Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
CLIMBING.
Poetic Dan said:
This was so good in so many ways is so hard to gain trust again, I had this thought yesterday and can\'t wait to share with you.
Your ending is so powerful, shaken but on solid ground with wiser hands.
Thank you for this and the quote with a little cry ;)
March 20th, 2019 04:26
Poetic Dan said:
This was so good in so many ways is so hard to gain trust again, I had this thought yesterday and can\'t wait to share with you.
Your ending is so powerful, shaken but on solid ground with wiser hands.
Thank you for this and the quote with a little cry ;)
March 20th, 2019 04:26
WAVERING.
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Fay, I am glad it is from your imagination and not your reality.
March 19th, 2019 16:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Fay, I am glad it is from your imagination and not your reality.
March 19th, 2019 16:11
WAVERING.
MendedFences27 said:
Billions of people in the world, each with their own idea of reality. It does not matter what one thinks as long as it doesn\'t injure another.We can all be as we imagine ourselves.We can all think freely. We can create as we wish. Just do not step on anyone,s toes Loved your poem. - Phil A.
March 19th, 2019 15:52
MendedFences27 said:
Billions of people in the world, each with their own idea of reality. It does not matter what one thinks as long as it doesn\'t injure another.We can all be as we imagine ourselves.We can all think freely. We can create as we wish. Just do not step on anyone,s toes Loved your poem. - Phil A.
March 19th, 2019 15:52
WAVERING.
Nicholas Browning said:
Ahh, yes. Will trust allow us to see things for what they truly are? To have faith in ourselves is a difficult thing. You have said well what you meant, and here it rings true.
Nicely done, Fay.
March 19th, 2019 14:09
Nicholas Browning said:
Ahh, yes. Will trust allow us to see things for what they truly are? To have faith in ourselves is a difficult thing. You have said well what you meant, and here it rings true.
Nicely done, Fay.
March 19th, 2019 14:09
WAVERING.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing FAY ~ YES our thoughts do waver and for me (BRIAN) especially when I am on holiday !
However when I am at work all my Lectures and Practical Classes are programmed (syllabus) and prepared well in advance ! HOWEVER at weekends ~ and on Holiday (especially abroad) I can let my mind wander & waver as described in your elegant Poem ! I hope to be retired in 2050 ~ and then my MIND can waver & wander all day ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace of Mind
BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 19th, 2019 12:15
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing FAY ~ YES our thoughts do waver and for me (BRIAN) especially when I am on holiday !
However when I am at work all my Lectures and Practical Classes are programmed (syllabus) and prepared well in advance ! HOWEVER at weekends ~ and on Holiday (especially abroad) I can let my mind wander & waver as described in your elegant Poem ! I hope to be retired in 2050 ~ and then my MIND can waver & wander all day ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace of Mind
BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 19th, 2019 12:15
WAVERING.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. We suffer ourselves too:\' A double-minded man (or person) is unstable in all their ways\' says James in New Testament. We suffer through not making up our minds: \'Shall I; Shan\'t I?\' then may miss opportunities if we take the wrong choice.
March 19th, 2019 03:55
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. We suffer ourselves too:\' A double-minded man (or person) is unstable in all their ways\' says James in New Testament. We suffer through not making up our minds: \'Shall I; Shan\'t I?\' then may miss opportunities if we take the wrong choice.
March 19th, 2019 03:55
BEGINNINGS.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FAY ~ All seasons are poetical but SPRING stirs the MUSE more than the the others ~ Nature wakens from Her Winter hibernation and bursts into unstoppable life !
Verse 1. Blue skies & Beauty from dryness
V 2. Flowers begin to reclothe woodland
V 3. The snowdrops reappear SPRING has SPRUNG
V 4. Springs beginning has to be seen to be believed
Blessings & Love through Poetry
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 18th, 2019 16:43
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FAY ~ All seasons are poetical but SPRING stirs the MUSE more than the the others ~ Nature wakens from Her Winter hibernation and bursts into unstoppable life !
Verse 1. Blue skies & Beauty from dryness
V 2. Flowers begin to reclothe woodland
V 3. The snowdrops reappear SPRING has SPRUNG
V 4. Springs beginning has to be seen to be believed
Blessings & Love through Poetry
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 18th, 2019 16:43
BEGINNINGS.
Jo March said:
I really enjoyed this poem! It\'s so beautiful. Yes, spring definitely marks a new beginning for us. I think we just have to look up at the \"sapphire-blue roof\" more often! Thank you for the poem!
