Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
INSIDE ME.
Lauraš» said:
My dear Fay,
An exquisite write!
One of my favorites...
āGrind etches diamonds in cushions of patience.ā Superb!
~Laura~
June 4th, 2018 19:41
Lauraš» said:
My dear Fay,
An exquisite write!
One of my favorites...
āGrind etches diamonds in cushions of patience.ā Superb!
~Laura~
June 4th, 2018 19:41
INSIDE ME.
dusk arising said:
Another jewel from the pearl which you are.
Time - what is that? The rhythm to which the tides exercise?
Wisdom - what is that? Achievement of no longer being foolish?
Stone within you - perhaps. But today we see only one facet. In caring hands the jewel could be \'adjusted\' allowing the inner beauty, always there, to radiate.
A prize indeed!
June 4th, 2018 16:12
dusk arising said:
Another jewel from the pearl which you are.
Time - what is that? The rhythm to which the tides exercise?
Wisdom - what is that? Achievement of no longer being foolish?
Stone within you - perhaps. But today we see only one facet. In caring hands the jewel could be \'adjusted\' allowing the inner beauty, always there, to radiate.
A prize indeed!
June 4th, 2018 16:12
INSIDE ME.
dusk arising said:
Another jewel from the pearl which you are.
Time - what is that? The rhythm to which the tides exercise?
Wisdom - what is that? Achievement of no longer being foolish?
Stone within you - perhaps. But today we see only one facet. In caring hands the jewel could be \'adjusted\' allowing the inner beauty, always there, to radiate.
A prize indeed!
June 4th, 2018 11:33
dusk arising said:
Another jewel from the pearl which you are.
Time - what is that? The rhythm to which the tides exercise?
Wisdom - what is that? Achievement of no longer being foolish?
Stone within you - perhaps. But today we see only one facet. In caring hands the jewel could be \'adjusted\' allowing the inner beauty, always there, to radiate.
A prize indeed!
June 4th, 2018 11:33
INSIDE ME.
Lorna said:
Oh Fay - I love \"There is stone inside me that knows stone\" - tells of hard gained knowledge that comes with life. Aren\'t stones magical - when you break one open, you see what no one has seen for millions of years - wow.......
June 4th, 2018 07:35
Lorna said:
Oh Fay - I love \"There is stone inside me that knows stone\" - tells of hard gained knowledge that comes with life. Aren\'t stones magical - when you break one open, you see what no one has seen for millions of years - wow.......
June 4th, 2018 07:35
LET US ..........
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ This is so beautiful it made me cry ! I am a morning person (still working !) and I achieved pole position (6am) once on MPS ! When I\'m on Holiday I get up as early as possible to milk every minute ! Love the positivity in the final verse !
Using light\'s fire to begin birth walz
let us throw off nocturnal attire
and learn to adorn new life
by putting on MORNING
A great MANTRA thanks for sharing
Yours as always ~ BRIAN !
Please check my Braw Brown Bears ~ B
May 31st, 2018 06:08
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ This is so beautiful it made me cry ! I am a morning person (still working !) and I achieved pole position (6am) once on MPS ! When I\'m on Holiday I get up as early as possible to milk every minute ! Love the positivity in the final verse !
Using light\'s fire to begin birth walz
let us throw off nocturnal attire
and learn to adorn new life
by putting on MORNING
A great MANTRA thanks for sharing
Yours as always ~ BRIAN !
Please check my Braw Brown Bears ~ B
May 31st, 2018 06:08
LET US ..........
Nicholas Browning said:
I\'d pay a hefty weight in gold to hear the song that plays inside your head when you write. Everyone has one, I think. Lovely poem.
May 31st, 2018 05:55
Nicholas Browning said:
I\'d pay a hefty weight in gold to hear the song that plays inside your head when you write. Everyone has one, I think. Lovely poem.
May 31st, 2018 05:55
LET US ..........
Michael Edwards said:
A super write Fay - let us all put on morning
May 31st, 2018 04:46
Michael Edwards said:
A super write Fay - let us all put on morning
May 31st, 2018 04:46
DILLIGENCE.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Diligence bred in nature is dignified with perception of nature. Endless effort to satisfy motivates mind. Through feeding it is expected that young feathers will come up soon. Behaviour of each kid-bird is uncontrolled. Parental responses are humbly adored. This poem is also outstanding natural poem and perception motivates mind through reading. Imagery comes alive like a living scene of nature.
