Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
AWE.
Goldfinch60 said:
All life should be lived in wonderment Fay. Very good write.
April 26th, 2018 07:56
Goldfinch60 said:
All life should be lived in wonderment Fay. Very good write.
April 26th, 2018 07:56
AWE.
Lorna said:
And now that winter has broken and we are in the garden - the Wonderment is all around us to find again! Hope you had one of your \"wonderment\" walks today!
April 26th, 2018 07:03
Lorna said:
And now that winter has broken and we are in the garden - the Wonderment is all around us to find again! Hope you had one of your \"wonderment\" walks today!
April 26th, 2018 07:03
AWE.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
O LORD MY GOD ~ When I in awesome Wonder
Consider ALL the things your hand has made !
I see the Stars ~ I hear the Rolling Thunder
Your Power throughout the Universe displayed !
Then sings my Soul ~ Creator GOD to YOU
How Great You are ~ How Great You are !
Thanks for Caring & Sharing FAY
Something of the AWE with which we experience
the Wonders of God\'s Creation each & every DAY !
Birds & Bees ~ Forests & Streams ~ Pike & Ponies
Cobwebs & Kittens ~ Clouds & Cockles ~ Snow & Snowdrops
Scent of Roses and all the Woody Woodland smells !
Not only in Cornwall ~ But also Industrial Essex !
And I say to myself \"What A Wonderful World\"
My Fellow Scientists are looking for another PLANET EARTH
In \"The Goldilocks Zone\" but personally I think it\'s a MYTH !
They will only find one if GOD chose to Create another
Living Planet in Our Galaxy or another !
I look around ~ GOD is there
I look through my MICROSCOPE ~ God is there
I look through my TELESCOPE ~ God is there also
In my POEM today \"POWER of the CROSS\"
GOD is there also !
HANDS that Flung Stars into Space
To cruel nails surrended and ALL FOR US !
Thanks FAY ~ GOD is active on MPS TODAY
Your Good Friend as always ~ BRIAN
April 26th, 2018 05:06
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
O LORD MY GOD ~ When I in awesome Wonder
Consider ALL the things your hand has made !
I see the Stars ~ I hear the Rolling Thunder
Your Power throughout the Universe displayed !
Then sings my Soul ~ Creator GOD to YOU
How Great You are ~ How Great You are !
Thanks for Caring & Sharing FAY
Something of the AWE with which we experience
the Wonders of God\'s Creation each & every DAY !
Birds & Bees ~ Forests & Streams ~ Pike & Ponies
Cobwebs & Kittens ~ Clouds & Cockles ~ Snow & Snowdrops
Scent of Roses and all the Woody Woodland smells !
Not only in Cornwall ~ But also Industrial Essex !
And I say to myself \"What A Wonderful World\"
My Fellow Scientists are looking for another PLANET EARTH
In \"The Goldilocks Zone\" but personally I think it\'s a MYTH !
They will only find one if GOD chose to Create another
Living Planet in Our Galaxy or another !
I look around ~ GOD is there
I look through my MICROSCOPE ~ God is there
I look through my TELESCOPE ~ God is there also
In my POEM today \"POWER of the CROSS\"
GOD is there also !
HANDS that Flung Stars into Space
To cruel nails surrended and ALL FOR US !
Thanks FAY ~ GOD is active on MPS TODAY
Your Good Friend as always ~ BRIAN
April 26th, 2018 05:06
AWE.
orchidee said:
A wondermental write Fay - if that is a word?! heehee. Spell-checker doesn\'t like it!
April 26th, 2018 04:51
orchidee said:
A wondermental write Fay - if that is a word?! heehee. Spell-checker doesn\'t like it!
April 26th, 2018 04:51
HEART\'S CORE.
Christina8 said:
I love it! It\'s a great write and I love the repetition at the second line with a twist!
April 24th, 2018 12:00
Christina8 said:
I love it! It\'s a great write and I love the repetition at the second line with a twist!
April 24th, 2018 12:00
HEART\'S CORE.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, the hearts core is the centre of love.
April 24th, 2018 08:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, the hearts core is the centre of love.
April 24th, 2018 08:00
HEART\'S CORE.
Lorna said:
I think you are always living, looking, loving at the heart\'s core Fay..........
April 24th, 2018 04:40
Lorna said:
I think you are always living, looking, loving at the heart\'s core Fay..........
