Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
LET US GO.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ Love the POEM and the importance of TOGETHERNESS when you are in LOVE ~ I am just beginning to understand because I am missing ANGELA so so much when she is so so far away (11,500 miles) in NZ. However because she is with RUTH and she is so happy with her work etc ~ it does compensate for my loving sacrifice ~ so she could fulfil her dream Physiotherapy Exchange Placement ! Love the \"togetherness\" visual ~ perfect ! Yours as always ~ BRIAN The Dreamer !
June 13th, 2018 18:21
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ Love the POEM and the importance of TOGETHERNESS when you are in LOVE ~ I am just beginning to understand because I am missing ANGELA so so much when she is so so far away (11,500 miles) in NZ. However because she is with RUTH and she is so happy with her work etc ~ it does compensate for my loving sacrifice ~ so she could fulfil her dream Physiotherapy Exchange Placement ! Love the \"togetherness\" visual ~ perfect ! Yours as always ~ BRIAN The Dreamer !
June 13th, 2018 18:21
LET US GO.
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
An exquisite write. I can envision the two of them walking off into the sunset! A hypnotic read for certain!
~Laura~
June 13th, 2018 14:17
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
An exquisite write. I can envision the two of them walking off into the sunset! A hypnotic read for certain!
~Laura~
June 13th, 2018 14:17
LET US GO.
orchidee said:
I was \'going\' to read this fine poem Fay - now I have!
June 13th, 2018 07:40
orchidee said:
I was \'going\' to read this fine poem Fay - now I have!
June 13th, 2018 07:40
LET US GO.
Heartwriter said:
Very beautiful write. Beneath skies shy light was my favorite.
June 13th, 2018 05:42
Heartwriter said:
Very beautiful write. Beneath skies shy light was my favorite.
June 13th, 2018 05:42
BRIDGED.
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
Loved this ...
“with no way to transcribe I leaned forward into
his mind and caught the right frame of his tone.”
Communicating with nature’s beautiful creature! That is a special gift!
An excellent write which I very much enjoyed reading!
~Laura~
June 13th, 2018 00:37
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
Loved this ...
“with no way to transcribe I leaned forward into
his mind and caught the right frame of his tone.”
Communicating with nature’s beautiful creature! That is a special gift!
An excellent write which I very much enjoyed reading!
~Laura~
June 13th, 2018 00:37
BRIDGED.
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Fay. Dippers are wonderful birds to be with.
June 13th, 2018 00:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Fay. Dippers are wonderful birds to be with.
June 13th, 2018 00:33
BRIDGED.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ Beautiful Structure (It is in fact a 4 4 4 2 Sonnet) and a Perfect Subject ~ \"I talk to the Birds !\" To me the implication is that you did communicate through Natures Telepathy rather than human-speak ! For me you communicated your \"telepathic conversation\" through you moving poem ! Thanks for sharing & caring ~ Yours BRIAN
June 12th, 2018 14:14
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ Beautiful Structure (It is in fact a 4 4 4 2 Sonnet) and a Perfect Subject ~ \"I talk to the Birds !\" To me the implication is that you did communicate through Natures Telepathy rather than human-speak ! For me you communicated your \"telepathic conversation\" through you moving poem ! Thanks for sharing & caring ~ Yours BRIAN
June 12th, 2018 14:14
BRIDGED.
dusk arising said:
What a lovely read, totally uplifting and such a wonderful picture accompanying this.
Joyous.
June 12th, 2018 11:11
dusk arising said:
What a lovely read, totally uplifting and such a wonderful picture accompanying this.
Joyous.
June 12th, 2018 11:11
BRIDGED.
willyweed said:
oh if we could talk to the animals, loved this one Fay. ww
June 12th, 2018 08:43
willyweed said:
oh if we could talk to the animals, loved this one Fay. ww
June 12th, 2018 08:43
BRIDGED.
orchidee said:
A lovely write Fay. More melodious than MY singing?! heehee.
June 12th, 2018 06:47
orchidee said:
A lovely write Fay. More melodious than MY singing?! heehee.
June 12th, 2018 06:47
BRIDGED.
