Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Mile-High Amour.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Fay and so true. True love is the way to go.
March 26th, 2018 07:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Fay and so true. True love is the way to go.
March 26th, 2018 07:57
Mile-High Amour.
Lorna said:
Phenomenal Fay! Love the thoughts especially weeding the men from the boys, the truth from the fake..... perfect construction. Wow......
March 26th, 2018 05:32
Lorna said:
Phenomenal Fay! Love the thoughts especially weeding the men from the boys, the truth from the fake..... perfect construction. Wow......
March 26th, 2018 05:32
Mile-High Amour.
orchidee said:
She having fun there? Should I try this? Will I only faint?! heehee.
March 26th, 2018 04:32
orchidee said:
She having fun there? Should I try this? Will I only faint?! heehee.
March 26th, 2018 04:32
Mile-High Amour.
w c said:
Very nice, Fay. I really enjoyed the \"Find me a Club that puts Love first\" line.
March 26th, 2018 02:51
w c said:
Very nice, Fay. I really enjoyed the \"Find me a Club that puts Love first\" line.
March 26th, 2018 02:51
Mile-High Amour.
Michael Edwards said:
Just brilliant Fay - a lot of tenderness behind the humour.
March 26th, 2018 02:34
Michael Edwards said:
Just brilliant Fay - a lot of tenderness behind the humour.
March 26th, 2018 02:34
Mile-High Amour.
kevin browne said:
loving your flight of love for the metaphor in you work her. Loved it from start till the end.
March 26th, 2018 02:32
kevin browne said:
loving your flight of love for the metaphor in you work her. Loved it from start till the end.
March 26th, 2018 02:32
Blown Force.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
I LOVE WINDY DAYS
It blow where it will
But ~ we cannot tell
Where it comes from
Or where it goes !
THANKS FAY Wind purifies ~ like a Hoover
Making sure that the composition of the Air
(for good or ill !) is uniform everywhere !
A Seasonal Adjective (W ~ S ~ S ~ A) gives
WIND an extra poetic dimension ~ Elegant
Thanks for composing and circulating !
The PHOTO took my breath away ~ Perfect
ANGELA love the Mountains & the Wind in
her hair ! She send her LOVE X
Yours as always ~ BRIAN & ANGELA
March 25th, 2018 01:51
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
I LOVE WINDY DAYS
It blow where it will
But ~ we cannot tell
Where it comes from
Or where it goes !
THANKS FAY Wind purifies ~ like a Hoover
Making sure that the composition of the Air
(for good or ill !) is uniform everywhere !
A Seasonal Adjective (W ~ S ~ S ~ A) gives
WIND an extra poetic dimension ~ Elegant
Thanks for composing and circulating !
The PHOTO took my breath away ~ Perfect
ANGELA love the Mountains & the Wind in
her hair ! She send her LOVE X
Yours as always ~ BRIAN & ANGELA
March 25th, 2018 01:51
MY AIM.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
IMPERCEPTIBLY
IMMACULATELY
IMPOSINGLY
IMPARTIALLY
IMMEDIATE
All these adverbs harbour Spring FAY ~ but they also describe how you pen your daily ODE. I love to comment but alas IMPERFECTLY ! Love the JOY in the picture ~ It is the dorsal view of ANGELA at Daybreak ~ JOY ! Thanks for caring and sharing each day ~ Yours as ever ~ BRIAN
March 23rd, 2018 17:09
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
IMPERCEPTIBLY
IMMACULATELY
IMPOSINGLY
IMPARTIALLY
IMMEDIATE
All these adverbs harbour Spring FAY ~ but they also describe how you pen your daily ODE. I love to comment but alas IMPERFECTLY ! Love the JOY in the picture ~ It is the dorsal view of ANGELA at Daybreak ~ JOY ! Thanks for caring and sharing each day ~ Yours as ever ~ BRIAN
March 23rd, 2018 17:09
MY AIM.
Laura🌻 said:
I concur with Tepo!
Another magical write,
my dear Fay!
Loved the opening of your write...
“From the first finger of misty light
fresh rays from day’s entrance...”
It reminds me of the first
breath we breathe in of
Spring’s fresh air...as in
your beautiful pic! All she
has to do is open that
window abundant with
sunshine and freshness!
~Laura~
March 23rd, 2018 15:06
Laura🌻 said:
I concur with Tepo!
Another magical write,
my dear Fay!
Loved the opening of your write...
“From the first finger of misty light
fresh rays from day’s entrance...”
It reminds me of the first
breath we breathe in of
Spring’s fresh air...as in
your beautiful pic! All she
has to do is open that
window abundant with
sunshine and freshness!
~Laura~
March 23rd, 2018 15:06
MY AIM.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Arghh, plunged back into dark mornings soon, when the clocks change? Depends what time we get up! heehee.
