Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
LOVE\'S TUNE.
Lorna said:
Oscar Wilde had a beautiful heart I think. He has more memorable quotes than anyone I can think of.... that song that we hear (if we\'re lucky) is a lone one in a world of shrieks....
May 9th, 2018 05:37
Lorna said:
Oscar Wilde had a beautiful heart I think. He has more memorable quotes than anyone I can think of.... that song that we hear (if we\'re lucky) is a lone one in a world of shrieks....
May 9th, 2018 05:37
LOVE\'S TUNE.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL FAY ~ Thanks for sharing ! We are on the same wavelength today ~ Please check LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT ~ Thanks BRIAN & ANGELA
May 9th, 2018 03:30
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL FAY ~ Thanks for sharing ! We are on the same wavelength today ~ Please check LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT ~ Thanks BRIAN & ANGELA
May 9th, 2018 03:30
LOVE\'S TUNE.
orchidee said:
Aww, why some say they rather not hear me sing? And why they say they can\'t tell if it\'s me singing or two cats fighting? heehee. A fine write Fay. Some people we \'can\'t stand them\'. We may not LIKE them, but can LOVE them hopefully. Same as with my singing!
May 9th, 2018 03:24
orchidee said:
Aww, why some say they rather not hear me sing? And why they say they can\'t tell if it\'s me singing or two cats fighting? heehee. A fine write Fay. Some people we \'can\'t stand them\'. We may not LIKE them, but can LOVE them hopefully. Same as with my singing!
May 9th, 2018 03:24
LOVE\'S TUNE.
Michael Edwards said:
Beautiful sentiments Fay
Love\'s tune composes more than music - just lovely !!
May 9th, 2018 03:00
Michael Edwards said:
Beautiful sentiments Fay
Love\'s tune composes more than music - just lovely !!
May 9th, 2018 03:00
THAT MORN.
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Fay, I felt I was in the corn field as well.
May 7th, 2018 00:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Fay, I felt I was in the corn field as well.
May 7th, 2018 00:41
THAT MORN.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY ~ for sharing a lovely \"At one with Nature\" experience. The STRUCTURE ~ balanced triplets ~ is superb and the SUBJECT and language sublime ! Superficially one could say that you reflected on the \"growingness\" of corn ~ as you sat in it ! However your linguistic skills demand more than just that ! Love verse 3 ~ as fragile cobs through thick fringes crept ~ How long did you sit there ? V 4. \"The creation of protective webs\" V 5. \"Gilding pale corn\" V 6. \"That life\'s being is quite seeable to eyes on amazement bent\" That insight is what this very elegant Poem is all about ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours as always ~ BRIAN
May 6th, 2018 17:27
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY ~ for sharing a lovely \"At one with Nature\" experience. The STRUCTURE ~ balanced triplets ~ is superb and the SUBJECT and language sublime ! Superficially one could say that you reflected on the \"growingness\" of corn ~ as you sat in it ! However your linguistic skills demand more than just that ! Love verse 3 ~ as fragile cobs through thick fringes crept ~ How long did you sit there ? V 4. \"The creation of protective webs\" V 5. \"Gilding pale corn\" V 6. \"That life\'s being is quite seeable to eyes on amazement bent\" That insight is what this very elegant Poem is all about ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours as always ~ BRIAN
May 6th, 2018 17:27
THAT MORN.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY ~ for sharing a lovely \"At one with Nature
May 6th, 2018 17:11
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY ~ for sharing a lovely \"At one with Nature
May 6th, 2018 17:11
THAT MORN.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY ~ for sharing a lovely \"At one with Nature
May 6th, 2018 17:11
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY ~ for sharing a lovely \"At one with Nature
May 6th, 2018 17:11
THAT MORN.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY ~ for sharing a lovely \"At one with Nature
May 6th, 2018 17:11
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY ~ for sharing a lovely \"At one with Nature
May 6th, 2018 17:11
THAT MORN.