March 18th, 2019 15:37
Jo March said:
I really enjoyed this poem! It\'s so beautiful. Yes, spring definitely marks a new beginning for us. I think we just have to look up at the \"sapphire-blue roof\" more often! Thank you for the poem!
March 18th, 2019 15:37
BEGINNINGS.
Michael Edwards said:
Great joyloads dear Fay - a beautiful morning so full of promise.r
March 18th, 2019 07:22
Michael Edwards said:
Great joyloads dear Fay - a beautiful morning so full of promise.r
March 18th, 2019 07:22
BEGINNINGS.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay.
A church may seem a bit ghoulish. Being Protestant, one highlight of their year is Archbishop Thomas Cranmer\'s martyrdom on 21st March each year. Erm, a nice start to Spring. Doh!
Well, hopefully they don\'t rub their hands in glee, and say \'Oh goody!\'
March 18th, 2019 07:21
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay.
A church may seem a bit ghoulish. Being Protestant, one highlight of their year is Archbishop Thomas Cranmer\'s martyrdom on 21st March each year. Erm, a nice start to Spring. Doh!
Well, hopefully they don\'t rub their hands in glee, and say \'Oh goody!\'
March 18th, 2019 07:21
BEGINNINGS.
Nicholas Browning said:
I enjoyed this quite a bit.
What a wonderful roller coaster through the dawning of a new season, and new paths that we may take as people.
The description usage is superb.
Lovely write! Thank you for sharing.
March 18th, 2019 06:02
Nicholas Browning said:
I enjoyed this quite a bit.
What a wonderful roller coaster through the dawning of a new season, and new paths that we may take as people.
The description usage is superb.
Lovely write! Thank you for sharing.
March 18th, 2019 06:02
AIR.
Nicholas Browning said:
From physics to personification this is a bundle of gale description! Quite nice.
March 15th, 2019 16:00
Nicholas Browning said:
From physics to personification this is a bundle of gale description! Quite nice.
March 15th, 2019 16:00
AIR.
dusk arising said:
Oh dear, this is where the poet in me comes into conflict with the scientist in me.
So to get myself out of that sillyness i shall picture the coastal hills and the birds forever bringing forth our envy at their flight and mastery of the air.
March 15th, 2019 03:52
dusk arising said:
Oh dear, this is where the poet in me comes into conflict with the scientist in me.
So to get myself out of that sillyness i shall picture the coastal hills and the birds forever bringing forth our envy at their flight and mastery of the air.
March 15th, 2019 03:52
OMENS.
Goldfinch60 said:
If only those stones could talk we would become so knowledgeable.
March 15th, 2019 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
If only those stones could talk we would become so knowledgeable.
March 15th, 2019 01:49
OMENS.
kevin browne said:
Yes, Stonehenge is prevalent all the way through this wonderfully observed and expressed in detail of these stunning stones. I\'m not too far from Stonehenge and have visited on many occasions. It has a sense of nobleness about it as indeed just like your poem.
March 14th, 2019 17:42
kevin browne said:
Yes, Stonehenge is prevalent all the way through this wonderfully observed and expressed in detail of these stunning stones. I\'m not too far from Stonehenge and have visited on many occasions. It has a sense of nobleness about it as indeed just like your poem.
March 14th, 2019 17:42
OMENS.
Nicholas Browning said:
Ahh, what an inspirational message. Watch the stones and then you\'ll know longevity and victory! I enjoyed the read.
March 14th, 2019 16:34
Nicholas Browning said:
Ahh, what an inspirational message. Watch the stones and then you\'ll know longevity and victory! I enjoyed the read.
March 14th, 2019 16:34
OMENS.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing this FAY ~ Much food for thought ! When we visit STONEHENGE and the Standing Stones in the English Lake District and the Geysers & Hot Springs etc in New Zealand & Ayres Rock in Australia and sites sacred to the Native Americans they all trigger mystic vibes in our Minds ! FAITH ICONS always conceal covert TRUTHS ~ BUT ~ to echo your first verse ~ HOW do we unlock them ? Love the visual which complements your questioning Poem ! Some facets of your Poem reflects JOHN BETJAMANS \"Ireland with Emily\" where he ponders similar questions.
Blessings & Love through Poetry
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 14th, 2019 15:39
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing this FAY ~ Much food for thought ! When we visit STONEHENGE and the Standing Stones in the English Lake District and the Geysers & Hot Springs etc in New Zealand & Ayres Rock in Australia and sites sacred to the Native Americans they all trigger mystic vibes in our Minds ! FAITH ICONS always conceal covert TRUTHS ~ BUT ~ to echo your first verse ~ HOW do we unlock them ? Love the visual which complements your questioning Poem ! Some facets of your Poem reflects JOHN BETJAMANS \"Ireland with Emily\" where he ponders similar questions.
