Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
EPITAPH.
dusk arising said:
Sadly i have been that driver and its a sickening event.
But too i remember one early frosty morning in the cotswolds our taxi driver stopped dead and we were all delighted to see mother fox cross the road ahead of us followed by her five beautiful cubs. Now there\'s a memory which will stay with me, as do the memories of those i sadly killed.
June 8th, 2018 11:57
dusk arising said:
Sadly i have been that driver and its a sickening event.
But too i remember one early frosty morning in the cotswolds our taxi driver stopped dead and we were all delighted to see mother fox cross the road ahead of us followed by her five beautiful cubs. Now there\'s a memory which will stay with me, as do the memories of those i sadly killed.
June 8th, 2018 11:57
EPITAPH.
orchidee said:
A fine and sad write Fay. I moved a dead fox once. It was embarrassing though. I was in the country and took it into a pub and asked if they could bury it. Erm, it was a bit pongy by then!
I at least move a dead animal to the side of the road, so that it\'s not awfully squashed repeatedly, even though it\'s dead.
June 8th, 2018 11:31
orchidee said:
A fine and sad write Fay. I moved a dead fox once. It was embarrassing though. I was in the country and took it into a pub and asked if they could bury it. Erm, it was a bit pongy by then!
I at least move a dead animal to the side of the road, so that it\'s not awfully squashed repeatedly, even though it\'s dead.
June 8th, 2018 11:31
EPITAPH.
Lorna said:
How sad and how beautiful she is - even in death..... hopefully it was very quick.........
June 8th, 2018 07:49
Lorna said:
How sad and how beautiful she is - even in death..... hopefully it was very quick.........
June 8th, 2018 07:49
MEMORY\'S PEARL.
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
An exquisite verse!
You’re an incredible poetess!
This has touched every fiber of my being due to a very personal experience of long ago! (I’ve often called them my missing years.) A once in a lifetime experience!
This quote sums it up
for me...
“She knew only
once close romance of a life-time
therefore memory’s
pearl she now wears with a smile.”
~Laura~
June 7th, 2018 11:26
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
An exquisite verse!
You’re an incredible poetess!
This has touched every fiber of my being due to a very personal experience of long ago! (I’ve often called them my missing years.) A once in a lifetime experience!
This quote sums it up
for me...
“She knew only
once close romance of a life-time
therefore memory’s
pearl she now wears with a smile.”
~Laura~
June 7th, 2018 11:26
MEMORY\'S PEARL.
Heartwriter said:
It is quite the jewel to find ever lasting love. Beautifully pictured in words.
June 7th, 2018 09:24
Heartwriter said:
It is quite the jewel to find ever lasting love. Beautifully pictured in words.
June 7th, 2018 09:24
I AM CLOUD.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful, Fay, I spend a lot of time looking up and cloud watching, I will have to look out for you up there.
June 6th, 2018 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful, Fay, I spend a lot of time looking up and cloud watching, I will have to look out for you up there.
June 6th, 2018 00:44
I AM CLOUD.
Lorna said:
Fay this is absolutely inspired! Wonderful poem and imagery and builds the cloud\'s hidden \"anger\" in a masterful way!
June 5th, 2018 05:39
Lorna said:
Fay this is absolutely inspired! Wonderful poem and imagery and builds the cloud\'s hidden \"anger\" in a masterful way!
June 5th, 2018 05:39
INSIDE ME.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Fay, that core inside us is always stable.
June 5th, 2018 00:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Fay, that core inside us is always stable.
June 5th, 2018 00:20
INSIDE ME.
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
An exquisite write!
One of my favorites...
“Grind etches diamonds in cushions of patience.” Superb!
~Laura~
June 4th, 2018 19:41
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
An exquisite write!
One of my favorites...
“Grind etches diamonds in cushions of patience.” Superb!
~Laura~
June 4th, 2018 19:41
INSIDE ME.
dusk arising said:
Another jewel from the pearl which you are.
Time - what is that? The rhythm to which the tides exercise?
Wisdom - what is that? Achievement of no longer being foolish?
Stone within you - perhaps. But today we see only one facet. In caring hands the jewel could be \'adjusted\' allowing the inner beauty, always there, to radiate.
A prize indeed!
June 4th, 2018 16:12
dusk arising said:
Another jewel from the pearl which you are.
Time - what is that? The rhythm to which the tides exercise?
Wisdom - what is that? Achievement of no longer being foolish?
Stone within you - perhaps. But today we see only one facet. In caring hands the jewel could be \'adjusted\' allowing the inner beauty, always there, to radiate.
A prize indeed!
June 4th, 2018 16:12
INSIDE ME.
dusk arising said:
Another jewel from the pearl which you are.
Time - what is that? The rhythm to which the tides exercise?
Wisdom - what is that? Achievement of no longer being foolish?