May 26th, 2018 22:01
Pintu Mahakul said:
Diligence bred in nature is dignified with perception of nature. Endless effort to satisfy motivates mind. Through feeding it is expected that young feathers will come up soon. Behaviour of each kid-bird is uncontrolled. Parental responses are humbly adored. This poem is also outstanding natural poem and perception motivates mind through reading. Imagery comes alive like a living scene of nature.
May 26th, 2018 22:01
LIFESAVING.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Performance of humanity depends on glittering of inner values and ethics. This is based on light of wisdom that we get from family, nature, universe and God. Invisibly light travels so fast to discover mystery of universe. But mind travels much faster than light to perceive every wonder. Lower or higher it does not matter. Shining entrance of light matters a lot. An interesting poem is beautifully written is outstanding one.
May 26th, 2018 21:53
Pintu Mahakul said:
Performance of humanity depends on glittering of inner values and ethics. This is based on light of wisdom that we get from family, nature, universe and God. Invisibly light travels so fast to discover mystery of universe. But mind travels much faster than light to perceive every wonder. Lower or higher it does not matter. Shining entrance of light matters a lot. An interesting poem is beautifully written is outstanding one.
May 26th, 2018 21:53
DILLIGENCE.
w c said:
Thanks, Fay, for this beautiful poem. I have a special thing for birds.
May 25th, 2018 18:50
w c said:
Thanks, Fay, for this beautiful poem. I have a special thing for birds.
May 25th, 2018 18:50
DILLIGENCE.
Michael Edwards said:
There is so much we can learn from nature - a fine poem recording one of its wonders.
May 25th, 2018 06:04
Michael Edwards said:
There is so much we can learn from nature - a fine poem recording one of its wonders.
May 25th, 2018 06:04
DILLIGENCE.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for sharing a very elegant Poem (impeccable metre !) in respect of the Mother Instinct of BIRDS and other creatures ! My MIUM has nesting boxes with families of BLUE-TITS and when i get a chance to observe them at the weekend the parents are in & out all day with a tasty snack. It seems to me that many Young Mothers today are striving after PAY & OPPORTUNITY and are reluctant to \"stay at home\" and raise their family ~ which could take ten or more years ! To me that is the HIDDEN LESSON ~ to put Family before Fame & Fortune ~ Of course in these days of \"equal opportunity\" the FATHER could always be a STAY AT HOME DAD ! Thanks for carng & sharing ~ love the picture ~ YOURS BRIAN ~ Please check my Poem ~ Thanks BRIAN
May 25th, 2018 04:47
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for sharing a very elegant Poem (impeccable metre !) in respect of the Mother Instinct of BIRDS and other creatures ! My MIUM has nesting boxes with families of BLUE-TITS and when i get a chance to observe them at the weekend the parents are in & out all day with a tasty snack. It seems to me that many Young Mothers today are striving after PAY & OPPORTUNITY and are reluctant to \"stay at home\" and raise their family ~ which could take ten or more years ! To me that is the HIDDEN LESSON ~ to put Family before Fame & Fortune ~ Of course in these days of \"equal opportunity\" the FATHER could always be a STAY AT HOME DAD ! Thanks for carng & sharing ~ love the picture ~ YOURS BRIAN ~ Please check my Poem ~ Thanks BRIAN
May 25th, 2018 04:47
DILLIGENCE.
Goldfinch60 said:
The rate at which birds feed their young is astonishing. We watch them come tome and time again to the bird table - it gets quite pricey at this time of the year, apart from other seeds and fat etc I feed them sultanas and at the moment they are getting through a kilo a day.
May 25th, 2018 04:23
Goldfinch60 said:
The rate at which birds feed their young is astonishing. We watch them come tome and time again to the bird table - it gets quite pricey at this time of the year, apart from other seeds and fat etc I feed them sultanas and at the moment they are getting through a kilo a day.
May 25th, 2018 04:23
SELF-HOOD.
Poetic Dan said:
Your words flew through me
Just like the bird
I\'m left with a beautiful feeling
Like I\'m just thankful to be here
Much appreciated as always
May 23rd, 2018 09:34
Poetic Dan said:
Your words flew through me
Just like the bird
I\'m left with a beautiful feeling
Like I\'m just thankful to be here
Much appreciated as always
May 23rd, 2018 09:34
LIFESAVING.
Lauraš» said:
My dear Fay,
A brilliant verse!
To know darkness is to appreciate the gift of LIGHT!
Your words are splendid; especially...
