Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.



LOVE\'S GLOW.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Beautiful FAY and a blessed message for TUESDAY MORNING ! With ANGELA & I it was sealed with our first KISS and it has progressed exactly as you describe ! I emailed her a copy and she loved it ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Brian & Angela X Please check my HOT AIR BALLOONS ~ Thanks B.

May 1st, 2018 03:59

LOVE\'S GLOW.
orchidee said:

Better togheter? (in the pic). Together, even! heehee. A fine write Fay.

May 1st, 2018 03:34

BEGINNINGS.
LaurašŸŒ» said:

A truly beautifully written poem, my dear Fay, that evokes our senses to appreciate nature and its surroundings!
Youā€™re so spot on with...
ā€œThereā€™s nothing like mingling
with Springtimeā€™s beginningsā€.

~Laura~

April 30th, 2018 19:42

BEGINNINGS.
onepauly said:

spring! the best time of the year!

April 30th, 2018 09:48

BEGINNINGS.
Goldfinch60 said:

Oops two.

April 30th, 2018 08:03

BEGINNINGS.
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true Fay, cracking last too lines.

April 30th, 2018 08:03

BEGINNINGS.
Lorna said:

I love your walks showing us England\'s spring with such beautiful verse.......

April 30th, 2018 05:25

BEGINNINGS.
orchidee said:

A fine write Fay. Wish we could wake without icy blasts some days. Surely that wasn\'t our Summer just gone - that heatwave?!

April 30th, 2018 03:06

UNTIED.
Syd said:

Beautiful write Faye. Enjoyed

- Syd

April 27th, 2018 11:08

UNTIED.
onepauly said:

freedom flight.

April 27th, 2018 10:10

UNTIED.
orchidee said:

A fine write Fay. We have some kestrels that swoop around our way. The other birds all fly off when they see them.

April 27th, 2018 07:21

UNTIED.
Lorna said:

Gorgeous depiction of a beautiful bird Fay! I had the privilege to hold one on my arm once at a corporate thingy do where we were supposed to all \"bond\"..... ha ha.... I bonded with the bird. And I\'m with you - let\'s let them all free!

April 27th, 2018 05:35

UNTIED.
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful write Fay, raptors are wonderful to watch, especially in the wild, I have seen many in my forays with nature.

April 27th, 2018 04:04

AWE.
Christina8 said:

Now that the snow has lifted I do live in wonder of the beauty that surrounds--you captured everything so well in your poem! Great write indeed!

April 26th, 2018 17:01

AWE.
onepauly said:

it was tough
but I got through it.
keep them coming.

April 26th, 2018 09:50

AWE.
Goldfinch60 said:

All life should be lived in wonderment Fay. Very good write.

April 26th, 2018 07:56

AWE.
Lorna said:

And now that winter has broken and we are in the garden - the Wonderment is all around us to find again! Hope you had one of your \"wonderment\" walks today!

April 26th, 2018 07:03

AWE.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

O LORD MY GOD ~ When I in awesome Wonder
Consider ALL the things your hand has made !
I see the Stars ~ I hear the Rolling Thunder
Your Power throughout the Universe displayed !
Then sings my Soul ~ Creator GOD to YOU
How Great You are ~ How Great You are !

Thanks for Caring & Sharing FAY
Something of the AWE with which we experience
the Wonders of God\'s Creation each & every DAY !
Birds & Bees ~ Forests & Streams ~ Pike & Ponies
Cobwebs & Kittens ~ Clouds & Cockles ~ Snow & Snowdrops
Scent of Roses and all the Woody Woodland smells !
Not only in Cornwall ~ But also Industrial Essex !
And I say to myself \"What A Wonderful World\"
My Fellow Scientists are looking for another PLANET EARTH
In \"The Goldilocks Zone\" but personally I think it\'s a MYTH !
They will only find one if GOD chose to Create another
Living Planet in Our Galaxy or another !
I look around ~ GOD is there
I look through my MICROSCOPE ~ God is there
I look through my TELESCOPE ~ God is there also
In my POEM today \"POWER of the CROSS\"
GOD is there also !
HANDS that Flung Stars into Space
To cruel nails surrended and ALL FOR US !

Thanks FAY ~ GOD is active on MPS TODAY
Your Good Friend as always ~ BRIAN


April 26th, 2018 05:06

AWE.
orchidee said:

A wondermental write Fay - if that is a word?! heehee. Spell-checker doesn\'t like it!

April 26th, 2018 04:51

HEART\'S CORE.
Christina8 said:

I love it! It\'s a great write and I love the repetition at the second line with a twist!

April 24th, 2018 12:00

HEART\'S CORE.
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write, the hearts core is the centre of love.

April 24th, 2018 08:00

HEART\'S CORE.
Michael Edwards said:

Sweet - perfect words as always Fay.

April 24th, 2018 07:27

HEART\'S CORE.
Lorna said:

I think you are always living, looking, loving at the heart\'s core Fay..........

April 24th, 2018 04:40

HEART\'S CORE.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

When we open our Inner Heart ~ Our Heart\'s Core ~ to another person it opens \"A Gateway into Paradise\" which only those who have experienced it understand ! Love the Structure and Sentiment of the Poem ~ Living ~ Looking ~ Loving @ Heart\'s Core ~ SUCHNESS (perfect word !) is Love ~ Heart ~ Spirit that all ......... Life sings with transcendent light ~ and soul weeps no more ~ AMEN Thanks FAY for a powerful testimony to the infinity of TRUE LOVE ~ Yours Brian & Angela XX Please check my tribute to William & Kate and their New Prince ~ Thanks !

April 24th, 2018 03:46

HEART\'S CORE.
orchidee said:

\'Such\' a good write Fay! Did you know I would say that?! lol.

April 24th, 2018 03:35

UNCOVERED.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS FAY ~ For a very descriptive Photo and an elegant Poem ! Thoughts on a discussion on discovering a stone terrace built to surround homesteads and fence in sheep ! Even the homesteads have now disintegrated. We search and mentally build such sites to give us an insight into \"A cliff-top Shepherding Industry !\" In 500 years perhaps archaeologists will search the remains of our homes for clues. A very emotive poem ~ thanks for sharing ~ Yours as always BRIAN

April 23rd, 2018 11:08

UNCOVERED.
Michael Edwards said:

Your wonderful language takes us on a great journey - thanks Fay.

April 23rd, 2018 07:55

UNCOVERED.
Accidental Poet said:

Relics of past eons bring thoughts of compassion for the souls who lived in those long forgotten days. But not all is forgotten, as some of us long to know the lives of those who lived before us. Great write Fay. Very intriguing.

April 23rd, 2018 07:45

UNCOVERED.
orchidee said:

A fine write Fay.

April 23rd, 2018 05:24

UNCOVERED.
Lorna said:

How magical your poem and the old stones and the mysteries they hold. You have so much history \"for free\" - it must be spiritual to come across these lonely places of the past (without crowds of tourists pushing in lines)........

April 23rd, 2018 05:17



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