April 24th, 2018 04:40
HEART\'S CORE.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
When we open our Inner Heart ~ Our Heart\'s Core ~ to another person it opens \"A Gateway into Paradise\" which only those who have experienced it understand ! Love the Structure and Sentiment of the Poem ~ Living ~ Looking ~ Loving @ Heart\'s Core ~ SUCHNESS (perfect word !) is Love ~ Heart ~ Spirit that all ......... Life sings with transcendent light ~ and soul weeps no more ~ AMEN Thanks FAY for a powerful testimony to the infinity of TRUE LOVE ~ Yours Brian & Angela XX Please check my tribute to William & Kate and their New Prince ~ Thanks !
April 24th, 2018 03:46
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
When we open our Inner Heart ~ Our Heart\'s Core ~ to another person it opens \"A Gateway into Paradise\" which only those who have experienced it understand ! Love the Structure and Sentiment of the Poem ~ Living ~ Looking ~ Loving @ Heart\'s Core ~ SUCHNESS (perfect word !) is Love ~ Heart ~ Spirit that all ......... Life sings with transcendent light ~ and soul weeps no more ~ AMEN Thanks FAY for a powerful testimony to the infinity of TRUE LOVE ~ Yours Brian & Angela XX Please check my tribute to William & Kate and their New Prince ~ Thanks !
April 24th, 2018 03:46
HEART\'S CORE.
orchidee said:
\'Such\' a good write Fay! Did you know I would say that?! lol.
April 24th, 2018 03:35
orchidee said:
\'Such\' a good write Fay! Did you know I would say that?! lol.
April 24th, 2018 03:35
UNCOVERED.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY ~ For a very descriptive Photo and an elegant Poem ! Thoughts on a discussion on discovering a stone terrace built to surround homesteads and fence in sheep ! Even the homesteads have now disintegrated. We search and mentally build such sites to give us an insight into \"A cliff-top Shepherding Industry !\" In 500 years perhaps archaeologists will search the remains of our homes for clues. A very emotive poem ~ thanks for sharing ~ Yours as always BRIAN
April 23rd, 2018 11:08
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY ~ For a very descriptive Photo and an elegant Poem ! Thoughts on a discussion on discovering a stone terrace built to surround homesteads and fence in sheep ! Even the homesteads have now disintegrated. We search and mentally build such sites to give us an insight into \"A cliff-top Shepherding Industry !\" In 500 years perhaps archaeologists will search the remains of our homes for clues. A very emotive poem ~ thanks for sharing ~ Yours as always BRIAN
April 23rd, 2018 11:08
UNCOVERED.
Michael Edwards said:
Your wonderful language takes us on a great journey - thanks Fay.
April 23rd, 2018 07:55
Michael Edwards said:
Your wonderful language takes us on a great journey - thanks Fay.
April 23rd, 2018 07:55
UNCOVERED.
Lorna said:
How magical your poem and the old stones and the mysteries they hold. You have so much history \"for free\" - it must be spiritual to come across these lonely places of the past (without crowds of tourists pushing in lines)........
April 23rd, 2018 05:17
Lorna said:
How magical your poem and the old stones and the mysteries they hold. You have so much history \"for free\" - it must be spiritual to come across these lonely places of the past (without crowds of tourists pushing in lines)........
April 23rd, 2018 05:17
SWEETNESS.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Fay. I was walking into town the other day and took a oath by a stream and there above me was a thrush singing quite beautifully.
April 22nd, 2018 00:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Fay. I was walking into town the other day and took a oath by a stream and there above me was a thrush singing quite beautifully.
April 22nd, 2018 00:24
SWEETNESS.
kevin browne said:
oh, how you carry the sweetness upon your flight through this wonderful piece of writing. you write like how a sweet thrush chirps in all it\'s glory. love it, Fay.
April 21st, 2018 18:20
kevin browne said:
oh, how you carry the sweetness upon your flight through this wonderful piece of writing. you write like how a sweet thrush chirps in all it\'s glory. love it, Fay.
April 21st, 2018 18:20
SWEETNESS.
Laura🌻 said:
A super poem, my dear Fay!
A great pic of that beautiful thrush! Love hearing their sweet sound. “Sweetness” indeed! A friend of mine photographed one in Central Park two years ago! They are beautiful sweet little creatures!
