Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
DILLIGENCE.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for sharing a very elegant Poem (impeccable metre !) in respect of the Mother Instinct of BIRDS and other creatures ! My MIUM has nesting boxes with families of BLUE-TITS and when i get a chance to observe them at the weekend the parents are in & out all day with a tasty snack. It seems to me that many Young Mothers today are striving after PAY & OPPORTUNITY and are reluctant to \"stay at home\" and raise their family ~ which could take ten or more years ! To me that is the HIDDEN LESSON ~ to put Family before Fame & Fortune ~ Of course in these days of \"equal opportunity\" the FATHER could always be a STAY AT HOME DAD ! Thanks for carng & sharing ~ love the picture ~ YOURS BRIAN ~ Please check my Poem ~ Thanks BRIAN
May 25th, 2018 04:47
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for sharing a very elegant Poem (impeccable metre !) in respect of the Mother Instinct of BIRDS and other creatures ! My MIUM has nesting boxes with families of BLUE-TITS and when i get a chance to observe them at the weekend the parents are in & out all day with a tasty snack. It seems to me that many Young Mothers today are striving after PAY & OPPORTUNITY and are reluctant to \"stay at home\" and raise their family ~ which could take ten or more years ! To me that is the HIDDEN LESSON ~ to put Family before Fame & Fortune ~ Of course in these days of \"equal opportunity\" the FATHER could always be a STAY AT HOME DAD ! Thanks for carng & sharing ~ love the picture ~ YOURS BRIAN ~ Please check my Poem ~ Thanks BRIAN
May 25th, 2018 04:47
DILLIGENCE.
Goldfinch60 said:
The rate at which birds feed their young is astonishing. We watch them come tome and time again to the bird table - it gets quite pricey at this time of the year, apart from other seeds and fat etc I feed them sultanas and at the moment they are getting through a kilo a day.
May 25th, 2018 04:23
Goldfinch60 said:
The rate at which birds feed their young is astonishing. We watch them come tome and time again to the bird table - it gets quite pricey at this time of the year, apart from other seeds and fat etc I feed them sultanas and at the moment they are getting through a kilo a day.
May 25th, 2018 04:23
SELF-HOOD.
Poetic Dan said:
Your words flew through me
Just like the bird
I\'m left with a beautiful feeling
Like I\'m just thankful to be here
Much appreciated as always
May 23rd, 2018 09:34
Poetic Dan said:
Your words flew through me
Just like the bird
I\'m left with a beautiful feeling
Like I\'m just thankful to be here
Much appreciated as always
May 23rd, 2018 09:34
LIFESAVING.
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
A brilliant verse!
To know darkness is to appreciate the gift of LIGHT!
Your words are splendid; especially...
“For this resplendent creation to daily glorify
Love’s lifesaving proof radiant
Light needs full praise.”
~Laura~
May 22nd, 2018 18:07
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
A brilliant verse!
To know darkness is to appreciate the gift of LIGHT!
Your words are splendid; especially...
“For this resplendent creation to daily glorify
Love’s lifesaving proof radiant
Light needs full praise.”
~Laura~
May 22nd, 2018 18:07
LIFESAVING.
Michael Edwards said:
Light leads us all if only everyone could appreciate it - great work Fay.
May 22nd, 2018 12:48
Michael Edwards said:
Light leads us all if only everyone could appreciate it - great work Fay.
May 22nd, 2018 12:48
LIFESAVING.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
And GOD said \"let there be LIGHT\"
And there was LIGHT !
And GOD called the LIGHT ~ DAY
And the DARKNESS he called NIGHT
And the Evening & the Morning ~ the first DAY
Do we really appreciate the tremendous ENERGY we get from the SUN 24/7 in the form of HEAT & LIGHT and all for free ?Keeping Planet Earth at an ambient temperature of 16C ! Without the SUN there would be no photosynthesis ~ no FOOD and no LIFE on Earth !
Your Poem & Complementary Picture is a great tribute to the SUN the centre and sustainer of the Solar System ~ Please let the LIGHT continue ~ AMEN Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours as always BRIAN ! Please check \"GIVE THANKS\" and add a POEM to my latest Fusion \"HOLIDAYS\" ~ Thanks B !
May 22nd, 2018 06:00
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
And GOD said \"let there be LIGHT\"
And there was LIGHT !
And GOD called the LIGHT ~ DAY
And the DARKNESS he called NIGHT
And the Evening & the Morning ~ the first DAY
Do we really appreciate the tremendous ENERGY we get from the SUN 24/7 in the form of HEAT & LIGHT and all for free ?Keeping Planet Earth at an ambient temperature of 16C ! Without the SUN there would be no photosynthesis ~ no FOOD and no LIFE on Earth !
Your Poem & Complementary Picture is a great tribute to the SUN the centre and sustainer of the Solar System ~ Please let the LIGHT continue ~ AMEN Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours as always BRIAN ! Please check \"GIVE THANKS\" and add a POEM to my latest Fusion \"HOLIDAYS\" ~ Thanks B !