Lorna said:
What a lovely quiet moment for us with you and the bird! I love the picture - wonder what kind of bird that is......fishing from land?
June 12th, 2018 05:38
Lorna said:
What a lovely quiet moment for us with you and the bird! I love the picture - wonder what kind of bird that is......fishing from land?
June 12th, 2018 05:38
BRIDGED.
Heartwriter said:
Beautiful. The birds have a speach all their own. It always comes out as a joyful song. Loved this.
June 12th, 2018 04:50
Heartwriter said:
Beautiful. The birds have a speach all their own. It always comes out as a joyful song. Loved this.
June 12th, 2018 04:50
AFTER SCHOOL.
SLR said:
I had somewhat of a hobby growing up. There were bullies in our school, as there are in most, but I got my fun from beating up the bullies. Afterwards I would often sit and talk to them to find out if something was going on at home. I became friends with several of them. When they were feeling frustrated with stuff they knew they could tussle with me and there\'d be no hard feelings after we both calmed back down. And the smaller and chubby kids didn\'t get bullied by them any more. Although there were a couple that I didn\'t get to be friends with so we\'d end up fighting after each time they decided to bully someone again. But I figure, you win some, you lose some. Great piece of nostalgic memories Ms Fay!
June 11th, 2018 15:13
SLR said:
I had somewhat of a hobby growing up. There were bullies in our school, as there are in most, but I got my fun from beating up the bullies. Afterwards I would often sit and talk to them to find out if something was going on at home. I became friends with several of them. When they were feeling frustrated with stuff they knew they could tussle with me and there\'d be no hard feelings after we both calmed back down. And the smaller and chubby kids didn\'t get bullied by them any more. Although there were a couple that I didn\'t get to be friends with so we\'d end up fighting after each time they decided to bully someone again. But I figure, you win some, you lose some. Great piece of nostalgic memories Ms Fay!
June 11th, 2018 15:13
AFTER SCHOOL.
Lorna said:
Fay - how sad that this is in the human genes unless taught otherwise........ and that we have a leader (ha ha) who flaunts this as a role model........
June 11th, 2018 05:13
Lorna said:
Fay - how sad that this is in the human genes unless taught otherwise........ and that we have a leader (ha ha) who flaunts this as a role model........
June 11th, 2018 05:13
AFTER SCHOOL.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FOR HILITING FAY ! Boys (and increasingly Girls) have always indulged in BULLYING those Younger and sadly Children with Disabilities ~ I always thanked GOD I have an older (2 years) Brother and lots of male Cousins. I am pleased to say I have never bullied anyone or been part of a GANG that bullied ~ especially being in the Scouts at an early age ~ which is always opposed to BULLYING at any level ! Loved the Cartoon & the Poem ~ thanks for caring. Please check my Poem & FUSION ~ both on Flowers ~ Yours BRIAN
June 11th, 2018 04:06
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FOR HILITING FAY ! Boys (and increasingly Girls) have always indulged in BULLYING those Younger and sadly Children with Disabilities ~ I always thanked GOD I have an older (2 years) Brother and lots of male Cousins. I am pleased to say I have never bullied anyone or been part of a GANG that bullied ~ especially being in the Scouts at an early age ~ which is always opposed to BULLYING at any level ! Loved the Cartoon & the Poem ~ thanks for caring. Please check my Poem & FUSION ~ both on Flowers ~ Yours BRIAN
June 11th, 2018 04:06
AFTER SCHOOL.
dusk arising said:
Now if Freud were to read this he may conject that your pigtailed childhood teasers who, understandably, all died in quietly mysterious circumstance are the target for todays piece.
May they rest in peace. Dues paid.
June 11th, 2018 03:50
dusk arising said:
Now if Freud were to read this he may conject that your pigtailed childhood teasers who, understandably, all died in quietly mysterious circumstance are the target for todays piece.
May they rest in peace. Dues paid.
June 11th, 2018 03:50
AFTER SCHOOL.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Fay, those bullies are all cowards at heart and will all get their comeuppance.
June 11th, 2018 03:03
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Fay, those bullies are all cowards at heart and will all get their comeuppance.