Michael Edwards said:
A beautiful write Fay - I was there in the corn.
May 6th, 2018 10:57
Michael Edwards said:
A beautiful write Fay - I was there in the corn.
May 6th, 2018 10:57
THAT MORN.
Lauraš» said:
My dear Fay,
This is an extraordinary verse tantalizing our senses!
ā...lifeās being is quite seeable to eyes on amazement bentā
Iām convinced you can write about anything like no other can! You truly possess the gift of writing! Thank you for sharing your marvelous work with us for our enjoyment!
~Laura~
May 6th, 2018 09:41
Lauraš» said:
My dear Fay,
This is an extraordinary verse tantalizing our senses!
ā...lifeās being is quite seeable to eyes on amazement bentā
Iām convinced you can write about anything like no other can! You truly possess the gift of writing! Thank you for sharing your marvelous work with us for our enjoyment!
~Laura~
May 6th, 2018 09:41
THAT MORN.
orchidee said:
A fine write and place to be Fay. Well, I was not in the corn fields (it\'s private property) but was on a country walk, and felt like I was in the \'back of beyond\'.
May 6th, 2018 07:49
orchidee said:
A fine write and place to be Fay. Well, I was not in the corn fields (it\'s private property) but was on a country walk, and felt like I was in the \'back of beyond\'.
May 6th, 2018 07:49
CHANGES.
Netashi said:
Change is everything weather, People, Trends, Social Norms, Health, But we can never force ourselves to change we just build upon ourselves. Very pleasant poem Fay keep it up
-Theta
May 4th, 2018 11:45
Netashi said:
Change is everything weather, People, Trends, Social Norms, Health, But we can never force ourselves to change we just build upon ourselves. Very pleasant poem Fay keep it up
-Theta
May 4th, 2018 11:45
CHANGES.
onepauly said:
we all have to accept changes
if we like them or not.
the thing to do is adapt.
May 4th, 2018 10:16
onepauly said:
we all have to accept changes
if we like them or not.
the thing to do is adapt.
May 4th, 2018 10:16
CHANGES.
Lorna said:
This was magical Fay! On very early mornings when we were on our way to horse shows in Vermont the landscape (which is beautiful) was dotted with cows just shifting in the morning mist - exactly as you describe! Just as a funny..... one thing I know about working with cows as opposed to horses..... if a horse steps on your foot, you can swiftly get him off with a poke in the ribs. If a cow stands on your foot, there goes your toenail as you push and push and push........ saw this happen to my friend! ha ha.......
May 4th, 2018 04:57
Lorna said:
This was magical Fay! On very early mornings when we were on our way to horse shows in Vermont the landscape (which is beautiful) was dotted with cows just shifting in the morning mist - exactly as you describe! Just as a funny..... one thing I know about working with cows as opposed to horses..... if a horse steps on your foot, you can swiftly get him off with a poke in the ribs. If a cow stands on your foot, there goes your toenail as you push and push and push........ saw this happen to my friend! ha ha.......
May 4th, 2018 04:57
ON THE RUN.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for sharing the Adventure & Otherness (nice word !) of URBAN LIFE ! Soon more than 50% of the Earths Population will live in cities (nearly 4 billion and rising !) largely out of necessity to earn a crust ! I am always horrified at soem of the conditions they live in ! However having lived in Cities in the UK (which is a very affluent Country !) I can see the attraction ! Work ~ Sport ~ Entertainment ~ Restaurants ~ Multi-Ethnicity ~ Education ~ Art ~ Opportunity etc compared with Rural Living ! I have never lived in a Village but I have lived in Small Towns and as I get older ~ and think of raising a Family I prefer a Small Town to a Big City especially as lack of respect for the Law and Personal Abuse ~ seems to be on the increase ! Thanks for caring ~ Yours as always ~ BRIAN !
