Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
SELF-HOOD.
Lauraš» said:
My dear Fay,
I agree with Lorna...
you do every single day!
A fine write indeed!
~Laura~
May 11th, 2018 16:26
Lauraš» said:
My dear Fay,
I agree with Lorna...
you do every single day!
A fine write indeed!
~Laura~
May 11th, 2018 16:26
SELF-HOOD.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ as you know every Human Being is gifted in one way or another. Sometimes as your poem hints we are too busy and preoccupied to hone or share our gift ! The ANIMAL WORLD has no such inhibitions ~ and they all do what they do do well. Perhaps we have to much choice to achieve SELF-HOOD so we become Jacks of All Trades and Masters of NONE ! Love the SILHOUETTED PICTURE ~ Thanks for CARING ~ Yours BRIAN ~ Please check my POEM ~ Thanks B !
May 11th, 2018 10:38
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ as you know every Human Being is gifted in one way or another. Sometimes as your poem hints we are too busy and preoccupied to hone or share our gift ! The ANIMAL WORLD has no such inhibitions ~ and they all do what they do do well. Perhaps we have to much choice to achieve SELF-HOOD so we become Jacks of All Trades and Masters of NONE ! Love the SILHOUETTED PICTURE ~ Thanks for CARING ~ Yours BRIAN ~ Please check my POEM ~ Thanks B !
May 11th, 2018 10:38
SELF-HOOD.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write, those songs in the late evening are wondrous.
May 11th, 2018 07:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write, those songs in the late evening are wondrous.
May 11th, 2018 07:55
LUNACY.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good and very true write Fay. another phase where homo sapiens is destroying our planet.
May 11th, 2018 00:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good and very true write Fay. another phase where homo sapiens is destroying our planet.
May 11th, 2018 00:54
LUNACY.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Yep, sure as eggs are eggs, in some places all is OK until man comes along and mucks it up!
May 10th, 2018 11:33
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Yep, sure as eggs are eggs, in some places all is OK until man comes along and mucks it up!
May 10th, 2018 11:33
LUNACY.
Michael Edwards said:
Crimes against nature are crimes against humanity - this is such a global problem and your super write nails it so well.
May 10th, 2018 11:10
Michael Edwards said:
Crimes against nature are crimes against humanity - this is such a global problem and your super write nails it so well.
May 10th, 2018 11:10
LUNACY.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
YES FAY ~ The UK used to be covered in FOREST now it\'s less than 10 % (The USA is still 50%) You have alluded to the symbiosis between Flora & Fauna ~ Plants inhale CO2 and exhale O2 and the animals vice-versa ! For years this maintained the CO2 @ 250ppm and its now over 400ppm due to Industrial CO2 and deforestation !
Unfortunately the POLITICIANS ~ who make these decisions are LUNATICS and ignorant of CONSERVATION & SUSTAINABILITY ! Al Gore (A Conservationist) would have made a Great Green President ~ Trump is an ecological disaster ! Thanks for caring ~ Yours as ever !
May 10th, 2018 11:02
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
YES FAY ~ The UK used to be covered in FOREST now it\'s less than 10 % (The USA is still 50%) You have alluded to the symbiosis between Flora & Fauna ~ Plants inhale CO2 and exhale O2 and the animals vice-versa ! For years this maintained the CO2 @ 250ppm and its now over 400ppm due to Industrial CO2 and deforestation !
Unfortunately the POLITICIANS ~ who make these decisions are LUNATICS and ignorant of CONSERVATION & SUSTAINABILITY ! Al Gore (A Conservationist) would have made a Great Green President ~ Trump is an ecological disaster ! Thanks for caring ~ Yours as ever !
May 10th, 2018 11:02
LUNACY.
Lauraš» said:
My dear Fay,
Youāre so spot on with your poem!
It should be disseminated throughout the world!
When Iām in NYC, as a lifetime member of a Community Board, I attend their meetings. The subject of passing a city law/ordinance to stop homeowners from cementing their lawns to make a parking space for their cars always comes up! I cannot believe how difficult it is! It takes years! Itās unbelievable!
Your final words say it best...
āLunacy governs as down each tree goes.ā
~Laura~
May 10th, 2018 10:54
Lauraš» said:
My dear Fay,
Youāre so spot on with your poem!
It should be disseminated throughout the world!
