Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
SINGLE HANDED
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good and very true write, I still learn new things every day and I reach the three score years and ten in a few months.
July 3rd, 2018 07:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good and very true write, I still learn new things every day and I reach the three score years and ten in a few months.
July 3rd, 2018 07:52
SINGLE HANDED
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. There\'s nothing like the WI - some are stern, strict, old school - fearful! lol.
July 3rd, 2018 06:15
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. There\'s nothing like the WI - some are stern, strict, old school - fearful! lol.
July 3rd, 2018 06:15
SINGLE HANDED
Heartwriter said:
It\'s never too late to enjoy life at you capability. Getting older should be fun. We need to look at the elderly as still needed members of society and not a burden. Loved this!
July 3rd, 2018 05:50
Heartwriter said:
It\'s never too late to enjoy life at you capability. Getting older should be fun. We need to look at the elderly as still needed members of society and not a burden. Loved this!
July 3rd, 2018 05:50
SINGLE HANDED
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ Great advice for all GERIATRICS ~ My Granny has mastered the Computer and is now a Silver Surfer we have put an 18+ block on it ! For computer literate 70+ \"Future learn\" offers a plethora of Superb Short on-line courses to keep their Brains active. Saga offers door to door Age-friendly Cruises (with handsome male escorts ~ my Granny tells me ~ to dance with) and Holidays as do Warners (no KIDS !) So far the NHS provides Pacemakers ~ Physiotherapy ~ Free Joints (not cocaine) There are also plenty of Clubs ~ Probus ~ WI and Church based which cater for the retired. I only hope all these facilties will still be available in 2053 when I will need them and a THREE WHEEL ~ Harley Davidson to ride Route 66 ! As in your PICTURE. Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours as always BRIAN ~ Please check my World Cup Poems while ENGLAND are still in the MIX ~ I\'m still flying the flag ~ Thanks B !
July 3rd, 2018 03:59
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ Great advice for all GERIATRICS ~ My Granny has mastered the Computer and is now a Silver Surfer we have put an 18+ block on it ! For computer literate 70+ \"Future learn\" offers a plethora of Superb Short on-line courses to keep their Brains active. Saga offers door to door Age-friendly Cruises (with handsome male escorts ~ my Granny tells me ~ to dance with) and Holidays as do Warners (no KIDS !) So far the NHS provides Pacemakers ~ Physiotherapy ~ Free Joints (not cocaine) There are also plenty of Clubs ~ Probus ~ WI and Church based which cater for the retired. I only hope all these facilties will still be available in 2053 when I will need them and a THREE WHEEL ~ Harley Davidson to ride Route 66 ! As in your PICTURE. Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours as always BRIAN ~ Please check my World Cup Poems while ENGLAND are still in the MIX ~ I\'m still flying the flag ~ Thanks B !
July 3rd, 2018 03:59
Heaven Held.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Dunno if we\'ll hear much thunder. Our clay is melting, i.e. ourselves!
July 2nd, 2018 09:02
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Dunno if we\'ll hear much thunder. Our clay is melting, i.e. ourselves!
July 2nd, 2018 09:02
Heaven Held.
Heartwriter said:
Beautiful Fay! The last verses we\'re my fav. In our miraculous vessel.
July 2nd, 2018 04:56
Heartwriter said:
Beautiful Fay! The last verses we\'re my fav. In our miraculous vessel.
July 2nd, 2018 04:56
REVERIE.
Goldfinch60 said:
That so special time of the day, Described by you,
In your so special way
June 29th, 2018 00:05
Goldfinch60 said:
That so special time of the day, Described by you,
In your so special way
June 29th, 2018 00:05
REVERIE.
Frogspoetry said:
YOUR WORK IS ALWAYS VERY WELL WRITTEN.I LOVE READING YOUR WORK FAY.
June 28th, 2018 22:24
Frogspoetry said:
YOUR WORK IS ALWAYS VERY WELL WRITTEN.I LOVE READING YOUR WORK FAY.
June 28th, 2018 22:24
REVERIE.
dusk arising said:
Exquisite! Just so flipping good! nuff said? Definate favourite.
June 28th, 2018 14:05
dusk arising said:
Exquisite! Just so flipping good! nuff said? Definate favourite.
June 28th, 2018 14:05
REVERIE.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Hope we don\'t dawdle all day, half asleep! heehee.
June 28th, 2018 12:03
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Hope we don\'t dawdle all day, half asleep! heehee.
June 28th, 2018 12:03
REVERIE.
Fay Slimm. said:
Thank you EPoems for saving this verse in your favourites - so pleased you enjoyed the read.
June 28th, 2018 09:55
Fay Slimm. said:
Thank you EPoems for saving this verse in your favourites - so pleased you enjoyed the read.
June 28th, 2018 09:55
MY ENCOUNTER.
SLR said:
This is so cute. I recently had a similar experience with a baby deer. I love nature babies. Great write Ms Fay! Thank you for sharing your \'meet and greet\'.
June 27th, 2018 16:46
SLR said:
This is so cute. I recently had a similar experience with a baby deer. I love nature babies. Great write Ms Fay! Thank you for sharing your \'meet and greet\'.
June 27th, 2018 16:46
MY ENCOUNTER.
Frogspoetry said:
I love watching God creations,I find them very beautiful regardless of what or who they are.
