Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
CHANGES.
Netashi said:
Change is everything weather, People, Trends, Social Norms, Health, But we can never force ourselves to change we just build upon ourselves. Very pleasant poem Fay keep it up
-Theta
May 4th, 2018 11:45
Netashi said:
Change is everything weather, People, Trends, Social Norms, Health, But we can never force ourselves to change we just build upon ourselves. Very pleasant poem Fay keep it up
-Theta
May 4th, 2018 11:45
CHANGES.
onepauly said:
we all have to accept changes
if we like them or not.
the thing to do is adapt.
May 4th, 2018 10:16
onepauly said:
we all have to accept changes
if we like them or not.
the thing to do is adapt.
May 4th, 2018 10:16
CHANGES.
Lorna said:
This was magical Fay! On very early mornings when we were on our way to horse shows in Vermont the landscape (which is beautiful) was dotted with cows just shifting in the morning mist - exactly as you describe! Just as a funny..... one thing I know about working with cows as opposed to horses..... if a horse steps on your foot, you can swiftly get him off with a poke in the ribs. If a cow stands on your foot, there goes your toenail as you push and push and push........ saw this happen to my friend! ha ha.......
May 4th, 2018 04:57
Lorna said:
This was magical Fay! On very early mornings when we were on our way to horse shows in Vermont the landscape (which is beautiful) was dotted with cows just shifting in the morning mist - exactly as you describe! Just as a funny..... one thing I know about working with cows as opposed to horses..... if a horse steps on your foot, you can swiftly get him off with a poke in the ribs. If a cow stands on your foot, there goes your toenail as you push and push and push........ saw this happen to my friend! ha ha.......
May 4th, 2018 04:57
ON THE RUN.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for sharing the Adventure & Otherness (nice word !) of URBAN LIFE ! Soon more than 50% of the Earths Population will live in cities (nearly 4 billion and rising !) largely out of necessity to earn a crust ! I am always horrified at soem of the conditions they live in ! However having lived in Cities in the UK (which is a very affluent Country !) I can see the attraction ! Work ~ Sport ~ Entertainment ~ Restaurants ~ Multi-Ethnicity ~ Education ~ Art ~ Opportunity etc compared with Rural Living ! I have never lived in a Village but I have lived in Small Towns and as I get older ~ and think of raising a Family I prefer a Small Town to a Big City especially as lack of respect for the Law and Personal Abuse ~ seems to be on the increase ! Thanks for caring ~ Yours as always ~ BRIAN !
May 3rd, 2018 18:40
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for sharing the Adventure & Otherness (nice word !) of URBAN LIFE ! Soon more than 50% of the Earths Population will live in cities (nearly 4 billion and rising !) largely out of necessity to earn a crust ! I am always horrified at soem of the conditions they live in ! However having lived in Cities in the UK (which is a very affluent Country !) I can see the attraction ! Work ~ Sport ~ Entertainment ~ Restaurants ~ Multi-Ethnicity ~ Education ~ Art ~ Opportunity etc compared with Rural Living ! I have never lived in a Village but I have lived in Small Towns and as I get older ~ and think of raising a Family I prefer a Small Town to a Big City especially as lack of respect for the Law and Personal Abuse ~ seems to be on the increase ! Thanks for caring ~ Yours as always ~ BRIAN !
May 3rd, 2018 18:40
ON THE RUN.
Lauraš» said:
My dear Fay,
The hustle and bustle of the city!
Use to love it...not as much any more! I guess youth has a lot to do with! Now Iām more of a city tourist than a city resident!
Your metaphorically rich write is extraordinary! I love reading your writings more than youāll ever know! Thank you for sharing your gift š!
~Laura~
May 3rd, 2018 13:45
Lauraš» said:
My dear Fay,
The hustle and bustle of the city!
Use to love it...not as much any more! I guess youth has a lot to do with! Now Iām more of a city tourist than a city resident!
Your metaphorically rich write is extraordinary! I love reading your writings more than youāll ever know! Thank you for sharing your gift š!
~Laura~
May 3rd, 2018 13:45
ON THE RUN.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Fay, I was there walking down the crowded streets.
May 3rd, 2018 07:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Fay, I was there walking down the crowded streets.
May 3rd, 2018 07:57
ON THE RUN.
Michael Edwards said:
When I first left London I would have done anything to return but now I wouldn\'t go back for anything. Nonetheless I still think of it as home and get a buzz when I visit. The magic of it all is caught in yet another fine write Fay.
May 3rd, 2018 07:46
Michael Edwards said:
When I first left London I would have done anything to return but now I wouldn\'t go back for anything. Nonetheless I still think of it as home and get a buzz when I visit. The magic of it all is caught in yet another fine write Fay.
May 3rd, 2018 07:46
ON THE RUN.
onepauly said:
this is something.
to enjoy city life.
among its negative aspects.
May 3rd, 2018 07:04
onepauly said:
this is something.
to enjoy city life.
among its negative aspects.
May 3rd, 2018 07:04
ON THE RUN.
