Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
ALLURE.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
CORNWALL ~ A Perfect Peninsular ~ Timeless & Touched by the hand of God ! Thanks FAY for perfection in Poem \'n Pic and reminding us ~ that in essence ~ MPS is a POETRY SITE ! How a Poem ends is equally as important as its start & middle ! I love you final verse !
Storms have engraved a raw majesty
on Cornwall\'s honed face
that once gazed on draws lovers back
Angela & I have enjoyed Cornwall separately and together and it always draws us back ~ again & again ~ AMEN ! We love you FAY for being a perfect poet and sharing freely with us ALL ~ Yours ANGELA & BRIAN XOX
April 12th, 2018 06:37
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
CORNWALL ~ A Perfect Peninsular ~ Timeless & Touched by the hand of God ! Thanks FAY for perfection in Poem \'n Pic and reminding us ~ that in essence ~ MPS is a POETRY SITE ! How a Poem ends is equally as important as its start & middle ! I love you final verse !
Storms have engraved a raw majesty
on Cornwall\'s honed face
that once gazed on draws lovers back
Angela & I have enjoyed Cornwall separately and together and it always draws us back ~ again & again ~ AMEN ! We love you FAY for being a perfect poet and sharing freely with us ALL ~ Yours ANGELA & BRIAN XOX
April 12th, 2018 06:37
ALLURE.
Michael Edwards said:
Ditto everything said before me - you\'re the ultimate wordsmith Fay.
April 12th, 2018 04:42
Michael Edwards said:
Ditto everything said before me - you\'re the ultimate wordsmith Fay.
April 12th, 2018 04:42
ALLURE.
Lorna said:
Beautiful poem and I am in awe of the views of your coast that you share with us.........
April 12th, 2018 04:36
Lorna said:
Beautiful poem and I am in awe of the views of your coast that you share with us.........
April 12th, 2018 04:36
ALLURE.
Daveyboyz said:
Well described and a more than a couple astoundingly assembled lines.
April 12th, 2018 03:58
Daveyboyz said:
Well described and a more than a couple astoundingly assembled lines.
April 12th, 2018 03:58
ALLURE.
Nicholas Browning said:
A perfect title. It lived up to its name. Your sense for description and making things seem almost visible is astounding. Well done.
April 12th, 2018 03:44
Nicholas Browning said:
A perfect title. It lived up to its name. Your sense for description and making things seem almost visible is astounding. Well done.
April 12th, 2018 03:44
DECEPTION.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ideally FAY ~ Each child born into this World should enjoy a loving upbringing with its Birth Mother & Genetic Father ! Because MEN don\'t get Physically Pregnant ~ The Girls they impregnate often end us a Single Parents and have to bear the Responsibility of Child rearing alone without the support of the Father. Worse still they are often driven to choose ABORTION a the most most appropriate answer to a difficult situation ! I am PRO-LIFE Thanks for raising this dilemma which always greatly disadvantages the Female. Thanks for caring ~ BRIAN
April 11th, 2018 17:32
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ideally FAY ~ Each child born into this World should enjoy a loving upbringing with its Birth Mother & Genetic Father ! Because MEN don\'t get Physically Pregnant ~ The Girls they impregnate often end us a Single Parents and have to bear the Responsibility of Child rearing alone without the support of the Father. Worse still they are often driven to choose ABORTION a the most most appropriate answer to a difficult situation ! I am PRO-LIFE Thanks for raising this dilemma which always greatly disadvantages the Female. Thanks for caring ~ BRIAN
April 11th, 2018 17:32
DECEPTION.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ideally FAY ~ Each child born into this World should enjoy a loving upbringing with its Birth Mother & Genetic Father ! Because MEN don\'t get Physically Pregnant ~ The Girls they impregnate often end us a Single Parents and have to bear the Responsibility of Child rearing alone without the support of the Father. Worse still they are often driven to choose ABORTION a the most most appropriate answer to a difficult situation ! I am PRO-LIFE Thanks for raising this dilemma which always greatly disadvantages the Female. Thanks for caring ~ BRIAN
April 11th, 2018 17:32
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ideally FAY ~ Each child born into this World should enjoy a loving upbringing with its Birth Mother & Genetic Father ! Because MEN don\'t get Physically Pregnant ~ The Girls they impregnate often end us a Single Parents and have to bear the Responsibility of Child rearing alone without the support of the Father. Worse still they are often driven to choose ABORTION a the most most appropriate answer to a difficult situation ! I am PRO-LIFE Thanks for raising this dilemma which always greatly disadvantages the Female. Thanks for caring ~ BRIAN
April 11th, 2018 17:32
DECEPTION.