June 27th, 2018 08:26
Frogspoetry said:
I love watching God creations,I find them very beautiful regardless of what or who they are.
June 27th, 2018 08:26
MY ENCOUNTER.
dusk arising said:
Odd how we have to do so much growing ourselves before we start to really \'see\' and appreciate the beauty that is all around us.
Plain to see, from your writing, that you \'see\' appreciate and enjoy our planet.
You create a lovely mind picture/story here. Taking time to aside from your days intent, this tiny wonder refreshes the joy of life itself. Lovely to read.
June 27th, 2018 08:14
dusk arising said:
Odd how we have to do so much growing ourselves before we start to really \'see\' and appreciate the beauty that is all around us.
Plain to see, from your writing, that you \'see\' appreciate and enjoy our planet.
You create a lovely mind picture/story here. Taking time to aside from your days intent, this tiny wonder refreshes the joy of life itself. Lovely to read.
June 27th, 2018 08:14
MY ENCOUNTER.
Goldfinch60 said:
It is so wonderful to watch wildlife, especially the tiny ones scuttling around.
June 27th, 2018 03:37
Goldfinch60 said:
It is so wonderful to watch wildlife, especially the tiny ones scuttling around.
June 27th, 2018 03:37
MY ENCOUNTER.
Heartwriter said:
Isn\'t nature awesome! I love to watch the animals. Great write and thanks for sharing. It\'s their world too
June 27th, 2018 02:32
Heartwriter said:
Isn\'t nature awesome! I love to watch the animals. Great write and thanks for sharing. It\'s their world too
June 27th, 2018 02:32
MY ENCOUNTER.
orchidee said:
A lovely write Fay. I see squirrels and some wild bunnies in some woodland/country walks.
June 27th, 2018 02:23
orchidee said:
A lovely write Fay. I see squirrels and some wild bunnies in some woodland/country walks.
June 27th, 2018 02:23
FORLORN.
SLR said:
I really like this Ms Fay, but I have to add that flowers, like people, die if not \"plucked\" with extreme care. Any tender care can be negated by the manner of plucking. I feel that your kindness would extend through the whole process. You seem to have a sweet nature. Love the pic too.
June 21st, 2018 10:59
SLR said:
I really like this Ms Fay, but I have to add that flowers, like people, die if not \"plucked\" with extreme care. Any tender care can be negated by the manner of plucking. I feel that your kindness would extend through the whole process. You seem to have a sweet nature. Love the pic too.
June 21st, 2018 10:59
FORLORN.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Beautiful Picture ~ Elegant Poem ~ Thanks for brightening our day ~ FAY ! The Picture and Poem conjure up many analogies in Life and Love ! People left out in the \"cold\" for all sorts of reasons and alas ~ not all rescued in time ! ICE ROSES are quite common in Essex and if left on the branch remain as buds and never open ~ the same is true of People ! However as your last verse suggests ~ If we rescue them ~ place the stem in warm water in a warm environment ~ the bud opens and it becomes (in time) a beautiful \"full blown rose\" The same is true of people ~ a Hot Shower ~ A Warm Environment ~ Food & Drink and lots of TLC ~ AMEN ~ Yours as always BRIAN
June 21st, 2018 10:02
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Beautiful Picture ~ Elegant Poem ~ Thanks for brightening our day ~ FAY ! The Picture and Poem conjure up many analogies in Life and Love ! People left out in the \"cold\" for all sorts of reasons and alas ~ not all rescued in time ! ICE ROSES are quite common in Essex and if left on the branch remain as buds and never open ~ the same is true of People ! However as your last verse suggests ~ If we rescue them ~ place the stem in warm water in a warm environment ~ the bud opens and it becomes (in time) a beautiful \"full blown rose\" The same is true of people ~ a Hot Shower ~ A Warm Environment ~ Food & Drink and lots of TLC ~ AMEN ~ Yours as always BRIAN
June 21st, 2018 10:02
FORLORN.
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
This beautiful poem reminds me of many moments in my life! The one that will always stand out is the day one son came back into my arms from a long lonely journey!
“Relieved by fresh water
and warmed indoors
then thou might heal.”
He is healing!
~Laura~
June 21st, 2018 09:05
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
This beautiful poem reminds me of many moments in my life! The one that will always stand out is the day one son came back into my arms from a long lonely journey!
“Relieved by fresh water
and warmed indoors
then thou might heal.”
He is healing!
~Laura~
June 21st, 2018 09:05
FORLORN.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
This is beautiful Fay
The sadness is made happy by hope
I love it!
Andrew
June 21st, 2018 05:43
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
This is beautiful Fay
The sadness is made happy by hope
I love it!
Andrew
June 21st, 2018 05:43
ONCE DISTILLED.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for a beautiful nostalgic Love Poem ~ Love the Satisfaction & Sunshine of your SMILE ! Sometimes ANGELA smiles like that ~ I must be doing something right ~ AMEN ~ Yours as always ~ BRIAN ~ A fine Tone Poem indeed !
June 20th, 2018 18:42
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for a beautiful nostalgic Love Poem ~ Love the Satisfaction & Sunshine of your SMILE ! Sometimes ANGELA smiles like that ~ I must be doing something right ~ AMEN ~ Yours as always ~ BRIAN ~ A fine Tone Poem indeed !
June 20th, 2018 18:42
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