Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
MY ENCOUNTER.
SLR said:
This is so cute. I recently had a similar experience with a baby deer. I love nature babies. Great write Ms Fay! Thank you for sharing your \'meet and greet\'.
June 27th, 2018 16:46
SLR said:
This is so cute. I recently had a similar experience with a baby deer. I love nature babies. Great write Ms Fay! Thank you for sharing your \'meet and greet\'.
June 27th, 2018 16:46
MY ENCOUNTER.
Frogspoetry said:
I love watching God creations,I find them very beautiful regardless of what or who they are.
June 27th, 2018 08:26
Frogspoetry said:
I love watching God creations,I find them very beautiful regardless of what or who they are.
June 27th, 2018 08:26
MY ENCOUNTER.
dusk arising said:
Odd how we have to do so much growing ourselves before we start to really \'see\' and appreciate the beauty that is all around us.
Plain to see, from your writing, that you \'see\' appreciate and enjoy our planet.
You create a lovely mind picture/story here. Taking time to aside from your days intent, this tiny wonder refreshes the joy of life itself. Lovely to read.
June 27th, 2018 08:14
dusk arising said:
Odd how we have to do so much growing ourselves before we start to really \'see\' and appreciate the beauty that is all around us.
Plain to see, from your writing, that you \'see\' appreciate and enjoy our planet.
You create a lovely mind picture/story here. Taking time to aside from your days intent, this tiny wonder refreshes the joy of life itself. Lovely to read.
June 27th, 2018 08:14
MY ENCOUNTER.
Goldfinch60 said:
It is so wonderful to watch wildlife, especially the tiny ones scuttling around.
June 27th, 2018 03:37
Goldfinch60 said:
It is so wonderful to watch wildlife, especially the tiny ones scuttling around.
June 27th, 2018 03:37
MY ENCOUNTER.
Heartwriter said:
Isn\'t nature awesome! I love to watch the animals. Great write and thanks for sharing. It\'s their world too
June 27th, 2018 02:32
Heartwriter said:
Isn\'t nature awesome! I love to watch the animals. Great write and thanks for sharing. It\'s their world too
June 27th, 2018 02:32
MY ENCOUNTER.
orchidee said:
A lovely write Fay. I see squirrels and some wild bunnies in some woodland/country walks.
June 27th, 2018 02:23
orchidee said:
A lovely write Fay. I see squirrels and some wild bunnies in some woodland/country walks.
June 27th, 2018 02:23
FORLORN.
SLR said:
I really like this Ms Fay, but I have to add that flowers, like people, die if not \"plucked\" with extreme care. Any tender care can be negated by the manner of plucking. I feel that your kindness would extend through the whole process. You seem to have a sweet nature. Love the pic too.
June 21st, 2018 10:59
SLR said:
I really like this Ms Fay, but I have to add that flowers, like people, die if not \"plucked\" with extreme care. Any tender care can be negated by the manner of plucking. I feel that your kindness would extend through the whole process. You seem to have a sweet nature. Love the pic too.
June 21st, 2018 10:59
FORLORN.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Beautiful Picture ~ Elegant Poem ~ Thanks for brightening our day ~ FAY ! The Picture and Poem conjure up many analogies in Life and Love ! People left out in the \"cold\" for all sorts of reasons and alas ~ not all rescued in time ! ICE ROSES are quite common in Essex and if left on the branch remain as buds and never open ~ the same is true of People ! However as your last verse suggests ~ If we rescue them ~ place the stem in warm water in a warm environment ~ the bud opens and it becomes (in time) a beautiful \"full blown rose\" The same is true of people ~ a Hot Shower ~ A Warm Environment ~ Food & Drink and lots of TLC ~ AMEN ~ Yours as always BRIAN
June 21st, 2018 10:02
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Beautiful Picture ~ Elegant Poem ~ Thanks for brightening our day ~ FAY ! The Picture and Poem conjure up many analogies in Life and Love ! People left out in the \"cold\" for all sorts of reasons and alas ~ not all rescued in time ! ICE ROSES are quite common in Essex and if left on the branch remain as buds and never open ~ the same is true of People ! However as your last verse suggests ~ If we rescue them ~ place the stem in warm water in a warm environment ~ the bud opens and it becomes (in time) a beautiful \"full blown rose\" The same is true of people ~ a Hot Shower ~ A Warm Environment ~ Food & Drink and lots of TLC ~ AMEN ~ Yours as always BRIAN
June 21st, 2018 10:02
FORLORN.
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
This beautiful poem reminds me of many moments in my life! The one that will always stand out is the day one son came back into my arms from a long lonely journey!
“Relieved by fresh water
and warmed indoors
then thou might heal.”
He is healing!
~Laura~
June 21st, 2018 09:05
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
This beautiful poem reminds me of many moments in my life! The one that will always stand out is the day one son came back into my arms from a long lonely journey!
“Relieved by fresh water
and warmed indoors
then thou might heal.”
He is healing!
~Laura~
June 21st, 2018 09:05
FORLORN.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
This is beautiful Fay
The sadness is made happy by hope
I love it!
Andrew
June 21st, 2018 05:43
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
This is beautiful Fay
The sadness is made happy by hope
I love it!