When Iām in NYC, as a lifetime member of a Community Board, I attend their meetings. The subject of passing a city law/ordinance to stop homeowners from cementing their lawns to make a parking space for their cars always comes up! I cannot believe how difficult it is! It takes years! Itās unbelievable!
Your final words say it best...
āLunacy governs as down each tree goes.ā
~Laura~
May 10th, 2018 10:54
LUNACY.
Lorna said:
Like the plastic in the ocean..... the saddest proof that mankind will self-destruct. Your poem does justice to the problem. There are some hopeful sites on internet that show some wonderful progress being made to fix problems so maybe the young people will be more aware...... for their sakes, I hope so.....
May 10th, 2018 07:32
Lorna said:
Like the plastic in the ocean..... the saddest proof that mankind will self-destruct. Your poem does justice to the problem. There are some hopeful sites on internet that show some wonderful progress being made to fix problems so maybe the young people will be more aware...... for their sakes, I hope so.....
May 10th, 2018 07:32
LOVE\'S TUNE.
Lauraš» said:
My dear Fay,
I love the Oscar Wilde quote you chose! I wish everyone would tattoo it onto their heart!
An awesome write delivering a beautiful message! Yes, āloveās tune composes much more than music.ā
~Laura~
May 9th, 2018 16:16
Lauraš» said:
My dear Fay,
I love the Oscar Wilde quote you chose! I wish everyone would tattoo it onto their heart!
An awesome write delivering a beautiful message! Yes, āloveās tune composes much more than music.ā
~Laura~
May 9th, 2018 16:16
LOVE\'S TUNE.
Fay Slimm. said:
MY APOLOGIES DEAR FRIENDS FOR NOT BEING ABLE TO GET INDIVIDUAL REPLIES TO YOUR LOVELY COMMENTS - - THINGS SEEM TO HAVE GONE AWRY FROM THIS END AT THE MOMENT BUT i REALLY APPRECIATE EVERY VISIT AND VIEW MADE ON THIS LITTLE TRIBUTE TO LOVE. - - - HOPING THIS WILL GET POSTED AS MY OTHER ATTEMPTS GOT LOST. -- - from Fay xx
May 9th, 2018 16:03
Fay Slimm. said:
MY APOLOGIES DEAR FRIENDS FOR NOT BEING ABLE TO GET INDIVIDUAL REPLIES TO YOUR LOVELY COMMENTS - - THINGS SEEM TO HAVE GONE AWRY FROM THIS END AT THE MOMENT BUT i REALLY APPRECIATE EVERY VISIT AND VIEW MADE ON THIS LITTLE TRIBUTE TO LOVE. - - - HOPING THIS WILL GET POSTED AS MY OTHER ATTEMPTS GOT LOST. -- - from Fay xx
May 9th, 2018 16:03
LOVE\'S TUNE.
Fay Slimm. said:
Glad you found that final line pleasing Michael - - thanks for your encouraging comment too.
May 9th, 2018 15:58
Fay Slimm. said:
Glad you found that final line pleasing Michael - - thanks for your encouraging comment too.
May 9th, 2018 15:58
LOVE\'S TUNE.
dusk arising said:
No one else sees what the lover sees and, with its own beguiling charm each oddness/strangeness/\'dischord\' can create within us a unique cherished value which bonds us closer to our special someone.
Binging home the marvel of the oft heard words \'i dont know what you seen in him/her\'.
May 9th, 2018 13:47
dusk arising said:
No one else sees what the lover sees and, with its own beguiling charm each oddness/strangeness/\'dischord\' can create within us a unique cherished value which bonds us closer to our special someone.
Binging home the marvel of the oft heard words \'i dont know what you seen in him/her\'.
May 9th, 2018 13:47
LOVE\'S TUNE.
Lorna said:
Oscar Wilde had a beautiful heart I think. He has more memorable quotes than anyone I can think of.... that song that we hear (if we\'re lucky) is a lone one in a world of shrieks....
May 9th, 2018 05:37
Lorna said:
Oscar Wilde had a beautiful heart I think. He has more memorable quotes than anyone I can think of.... that song that we hear (if we\'re lucky) is a lone one in a world of shrieks....
May 9th, 2018 05:37
LOVE\'S TUNE.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL FAY ~ Thanks for sharing ! We are on the same wavelength today ~ Please check LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT ~ Thanks BRIAN & ANGELA
May 9th, 2018 03:30
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL FAY ~ Thanks for sharing ! We are on the same wavelength today ~ Please check LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT ~ Thanks BRIAN & ANGELA
May 9th, 2018 03:30
LOVE\'S TUNE.
orchidee said:
Aww, why some say they rather not hear me sing? And why they say they can\'t tell if it\'s me singing or two cats fighting? heehee. A fine write Fay. Some people we \'can\'t stand them\'. We may not LIKE them, but can LOVE them hopefully. Same as with my singing!
