Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
CAUGHT.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Fay. I have seen sea eagles on Skye, wonderful birds.
August 31st, 2018 08:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Fay. I have seen sea eagles on Skye, wonderful birds.
August 31st, 2018 08:07
CAUGHT.
orchidee said:
Good write and pic Fay.
Only man kills out of selfishness surely. There\'s arguing about scallops now, of all things (the French) and throwing smoke bombs at each other. Bit pathetic. doh!
August 31st, 2018 06:52
orchidee said:
Good write and pic Fay.
Only man kills out of selfishness surely. There\'s arguing about scallops now, of all things (the French) and throwing smoke bombs at each other. Bit pathetic. doh!
August 31st, 2018 06:52
CAUGHT.
sylviasearcher said:
You write so well of magnificent feathered creatures.
You always do justice to their awesomeness
August 31st, 2018 06:27
sylviasearcher said:
You write so well of magnificent feathered creatures.
You always do justice to their awesomeness
August 31st, 2018 06:27
PLANNED.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY ~ I have researched PLANT BIOSYNTHESIS and my conclusions ~ from my research is that \"THERE IS A GOD\". By Photosynthesis CO2 & H2O are converted into Glucose C6H12O6 : which (with enzymes) can be converted into POLYMERS STARCH (for food) and CELLULOSE (for fibres). Seed dispersion ~ for propogation ~ is one of GOD\'s many Master Plans n the field of Plant Biochemistry ! Yours as always BRIAN 🧡
August 29th, 2018 16:51
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY ~ I have researched PLANT BIOSYNTHESIS and my conclusions ~ from my research is that \"THERE IS A GOD\". By Photosynthesis CO2 & H2O are converted into Glucose C6H12O6 : which (with enzymes) can be converted into POLYMERS STARCH (for food) and CELLULOSE (for fibres). Seed dispersion ~ for propogation ~ is one of GOD\'s many Master Plans n the field of Plant Biochemistry ! Yours as always BRIAN 🧡
August 29th, 2018 16:51
PLANNED.
orchidee said:
Another fine write Fay. And trees are never \'only trees\'. Each one is different, all shades of green, etc.
August 29th, 2018 11:42
orchidee said:
Another fine write Fay. And trees are never \'only trees\'. Each one is different, all shades of green, etc.
August 29th, 2018 11:42
FINALITY.
ron parrish aka wordman said:
lovely but sad write,you conveted it well
August 28th, 2018 23:22
ron parrish aka wordman said:
lovely but sad write,you conveted it well
August 28th, 2018 23:22
FINALITY.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
🧡 Thanks FAY for bringing us all to tears ! An ONLY CHILD is an infinite blessing because it turns a loving couple into a FAMILY ! If that child is taken away the effect is devastating especially if the mother is unable to conceive again ! I have seen the effect of this in my extended Family & the Community. As a Church Worker I have had to counsel Parents in that situation ~ it is never easy ~ weeping & praying with them brings some consolation. They show the PAIN you describe: deep cries ~ shuddering whines ~ moans & howling ~ abandonment (especially the Mother !) ~ WHY ME ? inconsolable questions.
The picture of Mary with her Baby reminded me that when she was only about 50 she stood at the Cross and witnessed her SON ~ JESUS die a horrible death ~ CRUCIFIED ~ equally horrific. Thanks for caring & sharing Yours BRIAN & ANGELA Please check ANGELAS POEM ~ NEW ZEALAND TRIP ~ Thanks 🧡
August 28th, 2018 17:01
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
🧡 Thanks FAY for bringing us all to tears ! An ONLY CHILD is an infinite blessing because it turns a loving couple into a FAMILY ! If that child is taken away the effect is devastating especially if the mother is unable to conceive again ! I have seen the effect of this in my extended Family & the Community. As a Church Worker I have had to counsel Parents in that situation ~ it is never easy ~ weeping & praying with them brings some consolation. They show the PAIN you describe: deep cries ~ shuddering whines ~ moans & howling ~ abandonment (especially the Mother !) ~ WHY ME ? inconsolable questions.
The picture of Mary with her Baby reminded me that when she was only about 50 she stood at the Cross and witnessed her SON ~ JESUS die a horrible death ~ CRUCIFIED ~ equally horrific. Thanks for caring & sharing Yours BRIAN & ANGELA Please check ANGELAS POEM ~ NEW ZEALAND TRIP ~ Thanks 🧡
August 28th, 2018 17:01
FINALITY.
Michael Edwards said:
The grief is evident in every word - so well crafted dear Fay
August 28th, 2018 07:46
Michael Edwards said:
The grief is evident in every word - so well crafted dear Fay
August 28th, 2018 07:46
FINALITY.
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
A poignant reminder of the loss of a child! Reading your poem, reminded me of a friend of mine whose one year old son died of cancer. You have captured her in your write as only you, my dear poetess, can do! She has never recovered from her loss. She visits his burial site every day. She has aged beyond her years! So sad to see her in such pain.
~Laura~
August 28th, 2018 05:08
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
A poignant reminder of the loss of a child! Reading your poem, reminded me of a friend of mine whose one year old son died of cancer. You have captured her in your write as only you, my dear poetess, can do! She has never recovered from her loss. She visits his burial site every day. She has aged beyond her years! So sad to see her in such pain.
