Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
LOVE\'S GLOW.
onepauly said:
I wish I knew what its like to love another person. my love has always been for the many.
May 1st, 2018 07:21
onepauly said:
I wish I knew what its like to love another person. my love has always been for the many.
May 1st, 2018 07:21
LOVE\'S GLOW.
Lauraš» said:
A beautiful write, my dear Fay!
The magical kisses; especially the first ones as Lorna said! Your words are magical...
ā ...for love drives away any petrified heart-chillā...
~Laura~
May 1st, 2018 07:04
Lauraš» said:
A beautiful write, my dear Fay!
The magical kisses; especially the first ones as Lorna said! Your words are magical...
ā ...for love drives away any petrified heart-chillā...
~Laura~
May 1st, 2018 07:04
LOVE\'S GLOW.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Beautiful FAY and a blessed message for TUESDAY MORNING ! With ANGELA & I it was sealed with our first KISS and it has progressed exactly as you describe ! I emailed her a copy and she loved it ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Brian & Angela X Please check my HOT AIR BALLOONS ~ Thanks B.
May 1st, 2018 03:59
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Beautiful FAY and a blessed message for TUESDAY MORNING ! With ANGELA & I it was sealed with our first KISS and it has progressed exactly as you describe ! I emailed her a copy and she loved it ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Brian & Angela X Please check my HOT AIR BALLOONS ~ Thanks B.
May 1st, 2018 03:59
LOVE\'S GLOW.
orchidee said:
Better togheter? (in the pic). Together, even! heehee. A fine write Fay.
May 1st, 2018 03:34
orchidee said:
Better togheter? (in the pic). Together, even! heehee. A fine write Fay.
May 1st, 2018 03:34
BEGINNINGS.
Lauraš» said:
A truly beautifully written poem, my dear Fay, that evokes our senses to appreciate nature and its surroundings!
Youāre so spot on with...
āThereās nothing like mingling
with Springtimeās beginningsā.
~Laura~
April 30th, 2018 19:42
Lauraš» said:
A truly beautifully written poem, my dear Fay, that evokes our senses to appreciate nature and its surroundings!
Youāre so spot on with...
āThereās nothing like mingling
with Springtimeās beginningsā.
~Laura~
April 30th, 2018 19:42
BEGINNINGS.
Lorna said:
I love your walks showing us England\'s spring with such beautiful verse.......
April 30th, 2018 05:25
Lorna said:
I love your walks showing us England\'s spring with such beautiful verse.......
April 30th, 2018 05:25
BEGINNINGS.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Wish we could wake without icy blasts some days. Surely that wasn\'t our Summer just gone - that heatwave?!
April 30th, 2018 03:06
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Wish we could wake without icy blasts some days. Surely that wasn\'t our Summer just gone - that heatwave?!
April 30th, 2018 03:06
UNTIED.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. We have some kestrels that swoop around our way. The other birds all fly off when they see them.
April 27th, 2018 07:21
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. We have some kestrels that swoop around our way. The other birds all fly off when they see them.
April 27th, 2018 07:21
UNTIED.
Lorna said:
Gorgeous depiction of a beautiful bird Fay! I had the privilege to hold one on my arm once at a corporate thingy do where we were supposed to all \"bond\"..... ha ha.... I bonded with the bird. And I\'m with you - let\'s let them all free!
April 27th, 2018 05:35
Lorna said:
Gorgeous depiction of a beautiful bird Fay! I had the privilege to hold one on my arm once at a corporate thingy do where we were supposed to all \"bond\"..... ha ha.... I bonded with the bird. And I\'m with you - let\'s let them all free!
April 27th, 2018 05:35
UNTIED.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Fay, raptors are wonderful to watch, especially in the wild, I have seen many in my forays with nature.
April 27th, 2018 04:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Fay, raptors are wonderful to watch, especially in the wild, I have seen many in my forays with nature.
April 27th, 2018 04:04
AWE.
Christina8 said:
Now that the snow has lifted I do live in wonder of the beauty that surrounds--you captured everything so well in your poem! Great write indeed!
April 26th, 2018 17:01
Christina8 said:
Now that the snow has lifted I do live in wonder of the beauty that surrounds--you captured everything so well in your poem! Great write indeed!
April 26th, 2018 17:01
AWE.
Goldfinch60 said:
All life should be lived in wonderment Fay. Very good write.
April 26th, 2018 07:56
Goldfinch60 said:
All life should be lived in wonderment Fay. Very good write.
April 26th, 2018 07:56
AWE.
Lorna said:
And now that winter has broken and we are in the garden - the Wonderment is all around us to find again! Hope you had one of your \"wonderment\" walks today!
April 26th, 2018 07:03
Lorna said:
And now that winter has broken and we are in the garden - the Wonderment is all around us to find again! Hope you had one of your \"wonderment\" walks today!
April 26th, 2018 07:03
AWE.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
O LORD MY GOD ~ When I in awesome Wonder
Consider ALL the things your hand has made !
I see the Stars ~ I hear the Rolling Thunder
Your Power throughout the Universe displayed !
Then sings my Soul ~ Creator GOD to YOU
How Great You are ~ How Great You are !
Thanks for Caring & Sharing FAY
Something of the AWE with which we experience
the Wonders of God\'s Creation each & every DAY !
Birds & Bees ~ Forests & Streams ~ Pike & Ponies
Cobwebs & Kittens ~ Clouds & Cockles ~ Snow & Snowdrops
Scent of Roses and all the Woody Woodland smells !
Not only in Cornwall ~ But also Industrial Essex !
And I say to myself \"What A Wonderful World\"
My Fellow Scientists are looking for another PLANET EARTH
In \"The Goldilocks Zone\" but personally I think it\'s a MYTH !
