Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
A DELICATE THING.
onepauly said:
its how many more trees
the forest needs.
good one fay.
July 12th, 2018 07:48
onepauly said:
its how many more trees
the forest needs.
good one fay.
July 12th, 2018 07:48
A DELICATE THING.
onepauly said:
I remember listening
to the wind through the leaves and branches. very good meditation.
peace.
July 12th, 2018 07:46
onepauly said:
I remember listening
to the wind through the leaves and branches. very good meditation.
peace.
July 12th, 2018 07:46
A DELICATE THING.
onepauly said:
its how many more trees
the forest needs.
good one fay.
July 12th, 2018 07:42
onepauly said:
its how many more trees
the forest needs.
good one fay.
July 12th, 2018 07:42
A DELICATE THING.
Heartwriter said:
Fay, even a tree will struggle to survive. We had to cut a dogwood regretfully. It was in the path of our septic system that was too be put in. We pushed it over from the root up. So it could be replanted. It at the moment is still root up and thriving. As soon as possible those greenest of leaves will flutter once again in the wind! Love this write.
July 12th, 2018 06:07
Heartwriter said:
Fay, even a tree will struggle to survive. We had to cut a dogwood regretfully. It was in the path of our septic system that was too be put in. We pushed it over from the root up. So it could be replanted. It at the moment is still root up and thriving. As soon as possible those greenest of leaves will flutter once again in the wind! Love this write.
July 12th, 2018 06:07
A DELICATE THING.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Will the tree singing to us sound better than me singing to people?! heehee.
July 12th, 2018 03:29
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Will the tree singing to us sound better than me singing to people?! heehee.
July 12th, 2018 03:29
A DELICATE THING.
dusk arising said:
Ah this just gets better and better as one reads on. I am always struck by the majesty of dead trees as they appear sculptured against the skylight. Appearing as earth\'s antlers reaching upward to a future spiritual path.
What wisdom do these trees hold, standing as they do for decades, centuries, observing from their one place life of all kinds around them. The marvels of natural beauty, the phases and fashions of humanity. War and destruction, murder, rape and pillage.
Yes i have been known to hug a tree and lose myself in those moments.
I love your \'the poem that we call a tree\' for they do sing to us, greet us, validate us. Like old friends they\'re there when we return to childhood haunts.
Majestic beings.
Lovely writing, thank you.
July 12th, 2018 03:18
dusk arising said:
Ah this just gets better and better as one reads on. I am always struck by the majesty of dead trees as they appear sculptured against the skylight. Appearing as earth\'s antlers reaching upward to a future spiritual path.
What wisdom do these trees hold, standing as they do for decades, centuries, observing from their one place life of all kinds around them. The marvels of natural beauty, the phases and fashions of humanity. War and destruction, murder, rape and pillage.
Yes i have been known to hug a tree and lose myself in those moments.
I love your \'the poem that we call a tree\' for they do sing to us, greet us, validate us. Like old friends they\'re there when we return to childhood haunts.
Majestic beings.
Lovely writing, thank you.
July 12th, 2018 03:18
A DELICATE THING.
Goldfinch60 said:
I don\'t think that there is anything so wonderful and so inspiring as a lone tree, its life flowing through it as it does in your words Fay.
July 12th, 2018 02:52
Goldfinch60 said:
I don\'t think that there is anything so wonderful and so inspiring as a lone tree, its life flowing through it as it does in your words Fay.
July 12th, 2018 02:52
SWIFT MAGIC.
Michael Edwards said:
Wonderful birds and a wonderful write dear Fay.
July 6th, 2018 09:36
Michael Edwards said:
Wonderful birds and a wonderful write dear Fay.
July 6th, 2018 09:36
SWIFT MAGIC.
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
Great structure and tone
to your wonderful write!
Your poem conjures a
magical vision of these
creatures migrating!
It’s fascinating to watch
these swifts in flight!
~Laura~
July 6th, 2018 05:58
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
Great structure and tone
to your wonderful write!
Your poem conjures a
magical vision of these
creatures migrating!
It’s fascinating to watch
these swifts in flight!
~Laura~
July 6th, 2018 05:58
SWIFT MAGIC.
Heartwriter said:
Lovely write Fay. I enjoy seeing large flocks of birds.
July 6th, 2018 04:53
Heartwriter said:
Lovely write Fay. I enjoy seeing large flocks of birds.
July 6th, 2018 04:53
SWIFT MAGIC.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ahhhhhhhhhh YES FAY ~ Thanks for a beautiful Tone Poem I can both see & hear them ! Love the visual so evocative. Weather ~ Customs ~ Bird & Bees etc are all harbingers of the Seasons in the UK ~ We are more blessed than we realise ~ AMEN ~ My Poem today is on WEATHER with a ditty by the Late Great BING CROSBY who influenced all the Great Ballad singer from Sinatra onwards ~ who all wanted to \"Sing like Bing\" Yours as always BRIAN !