May 22nd, 2018 06:00
TICKING AWAY.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, your command of language is superb.
May 22nd, 2018 01:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, your command of language is superb.
May 22nd, 2018 01:58
HEART\'S CORE.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Loving heart\'s core keeps beauty of hope and life\'s dignity in each beat as this spreads and receives love. Heart is treasured with memory and beauty of life. Love is treasured in inner core of heart and this is love bank. Soul recognizes own efficiency. Definitely life sings with transcendent light. This poem is an outstanding poem and very heart touching.
May 21st, 2018 17:05
Pintu Mahakul said:
Loving heart\'s core keeps beauty of hope and life\'s dignity in each beat as this spreads and receives love. Heart is treasured with memory and beauty of life. Love is treasured in inner core of heart and this is love bank. Soul recognizes own efficiency. Definitely life sings with transcendent light. This poem is an outstanding poem and very heart touching.
May 21st, 2018 17:05
TICKING AWAY.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL FAY ~ An awesome plethora of words woven to capture perfectly that \"wakin\' up mornin\' feelin\'\" Thanks for sharing ~ made me smile ~ that\'s me every day ! Every one of of you delectable poems ameliorates this lovely SITE. Please check SUMMER HOLIDAYS a collaboration with MAXINE ~ thanks ~ Yours as always ~ BRIAN
May 21st, 2018 03:59
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL FAY ~ An awesome plethora of words woven to capture perfectly that \"wakin\' up mornin\' feelin\'\" Thanks for sharing ~ made me smile ~ that\'s me every day ! Every one of of you delectable poems ameliorates this lovely SITE. Please check SUMMER HOLIDAYS a collaboration with MAXINE ~ thanks ~ Yours as always ~ BRIAN
May 21st, 2018 03:59
SELF-HOOD.
SLR said:
Beautiful piece ms Fay! If I close my eyes I can hear the birds and feel the sunset.
May 11th, 2018 18:04
SLR said:
Beautiful piece ms Fay! If I close my eyes I can hear the birds and feel the sunset.
May 11th, 2018 18:04
SELF-HOOD.
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
I agree with Lorna...
you do every single day!
A fine write indeed!
~Laura~
May 11th, 2018 16:26
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
I agree with Lorna...
you do every single day!
A fine write indeed!
~Laura~
May 11th, 2018 16:26
SELF-HOOD.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ as you know every Human Being is gifted in one way or another. Sometimes as your poem hints we are too busy and preoccupied to hone or share our gift ! The ANIMAL WORLD has no such inhibitions ~ and they all do what they do do well. Perhaps we have to much choice to achieve SELF-HOOD so we become Jacks of All Trades and Masters of NONE ! Love the SILHOUETTED PICTURE ~ Thanks for CARING ~ Yours BRIAN ~ Please check my POEM ~ Thanks B !
May 11th, 2018 10:38
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ as you know every Human Being is gifted in one way or another. Sometimes as your poem hints we are too busy and preoccupied to hone or share our gift ! The ANIMAL WORLD has no such inhibitions ~ and they all do what they do do well. Perhaps we have to much choice to achieve SELF-HOOD so we become Jacks of All Trades and Masters of NONE ! Love the SILHOUETTED PICTURE ~ Thanks for CARING ~ Yours BRIAN ~ Please check my POEM ~ Thanks B !
May 11th, 2018 10:38
SELF-HOOD.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write, those songs in the late evening are wondrous.
May 11th, 2018 07:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write, those songs in the late evening are wondrous.
May 11th, 2018 07:55
LUNACY.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good and very true write Fay. another phase where homo sapiens is destroying our planet.
May 11th, 2018 00:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good and very true write Fay. another phase where homo sapiens is destroying our planet.
May 11th, 2018 00:54
LUNACY.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Yep, sure as eggs are eggs, in some places all is OK until man comes along and mucks it up!
May 10th, 2018 11:33
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Yep, sure as eggs are eggs, in some places all is OK until man comes along and mucks it up!
May 10th, 2018 11:33
LUNACY.
Michael Edwards said:
Crimes against nature are crimes against humanity - this is such a global problem and your super write nails it so well.
May 10th, 2018 11:10
Michael Edwards said:
Crimes against nature are crimes against humanity - this is such a global problem and your super write nails it so well.
May 10th, 2018 11:10
LUNACY.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
YES FAY ~ The UK used to be covered in FOREST now it\'s less than 10 % (The USA is still 50%) You have alluded to the symbiosis between Flora & Fauna ~ Plants inhale CO2 and exhale O2 and the animals vice-versa ! For years this maintained the CO2 @ 250ppm and its now over 400ppm due to Industrial CO2 and deforestation !
Unfortunately the POLITICIANS ~ who make these decisions are LUNATICS and ignorant of CONSERVATION & SUSTAINABILITY ! Al Gore (A Conservationist) would have made a Great Green President ~ Trump is an ecological disaster ! Thanks for caring ~ Yours as ever !