Stone within you - perhaps. But today we see only one facet. In caring hands the jewel could be \'adjusted\' allowing the inner beauty, always there, to radiate.
A prize indeed!
June 4th, 2018 11:33
dusk arising said:
Another jewel from the pearl which you are.
Time - what is that? The rhythm to which the tides exercise?
Wisdom - what is that? Achievement of no longer being foolish?
Stone within you - perhaps. But today we see only one facet. In caring hands the jewel could be \'adjusted\' allowing the inner beauty, always there, to radiate.
A prize indeed!
June 4th, 2018 11:33
INSIDE ME.
Lorna said:
Oh Fay - I love \"There is stone inside me that knows stone\" - tells of hard gained knowledge that comes with life. Aren\'t stones magical - when you break one open, you see what no one has seen for millions of years - wow.......
June 4th, 2018 07:35
Lorna said:
Oh Fay - I love \"There is stone inside me that knows stone\" - tells of hard gained knowledge that comes with life. Aren\'t stones magical - when you break one open, you see what no one has seen for millions of years - wow.......
June 4th, 2018 07:35
LET US ..........
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ This is so beautiful it made me cry ! I am a morning person (still working !) and I achieved pole position (6am) once on MPS ! When I\'m on Holiday I get up as early as possible to milk every minute ! Love the positivity in the final verse !
Using light\'s fire to begin birth walz
let us throw off nocturnal attire
and learn to adorn new life
by putting on MORNING
A great MANTRA thanks for sharing
Yours as always ~ BRIAN !
Please check my Braw Brown Bears ~ B
May 31st, 2018 06:08
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ This is so beautiful it made me cry ! I am a morning person (still working !) and I achieved pole position (6am) once on MPS ! When I\'m on Holiday I get up as early as possible to milk every minute ! Love the positivity in the final verse !
Using light\'s fire to begin birth walz
let us throw off nocturnal attire
and learn to adorn new life
by putting on MORNING
A great MANTRA thanks for sharing
Yours as always ~ BRIAN !
Please check my Braw Brown Bears ~ B
May 31st, 2018 06:08
LET US ..........
Nicholas Browning said:
I\'d pay a hefty weight in gold to hear the song that plays inside your head when you write. Everyone has one, I think. Lovely poem.
May 31st, 2018 05:55
Nicholas Browning said:
I\'d pay a hefty weight in gold to hear the song that plays inside your head when you write. Everyone has one, I think. Lovely poem.
May 31st, 2018 05:55
LET US ..........
Michael Edwards said:
A super write Fay - let us all put on morning
May 31st, 2018 04:46
Michael Edwards said:
A super write Fay - let us all put on morning
May 31st, 2018 04:46
DILLIGENCE.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Diligence bred in nature is dignified with perception of nature. Endless effort to satisfy motivates mind. Through feeding it is expected that young feathers will come up soon. Behaviour of each kid-bird is uncontrolled. Parental responses are humbly adored. This poem is also outstanding natural poem and perception motivates mind through reading. Imagery comes alive like a living scene of nature.
May 26th, 2018 22:01
Pintu Mahakul said:
Diligence bred in nature is dignified with perception of nature. Endless effort to satisfy motivates mind. Through feeding it is expected that young feathers will come up soon. Behaviour of each kid-bird is uncontrolled. Parental responses are humbly adored. This poem is also outstanding natural poem and perception motivates mind through reading. Imagery comes alive like a living scene of nature.
May 26th, 2018 22:01
LIFESAVING.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Performance of humanity depends on glittering of inner values and ethics. This is based on light of wisdom that we get from family, nature, universe and God. Invisibly light travels so fast to discover mystery of universe. But mind travels much faster than light to perceive every wonder. Lower or higher it does not matter. Shining entrance of light matters a lot. An interesting poem is beautifully written is outstanding one.
May 26th, 2018 21:53
Pintu Mahakul said:
Performance of humanity depends on glittering of inner values and ethics. This is based on light of wisdom that we get from family, nature, universe and God. Invisibly light travels so fast to discover mystery of universe. But mind travels much faster than light to perceive every wonder. Lower or higher it does not matter. Shining entrance of light matters a lot. An interesting poem is beautifully written is outstanding one.
May 26th, 2018 21:53
DILLIGENCE.
w c said:
Thanks, Fay, for this beautiful poem. I have a special thing for birds.
May 25th, 2018 18:50
w c said:
Thanks, Fay, for this beautiful poem. I have a special thing for birds.
May 25th, 2018 18:50
DILLIGENCE.
Michael Edwards said:
There is so much we can learn from nature - a fine poem recording one of its wonders.
May 25th, 2018 06:04
Michael Edwards said:
There is so much we can learn from nature - a fine poem recording one of its wonders.
May 25th, 2018 06:04
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