Christina8 said:
Such a sad story but very well written. SOME men!! Great job Fay!
April 11th, 2018 12:08
Christina8 said:
Such a sad story but very well written. SOME men!! Great job Fay!
April 11th, 2018 12:08
DECEPTION.
Goldfinch60 said:
So sad, these type of man should be ***************ed Enter your own word,!
April 11th, 2018 08:20
Goldfinch60 said:
So sad, these type of man should be ***************ed Enter your own word,!
April 11th, 2018 08:20
DECEPTION.
Michael Edwards said:
So cruel and sadly this situation will continue.
April 11th, 2018 06:13
Michael Edwards said:
So cruel and sadly this situation will continue.
April 11th, 2018 06:13
SUNDAY WAYS.
Lorna said:
After: more creamy helpings of sweet fruit pie...... I am now dreading back to work on Monday! Great write1
April 11th, 2018 04:59
Lorna said:
After: more creamy helpings of sweet fruit pie...... I am now dreading back to work on Monday! Great write1
April 11th, 2018 04:59
DECEPTION.
Lorna said:
The old story! There should be a warning label on some men........
April 11th, 2018 04:10
Lorna said:
The old story! There should be a warning label on some men........
April 11th, 2018 04:10
DECEPTION.
Nicholas Browning said:
This cut deep. A wonderful, thought enriching piece.
April 11th, 2018 03:23
Nicholas Browning said:
This cut deep. A wonderful, thought enriching piece.
April 11th, 2018 03:23
SUNDAY WAYS.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, those Sundays were so special.
April 10th, 2018 00:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, those Sundays were so special.
April 10th, 2018 00:26
SUNDAY WAYS.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL FAY ~ Memories of the Old Fashioned Sunday ! Alas the peace and tranquility and the traditional Church Service and Sunday Lunch etc have been replaced by Shopping trips ~ dining at the Harvester and the user friendly radio replaced by the \"must be watched & listened to\" TV ! When I became a teen (1996) most of what you describe had disappeared ~ no time for meditation ~ Sunday is no longer a \"Day of Rest\". Thanks for sharing ~ yours BRIAN.
April 9th, 2018 05:54
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL FAY ~ Memories of the Old Fashioned Sunday ! Alas the peace and tranquility and the traditional Church Service and Sunday Lunch etc have been replaced by Shopping trips ~ dining at the Harvester and the user friendly radio replaced by the \"must be watched & listened to\" TV ! When I became a teen (1996) most of what you describe had disappeared ~ no time for meditation ~ Sunday is no longer a \"Day of Rest\". Thanks for sharing ~ yours BRIAN.
April 9th, 2018 05:54
SUNDAY WAYS.
Daveyboyz said:
I love the language, the exuberance of your verbosity is breathtaking and I like the sound of that fruit pie :)
April 9th, 2018 05:42
Daveyboyz said:
I love the language, the exuberance of your verbosity is breathtaking and I like the sound of that fruit pie :)
April 9th, 2018 05:42
FLIMSY WONDERS.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words.
Whenever you see a feather you know an Angel has been near.
April 9th, 2018 02:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words.
Whenever you see a feather you know an Angel has been near.
