Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
ABANDON.
dusk arising said:
Oooooh that young soul hasn\'t left your limbs I\'m thinking. Did your mind travel to times when the lady you describe was no other than you poetess?.... oh false modesty, shy and blinking innocence I perceive.
Hope you\'re smiling. Such a tantalising piece.
July 20th, 2018 00:42
dusk arising said:
Oooooh that young soul hasn\'t left your limbs I\'m thinking. Did your mind travel to times when the lady you describe was no other than you poetess?.... oh false modesty, shy and blinking innocence I perceive.
Hope you\'re smiling. Such a tantalising piece.
July 20th, 2018 00:42
ABANDON.
onepauly said:
you show us how fragile and sensitive we are.
good one!
July 19th, 2018 15:21
onepauly said:
you show us how fragile and sensitive we are.
good one!
July 19th, 2018 15:21
ABANDON.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I would swoon seeing her, as in some other poems, where I am \'delicate\'. I should get out more! heehee.
July 19th, 2018 10:33
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I would swoon seeing her, as in some other poems, where I am \'delicate\'. I should get out more! heehee.
July 19th, 2018 10:33
ABANDON.
lasergraph said:
My granddaughter loves to dance. She started ballet at age 3. The movements are so graceful.
July 19th, 2018 10:13
lasergraph said:
My granddaughter loves to dance. She started ballet at age 3. The movements are so graceful.
July 19th, 2018 10:13
ABANDON.
Heartwriter said:
Beautiful write Fay. It perfectly describes their movements so well. Lovely pic painted by words and the pic completed it.
July 19th, 2018 07:11
Heartwriter said:
Beautiful write Fay. It perfectly describes their movements so well. Lovely pic painted by words and the pic completed it.
July 19th, 2018 07:11
NOW SLEEPING.
dusk arising said:
\'Stop all the clocks\'. Terrible drama from your eloquence today.
A positive haunting final line tells of your innate love of existence in this oft wickedly sad but beautiful world.
July 18th, 2018 18:18
dusk arising said:
\'Stop all the clocks\'. Terrible drama from your eloquence today.
A positive haunting final line tells of your innate love of existence in this oft wickedly sad but beautiful world.
July 18th, 2018 18:18
NOW SLEEPING.
Michael Edwards said:
It\'s always been a favourite of mine and your poem does it full justice - great work Fay
July 18th, 2018 12:36
Michael Edwards said:
It\'s always been a favourite of mine and your poem does it full justice - great work Fay
July 18th, 2018 12:36
NOW SLEEPING.
Heartwriter said:
Aww Fay what an amazing poem today. It to me was one of the best ever!
July 18th, 2018 06:15
Heartwriter said:
Aww Fay what an amazing poem today. It to me was one of the best ever!
July 18th, 2018 06:15
IF ONLY.
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful write, I wake to the sound of blackbirds and robins starting Natures daily symphony, such a wonderful sound as are your words.
What if? The most profound question that we ever ask ourselves.
July 18th, 2018 00:13
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful write, I wake to the sound of blackbirds and robins starting Natures daily symphony, such a wonderful sound as are your words.
What if? The most profound question that we ever ask ourselves.
July 18th, 2018 00:13
IF ONLY.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ Loved it and a great Poem to \'jump start\' Tuesday ! There are MOOD POEMS to express MOOD and TONE POEMS inspired by Music & Visual Art. This is beautiful TONE POEM inspired not by an Al Fresco String Quartet in TINTAGEL but by the Blackbirds heralding another beautiful Cornish Dawn Yours as always BRIAN. Please check my poem \"FUSIONS\" and my FUSION on Prayer ~ THANKS B.
July 17th, 2018 05:34
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ Loved it and a great Poem to \'jump start\' Tuesday ! There are MOOD POEMS to express MOOD and TONE POEMS inspired by Music & Visual Art. This is beautiful TONE POEM inspired not by an Al Fresco String Quartet in TINTAGEL but by the Blackbirds heralding another beautiful Cornish Dawn Yours as always BRIAN. Please check my poem \"FUSIONS\" and my FUSION on Prayer ~ THANKS B.
July 17th, 2018 05:34
IF ONLY.
onepauly said:
there is something grateful about a bird singing its notes in the morn.
July 17th, 2018 04:17
onepauly said:
there is something grateful about a bird singing its notes in the morn.
July 17th, 2018 04:17
IF ONLY.
Poetic Dan said:
I agree a fine read that just left my mind at ease. Thank you kindly
July 17th, 2018 04:09
Poetic Dan said:
I agree a fine read that just left my mind at ease. Thank you kindly
July 17th, 2018 04:09
IF ONLY.
dusk arising said:
Ahhhh once again you waken to the sound of the birds yawning in preparation to the start of their morning fanfare.
What an early bird you are yourself committing to site another of your wonderful \'doses\' of morning glory bringing, yet again, a smile to the face of us \'later arising\' mortals.
A pleasure to read.
July 17th, 2018 03:28
dusk arising said:
Ahhhh once again you waken to the sound of the birds yawning in preparation to the start of their morning fanfare.