March 23rd, 2018 10:00
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Arghh, plunged back into dark mornings soon, when the clocks change? Depends what time we get up! heehee.
March 23rd, 2018 10:00
STIRRING.
Lorna said:
Oh so good for the ones with deep depression to remember Fay........ Thank goodness for the \"ups\".......
March 23rd, 2018 07:17
Lorna said:
Oh so good for the ones with deep depression to remember Fay........ Thank goodness for the \"ups\".......
March 23rd, 2018 07:17
MY AIM.
Lorna said:
Up and at \'em Fay! I love \"caught in night\'s shawl\" - the Spring juices are calling!
March 23rd, 2018 07:03
Lorna said:
Up and at \'em Fay! I love \"caught in night\'s shawl\" - the Spring juices are calling!
March 23rd, 2018 07:03
STIRRING.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ You have stolen one of my fave MANTRAS \"When you really reach rock~bottom the only way is UP ~ AMEN ! You have created a very beautiful Poem from my stark Mantra ~ that is your gift ! Love the you have discovered Julian\'s Title Backgrounds ~ they are fabulous ! Love your visual ~ Phoenix holding an ATOM (of a specific element) showing the electrons in their quantum orbitals ~ an elegant piece of SCIENCE ! I\'m speechless in appreciation ! Yours very impressed BRIAN ! To my eye the ATOM looks like SODIUM which has 11 electrons in four orbitals containing 2 2 6 1 (= 11) electrons. Sodium is a very important element in animal & plant metabolism (as Na+ ions) and of course in Sea Water (2.5% sodium chloride NaCl) ! Perhaps that is why it was chosen ~ imagine Fish & Chips without SALT ! Yours B.
March 22nd, 2018 16:49
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ You have stolen one of my fave MANTRAS \"When you really reach rock~bottom the only way is UP ~ AMEN ! You have created a very beautiful Poem from my stark Mantra ~ that is your gift ! Love the you have discovered Julian\'s Title Backgrounds ~ they are fabulous ! Love your visual ~ Phoenix holding an ATOM (of a specific element) showing the electrons in their quantum orbitals ~ an elegant piece of SCIENCE ! I\'m speechless in appreciation ! Yours very impressed BRIAN ! To my eye the ATOM looks like SODIUM which has 11 electrons in four orbitals containing 2 2 6 1 (= 11) electrons. Sodium is a very important element in animal & plant metabolism (as Na+ ions) and of course in Sea Water (2.5% sodium chloride NaCl) ! Perhaps that is why it was chosen ~ imagine Fish & Chips without SALT ! Yours B.
March 22nd, 2018 16:49
MYSTIC.
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a beautiful write Fay - into favourites with this one.
March 22nd, 2018 02:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a beautiful write Fay - into favourites with this one.
March 22nd, 2018 02:10
MYSTIC.
Accidental Poet said:
In the world of photography it\'s known as the Golden Hour. The hour before sunrise or after sunset. Beautiful write Fay.
March 21st, 2018 18:08
Accidental Poet said:
In the world of photography it\'s known as the Golden Hour. The hour before sunrise or after sunset. Beautiful write Fay.
March 21st, 2018 18:08
MYSTIC.
Michael Edwards said:
And so to bed - fine work Fay - love \'day is erased\'.
March 21st, 2018 10:32
Michael Edwards said:
And so to bed - fine work Fay - love \'day is erased\'.
March 21st, 2018 10:32
MYSTIC.
Lorna said:
Gorgeous picture of twilight - that lovely time of day that is always mystic and never the same twice! Wonderful Fay.......
March 21st, 2018 10:02
Lorna said:
Gorgeous picture of twilight - that lovely time of day that is always mystic and never the same twice! Wonderful Fay.......
March 21st, 2018 10:02
MYSTIC.
Laura🌻 said:
So beautifully penned,
my dear Fay!
“...the One who such beauty maintains as light-to-dark merges in mystic twilight.”
I’m envisioning a heavenly image created by your heavenly words !
~Laura~
March 21st, 2018 09:50
Laura🌻 said:
So beautifully penned,
my dear Fay!
“...the One who such beauty maintains as light-to-dark merges in mystic twilight.”
I’m envisioning a heavenly image created by your heavenly words !
~Laura~
March 21st, 2018 09:50
ATTITUDE.
Laura🌻 said:
Wow, my dear Fay!
So much truth in this
fine write! A great
message to heed...
beautifully summarized
in the last stanza!
~Laura~
March 20th, 2018 17:45
Laura🌻 said:
Wow, my dear Fay!
So much truth in this
fine write! A great
message to heed...
beautifully summarized
in the last stanza!
~Laura~
March 20th, 2018 17:45
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