Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
IT PASSED.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ when I saw the picture I thought t was going to be about the dreaded MOT ! In my experience of car driving (15 years) while there is often a CALM before the Storm ~ I know there is always one afterwards ! My worst experience was driving in the Lake District when the rain was so heavy it blurred vision ! We had to pull into a lay-by til it abated ! Then the Sun came out ~ but we were made aware of how steep the drops were on the driving side ~ scary ! Thanks for sharing a lovely poem on a scary situation ~ Loved the visual ~ Please check my ROSES ~ BRIAN
June 18th, 2018 05:23
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ when I saw the picture I thought t was going to be about the dreaded MOT ! In my experience of car driving (15 years) while there is often a CALM before the Storm ~ I know there is always one afterwards ! My worst experience was driving in the Lake District when the rain was so heavy it blurred vision ! We had to pull into a lay-by til it abated ! Then the Sun came out ~ but we were made aware of how steep the drops were on the driving side ~ scary ! Thanks for sharing a lovely poem on a scary situation ~ Loved the visual ~ Please check my ROSES ~ BRIAN
June 18th, 2018 05:23
REFLECTION.
dusk arising said:
Oh so true. If only writing such truths could bring them to our door.
i live in hope.
June 15th, 2018 16:49
dusk arising said:
Oh so true. If only writing such truths could bring them to our door.
i live in hope.
June 15th, 2018 16:49
REFLECTION.
Classicmister said:
A very complex but perceptive reflection on love. You manage to convey so much with few words,
June 15th, 2018 09:17
Classicmister said:
A very complex but perceptive reflection on love. You manage to convey so much with few words,
June 15th, 2018 09:17
CO-EXISTENCE.
dusk arising said:
Just today i sat in the sunshine watching trains go by and admired the beauty of the long grasses growing by the rusting 5 bar gate. Taking time to take it in because, well because its a simple beauty i\'ve taken for granted throughout my days and next time i pass that way it will probably be a different season.
So much of beauty we take for granted.
Reading your piece today brought this fresh to mind. The spirit of your words is so true. Thank you.
June 14th, 2018 17:22
dusk arising said:
Just today i sat in the sunshine watching trains go by and admired the beauty of the long grasses growing by the rusting 5 bar gate. Taking time to take it in because, well because its a simple beauty i\'ve taken for granted throughout my days and next time i pass that way it will probably be a different season.
So much of beauty we take for granted.
Reading your piece today brought this fresh to mind. The spirit of your words is so true. Thank you.
June 14th, 2018 17:22
CO-EXISTENCE.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Hopefully we need not say \'You\'ve had your Summer (all of it); it was yesterday; that\'s your lot for this year!\'
June 14th, 2018 10:54
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Hopefully we need not say \'You\'ve had your Summer (all of it); it was yesterday; that\'s your lot for this year!\'
June 14th, 2018 10:54
CO-EXISTENCE.
SLR said:
Love the last two stanzas. Nature will bring out the child in us, if we let it. By it does take a deliberate action on our parts. Time will slip away while we\'re distracted by our every day lives and we miss the importance of being mentally and physically refreshed by nature. Love this one Ms Fay!
June 14th, 2018 10:26
SLR said:
Love the last two stanzas. Nature will bring out the child in us, if we let it. By it does take a deliberate action on our parts. Time will slip away while we\'re distracted by our every day lives and we miss the importance of being mentally and physically refreshed by nature. Love this one Ms Fay!
June 14th, 2018 10:26
CO-EXISTENCE.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY we all need to get out MORE ! I do a lot of Coastal Field Courses ~ mainly S E Coast checking on erosion ~ and I love to go to the Lake District and I\'m going to the Isle of Man in OCTOBER ~ EXOTIC ! I write alot about the Seasons so you know where my HEART is ! Lots of good advice in your lovely POEM ~ Please check \"COTTAGE BY THE SEA\" with DEAN & NANCY \"Things\" as a BONUS also FUSION on ANIMALS with The Shadows \"APACHE\" as another BONUS ~ Your Friend as always BRIAN !
June 14th, 2018 08:21
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY we all need to get out MORE ! I do a lot of Coastal Field Courses ~ mainly S E Coast checking on erosion ~ and I love to go to the Lake District and I\'m going to the Isle of Man in OCTOBER ~ EXOTIC ! I write alot about the Seasons so you know where my HEART is ! Lots of good advice in your lovely POEM ~ Please check \"COTTAGE BY THE SEA\" with DEAN & NANCY \"Things\" as a BONUS also FUSION on ANIMALS with The Shadows \"APACHE\" as another BONUS ~ Your Friend as always BRIAN !
June 14th, 2018 08:21
LET US GO.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write as ever Fay, may your journey be filled with joy and love.
June 14th, 2018 01:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write as ever Fay, may your journey be filled with joy and love.