āFor this resplendent creation to daily glorify
Loveās lifesaving proof radiant
Light needs full praise.ā
~Laura~
May 22nd, 2018 18:07
Lauraš» said:
My dear Fay,
A brilliant verse!
To know darkness is to appreciate the gift of LIGHT!
Your words are splendid; especially...
āFor this resplendent creation to daily glorify
Loveās lifesaving proof radiant
Light needs full praise.ā
~Laura~
May 22nd, 2018 18:07
LIFESAVING.
Michael Edwards said:
Light leads us all if only everyone could appreciate it - great work Fay.
May 22nd, 2018 12:48
Michael Edwards said:
Light leads us all if only everyone could appreciate it - great work Fay.
May 22nd, 2018 12:48
LIFESAVING.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
And GOD said \"let there be LIGHT\"
And there was LIGHT !
And GOD called the LIGHT ~ DAY
And the DARKNESS he called NIGHT
And the Evening & the Morning ~ the first DAY
Do we really appreciate the tremendous ENERGY we get from the SUN 24/7 in the form of HEAT & LIGHT and all for free ?Keeping Planet Earth at an ambient temperature of 16C ! Without the SUN there would be no photosynthesis ~ no FOOD and no LIFE on Earth !
Your Poem & Complementary Picture is a great tribute to the SUN the centre and sustainer of the Solar System ~ Please let the LIGHT continue ~ AMEN Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours as always BRIAN ! Please check \"GIVE THANKS\" and add a POEM to my latest Fusion \"HOLIDAYS\" ~ Thanks B !
May 22nd, 2018 06:00
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
And GOD said \"let there be LIGHT\"
And there was LIGHT !
And GOD called the LIGHT ~ DAY
And the DARKNESS he called NIGHT
And the Evening & the Morning ~ the first DAY
Do we really appreciate the tremendous ENERGY we get from the SUN 24/7 in the form of HEAT & LIGHT and all for free ?Keeping Planet Earth at an ambient temperature of 16C ! Without the SUN there would be no photosynthesis ~ no FOOD and no LIFE on Earth !
Your Poem & Complementary Picture is a great tribute to the SUN the centre and sustainer of the Solar System ~ Please let the LIGHT continue ~ AMEN Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours as always BRIAN ! Please check \"GIVE THANKS\" and add a POEM to my latest Fusion \"HOLIDAYS\" ~ Thanks B !
May 22nd, 2018 06:00
TICKING AWAY.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, your command of language is superb.
May 22nd, 2018 01:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, your command of language is superb.
May 22nd, 2018 01:58
HEART\'S CORE.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Loving heart\'s core keeps beauty of hope and life\'s dignity in each beat as this spreads and receives love. Heart is treasured with memory and beauty of life. Love is treasured in inner core of heart and this is love bank. Soul recognizes own efficiency. Definitely life sings with transcendent light. This poem is an outstanding poem and very heart touching.
May 21st, 2018 17:05
Pintu Mahakul said:
Loving heart\'s core keeps beauty of hope and life\'s dignity in each beat as this spreads and receives love. Heart is treasured with memory and beauty of life. Love is treasured in inner core of heart and this is love bank. Soul recognizes own efficiency. Definitely life sings with transcendent light. This poem is an outstanding poem and very heart touching.
May 21st, 2018 17:05
TICKING AWAY.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL FAY ~ An awesome plethora of words woven to capture perfectly that \"wakin\' up mornin\' feelin\'\" Thanks for sharing ~ made me smile ~ that\'s me every day ! Every one of of you delectable poems ameliorates this lovely SITE. Please check SUMMER HOLIDAYS a collaboration with MAXINE ~ thanks ~ Yours as always ~ BRIAN
May 21st, 2018 03:59
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL FAY ~ An awesome plethora of words woven to capture perfectly that \"wakin\' up mornin\' feelin\'\" Thanks for sharing ~ made me smile ~ that\'s me every day ! Every one of of you delectable poems ameliorates this lovely SITE. Please check SUMMER HOLIDAYS a collaboration with MAXINE ~ thanks ~ Yours as always ~ BRIAN
May 21st, 2018 03:59
SELF-HOOD.
SLR said:
Beautiful piece ms Fay! If I close my eyes I can hear the birds and feel the sunset.
May 11th, 2018 18:04
SLR said:
Beautiful piece ms Fay! If I close my eyes I can hear the birds and feel the sunset.
May 11th, 2018 18:04
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