Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
FIRST BALLAD.
Laura🌻 said:
A fine write, my dear Fay!
You chose a great pic to accentuate your fine write! It reminds me of my maternal grandfather’s workshop! Loved to watch him create his wooden pieces! I was very young at the time, but I can still remember the feeling! Everything in his house was made by him!
~Laura~
April 7th, 2018 15:40
Laura🌻 said:
A fine write, my dear Fay!
You chose a great pic to accentuate your fine write! It reminds me of my maternal grandfather’s workshop! Loved to watch him create his wooden pieces! I was very young at the time, but I can still remember the feeling! Everything in his house was made by him!
~Laura~
April 7th, 2018 15:40
FIRST BALLAD.
MaddieJ said:
Absolutely splendid. I work with carpenters and woodworkers and this resonated for me. Thanks for sharing such a descriptive and creative piece!
April 7th, 2018 10:21
MaddieJ said:
Absolutely splendid. I work with carpenters and woodworkers and this resonated for me. Thanks for sharing such a descriptive and creative piece!
April 7th, 2018 10:21
FIRST BALLAD.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Are they chefs, with those hats? I wish I would shut up! lol.
April 7th, 2018 06:46
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Are they chefs, with those hats? I wish I would shut up! lol.
April 7th, 2018 06:46
FIRST BALLAD.
Lorna said:
I could smell the wood shavings in the workshop Fay and the excitement of the young apprentice..... such a beautiful picture - both word and sketch.......
April 7th, 2018 04:01
Lorna said:
I could smell the wood shavings in the workshop Fay and the excitement of the young apprentice..... such a beautiful picture - both word and sketch.......
April 7th, 2018 04:01
FIRST BALLAD.
Daveyboyz said:
Evocative of times gone by, a master of craft taking an apprentice built some special relationships. Nicely written...
April 7th, 2018 03:54
Daveyboyz said:
Evocative of times gone by, a master of craft taking an apprentice built some special relationships. Nicely written...
April 7th, 2018 03:54
FIRST BALLAD.
Michael Edwards said:
Fay - I just love this - one of your best - it tells a great story and carried it with me every word of the read.
April 7th, 2018 02:48
Michael Edwards said:
Fay - I just love this - one of your best - it tells a great story and carried it with me every word of the read.
April 7th, 2018 02:48
TOGETHERNESS.
Lorna said:
Delightful Fay! And may they always be together and not like the \"twin towers\" that came tumbling down.......
April 6th, 2018 05:40
Lorna said:
Delightful Fay! And may they always be together and not like the \"twin towers\" that came tumbling down.......
April 6th, 2018 05:40
TOGETHERNESS.
Goldfinch60 said:
Togetherness is so wonderful and it shows in this very good write.
April 5th, 2018 08:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Togetherness is so wonderful and it shows in this very good write.
April 5th, 2018 08:12
TOGETHERNESS.
Laura🌻 said:
I love this poem, my dear Fay!
It’s so beautifully written! It flows like liquid gold! Metaphorically rich...a delightful read!
~Laura~
April 5th, 2018 07:14
Laura🌻 said:
I love this poem, my dear Fay!
It’s so beautifully written! It flows like liquid gold! Metaphorically rich...a delightful read!
~Laura~
April 5th, 2018 07:14
Boisterous.
Caring dove said:
brilliant fay! :-) i especially love these lines
Seized with a madness,
sea spitting pebbles.
Sand and weed shaken
like rats in the air.
Tumbling excitement
breakers rise restless.
Desperately try flinging
drops from their hair.
i love your use of words! a bit similar to another one of yours.. very good.. i enjoyed
April 4th, 2018 03:26
Caring dove said:
brilliant fay! :-) i especially love these lines
Seized with a madness,
sea spitting pebbles.
Sand and weed shaken
like rats in the air.
Tumbling excitement
breakers rise restless.
Desperately try flinging
drops from their hair.
i love your use of words! a bit similar to another one of yours.. very good.. i enjoyed
April 4th, 2018 03:26
Wind-Demons.
Caring dove said:
i really enjoyed reading this fay .. .i love how you referred to the wind as some \'\' ravenous beast \'\', scaring people , making them want to hide.
these lines stood out for me and were my favourite !
the night heaves
with zealous wind-demons cavorting
in lace-caps, sandy-socks,
grit-filled ribbons
and the saltiest long seaweed frocks.
brilliant wording fay .. love this
April 4th, 2018 03:01
Caring dove said:
i really enjoyed reading this fay .. .i love how you referred to the wind as some \'\' ravenous beast \'\', scaring people , making them want to hide.
these lines stood out for me and were my favourite !
the night heaves
with zealous wind-demons cavorting
in lace-caps, sandy-socks,
grit-filled ribbons
and the saltiest long seaweed frocks.
brilliant wording fay .. love this
April 4th, 2018 03:01
Paired.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good love write Fay, that love only increases with time.
April 4th, 2018 00:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good love write Fay, that love only increases with time.
April 4th, 2018 00:58
Paired.
Lorna said:
Loved this and especially: They stood in awe
of what they knew had begun,
for outside of time
they learnt nothing but new.
What a wonderful line Fay!
April 3rd, 2018 05:46
Lorna said:
Loved this and especially: They stood in awe
of what they knew had begun,
for outside of time
they learnt nothing but new.
What a wonderful line Fay!
April 3rd, 2018 05:46
MYSTERIOUS.
Christina8 said:
Lovely write about rainbows, as only you can, Fay!
April 2nd, 2018 17:36
Christina8 said:
Lovely write about rainbows, as only you can, Fay!
April 2nd, 2018 17:36
MYSTERIOUS.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I know the day it first appeared, so I say, as I\'m millions of years old! heehee.
April 2nd, 2018 09:49
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I know the day it first appeared, so I say, as I\'m millions of years old! heehee.
April 2nd, 2018 09:49
MYSTERIOUS.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for your ever new and inventive Poets touch ! Who would have thought that the mechanical refraction of white light into (R O Y G B I V) by the prismatic raindrop ~ could ever stir such poetical musings ! But it did because FAY saw it ! Thanks for a remarkable POEM # from the pen of a very elegant Lady. I have a vision FAY of you writing all these awesome Odes on vellum with a quill pen ~ before moving into the 21st C and sharing them with us lesser Poets on your vintage PC ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours as always BRIAN. Please check my 14 Stations and my new Fusion CHOCOLATE ~ thanks B.
April 2nd, 2018 08:22
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for your ever new and inventive Poets touch ! Who would have thought that the mechanical refraction of white light into (R O Y G B I V) by the prismatic raindrop ~ could ever stir such poetical musings ! But it did because FAY saw it ! Thanks for a remarkable POEM # from the pen of a very elegant Lady. I have a vision FAY of you writing all these awesome Odes on vellum with a quill pen ~ before moving into the 21st C and sharing them with us lesser Poets on your vintage PC ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours as always BRIAN. Please check my 14 Stations and my new Fusion CHOCOLATE ~ thanks B.
April 2nd, 2018 08:22
WISELY BOUGHT.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Erm, I can\'t say the third line properly after a drop or two of s-s-s-sherry! (I\'m almost tee-total really).
April 1st, 2018 08:06
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Erm, I can\'t say the third line properly after a drop or two of s-s-s-sherry! (I\'m almost tee-total really).
April 1st, 2018 08:06
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