Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
BONDS.
dusk arising said:
Beautifully written observations of that creation of a lifetimes bond between a doting pair.
Brings a joyous smile to my face and memories of my puppy bundle of fluff \'Zoe\' now long departed.
September 10th, 2018 13:44
dusk arising said:
Beautifully written observations of that creation of a lifetimes bond between a doting pair.
Brings a joyous smile to my face and memories of my puppy bundle of fluff \'Zoe\' now long departed.
September 10th, 2018 13:44
CULLED.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
My Friend you would not tell
with such high zest ................
To Children : ardent for some
desperate GLORY ; the old lie
DULCE ET DECORUM EST
PRO PATRIA MORI !
It is sweet and fitting
to die for ones Country
RUPERT OWEN killed in battle (WW1)
4 November 1918 aged 25
Yes FAY all War is futile but while
Aggressive MEN rule the WORLD
it is inevitable. I pray there will never
be a WORLD WAR (like WW1 & WW2)
ever again. It would destroy the Planet
ONCE & for ALL.
Thanks for sharing & caring :
Love ANGELA 🧡 and BRIAN 😎
Please check our POEM : ANNIVERSARIES : Thanks
September 7th, 2018 04:44
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
My Friend you would not tell
with such high zest ................
To Children : ardent for some
desperate GLORY ; the old lie
DULCE ET DECORUM EST
PRO PATRIA MORI !
It is sweet and fitting
to die for ones Country
RUPERT OWEN killed in battle (WW1)
4 November 1918 aged 25
Yes FAY all War is futile but while
Aggressive MEN rule the WORLD
it is inevitable. I pray there will never
be a WORLD WAR (like WW1 & WW2)
ever again. It would destroy the Planet
ONCE & for ALL.
Thanks for sharing & caring :
Love ANGELA 🧡 and BRIAN 😎
Please check our POEM : ANNIVERSARIES : Thanks
September 7th, 2018 04:44
CULLED.
Lorna said:
Oh Fay and that\'s why we need more women politicians ... the \"glory\" of war escapes (most) of us........
September 7th, 2018 04:05
Lorna said:
Oh Fay and that\'s why we need more women politicians ... the \"glory\" of war escapes (most) of us........
September 7th, 2018 04:05
CULLED.
dusk arising said:
How can we be made in gods image if we send our young to fight the cowardly politicians battles? Maybe god is not so benevolent as we were led to believe? This is a cruel world.
September 7th, 2018 03:55
dusk arising said:
How can we be made in gods image if we send our young to fight the cowardly politicians battles? Maybe god is not so benevolent as we were led to believe? This is a cruel world.
September 7th, 2018 03:55
CULLED.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Yes, on a youth theme, it\'s said pre-teens even, say, age 12, don\'t have full \'road-sense\'. Here young lives wasted in learning and going to war. We\'re the only species that do it. Even animals only kill for food, and because they need to.
September 7th, 2018 03:06
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Yes, on a youth theme, it\'s said pre-teens even, say, age 12, don\'t have full \'road-sense\'. Here young lives wasted in learning and going to war. We\'re the only species that do it. Even animals only kill for food, and because they need to.
September 7th, 2018 03:06
WALLS.
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true, the heart can break through all walls.
September 7th, 2018 00:37
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true, the heart can break through all walls.
September 7th, 2018 00:37
WALLS.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ In history WALLS ~ Like the Walls of JERICHO and more recently BERLIN crumbled & fell at the onslaught of TRUTH & LOVE ! So it will ever be. TRUMP will see that AMERICA has more need for MEXICAN migrant workers ~ than MEXICO has for the USA. The WALL like a lot of other things ~ Trump trumpets ~ will never happen ! Yours BRIAN 😎and ANGELA 🧡
September 6th, 2018 17:04
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ In history WALLS ~ Like the Walls of JERICHO and more recently BERLIN crumbled & fell at the onslaught of TRUTH & LOVE ! So it will ever be. TRUMP will see that AMERICA has more need for MEXICAN migrant workers ~ than MEXICO has for the USA. The WALL like a lot of other things ~ Trump trumpets ~ will never happen ! Yours BRIAN 😎and ANGELA 🧡
September 6th, 2018 17:04
WALLS.
