the Population Density in NZ is only 7% that of the UK there is much less background noise and the \"Sounds of Nature\" become predominant and beautiful ! Our Poem today on Mickey Mouse does resonate with yours in that one day all Art will graduate to the Pastoral ! As in Robbie Burns \"To a Mouse !\"
Blessings & Love in the Spirit :
ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 21st, 2019 16:03
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Again FAY you have shared a Poem that is beautiful in both its meter & message ! Irespective of \"Wherever in the World we are : UK or NZ\" : An ear bent to NATURE does become tuned into its \"GOOD VIBRATIONS\" Because the Population Density in NZ is only 7% that of the UK there is much less background noise and the \"Sounds of Nature\" become predominant and beautiful ! Our Poem today on Mickey Mouse does resonate with yours in that one day all Art will graduate to the Pastoral ! As in Robbie Burns \"To a Mouse !\"
Blessings & Love in the Spirit :
ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 21st, 2019 16:03
CLIMBING.
Neville said:
indeed it is true, nothing stings quite like the smarting sting left in the wake of betrayal... any kind of betrayal in my mind.. another great write from a delicate & dedicated pen.... yours truly... A fan.....
March 21st, 2019 15:21
Neville said:
indeed it is true, nothing stings quite like the smarting sting left in the wake of betrayal... any kind of betrayal in my mind.. another great write from a delicate & dedicated pen.... yours truly... A fan.....
March 21st, 2019 15:21
VIBRATIONS.
sylviasearcher said:
I sensed it too but could never pen it like you do Fay. Beauty. True.
March 21st, 2019 13:03
sylviasearcher said:
I sensed it too but could never pen it like you do Fay. Beauty. True.
March 21st, 2019 13:03
VIBRATIONS.
Neville said:
Its gonna take some time for my fingers to loosen up a bit so all I\'m gonna say here and now is .. how exquisitely penned these flowing words are and true.... N
March 21st, 2019 12:29
Neville said:
Its gonna take some time for my fingers to loosen up a bit so all I\'m gonna say here and now is .. how exquisitely penned these flowing words are and true.... N
March 21st, 2019 12:29
VIBRATIONS.
Michael Edwards said:
This evokes such calming thoughts of peaceful rusticity - and mines a merlot.
March 21st, 2019 04:14
Michael Edwards said:
This evokes such calming thoughts of peaceful rusticity - and mines a merlot.
March 21st, 2019 04:14
VIBRATIONS.
Nicholas Browning said:
The final stanza holds much truth to it, and the entire poem shows the great care you took to write it.
Wonderfully done, Fay.
March 21st, 2019 03:39
Nicholas Browning said:
The final stanza holds much truth to it, and the entire poem shows the great care you took to write it.
Wonderfully done, Fay.
March 21st, 2019 03:39
VIBRATIONS.
Goldfinch60 said:
Life is always more bearable after reading your wonderful words Fay.
March 21st, 2019 03:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Life is always more bearable after reading your wonderful words Fay.
March 21st, 2019 03:14
VIBRATIONS.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I\'m gonna sit in those leafy green oceans of growing corn, but not in a Force 10 gale! lol.
March 21st, 2019 03:08
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I\'m gonna sit in those leafy green oceans of growing corn, but not in a Force 10 gale! lol.
March 21st, 2019 03:08
VIBRATIONS.
whisperingquill said:
You know it\'s exceptionally exquisite Ms. Fay
especially when I have to look up words.
\"Gowns of fragile filigree curled lightly\" that is smooth like silk
quenching like a Cabernet Sauvignon.
👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼 excellent work
March 21st, 2019 03:01
whisperingquill said:
You know it\'s exceptionally exquisite Ms. Fay
especially when I have to look up words.
\"Gowns of fragile filigree curled lightly\" that is smooth like silk
quenching like a Cabernet Sauvignon.
👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼 excellent work
March 21st, 2019 03:01
CLIMBING.
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a wonderful write Fay.
Experience cannot be taught but once learned can take us so much further in our lives.
March 21st, 2019 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a wonderful write Fay.