May 10th, 2018 11:02
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
YES FAY ~ The UK used to be covered in FOREST now it\'s less than 10 % (The USA is still 50%) You have alluded to the symbiosis between Flora & Fauna ~ Plants inhale CO2 and exhale O2 and the animals vice-versa ! For years this maintained the CO2 @ 250ppm and its now over 400ppm due to Industrial CO2 and deforestation !
Unfortunately the POLITICIANS ~ who make these decisions are LUNATICS and ignorant of CONSERVATION & SUSTAINABILITY ! Al Gore (A Conservationist) would have made a Great Green President ~ Trump is an ecological disaster ! Thanks for caring ~ Yours as ever !
May 10th, 2018 11:02
LUNACY.
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
You’re so spot on with your poem!
It should be disseminated throughout the world!
When I’m in NYC, as a lifetime member of a Community Board, I attend their meetings. The subject of passing a city law/ordinance to stop homeowners from cementing their lawns to make a parking space for their cars always comes up! I cannot believe how difficult it is! It takes years! It’s unbelievable!
Your final words say it best...
“Lunacy governs as down each tree goes.”
~Laura~
May 10th, 2018 10:54
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
You’re so spot on with your poem!
It should be disseminated throughout the world!
When I’m in NYC, as a lifetime member of a Community Board, I attend their meetings. The subject of passing a city law/ordinance to stop homeowners from cementing their lawns to make a parking space for their cars always comes up! I cannot believe how difficult it is! It takes years! It’s unbelievable!
Your final words say it best...
“Lunacy governs as down each tree goes.”
~Laura~
May 10th, 2018 10:54
LUNACY.
Lorna said:
Like the plastic in the ocean..... the saddest proof that mankind will self-destruct. Your poem does justice to the problem. There are some hopeful sites on internet that show some wonderful progress being made to fix problems so maybe the young people will be more aware...... for their sakes, I hope so.....
May 10th, 2018 07:32
Lorna said:
Like the plastic in the ocean..... the saddest proof that mankind will self-destruct. Your poem does justice to the problem. There are some hopeful sites on internet that show some wonderful progress being made to fix problems so maybe the young people will be more aware...... for their sakes, I hope so.....
May 10th, 2018 07:32
LOVE\'S TUNE.
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
I love the Oscar Wilde quote you chose! I wish everyone would tattoo it onto their heart!
An awesome write delivering a beautiful message! Yes, “love’s tune composes much more than music.”
~Laura~
May 9th, 2018 16:16
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
I love the Oscar Wilde quote you chose! I wish everyone would tattoo it onto their heart!
An awesome write delivering a beautiful message! Yes, “love’s tune composes much more than music.”
~Laura~
May 9th, 2018 16:16
LOVE\'S TUNE.
Fay Slimm. said:
MY APOLOGIES DEAR FRIENDS FOR NOT BEING ABLE TO GET INDIVIDUAL REPLIES TO YOUR LOVELY COMMENTS - - THINGS SEEM TO HAVE GONE AWRY FROM THIS END AT THE MOMENT BUT i REALLY APPRECIATE EVERY VISIT AND VIEW MADE ON THIS LITTLE TRIBUTE TO LOVE. - - - HOPING THIS WILL GET POSTED AS MY OTHER ATTEMPTS GOT LOST. -- - from Fay xx
May 9th, 2018 16:03
Fay Slimm. said:
MY APOLOGIES DEAR FRIENDS FOR NOT BEING ABLE TO GET INDIVIDUAL REPLIES TO YOUR LOVELY COMMENTS - - THINGS SEEM TO HAVE GONE AWRY FROM THIS END AT THE MOMENT BUT i REALLY APPRECIATE EVERY VISIT AND VIEW MADE ON THIS LITTLE TRIBUTE TO LOVE. - - - HOPING THIS WILL GET POSTED AS MY OTHER ATTEMPTS GOT LOST. -- - from Fay xx
May 9th, 2018 16:03
LOVE\'S TUNE.
Fay Slimm. said:
Glad you found that final line pleasing Michael - - thanks for your encouraging comment too.
May 9th, 2018 15:58
Fay Slimm. said:
Glad you found that final line pleasing Michael - - thanks for your encouraging comment too.
May 9th, 2018 15:58
LOVE\'S TUNE.
dusk arising said:
No one else sees what the lover sees and, with its own beguiling charm each oddness/strangeness/\'dischord\' can create within us a unique cherished value which bonds us closer to our special someone.
Binging home the marvel of the oft heard words \'i dont know what you seen in him/her\'.
May 9th, 2018 13:47
dusk arising said:
No one else sees what the lover sees and, with its own beguiling charm each oddness/strangeness/\'dischord\' can create within us a unique cherished value which bonds us closer to our special someone.
Binging home the marvel of the oft heard words \'i dont know what you seen in him/her\'.
May 9th, 2018 13:47
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