May 9th, 2018 03:24
orchidee said:
Aww, why some say they rather not hear me sing? And why they say they can\'t tell if it\'s me singing or two cats fighting? heehee. A fine write Fay. Some people we \'can\'t stand them\'. We may not LIKE them, but can LOVE them hopefully. Same as with my singing!
May 9th, 2018 03:24
LOVE\'S TUNE.
Michael Edwards said:
Beautiful sentiments Fay
Love\'s tune composes more than music - just lovely !!
May 9th, 2018 03:00
Michael Edwards said:
Beautiful sentiments Fay
Love\'s tune composes more than music - just lovely !!
May 9th, 2018 03:00
THAT MORN.
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Fay, I felt I was in the corn field as well.
May 7th, 2018 00:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Fay, I felt I was in the corn field as well.
May 7th, 2018 00:41
THAT MORN.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY ~ for sharing a lovely \"At one with Nature\" experience. The STRUCTURE ~ balanced triplets ~ is superb and the SUBJECT and language sublime ! Superficially one could say that you reflected on the \"growingness\" of corn ~ as you sat in it ! However your linguistic skills demand more than just that ! Love verse 3 ~ as fragile cobs through thick fringes crept ~ How long did you sit there ? V 4. \"The creation of protective webs\" V 5. \"Gilding pale corn\" V 6. \"That life\'s being is quite seeable to eyes on amazement bent\" That insight is what this very elegant Poem is all about ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours as always ~ BRIAN
May 6th, 2018 17:27
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY ~ for sharing a lovely \"At one with Nature\" experience. The STRUCTURE ~ balanced triplets ~ is superb and the SUBJECT and language sublime ! Superficially one could say that you reflected on the \"growingness\" of corn ~ as you sat in it ! However your linguistic skills demand more than just that ! Love verse 3 ~ as fragile cobs through thick fringes crept ~ How long did you sit there ? V 4. \"The creation of protective webs\" V 5. \"Gilding pale corn\" V 6. \"That life\'s being is quite seeable to eyes on amazement bent\" That insight is what this very elegant Poem is all about ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours as always ~ BRIAN
May 6th, 2018 17:27
THAT MORN.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY ~ for sharing a lovely \"At one with Nature
May 6th, 2018 17:11
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY ~ for sharing a lovely \"At one with Nature
May 6th, 2018 17:11
THAT MORN.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY ~ for sharing a lovely \"At one with Nature
May 6th, 2018 17:11
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY ~ for sharing a lovely \"At one with Nature
May 6th, 2018 17:11
THAT MORN.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY ~ for sharing a lovely \"At one with Nature
May 6th, 2018 17:11
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY ~ for sharing a lovely \"At one with Nature
May 6th, 2018 17:11
THAT MORN.
Michael Edwards said:
A beautiful write Fay - I was there in the corn.
May 6th, 2018 10:57
Michael Edwards said:
A beautiful write Fay - I was there in the corn.
May 6th, 2018 10:57
THAT MORN.
Lauraš» said:
My dear Fay,
This is an extraordinary verse tantalizing our senses!
ā...lifeās being is quite seeable to eyes on amazement bentā
Iām convinced you can write about anything like no other can! You truly possess the gift of writing! Thank you for sharing your marvelous work with us for our enjoyment!
~Laura~
May 6th, 2018 09:41
Lauraš» said:
My dear Fay,
This is an extraordinary verse tantalizing our senses!
ā...lifeās being is quite seeable to eyes on amazement bentā
Iām convinced you can write about anything like no other can! You truly possess the gift of writing! Thank you for sharing your marvelous work with us for our enjoyment!
~Laura~
May 6th, 2018 09:41
THAT MORN.
orchidee said:
A fine write and place to be Fay. Well, I was not in the corn fields (it\'s private property) but was on a country walk, and felt like I was in the \'back of beyond\'.
May 6th, 2018 07:49
orchidee said:
A fine write and place to be Fay. Well, I was not in the corn fields (it\'s private property) but was on a country walk, and felt like I was in the \'back of beyond\'.
May 6th, 2018 07:49
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