They will only find one if GOD chose to Create another
Living Planet in Our Galaxy or another !
I look around ~ GOD is there
I look through my MICROSCOPE ~ God is there
I look through my TELESCOPE ~ God is there also
In my POEM today \"POWER of the CROSS\"
GOD is there also !
HANDS that Flung Stars into Space
To cruel nails surrended and ALL FOR US !
Thanks FAY ~ GOD is active on MPS TODAY
Your Good Friend as always ~ BRIAN
April 26th, 2018 05:06
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
O LORD MY GOD ~ When I in awesome Wonder
Consider ALL the things your hand has made !
I see the Stars ~ I hear the Rolling Thunder
Your Power throughout the Universe displayed !
Then sings my Soul ~ Creator GOD to YOU
How Great You are ~ How Great You are !
Thanks for Caring & Sharing FAY
Something of the AWE with which we experience
the Wonders of God\'s Creation each & every DAY !
Birds & Bees ~ Forests & Streams ~ Pike & Ponies
Cobwebs & Kittens ~ Clouds & Cockles ~ Snow & Snowdrops
Scent of Roses and all the Woody Woodland smells !
Not only in Cornwall ~ But also Industrial Essex !
And I say to myself \"What A Wonderful World\"
My Fellow Scientists are looking for another PLANET EARTH
In \"The Goldilocks Zone\" but personally I think it\'s a MYTH !
They will only find one if GOD chose to Create another
Living Planet in Our Galaxy or another !
I look around ~ GOD is there
I look through my MICROSCOPE ~ God is there
I look through my TELESCOPE ~ God is there also
In my POEM today \"POWER of the CROSS\"
GOD is there also !
HANDS that Flung Stars into Space
To cruel nails surrended and ALL FOR US !
Thanks FAY ~ GOD is active on MPS TODAY
Your Good Friend as always ~ BRIAN
April 26th, 2018 05:06
AWE.
orchidee said:
A wondermental write Fay - if that is a word?! heehee. Spell-checker doesn\'t like it!
April 26th, 2018 04:51
orchidee said:
A wondermental write Fay - if that is a word?! heehee. Spell-checker doesn\'t like it!
April 26th, 2018 04:51
HEART\'S CORE.
Christina8 said:
I love it! It\'s a great write and I love the repetition at the second line with a twist!
April 24th, 2018 12:00
Christina8 said:
I love it! It\'s a great write and I love the repetition at the second line with a twist!
April 24th, 2018 12:00
HEART\'S CORE.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, the hearts core is the centre of love.
April 24th, 2018 08:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, the hearts core is the centre of love.
April 24th, 2018 08:00
HEART\'S CORE.
Lorna said:
I think you are always living, looking, loving at the heart\'s core Fay..........
April 24th, 2018 04:40
Lorna said:
I think you are always living, looking, loving at the heart\'s core Fay..........
April 24th, 2018 04:40
HEART\'S CORE.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
When we open our Inner Heart ~ Our Heart\'s Core ~ to another person it opens \"A Gateway into Paradise\" which only those who have experienced it understand ! Love the Structure and Sentiment of the Poem ~ Living ~ Looking ~ Loving @ Heart\'s Core ~ SUCHNESS (perfect word !) is Love ~ Heart ~ Spirit that all ......... Life sings with transcendent light ~ and soul weeps no more ~ AMEN Thanks FAY for a powerful testimony to the infinity of TRUE LOVE ~ Yours Brian & Angela XX Please check my tribute to William & Kate and their New Prince ~ Thanks !
April 24th, 2018 03:46
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
When we open our Inner Heart ~ Our Heart\'s Core ~ to another person it opens \"A Gateway into Paradise\" which only those who have experienced it understand ! Love the Structure and Sentiment of the Poem ~ Living ~ Looking ~ Loving @ Heart\'s Core ~ SUCHNESS (perfect word !) is Love ~ Heart ~ Spirit that all ......... Life sings with transcendent light ~ and soul weeps no more ~ AMEN Thanks FAY for a powerful testimony to the infinity of TRUE LOVE ~ Yours Brian & Angela XX Please check my tribute to William & Kate and their New Prince ~ Thanks !
April 24th, 2018 03:46
HEART\'S CORE.
orchidee said:
\'Such\' a good write Fay! Did you know I would say that?! lol.
April 24th, 2018 03:35
orchidee said:
\'Such\' a good write Fay! Did you know I would say that?! lol.
April 24th, 2018 03:35
UNCOVERED.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY ~ For a very descriptive Photo and an elegant Poem ! Thoughts on a discussion on discovering a stone terrace built to surround homesteads and fence in sheep ! Even the homesteads have now disintegrated. We search and mentally build such sites to give us an insight into \"A cliff-top Shepherding Industry !\" In 500 years perhaps archaeologists will search the remains of our homes for clues. A very emotive poem ~ thanks for sharing ~ Yours as always BRIAN
April 23rd, 2018 11:08
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY ~ For a very descriptive Photo and an elegant Poem ! Thoughts on a discussion on discovering a stone terrace built to surround homesteads and fence in sheep ! Even the homesteads have now disintegrated. We search and mentally build such sites to give us an insight into \"A cliff-top Shepherding Industry !\" In 500 years perhaps archaeologists will search the remains of our homes for clues. A very emotive poem ~ thanks for sharing ~ Yours as always BRIAN
April 23rd, 2018 11:08
UNCOVERED.
Michael Edwards said:
Your wonderful language takes us on a great journey - thanks Fay.
April 23rd, 2018 07:55
Michael Edwards said:
Your wonderful language takes us on a great journey - thanks Fay.
April 23rd, 2018 07:55
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