Blessings & Love through Poetry
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 14th, 2019 15:39
MEANT.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY : for sharing this very meaningful Poem of MPS Affection ! Poetic Soul Mates (V 4.) describes the relationship each of us has with a FINITE number of MPS Members ! WE have six or more : we always relate to : and You are a very important one ! These interactions are MEANT : for Brian & I to get the most out of MPS through sincere sharing of our Poetry and commenting encouragingly on the contibutions of others : as we do with you !
We use HEARTS (🧡🧡🧡🧡) because our interaction is both cerebral & emotional ! The words you employ in your Poem : exemplify your stance and we thank you for it !
Friendly love : Tied fetter of harmony
Ease with one another : Empathy
Amity : Soul Mate attraction : The extended
Soft hand of meant happiness etc !
Would that all Members shared those qualities !
Over the past few Years : Brian & I have experienced
these qualities and the real empathy that flows
between us DAILY ~ AMEN
Blessings & Poetic Soul Mate LOVE
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 14th, 2019 15:13
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY : for sharing this very meaningful Poem of MPS Affection ! Poetic Soul Mates (V 4.) describes the relationship each of us has with a FINITE number of MPS Members ! WE have six or more : we always relate to : and You are a very important one ! These interactions are MEANT : for Brian & I to get the most out of MPS through sincere sharing of our Poetry and commenting encouragingly on the contibutions of others : as we do with you !
We use HEARTS (🧡🧡🧡🧡) because our interaction is both cerebral & emotional ! The words you employ in your Poem : exemplify your stance and we thank you for it !
Friendly love : Tied fetter of harmony
Ease with one another : Empathy
Amity : Soul Mate attraction : The extended
Soft hand of meant happiness etc !
Would that all Members shared those qualities !
Over the past few Years : Brian & I have experienced
these qualities and the real empathy that flows
between us DAILY ~ AMEN
Blessings & Poetic Soul Mate LOVE
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 14th, 2019 15:13
OMENS.
dusk arising said:
Somehow these noble stones command a respect. A sense of wonderment invades us. Thoughts unthought invite us to wander spiritually.
Similar to hugging a tree.... what secrets do you know?
March 14th, 2019 12:40
dusk arising said:
Somehow these noble stones command a respect. A sense of wonderment invades us. Thoughts unthought invite us to wander spiritually.
Similar to hugging a tree.... what secrets do you know?
March 14th, 2019 12:40
OMENS.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I\'ve gone mad. I felt sorry for a lamp-post out on a cold night - get a grip, Orchi. Men in white coats will turn up soon! ooh.
March 14th, 2019 05:33
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I\'ve gone mad. I felt sorry for a lamp-post out on a cold night - get a grip, Orchi. Men in white coats will turn up soon! ooh.
March 14th, 2019 05:33
MEANT.
Goldfinch60 said:
Another good one Fay, that love that first stirs gets stronger as the souls become one in love.
March 14th, 2019 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Another good one Fay, that love that first stirs gets stronger as the souls become one in love.
March 14th, 2019 01:12
MEANT.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. But, aww, why no one offer me the hand of friendship when I sing? They throw rotten eggs at me instead! lol.
March 13th, 2019 10:49
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. But, aww, why no one offer me the hand of friendship when I sing? They throw rotten eggs at me instead! lol.
March 13th, 2019 10:49
MEANT.
Fay Slimm. said:
Many thanks dear L.G. for saving this verse among your favourites.
March 13th, 2019 06:57
Fay Slimm. said:
Many thanks dear L.G. for saving this verse among your favourites.
March 13th, 2019 06:57
MEANT.
Michael Edwards said:
Love the way the words are woven and especially the line: Time severs doubt\'s fading threads .
Super as always.
March 13th, 2019 05:14
Michael Edwards said:
Love the way the words are woven and especially the line: Time severs doubt\'s fading threads .
Super as always.
March 13th, 2019 05:14
MEANT.
Neville said:
these words should be dedicated to special friends around the globe.. only the very most special of special friends though.... accepted, bless ya my friend.... N
March 13th, 2019 05:05
Neville said:
these words should be dedicated to special friends around the globe.. only the very most special of special friends though.... accepted, bless ya my friend.... N
March 13th, 2019 05:05
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