May 3rd, 2018 18:40
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for sharing the Adventure & Otherness (nice word !) of URBAN LIFE ! Soon more than 50% of the Earths Population will live in cities (nearly 4 billion and rising !) largely out of necessity to earn a crust ! I am always horrified at soem of the conditions they live in ! However having lived in Cities in the UK (which is a very affluent Country !) I can see the attraction ! Work ~ Sport ~ Entertainment ~ Restaurants ~ Multi-Ethnicity ~ Education ~ Art ~ Opportunity etc compared with Rural Living ! I have never lived in a Village but I have lived in Small Towns and as I get older ~ and think of raising a Family I prefer a Small Town to a Big City especially as lack of respect for the Law and Personal Abuse ~ seems to be on the increase ! Thanks for caring ~ Yours as always ~ BRIAN !
May 3rd, 2018 18:40
ON THE RUN.
Lauraš» said:
My dear Fay,
The hustle and bustle of the city!
Use to love it...not as much any more! I guess youth has a lot to do with! Now Iām more of a city tourist than a city resident!
Your metaphorically rich write is extraordinary! I love reading your writings more than youāll ever know! Thank you for sharing your gift š!
~Laura~
May 3rd, 2018 13:45
Lauraš» said:
My dear Fay,
The hustle and bustle of the city!
Use to love it...not as much any more! I guess youth has a lot to do with! Now Iām more of a city tourist than a city resident!
Your metaphorically rich write is extraordinary! I love reading your writings more than youāll ever know! Thank you for sharing your gift š!
~Laura~
May 3rd, 2018 13:45
ON THE RUN.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Fay, I was there walking down the crowded streets.
May 3rd, 2018 07:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Fay, I was there walking down the crowded streets.
May 3rd, 2018 07:57
ON THE RUN.
Michael Edwards said:
When I first left London I would have done anything to return but now I wouldn\'t go back for anything. Nonetheless I still think of it as home and get a buzz when I visit. The magic of it all is caught in yet another fine write Fay.
May 3rd, 2018 07:46
Michael Edwards said:
When I first left London I would have done anything to return but now I wouldn\'t go back for anything. Nonetheless I still think of it as home and get a buzz when I visit. The magic of it all is caught in yet another fine write Fay.
May 3rd, 2018 07:46
ON THE RUN.
onepauly said:
this is something.
to enjoy city life.
among its negative aspects.
May 3rd, 2018 07:04
onepauly said:
this is something.
to enjoy city life.
among its negative aspects.
May 3rd, 2018 07:04
ON THE RUN.
Lorna said:
Yes this immediately brings to life the hum of the city (in my case New York) which gives you a thrill the minute you are in the hustle...... possibilities seem endless...... but then it sort of swallows me up.... great description Fay!
May 3rd, 2018 05:50
Lorna said:
Yes this immediately brings to life the hum of the city (in my case New York) which gives you a thrill the minute you are in the hustle...... possibilities seem endless...... but then it sort of swallows me up.... great description Fay!
May 3rd, 2018 05:50
LOVE\'S GLOW.
Netashi said:
Love is the most beautiful thing in this world and this poem is also beautiful.
Great poem Slimm, keep it up
-Theta
May 1st, 2018 11:25
Netashi said:
Love is the most beautiful thing in this world and this poem is also beautiful.
Great poem Slimm, keep it up
-Theta
May 1st, 2018 11:25
LOVE\'S GLOW.
onepauly said:
I wish I knew what its like to love another person. my love has always been for the many.
May 1st, 2018 07:21
onepauly said:
I wish I knew what its like to love another person. my love has always been for the many.
May 1st, 2018 07:21
LOVE\'S GLOW.
Lauraš» said:
A beautiful write, my dear Fay!
The magical kisses; especially the first ones as Lorna said! Your words are magical...
ā ...for love drives away any petrified heart-chillā...
~Laura~
May 1st, 2018 07:04
Lauraš» said:
A beautiful write, my dear Fay!
The magical kisses; especially the first ones as Lorna said! Your words are magical...
ā ...for love drives away any petrified heart-chillā...
~Laura~
May 1st, 2018 07:04
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