What an early bird you are yourself committing to site another of your wonderful \'doses\' of morning glory bringing, yet again, a smile to the face of us \'later arising\' mortals.
A pleasure to read.
July 17th, 2018 03:28
MEDITATING.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS for caring & sharing FAY. I love the structure of the poem ~ which isolates & highlights key words ~ such as Glowing ~ Flowing ~ Wholesome ~ Focus ~ Soul etc ! In my fond memories, CORNWALL is a perfect COUNTY for Meditation ! Please check my CHESS and my FUSION on Prayer ~ Thanks ~ Yours as always BRIAN & ANGELA ~ Hope you like our new Name & Logo !
July 16th, 2018 11:14
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS for caring & sharing FAY. I love the structure of the poem ~ which isolates & highlights key words ~ such as Glowing ~ Flowing ~ Wholesome ~ Focus ~ Soul etc ! In my fond memories, CORNWALL is a perfect COUNTY for Meditation ! Please check my CHESS and my FUSION on Prayer ~ Thanks ~ Yours as always BRIAN & ANGELA ~ Hope you like our new Name & Logo !
July 16th, 2018 11:14
MEDITATING.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Fay, meditation is so wonderful in controlling our lives.
July 16th, 2018 08:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Fay, meditation is so wonderful in controlling our lives.
July 16th, 2018 08:12
MEDITATING.
Heartwriter said:
Fay, you always write with purest of soul. We were sharing a breath in thought today. I love that! What an honour to breathe along side such a dear lady.
July 16th, 2018 06:15
Heartwriter said:
Fay, you always write with purest of soul. We were sharing a breath in thought today. I love that! What an honour to breathe along side such a dear lady.
July 16th, 2018 06:15
A DELICATE THING.
ron parrish aka wordman said:
in meadows with only one tree present looks so natural,like it was placed there for a reason
July 15th, 2018 16:44
ron parrish aka wordman said:
in meadows with only one tree present looks so natural,like it was placed there for a reason
July 15th, 2018 16:44
A DELICATE THING.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
O FAY ! I am honoured that you have applied your poetic skills to my field of PLANT BIOSYNTHESIS ! My Poem would have been gobbledegook yours is perfect ! The more I understand about TREES the more I am in awe of them ! One set of tubes (XYLEM) brings water and nutrients in the soil ~ UP from the root system ~ and another set (PHLOEM) bring the products of PHOTOSYNTHESIS DOWN from the leaves. This forms a perfect integrated biosynthetic system to produce FOOD (and SHELTER) for MAN ~ INSECTS & ANIMALS. By PHOTOSYNTHESIS Plants convert CO2 and H2O into GLOCOSE (C6H12O6) and OXYGEN (O2). So every TREE (and plant) on the PLANET is essential to maintain the equilibrium between CO2 & Oxygen in the atmosphere. DEFORESTATION is another key factor in GLOBAL WARMING ! \"Woodman spare that tree for me !\" Thanks for caring & sharing. Love the POEM and the PICTURE ~ Yours BRIAN ~ Hugger of Trees !
July 12th, 2018 10:15
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
O FAY ! I am honoured that you have applied your poetic skills to my field of PLANT BIOSYNTHESIS ! My Poem would have been gobbledegook yours is perfect ! The more I understand about TREES the more I am in awe of them ! One set of tubes (XYLEM) brings water and nutrients in the soil ~ UP from the root system ~ and another set (PHLOEM) bring the products of PHOTOSYNTHESIS DOWN from the leaves. This forms a perfect integrated biosynthetic system to produce FOOD (and SHELTER) for MAN ~ INSECTS & ANIMALS. By PHOTOSYNTHESIS Plants convert CO2 and H2O into GLOCOSE (C6H12O6) and OXYGEN (O2). So every TREE (and plant) on the PLANET is essential to maintain the equilibrium between CO2 & Oxygen in the atmosphere. DEFORESTATION is another key factor in GLOBAL WARMING ! \"Woodman spare that tree for me !\" Thanks for caring & sharing. Love the POEM and the PICTURE ~ Yours BRIAN ~ Hugger of Trees !
July 12th, 2018 10:15
A DELICATE THING.
Michael Edwards said:
Wonderful observational piece in you own superlative style dear Fay.l
July 12th, 2018 09:40
Michael Edwards said:
Wonderful observational piece in you own superlative style dear Fay.l
July 12th, 2018 09:40
A DELICATE THING.
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
Your outstanding poem has reminded me of the first poem I memorized as an English learner...“Trees” by Joyce Kilmer!
Trees are life...
Another writing that’s made a huge impression on me is a children’s book...“The Giving Tree” by Shel Silverstein.
Your exceptional poem will be added to my list along with Joyce Kilmer’s and Shel Silverstein!
~Laura~
July 12th, 2018 09:25
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
Your outstanding poem has reminded me of the first poem I memorized as an English learner...“Trees” by Joyce Kilmer!
Trees are life...
Another writing that’s made a huge impression on me is a children’s book...“The Giving Tree” by Shel Silverstein.
Your exceptional poem will be added to my list along with Joyce Kilmer’s and Shel Silverstein!
~Laura~
July 12th, 2018 09:25
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