Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.



LOVE\'S GLOW.
onepauly said:

I wish I knew what its like to love another person. my love has always been for the many.

May 1st, 2018 07:21

LOVE\'S GLOW.
Laura🌻 said:

A beautiful write, my dear Fay!
The magical kisses; especially the first ones as Lorna said! Your words are magical...
ā€œ ...for love drives away any petrified heart-chillā€...

~Laura~


May 1st, 2018 07:04

LOVE\'S GLOW.
Lorna said:

First kisses were always magical!

May 1st, 2018 04:42

LOVE\'S GLOW.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Beautiful FAY and a blessed message for TUESDAY MORNING ! With ANGELA & I it was sealed with our first KISS and it has progressed exactly as you describe ! I emailed her a copy and she loved it ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Brian & Angela X Please check my HOT AIR BALLOONS ~ Thanks B.

May 1st, 2018 03:59

LOVE\'S GLOW.
orchidee said:

Better togheter? (in the pic). Together, even! heehee. A fine write Fay.

May 1st, 2018 03:34

BEGINNINGS.
Laura🌻 said:

A truly beautifully written poem, my dear Fay, that evokes our senses to appreciate nature and its surroundings!
You’re so spot on with...
ā€œThere’s nothing like mingling
with Springtime’s beginningsā€.

~Laura~

April 30th, 2018 19:42

BEGINNINGS.
onepauly said:

spring! the best time of the year!

April 30th, 2018 09:48

BEGINNINGS.
Goldfinch60 said:

Oops two.

April 30th, 2018 08:03

BEGINNINGS.
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true Fay, cracking last too lines.

April 30th, 2018 08:03

BEGINNINGS.
Lorna said:

I love your walks showing us England\'s spring with such beautiful verse.......

April 30th, 2018 05:25

BEGINNINGS.
orchidee said:

A fine write Fay. Wish we could wake without icy blasts some days. Surely that wasn\'t our Summer just gone - that heatwave?!

April 30th, 2018 03:06

UNTIED.
Syd said:

Beautiful write Faye. Enjoyed

- Syd

April 27th, 2018 11:08

UNTIED.
onepauly said:

freedom flight.

April 27th, 2018 10:10

UNTIED.
orchidee said:

A fine write Fay. We have some kestrels that swoop around our way. The other birds all fly off when they see them.

April 27th, 2018 07:21

UNTIED.
Lorna said:

Gorgeous depiction of a beautiful bird Fay! I had the privilege to hold one on my arm once at a corporate thingy do where we were supposed to all \"bond\"..... ha ha.... I bonded with the bird. And I\'m with you - let\'s let them all free!

April 27th, 2018 05:35

UNTIED.
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful write Fay, raptors are wonderful to watch, especially in the wild, I have seen many in my forays with nature.

April 27th, 2018 04:04

AWE.
Christina8 said:

Now that the snow has lifted I do live in wonder of the beauty that surrounds--you captured everything so well in your poem! Great write indeed!

April 26th, 2018 17:01

AWE.
onepauly said:

it was tough
but I got through it.
keep them coming.

April 26th, 2018 09:50

AWE.
Goldfinch60 said:

All life should be lived in wonderment Fay. Very good write.

April 26th, 2018 07:56

AWE.
Lorna said:

And now that winter has broken and we are in the garden - the Wonderment is all around us to find again! Hope you had one of your \"wonderment\" walks today!

April 26th, 2018 07:03

AWE.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

O LORD MY GOD ~ When I in awesome Wonder
Consider ALL the things your hand has made !
I see the Stars ~ I hear the Rolling Thunder
Your Power throughout the Universe displayed !
Then sings my Soul ~ Creator GOD to YOU
How Great You are ~ How Great You are !

Thanks for Caring & Sharing FAY
Something of the AWE with which we experience
the Wonders of God\'s Creation each & every DAY !
Birds & Bees ~ Forests & Streams ~ Pike & Ponies
Cobwebs & Kittens ~ Clouds & Cockles ~ Snow & Snowdrops
Scent of Roses and all the Woody Woodland smells !
Not only in Cornwall ~ But also Industrial Essex !
And I say to myself \"What A Wonderful World\"
My Fellow Scientists are looking for another PLANET EARTH
In \"The Goldilocks Zone\" but personally I think it\'s a MYTH !
They will only find one if GOD chose to Create another
Living Planet in Our Galaxy or another !
I look around ~ GOD is there
I look through my MICROSCOPE ~ God is there
I look through my TELESCOPE ~ God is there also
In my POEM today \"POWER of the CROSS\"
GOD is there also !
HANDS that Flung Stars into Space
To cruel nails surrended and ALL FOR US !

Thanks FAY ~ GOD is active on MPS TODAY
Your Good Friend as always ~ BRIAN


April 26th, 2018 05:06

AWE.
orchidee said:

A wondermental write Fay - if that is a word?! heehee. Spell-checker doesn\'t like it!

April 26th, 2018 04:51

HEART\'S CORE.
Christina8 said:

I love it! It\'s a great write and I love the repetition at the second line with a twist!

April 24th, 2018 12:00

HEART\'S CORE.
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write, the hearts core is the centre of love.

April 24th, 2018 08:00

HEART\'S CORE.
Michael Edwards said:

Sweet - perfect words as always Fay.

April 24th, 2018 07:27

HEART\'S CORE.
Lorna said:

I think you are always living, looking, loving at the heart\'s core Fay..........

April 24th, 2018 04:40

HEART\'S CORE.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

When we open our Inner Heart ~ Our Heart\'s Core ~ to another person it opens \"A Gateway into Paradise\" which only those who have experienced it understand ! Love the Structure and Sentiment of the Poem ~ Living ~ Looking ~ Loving @ Heart\'s Core ~ SUCHNESS (perfect word !) is Love ~ Heart ~ Spirit that all ......... Life sings with transcendent light ~ and soul weeps no more ~ AMEN Thanks FAY for a powerful testimony to the infinity of TRUE LOVE ~ Yours Brian & Angela XX Please check my tribute to William & Kate and their New Prince ~ Thanks !

April 24th, 2018 03:46

HEART\'S CORE.
orchidee said:

\'Such\' a good write Fay! Did you know I would say that?! lol.

April 24th, 2018 03:35

UNCOVERED.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS FAY ~ For a very descriptive Photo and an elegant Poem ! Thoughts on a discussion on discovering a stone terrace built to surround homesteads and fence in sheep ! Even the homesteads have now disintegrated. We search and mentally build such sites to give us an insight into \"A cliff-top Shepherding Industry !\" In 500 years perhaps archaeologists will search the remains of our homes for clues. A very emotive poem ~ thanks for sharing ~ Yours as always BRIAN

April 23rd, 2018 11:08

UNCOVERED.
Michael Edwards said:

Your wonderful language takes us on a great journey - thanks Fay.

April 23rd, 2018 07:55



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