~Laura~
April 21st, 2018 15:23
Laura🌻 said:
A super poem, my dear Fay!
A great pic of that beautiful thrush! Love hearing their sweet sound. “Sweetness” indeed! A friend of mine photographed one in Central Park two years ago! They are beautiful sweet little creatures!
~Laura~
April 21st, 2018 15:23
SWEETNESS.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ Beautiful Photo ~ Bird & Poem. My MUM\'s garden is furnished for birds ~ and a large French Window to view them through ! The Flats where I live surround a garden which has Shrubs ~ Bird boxes ~ Bird tables & Bird baths etc so we do get many species of birds. The THRUSH is an understated Bird but always neat and smart ! As you say its trill does sweeten the Sunset unless it is drowned out Musak and City Sounds ! So called CIVILISATION has much to answer for ~ Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours as always BRIAN ! Please check my CATS ~ Thanks B !
April 21st, 2018 12:36
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ Beautiful Photo ~ Bird & Poem. My MUM\'s garden is furnished for birds ~ and a large French Window to view them through ! The Flats where I live surround a garden which has Shrubs ~ Bird boxes ~ Bird tables & Bird baths etc so we do get many species of birds. The THRUSH is an understated Bird but always neat and smart ! As you say its trill does sweeten the Sunset unless it is drowned out Musak and City Sounds ! So called CIVILISATION has much to answer for ~ Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours as always BRIAN ! Please check my CATS ~ Thanks B !
April 21st, 2018 12:36
SWEETNESS.
Lorna said:
A beautiful poem Fay and so nice that everything is spring now........ I haven\'t seen a thrush at my home but I will look up how to attract them - there are many varieties but we have a \"wood thrush\" that appears similar to the one you are showing us....... I\'d love to have one singing in my garden!
April 21st, 2018 06:20
Lorna said:
A beautiful poem Fay and so nice that everything is spring now........ I haven\'t seen a thrush at my home but I will look up how to attract them - there are many varieties but we have a \"wood thrush\" that appears similar to the one you are showing us....... I\'d love to have one singing in my garden!
April 21st, 2018 06:20
SWEETNESS.
Michael Edwards said:
A truly magical time of year, feathered friend and poem about it all - great write Fay.
April 21st, 2018 05:59
Michael Edwards said:
A truly magical time of year, feathered friend and poem about it all - great write Fay.
April 21st, 2018 05:59
WILD LAND.
Laura🌻 said:
A great write, my dear Fay!
I promise to not seek this human-less island and let nature continue on its course and be what it was meant to be! A very enjoyable and eye-opening read!
A beautiful and truthful statement...
“Such is the dictum of law and order among creatures living in real wilderness and who persist in a fierce kind of freedom.”
~Laura~
April 20th, 2018 02:31
Laura🌻 said:
A great write, my dear Fay!
I promise to not seek this human-less island and let nature continue on its course and be what it was meant to be! A very enjoyable and eye-opening read!
A beautiful and truthful statement...
“Such is the dictum of law and order among creatures living in real wilderness and who persist in a fierce kind of freedom.”
~Laura~
April 20th, 2018 02:31
WILD LAND.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, I was there as your words came into my mind.
April 20th, 2018 00:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, I was there as your words came into my mind.
April 20th, 2018 00:30
WILD LAND.
Lorna said:
When I was young the wilds of nature did not scare me - I loved it! Now that I\'m older I am more aware of her wrath and stay closer to the garden - but even there the hawks get my little birds and I find feathers under the bird feeder in the mornings........ We are here at her mercy! Lots of open space in your wonderful poem Fay.............
April 19th, 2018 05:52
Lorna said:
When I was young the wilds of nature did not scare me - I loved it! Now that I\'m older I am more aware of her wrath and stay closer to the garden - but even there the hawks get my little birds and I find feathers under the bird feeder in the mornings........ We are here at her mercy! Lots of open space in your wonderful poem Fay.............
April 19th, 2018 05:52
WILD LAND.
Michael Edwards said:
This is the perfect verse Fay - thanks so much for posting it - very appropriate . XXX
April 19th, 2018 02:59
Michael Edwards said:
This is the perfect verse Fay - thanks so much for posting it - very appropriate . XXX
April 19th, 2018 02:59
CAPTURED.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, the wind can be friend or foe.
April 19th, 2018 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, the wind can be friend or foe.
April 19th, 2018 00:44
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