~Laura~
August 28th, 2018 05:08
FINALITY.
kevin browne said:
I love this, Fay, you bring out. The first line caught me and I flowed through the rest with compassion towards the finality of your life. A deep and enchanting piece of work. Nicely written, too.
August 28th, 2018 04:24
kevin browne said:
I love this, Fay, you bring out. The first line caught me and I flowed through the rest with compassion towards the finality of your life. A deep and enchanting piece of work. Nicely written, too.
August 28th, 2018 04:24
DUET.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for caring FAY. Nature is full of harmony ~ wherever you are in the World. However it is often drowned out ~ drowned out by the cacophony of the 21st C ! I love to camp away from Towns & Cities and Natures pure harmonies have no discordance from Technological Man. Your as ever ~ Love BRAIN & ANGELA XXXX
August 24th, 2018 17:30
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for caring FAY. Nature is full of harmony ~ wherever you are in the World. However it is often drowned out ~ drowned out by the cacophony of the 21st C ! I love to camp away from Towns & Cities and Natures pure harmonies have no discordance from Technological Man. Your as ever ~ Love BRAIN & ANGELA XXXX
August 24th, 2018 17:30
DUET.
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Poetess Fay,
You never fail to amaze me.
Another stupendous poem!
There’s such beauty in your choice of words.
“...describe such creamy white, pinned-to-the-sky
magic of brilliant
diamond star-brooches bent on joining
this listening scene...”
Undeniably brilliant!
Hugs 🤗
~Laura~
August 24th, 2018 14:07
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Poetess Fay,
You never fail to amaze me.
Another stupendous poem!
There’s such beauty in your choice of words.
“...describe such creamy white, pinned-to-the-sky
magic of brilliant
diamond star-brooches bent on joining
this listening scene...”
Undeniably brilliant!
Hugs 🤗
~Laura~
August 24th, 2018 14:07
DUET.
Netashi said:
Very beautiful write Fay as always describing the scene so pin point i can feel myself there. Have a nice day
-Theta
August 24th, 2018 12:28
Netashi said:
Very beautiful write Fay as always describing the scene so pin point i can feel myself there. Have a nice day
-Theta
August 24th, 2018 12:28
DUET.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write once more Fay, I could see the scene.
August 24th, 2018 03:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write once more Fay, I could see the scene.
August 24th, 2018 03:31
DUET.
Michael Edwards said:
You paint such an atmospheric scene I am there with you
August 24th, 2018 02:46
Michael Edwards said:
You paint such an atmospheric scene I am there with you
August 24th, 2018 02:46
DREAMT DREAMS..
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GOOD AFTERNOON FAY: Angela here from NZ. Just when I think I got you sussed, you riposte with six elegant triplets on the subject of DREAMS. I love DREAMS. You will always be my Mentor. When I saw the Maori Poi Dancers I dreamt on day I would be one! Now my dream has come true (see my Poem!).
DREAMS
ONCE DREAMT : EVER TAKE
SUPERCEDENCE
Love you : ANGELA XXXX
August 23rd, 2018 08:29
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GOOD AFTERNOON FAY: Angela here from NZ. Just when I think I got you sussed, you riposte with six elegant triplets on the subject of DREAMS. I love DREAMS. You will always be my Mentor. When I saw the Maori Poi Dancers I dreamt on day I would be one! Now my dream has come true (see my Poem!).
DREAMS
ONCE DREAMT : EVER TAKE
SUPERCEDENCE
Love you : ANGELA XXXX
August 23rd, 2018 08:29
DREAMT DREAMS..
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. A church has \'Dream Interpretations\' and \'Peace Treatments\'. Could do with that - couldn\'t we all?!
August 23rd, 2018 06:15
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. A church has \'Dream Interpretations\' and \'Peace Treatments\'. Could do with that - couldn\'t we all?!
August 23rd, 2018 06:15
DREAMT DREAMS..
sylviasearcher said:
Oh dreams they are a powerful messenger of what we try to hold back
August 23rd, 2018 05:21
sylviasearcher said:
Oh dreams they are a powerful messenger of what we try to hold back
August 23rd, 2018 05:21
NEWNESS.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Lovely Picture FAY: Its 10am Thursday here so we are now up and going sailing in \"The Bay of Islands\". We don\'t cohabit : but if we share a (twin) bedroom BRIAN likes me to wake him with a KISS and a cup of filter coffee! I always learn something from your poems. If this is spontaneous you must have a large vocabulary so Im reading more. The poem is \"one liners\" but with flow and cohesion. My fave line is 6 \"Use lights emergence to attire your inertia\". Please excuse the pun : but line 13 reminded me of TRUMP on the STUMP! Love the Picture and the Poem it spawned. Love ANGELA XXXX
August 22nd, 2018 17:33
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Lovely Picture FAY: Its 10am Thursday here so we are now up and going sailing in \"The Bay of Islands\". We don\'t cohabit : but if we share a (twin) bedroom BRIAN likes me to wake him with a KISS and a cup of filter coffee! I always learn something from your poems. If this is spontaneous you must have a large vocabulary so Im reading more. The poem is \"one liners\" but with flow and cohesion. My fave line is 6 \"Use lights emergence to attire your inertia\". Please excuse the pun : but line 13 reminded me of TRUMP on the STUMP! Love the Picture and the Poem it spawned. Love ANGELA XXXX
August 22nd, 2018 17:33
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