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow ends in a sensational way. Love knows no bars eh. An awesome poem in superb wording, rhyming and content altogether. Kudos.
Soo nice to read from your ink again, Pleez do review my newest poem too.
September 6th, 2018 14:53
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow ends in a sensational way. Love knows no bars eh. An awesome poem in superb wording, rhyming and content altogether. Kudos.
Soo nice to read from your ink again, Pleez do review my newest poem too.
September 6th, 2018 14:53
WALLS.
Michael Edwards said:
I have a wall enclosed garden so I\'m keeping my fingers crossed. Fine write Fay.
September 6th, 2018 12:56
Michael Edwards said:
I have a wall enclosed garden so I\'m keeping my fingers crossed. Fine write Fay.
September 6th, 2018 12:56
SIGNS.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ahhhhh FAY ~ The AGONY & ECSTASY of LOVE ~ Over the last 20 years I have experienced both ~ several times ! For the last two years ANGELA and I are both in Ecstasy mode and we pray it will last forever ! Our Touch IS as soft as a cobweb ~ our Bodies ARE damp with the Dew of Love ~ our Kisses ARE Ruby Red Wine ! It\'s just a pity that we are physically as far apart on earth ~ as we can be ! Our Love is STRONGER after 3 months separation (and then 2 weeks togetherness !) We know our Love will be twice as strong after 7 months of separation ~ AMEN ! Yours as always BRIAN
September 5th, 2018 10:29
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ahhhhh FAY ~ The AGONY & ECSTASY of LOVE ~ Over the last 20 years I have experienced both ~ several times ! For the last two years ANGELA and I are both in Ecstasy mode and we pray it will last forever ! Our Touch IS as soft as a cobweb ~ our Bodies ARE damp with the Dew of Love ~ our Kisses ARE Ruby Red Wine ! It\'s just a pity that we are physically as far apart on earth ~ as we can be ! Our Love is STRONGER after 3 months separation (and then 2 weeks togetherness !) We know our Love will be twice as strong after 7 months of separation ~ AMEN ! Yours as always BRIAN
September 5th, 2018 10:29
SIGNS.
dusk arising said:
Hmmm, i\'m envious of the love you describe... and they say envy is a sin?
September 5th, 2018 07:38
dusk arising said:
Hmmm, i\'m envious of the love you describe... and they say envy is a sin?
September 5th, 2018 07:38
SIGNS.
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write once again Fay, love when found is wonderful.
September 5th, 2018 02:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write once again Fay, love when found is wonderful.
September 5th, 2018 02:54
WINDING DOWN.
w c said:
Hi, Fay. I really enjoyed your poem. I was raised around a farm, and I miss those days very much.
September 4th, 2018 17:31
w c said:
Hi, Fay. I really enjoyed your poem. I was raised around a farm, and I miss those days very much.
September 4th, 2018 17:31
WINDING DOWN.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ooooo FAY ~ Your elegant ODE paints a busy but less frenetic life style (before my Time) in the Middle of the last Century. West Country Farming ! Rumbling tractors ~ Laundry on the line ~ Owls & foxes ~ Country kitchens ~ Boiling eggs ~ Sheep dogs ~ Creaking gates ~ New born lambs ~ Chores 24/7 ! In some aspects LIFE was HARDER but I guess (without information overkill) people were HAPPIER ? Thanks for caring ~ BRIAN ~ Please check my FUSION on Seasons ~ Thanks B 🧡
September 4th, 2018 10:41
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ooooo FAY ~ Your elegant ODE paints a busy but less frenetic life style (before my Time) in the Middle of the last Century. West Country Farming ! Rumbling tractors ~ Laundry on the line ~ Owls & foxes ~ Country kitchens ~ Boiling eggs ~ Sheep dogs ~ Creaking gates ~ New born lambs ~ Chores 24/7 ! In some aspects LIFE was HARDER but I guess (without information overkill) people were HAPPIER ? Thanks for caring ~ BRIAN ~ Please check my FUSION on Seasons ~ Thanks B 🧡
September 4th, 2018 10:41
WINDING DOWN.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write a tribute to those who work on farms, many do not just how hard they have to work.