Experience cannot be taught but once learned can take us so much further in our lives.
March 21st, 2019 01:48
CLIMBING.
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
As the expression goes...
—Been there, done that—
The end result of it all is extraordinary!
It has made me stronger, independent, and best of all experience a love deeper than ever before! The love we experienced for one another when we first met will always be there! No more doubts!
This great line truly describes how I felt at the time...
“Life in the wake of changes acts
out a merciless course”...
Thank you for sharing this outstanding write! You are truly a poetess I very much admire!
~Laura~
March 20th, 2019 19:53
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
As the expression goes...
—Been there, done that—
The end result of it all is extraordinary!
It has made me stronger, independent, and best of all experience a love deeper than ever before! The love we experienced for one another when we first met will always be there! No more doubts!
This great line truly describes how I felt at the time...
“Life in the wake of changes acts
out a merciless course”...
Thank you for sharing this outstanding write! You are truly a poetess I very much admire!
~Laura~
March 20th, 2019 19:53
CLIMBING.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD NIGHT FAY : Its gone 12 noon (Thursday) here & my Clinic is 2 pm ! BETRAYAL is a big word and a denial of all that BRIAN & I stand for ! WE have been separated by 11,500 miles for Eight Months and because we have found TRUE LOVE and a bit more mature (30 & 35) the absence has made us stronger. We both wear engagement rings which helps and most KIWIS & MAORIS respect my status. A few have asked me for a date but I have always refused ! I either go out with RUTH or in a Group and I know BRIAN would never be unfaithful ~ AMEN
Each of the verses in your Perfect Poem expresses a betrayal of TRUST. I know Couples who have faced \"Bitter Betrayal by their Partner : some have survived : but others have ended the relationship and ended up SADDER but WISER Betrayal is something People have to climb out of or PERISH ! Brian and I keep in regular touch and lots of the Poems we post are COLLABORATIONS. We never do (and never will !) take each other for granted. Thanks for posting this poem as a salutary wraning to any would-be BETRAYERS !
Blessings & Love in the Spirit
ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 20th, 2019 18:58
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD NIGHT FAY : Its gone 12 noon (Thursday) here & my Clinic is 2 pm ! BETRAYAL is a big word and a denial of all that BRIAN & I stand for ! WE have been separated by 11,500 miles for Eight Months and because we have found TRUE LOVE and a bit more mature (30 & 35) the absence has made us stronger. We both wear engagement rings which helps and most KIWIS & MAORIS respect my status. A few have asked me for a date but I have always refused ! I either go out with RUTH or in a Group and I know BRIAN would never be unfaithful ~ AMEN
Each of the verses in your Perfect Poem expresses a betrayal of TRUST. I know Couples who have faced \"Bitter Betrayal by their Partner : some have survived : but others have ended the relationship and ended up SADDER but WISER Betrayal is something People have to climb out of or PERISH ! Brian and I keep in regular touch and lots of the Poems we post are COLLABORATIONS. We never do (and never will !) take each other for granted. Thanks for posting this poem as a salutary wraning to any would-be BETRAYERS !
Blessings & Love in the Spirit
ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 20th, 2019 18:58
CLIMBING.
Nicholas Browning said:
I enjoyed this very much. A very descriptive read on the subject.
Nicely written.
Best regards!
March 20th, 2019 14:03
Nicholas Browning said:
I enjoyed this very much. A very descriptive read on the subject.
Nicely written.
Best regards!
March 20th, 2019 14:03
CLIMBING.
MendedFences27 said:
A lost love through betrayal is more injurious than a loss, and your poem paints the repercussions exactly. Fighting \"on safer ground\" with \"a taste for forgiveness\" is the best result. Keep \"climbing\" - Phil A.
March 20th, 2019 13:38
MendedFences27 said:
A lost love through betrayal is more injurious than a loss, and your poem paints the repercussions exactly. Fighting \"on safer ground\" with \"a taste for forgiveness\" is the best result. Keep \"climbing\" - Phil A.
March 20th, 2019 13:38
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