April 9th, 2018 02:09
FLIMSY WONDERS.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ The structure of feathers and their role in flight ~ thermal protection and waterproofing etc is a very academic but very rewarding field of study ! Birds could fly long before Man but we can learn much about Astronautics by studying Birds ! Even a single Feather is a miracle and I always collect them when I find them. Delicate photo and an elegant Poem. Because there are Birds ~ there must be a Creator ~ AMEN ~ Yours BRIAN.
April 8th, 2018 09:51
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ The structure of feathers and their role in flight ~ thermal protection and waterproofing etc is a very academic but very rewarding field of study ! Birds could fly long before Man but we can learn much about Astronautics by studying Birds ! Even a single Feather is a miracle and I always collect them when I find them. Delicate photo and an elegant Poem. Because there are Birds ~ there must be a Creator ~ AMEN ~ Yours BRIAN.
April 8th, 2018 09:51
FLIMSY WONDERS.
Michael Edwards said:
Some wonderful lines but then there always are in your poems - fine work fay.
April 8th, 2018 09:09
Michael Edwards said:
Some wonderful lines but then there always are in your poems - fine work fay.
April 8th, 2018 09:09
FLIMSY WONDERS.
Lorna said:
I love feathers!! In Amy Tan\'s Joy Luck Club the best quote (to me) is \"This feather comes from afar and brings with it all my good intentions\".... they are magical little messengers...... when I find them on the floor I think someone I love who died is speaking to me........
April 8th, 2018 05:13
Lorna said:
I love feathers!! In Amy Tan\'s Joy Luck Club the best quote (to me) is \"This feather comes from afar and brings with it all my good intentions\".... they are magical little messengers...... when I find them on the floor I think someone I love who died is speaking to me........
April 8th, 2018 05:13
FIRST BALLAD.
Goldfinch60 said:
I was sitting their with you Fay, may your baton always produce fine words like these.
April 8th, 2018 00:21
Goldfinch60 said:
I was sitting their with you Fay, may your baton always produce fine words like these.
April 8th, 2018 00:21
FIRST BALLAD.
MendedFences27 said:
I will join the chorus and say that this is a well crafted piece. The link from wood to music is apropos. Think of the guitar, violin, cello, or bass; and then, there are the woodwinds, which at one time were wooden instruments. Certainly the conceptual thought of both creators of music and. say. a piece of furniture is on a par. A great first ballad. It held my interest from the get-go, and reminded me of youthful days working in a carpenters shop. Wow! A storyteller is born. Loved it. - Phil A.
April 7th, 2018 21:53
MendedFences27 said:
I will join the chorus and say that this is a well crafted piece. The link from wood to music is apropos. Think of the guitar, violin, cello, or bass; and then, there are the woodwinds, which at one time were wooden instruments. Certainly the conceptual thought of both creators of music and. say. a piece of furniture is on a par. A great first ballad. It held my interest from the get-go, and reminded me of youthful days working in a carpenters shop. Wow! A storyteller is born. Loved it. - Phil A.
April 7th, 2018 21:53
FIRST BALLAD.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ A GOOD POEM should tell a GOOD STORY ~ and yours is an EXCELLENT POEM ! There is always a melody being played out in busy Carpenter\'s Shop and I have often heard it and even a Carpenter playing BACH on a Musical Saw. You have captured the nuance perfectly in this nostalgic Poem \'n Pic ~ Thanks for sharing ~ Your MPS Friend ~ BRIAN
April 7th, 2018 17:32
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ A GOOD POEM should tell a GOOD STORY ~ and yours is an EXCELLENT POEM ! There is always a melody being played out in busy Carpenter\'s Shop and I have often heard it and even a Carpenter playing BACH on a Musical Saw. You have captured the nuance perfectly in this nostalgic Poem \'n Pic ~ Thanks for sharing ~ Your MPS Friend ~ BRIAN
April 7th, 2018 17:32
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