September 4th, 2018 07:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write a tribute to those who work on farms, many do not just how hard they have to work.
September 4th, 2018 07:52
WINDING DOWN.
Lorna said:
Oh Fay - whenever you write nostalgically about countryside living you always take me with you. You\'ve done it with the sea as well. I wasn\'t born to farm life but working with the horses all those years with my husband left me loving the smells, the nature all around and the day\'s end satisfaction after being with all that for a full day. Thanks for this beautiful picture ...
September 4th, 2018 05:57
Lorna said:
Oh Fay - whenever you write nostalgically about countryside living you always take me with you. You\'ve done it with the sea as well. I wasn\'t born to farm life but working with the horses all those years with my husband left me loving the smells, the nature all around and the day\'s end satisfaction after being with all that for a full day. Thanks for this beautiful picture ...
September 4th, 2018 05:57
MIRAGE.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thank you FAY ~ GLASS is an awesome material ~ a supercooled liquid, which is why it is transparent. The form of 3D glass objects d\'arte is infinite and I am always intrigued by them. I am a Technical Glassblower and can make & repair Scientific Glassware ~ OK. ANGELA has a collection of Glass and also Lladro Pottery. I love the language in your Poem it brings the World of decorative Glass alive ! Entwined silhouettes ~ rotated throughout lit opalescence ! You came ~ You saw and the GLASS conquered YOU ! Another perfect Poem ~ Yours as always BRIAN. Love the photo ~ Thanks.
September 3rd, 2018 16:06
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thank you FAY ~ GLASS is an awesome material ~ a supercooled liquid, which is why it is transparent. The form of 3D glass objects d\'arte is infinite and I am always intrigued by them. I am a Technical Glassblower and can make & repair Scientific Glassware ~ OK. ANGELA has a collection of Glass and also Lladro Pottery. I love the language in your Poem it brings the World of decorative Glass alive ! Entwined silhouettes ~ rotated throughout lit opalescence ! You came ~ You saw and the GLASS conquered YOU ! Another perfect Poem ~ Yours as always BRIAN. Love the photo ~ Thanks.
September 3rd, 2018 16:06
MIRAGE.
Michael Edwards said:
There are some beautiful examples of the glass makers art about and you have captured the excitement so well Fay.
September 3rd, 2018 08:04
Michael Edwards said:
There are some beautiful examples of the glass makers art about and you have captured the excitement so well Fay.
September 3rd, 2018 08:04
MIRAGE.
Goldfinch60 said:
Paperweights can be so magical to look at, as are your words.
September 3rd, 2018 07:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Paperweights can be so magical to look at, as are your words.
September 3rd, 2018 07:50
MIRAGE.
Lorna said:
I\'m mad about paperweights! I\'m so glad you got your hands on it!!! Better than all the jewelry in the world.
Lovely images Fay...
September 3rd, 2018 06:20
Lorna said:
I\'m mad about paperweights! I\'m so glad you got your hands on it!!! Better than all the jewelry in the world.
Lovely images Fay...
September 3rd, 2018 06:20
MIRAGE.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I saw something as old as me - a petrified decorative fossil, of about 200 million years ago. Don\'t drop it on a hard surface, it might shatter after all those years!
September 3rd, 2018 04:42
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I saw something as old as me - a petrified decorative fossil, of about 200 million years ago. Don\'t drop it on a hard surface, it might shatter after all those years!
September 3rd, 2018 04:42
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