Lorna said:
Yes this immediately brings to life the hum of the city (in my case New York) which gives you a thrill the minute you are in the hustle...... possibilities seem endless...... but then it sort of swallows me up.... great description Fay!
May 3rd, 2018 05:50
Lorna said:
Yes this immediately brings to life the hum of the city (in my case New York) which gives you a thrill the minute you are in the hustle...... possibilities seem endless...... but then it sort of swallows me up.... great description Fay!
May 3rd, 2018 05:50
LOVE\'S GLOW.
Netashi said:
Love is the most beautiful thing in this world and this poem is also beautiful.
Great poem Slimm, keep it up
-Theta
May 1st, 2018 11:25
Netashi said:
Love is the most beautiful thing in this world and this poem is also beautiful.
Great poem Slimm, keep it up
-Theta
May 1st, 2018 11:25
LOVE\'S GLOW.
onepauly said:
I wish I knew what its like to love another person. my love has always been for the many.
May 1st, 2018 07:21
onepauly said:
I wish I knew what its like to love another person. my love has always been for the many.
May 1st, 2018 07:21
LOVE\'S GLOW.
Lauraš» said:
A beautiful write, my dear Fay!
The magical kisses; especially the first ones as Lorna said! Your words are magical...
ā ...for love drives away any petrified heart-chillā...
~Laura~
May 1st, 2018 07:04
Lauraš» said:
A beautiful write, my dear Fay!
The magical kisses; especially the first ones as Lorna said! Your words are magical...
ā ...for love drives away any petrified heart-chillā...
~Laura~
May 1st, 2018 07:04
LOVE\'S GLOW.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Beautiful FAY and a blessed message for TUESDAY MORNING ! With ANGELA & I it was sealed with our first KISS and it has progressed exactly as you describe ! I emailed her a copy and she loved it ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Brian & Angela X Please check my HOT AIR BALLOONS ~ Thanks B.
May 1st, 2018 03:59
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Beautiful FAY and a blessed message for TUESDAY MORNING ! With ANGELA & I it was sealed with our first KISS and it has progressed exactly as you describe ! I emailed her a copy and she loved it ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Brian & Angela X Please check my HOT AIR BALLOONS ~ Thanks B.
May 1st, 2018 03:59
LOVE\'S GLOW.
orchidee said:
Better togheter? (in the pic). Together, even! heehee. A fine write Fay.
May 1st, 2018 03:34
orchidee said:
Better togheter? (in the pic). Together, even! heehee. A fine write Fay.
May 1st, 2018 03:34
BEGINNINGS.
Lauraš» said:
A truly beautifully written poem, my dear Fay, that evokes our senses to appreciate nature and its surroundings!
Youāre so spot on with...
āThereās nothing like mingling
with Springtimeās beginningsā.
~Laura~
April 30th, 2018 19:42
Lauraš» said:
A truly beautifully written poem, my dear Fay, that evokes our senses to appreciate nature and its surroundings!
Youāre so spot on with...
āThereās nothing like mingling
with Springtimeās beginningsā.
~Laura~
April 30th, 2018 19:42
BEGINNINGS.
Lorna said:
I love your walks showing us England\'s spring with such beautiful verse.......
April 30th, 2018 05:25
Lorna said:
I love your walks showing us England\'s spring with such beautiful verse.......
April 30th, 2018 05:25
BEGINNINGS.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Wish we could wake without icy blasts some days. Surely that wasn\'t our Summer just gone - that heatwave?!
April 30th, 2018 03:06
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Wish we could wake without icy blasts some days. Surely that wasn\'t our Summer just gone - that heatwave?!
April 30th, 2018 03:06
UNTIED.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. We have some kestrels that swoop around our way. The other birds all fly off when they see them.
April 27th, 2018 07:21
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. We have some kestrels that swoop around our way. The other birds all fly off when they see them.
April 27th, 2018 07:21
UNTIED.
Lorna said:
Gorgeous depiction of a beautiful bird Fay! I had the privilege to hold one on my arm once at a corporate thingy do where we were supposed to all \"bond\"..... ha ha.... I bonded with the bird. And I\'m with you - let\'s let them all free!
April 27th, 2018 05:35
Lorna said:
Gorgeous depiction of a beautiful bird Fay! I had the privilege to hold one on my arm once at a corporate thingy do where we were supposed to all \"bond\"..... ha ha.... I bonded with the bird. And I\'m with you - let\'s let them all free!
April 27th, 2018 05:35
UNTIED.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Fay, raptors are wonderful to watch, especially in the wild, I have seen many in my forays with nature.
April 27th, 2018 04:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Fay, raptors are wonderful to watch, especially in the wild, I have seen many in my forays with nature.
April 27th, 2018 04:04
AWE.
Christina8 said:
Now that the snow has lifted I do live in wonder of the beauty that surrounds--you captured everything so well in your poem! Great write indeed!
April 26th, 2018 17:01
Christina8 said:
Now that the snow has lifted I do live in wonder of the beauty that surrounds--you captured everything so well in your poem! Great write indeed!
April 26th, 2018 17:01
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