July 6th, 2018 03:51
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ahhhhhhhhhh YES FAY ~ Thanks for a beautiful Tone Poem I can both see & hear them ! Love the visual so evocative. Weather ~ Customs ~ Bird & Bees etc are all harbingers of the Seasons in the UK ~ We are more blessed than we realise ~ AMEN ~ My Poem today is on WEATHER with a ditty by the Late Great BING CROSBY who influenced all the Great Ballad singer from Sinatra onwards ~ who all wanted to \"Sing like Bing\" Yours as always BRIAN !
July 6th, 2018 03:51
SWIFT MAGIC.
Goldfinch60 said:
Swift are wondrous birds, I have had the honour to touch a swift that was stuck in the entrance to its nesting area in a building that I was working in.
You always know it is summer when the swifts appear.
July 6th, 2018 03:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Swift are wondrous birds, I have had the honour to touch a swift that was stuck in the entrance to its nesting area in a building that I was working in.
You always know it is summer when the swifts appear.
July 6th, 2018 03:46
SEIZE AND SEE.
Goldfinch60 said:
Every moment is precious Fay, as we both know, seize every one them with joy and laughter.
July 6th, 2018 00:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Every moment is precious Fay, as we both know, seize every one them with joy and laughter.
July 6th, 2018 00:25
SEIZE AND SEE.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
DAY BY DAY
And with each passing momment
MORE & MORE
We understand Ourselves
Others & Our Opportunities !
Let us therefore
Leap into the Moment
Change Human Fragilty
Seize the Present as Eternity ~ AMEN
Thanks for sharing FAY ~ there is much room for thought
in this Perfect Poem ~ Yours as always ~ BRIAN
July 5th, 2018 17:17
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
DAY BY DAY
And with each passing momment
MORE & MORE
We understand Ourselves
Others & Our Opportunities !
Let us therefore
Leap into the Moment
Change Human Fragilty
Seize the Present as Eternity ~ AMEN
Thanks for sharing FAY ~ there is much room for thought
in this Perfect Poem ~ Yours as always ~ BRIAN
July 5th, 2018 17:17
SEIZE AND SEE.
dusk arising said:
Wow! There\'s lots said in this piece. Now is gone and replaced with \'now\' before we realise it.
July 5th, 2018 16:22
dusk arising said:
Wow! There\'s lots said in this piece. Now is gone and replaced with \'now\' before we realise it.
July 5th, 2018 16:22
SEIZE AND SEE.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Meanwhile, I was trying to \'seize the day\' by understanding what \'Carpe Diem\' meant\'. By the time I found out, there was no more day left to seize. doh!
I get into some daft situations. lol.
July 5th, 2018 11:27
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Meanwhile, I was trying to \'seize the day\' by understanding what \'Carpe Diem\' meant\'. By the time I found out, there was no more day left to seize. doh!
I get into some daft situations. lol.
July 5th, 2018 11:27
SEIZE AND SEE.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
OH! Let us Faye what a wonderful thought well offered... Bravo 3 litle nuggets there
Thank you
Andrew
July 5th, 2018 09:38
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
OH! Let us Faye what a wonderful thought well offered... Bravo 3 litle nuggets there
Thank you
Andrew
July 5th, 2018 09:38
ILL-SENT.
Goldfinch60 said:
Super wok may, this always shows how strong the elements are and how weak man is trying to fight them.
July 4th, 2018 10:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Super wok may, this always shows how strong the elements are and how weak man is trying to fight them.
July 4th, 2018 10:48
ILL-SENT.
Heartwriter said:
It is sad when beauty turns to disaster. Just a reminder that nature is two-fold. On one hand it holds desire to the eye. In the other it can be hard and cold. Great write dear Fay!
July 4th, 2018 06:53
Heartwriter said:
It is sad when beauty turns to disaster. Just a reminder that nature is two-fold. On one hand it holds desire to the eye. In the other it can be hard and cold. Great write dear Fay!
July 4th, 2018 06:53
SINGLE HANDED
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
I’m on my way to join you to enjoy the ride while I can still walk and talk!
I’ve enjoyed reading this lighthearted poem very much!
I’m jumping on that
“cloud sailing to dreams”!
You’re so spot on with...
“It’s never too late to define success.”
Let’s take that ride to buy ourselves
“the starter-kit set.”
~Laura~
July 3rd, 2018 11:03
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
I’m on my way to join you to enjoy the ride while I can still walk and talk!
I’ve enjoyed reading this lighthearted poem very much!
I’m jumping on that
“cloud sailing to dreams”!
You’re so spot on with...
“It’s never too late to define success.”
Let’s take that ride to buy ourselves
“the starter-kit set.”
~Laura~
July 3rd, 2018 11:03
SINGLE HANDED
dusk arising said:
Oh Fay you do look so cute astride that motorbike.
Being of that certain age there are many things on my \'would love to try or do\' list. But i\'m not sure my knees and back want me to get stuck in.
July 3rd, 2018 09:53
dusk arising said:
Oh Fay you do look so cute astride that motorbike.
Being of that certain age there are many things on my \'would love to try or do\' list. But i\'m not sure my knees and back want me to get stuck in.
July 3rd, 2018 09:53
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