June 11th, 2018 03:03
AFTER SCHOOL.
orchidee said:
Oh the shame of it! In a church youth group, I read of a former member who went on to get nicked for stealing computers! A \'nominal\' Christian, as they say. We never know if people are Baptised or Confirmed for real (I trust most are) or if they are just choosing to be \'done\' as a performance.
June 11th, 2018 02:36
orchidee said:
Oh the shame of it! In a church youth group, I read of a former member who went on to get nicked for stealing computers! A \'nominal\' Christian, as they say. We never know if people are Baptised or Confirmed for real (I trust most are) or if they are just choosing to be \'done\' as a performance.
June 11th, 2018 02:36
AFTER SCHOOL.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I had horrid first year at secondary school. No one escaped the initiation of being pushed in the school holly bush - and worse. Mental intimidation..
I had lovely innocent primary school days, and a Christian headmaster and wife, who also taught there.
A local school was built, but the headmaster did not want me to leave - so I didn\'t move schools. A lovely appreciation.
June 11th, 2018 02:33
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I had horrid first year at secondary school. No one escaped the initiation of being pushed in the school holly bush - and worse. Mental intimidation..
I had lovely innocent primary school days, and a Christian headmaster and wife, who also taught there.
A local school was built, but the headmaster did not want me to leave - so I didn\'t move schools. A lovely appreciation.
June 11th, 2018 02:33
AFTER SCHOOL.
Michael Edwards said:
Top of the tree - a really inspired piece of work and destined foe my favourites.
June 11th, 2018 02:16
Michael Edwards said:
Top of the tree - a really inspired piece of work and destined foe my favourites.
June 11th, 2018 02:16
EPITAPH.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, foxes are beautiful creatures and you are right about the uncaring motorists.
June 9th, 2018 00:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, foxes are beautiful creatures and you are right about the uncaring motorists.
June 9th, 2018 00:14
EPITAPH.
Michael Edwards said:
A touching write Fay - it sadly happens too often.
June 8th, 2018 23:13
Michael Edwards said:
A touching write Fay - it sadly happens too often.
June 8th, 2018 23:13
EPITAPH.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing & caring FAY ! We get very upset when a Friend or Family are injured or killed in a road accident but give scant concern for the hundreds of Animals & Birds who die of SPEED everyday not to mention millions of INSECTS. We cry not for the ANIMAL but the fact that our Bumper is damaged ~ have you ever hit a SHEEP ? Foxes are exceedingly beautiful but are hunted (still) and considered worthless and vermin ! I always drive slower and more careful in the countryside especially at night ! If I see \"road kill\" I always stop and move it respectfully to the verge ! Your poem reminded me of Pam Ayres ~ \"All I see is HEDGEHOGS ~ squashed & dead & flat !\" Yours as always ~ BRIAN
June 8th, 2018 15:27
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing & caring FAY ! We get very upset when a Friend or Family are injured or killed in a road accident but give scant concern for the hundreds of Animals & Birds who die of SPEED everyday not to mention millions of INSECTS. We cry not for the ANIMAL but the fact that our Bumper is damaged ~ have you ever hit a SHEEP ? Foxes are exceedingly beautiful but are hunted (still) and considered worthless and vermin ! I always drive slower and more careful in the countryside especially at night ! If I see \"road kill\" I always stop and move it respectfully to the verge ! Your poem reminded me of Pam Ayres ~ \"All I see is HEDGEHOGS ~ squashed & dead & flat !\" Yours as always ~ BRIAN
June 8th, 2018 15:27
EPITAPH.
dusk arising said:
Sadly i have been that driver and its a sickening event.
But too i remember one early frosty morning in the cotswolds our taxi driver stopped dead and we were all delighted to see mother fox cross the road ahead of us followed by her five beautiful cubs. Now there\'s a memory which will stay with me, as do the memories of those i sadly killed.
June 8th, 2018 14:01
dusk arising said:
Sadly i have been that driver and its a sickening event.
But too i remember one early frosty morning in the cotswolds our taxi driver stopped dead and we were all delighted to see mother fox cross the road ahead of us followed by her five beautiful cubs. Now there\'s a memory which will stay with me, as do the memories of those i sadly killed.
June 8th, 2018 14:01
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