June 14th, 2018 01:07
LET US GO.
SLR said:
Sweetly sexy and romantic. Love it Ms Fay. Hope you don\'t mind if I screen shot it to read whenever the mood strikes. Gotta save this one.
June 13th, 2018 20:50
SLR said:
Sweetly sexy and romantic. Love it Ms Fay. Hope you don\'t mind if I screen shot it to read whenever the mood strikes. Gotta save this one.
June 13th, 2018 20:50
LET US GO.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ Love the POEM and the importance of TOGETHERNESS when you are in LOVE ~ I am just beginning to understand because I am missing ANGELA so so much when she is so so far away (11,500 miles) in NZ. However because she is with RUTH and she is so happy with her work etc ~ it does compensate for my loving sacrifice ~ so she could fulfil her dream Physiotherapy Exchange Placement ! Love the \"togetherness\" visual ~ perfect ! Yours as always ~ BRIAN The Dreamer !
June 13th, 2018 18:21
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ Love the POEM and the importance of TOGETHERNESS when you are in LOVE ~ I am just beginning to understand because I am missing ANGELA so so much when she is so so far away (11,500 miles) in NZ. However because she is with RUTH and she is so happy with her work etc ~ it does compensate for my loving sacrifice ~ so she could fulfil her dream Physiotherapy Exchange Placement ! Love the \"togetherness\" visual ~ perfect ! Yours as always ~ BRIAN The Dreamer !
June 13th, 2018 18:21
LET US GO.
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
An exquisite write. I can envision the two of them walking off into the sunset! A hypnotic read for certain!
~Laura~
June 13th, 2018 14:17
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
An exquisite write. I can envision the two of them walking off into the sunset! A hypnotic read for certain!
~Laura~
June 13th, 2018 14:17
LET US GO.
orchidee said:
I was \'going\' to read this fine poem Fay - now I have!
June 13th, 2018 07:40
orchidee said:
I was \'going\' to read this fine poem Fay - now I have!
June 13th, 2018 07:40
LET US GO.
Heartwriter said:
Very beautiful write. Beneath skies shy light was my favorite.
June 13th, 2018 05:42
Heartwriter said:
Very beautiful write. Beneath skies shy light was my favorite.
June 13th, 2018 05:42
BRIDGED.
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
Loved this ...
“with no way to transcribe I leaned forward into
his mind and caught the right frame of his tone.”
Communicating with nature’s beautiful creature! That is a special gift!
An excellent write which I very much enjoyed reading!
~Laura~
June 13th, 2018 00:37
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
Loved this ...
“with no way to transcribe I leaned forward into
his mind and caught the right frame of his tone.”
Communicating with nature’s beautiful creature! That is a special gift!
An excellent write which I very much enjoyed reading!
~Laura~
June 13th, 2018 00:37
BRIDGED.
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Fay. Dippers are wonderful birds to be with.
June 13th, 2018 00:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Fay. Dippers are wonderful birds to be with.
June 13th, 2018 00:33
BRIDGED.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ Beautiful Structure (It is in fact a 4 4 4 2 Sonnet) and a Perfect Subject ~ \"I talk to the Birds !\" To me the implication is that you did communicate through Natures Telepathy rather than human-speak ! For me you communicated your \"telepathic conversation\" through you moving poem ! Thanks for sharing & caring ~ Yours BRIAN
June 12th, 2018 14:14
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ Beautiful Structure (It is in fact a 4 4 4 2 Sonnet) and a Perfect Subject ~ \"I talk to the Birds !\" To me the implication is that you did communicate through Natures Telepathy rather than human-speak ! For me you communicated your \"telepathic conversation\" through you moving poem ! Thanks for sharing & caring ~ Yours BRIAN
June 12th, 2018 14:14
BRIDGED.
dusk arising said:
What a lovely read, totally uplifting and such a wonderful picture accompanying this.
Joyous.
June 12th, 2018 11:11
dusk arising said:
What a lovely read, totally uplifting and such a wonderful picture accompanying this.
Joyous.
June 12th, 2018 11:11
BRIDGED.
willyweed said:
oh if we could talk to the animals, loved this one Fay. ww
June 12th, 2018 08:43
willyweed said:
oh if we could talk to the animals, loved this one Fay. ww
June 12th, 2018 08:43
BRIDGED.
orchidee said:
A lovely write Fay. More melodious than MY singing?! heehee.
June 12th, 2018 06:47
orchidee said:
A lovely write Fay. More melodious than MY singing?! heehee.
June 12th, 2018 06:47
BRIDGED.
Lorna said:
What a lovely quiet moment for us with you and the bird! I love the picture - wonder what kind of bird that is......fishing from land?
June 12th, 2018 05:38
Lorna said:
What a lovely quiet moment for us with you and the bird! I love the picture - wonder what kind of bird that is......fishing from land?
June 12th, 2018 05:38
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