Andrew
June 21st, 2018 05:43
ONCE DISTILLED.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for a beautiful nostalgic Love Poem ~ Love the Satisfaction & Sunshine of your SMILE ! Sometimes ANGELA smiles like that ~ I must be doing something right ~ AMEN ~ Yours as always ~ BRIAN ~ A fine Tone Poem indeed !
June 20th, 2018 18:42
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for a beautiful nostalgic Love Poem ~ Love the Satisfaction & Sunshine of your SMILE ! Sometimes ANGELA smiles like that ~ I must be doing something right ~ AMEN ~ Yours as always ~ BRIAN ~ A fine Tone Poem indeed !
June 20th, 2018 18:42
ONCE DISTILLED.
Heartwriter said:
It truly was intreging. Very enjoying. Excellent!
June 20th, 2018 06:04
Heartwriter said:
It truly was intreging. Very enjoying. Excellent!
June 20th, 2018 06:04
ONCE DISTILLED.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Beautiful Fay!
Like last night by the sounds of it?
Lovely word plays
Bravo
Andrew
June 20th, 2018 05:34
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Beautiful Fay!
Like last night by the sounds of it?
Lovely word plays
Bravo
Andrew
June 20th, 2018 05:34
APPREHENSION.
willyweed said:
wonderful write we all can relate to this well structured poem. ww
June 19th, 2018 20:17
willyweed said:
wonderful write we all can relate to this well structured poem. ww
June 19th, 2018 20:17
APPREHENSION.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing FAY ~ Everyday life is punctuated with happenings ~ Births ~ Marriages ~ Illnesses & Deaths etc all tinged with apprehension. In my immediate Family I have (so far) only lost one Grandpa (Mum\'s DAD) and one Grandma (Dad\'s MUM) but of course I have attended many Christenings ~ Weddings & Funerals etc Your poem explores the APPREHENSION of a Lady facing the declining Health of Her Dad which i am sure must be very difficult ! Your poem describes so very elegantly her train journey to see her Dad (possibly for the last time ?) following an urgent phone call ~ thank heaven for Modern means of instant communication anywhere in the World ! I love the last line ~ because she calms her apprehension and foreboding by doing exactly what I would do in similar circumstances:
THEN SHE STARTED TO PRAY ~ AMEN
Thanks for caring ~ Yours as always ~BRIAN
June 19th, 2018 18:24
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing FAY ~ Everyday life is punctuated with happenings ~ Births ~ Marriages ~ Illnesses & Deaths etc all tinged with apprehension. In my immediate Family I have (so far) only lost one Grandpa (Mum\'s DAD) and one Grandma (Dad\'s MUM) but of course I have attended many Christenings ~ Weddings & Funerals etc Your poem explores the APPREHENSION of a Lady facing the declining Health of Her Dad which i am sure must be very difficult ! Your poem describes so very elegantly her train journey to see her Dad (possibly for the last time ?) following an urgent phone call ~ thank heaven for Modern means of instant communication anywhere in the World ! I love the last line ~ because she calms her apprehension and foreboding by doing exactly what I would do in similar circumstances:
THEN SHE STARTED TO PRAY ~ AMEN
Thanks for caring ~ Yours as always ~BRIAN
June 19th, 2018 18:24
APPREHENSION.
Heartwriter said:
My heart string was pulled by this one. Very well written. Thanks for sharing raw emotion.
June 19th, 2018 06:23
Heartwriter said:
My heart string was pulled by this one. Very well written. Thanks for sharing raw emotion.
June 19th, 2018 06:23
APPREHENSION.
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
This write resonates like a thunderbolt! I’ll never forget that early morning phone call!
With your poetess prowess, you’ve beautifully penned that painful feeling that physically takes over when receiving that dreadful phone call!
~Laura~
June 19th, 2018 05:23
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
This write resonates like a thunderbolt! I’ll never forget that early morning phone call!
With your poetess prowess, you’ve beautifully penned that painful feeling that physically takes over when receiving that dreadful phone call!
~Laura~
June 19th, 2018 05:23
APPREHENSION.
dusk arising said:
Gripping, suspenseful and filled with fearful apprehension.
Dear to all our hearts for, in the normal course of our lives, we lose our loving parents.
Loved the way you plucked out the features of the day, a day you are wondering whether it is the last day on which you\'d see your father.
I felt this.
June 19th, 2018 04:11
dusk arising said:
Gripping, suspenseful and filled with fearful apprehension.
Dear to all our hearts for, in the normal course of our lives, we lose our loving parents.
Loved the way you plucked out the features of the day, a day you are wondering whether it is the last day on which you\'d see your father.
I felt this.
June 19th, 2018 04:11
APPREHENSION.
Michael Edwards said:
A great write that takes you with it and some super lines - great work Fay.
June 19th, 2018 02:08
Michael Edwards said:
A great write that takes you with it and some super lines - great work Fay.
June 19th, 2018 02:08
IT PASSED.
Christina8 said:
A very nice piece of poetry with fantastic imagery!
June 18th, 2018 14:08
Christina8 said:
A very nice piece of poetry with fantastic imagery!
June 18th, 2018 14:08
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