Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
CONSTANT.
kevin browne said:
my first ever job when I left school was working with my father who owned two trawler boats at the time. I spent 5 years waving over the ocean and the sensation is great. a lot of memories for me in this poem of yours. great tribute to those men, and women too.
March 30th, 2018 15:40
kevin browne said:
my first ever job when I left school was working with my father who owned two trawler boats at the time. I spent 5 years waving over the ocean and the sensation is great. a lot of memories for me in this poem of yours. great tribute to those men, and women too.
March 30th, 2018 15:40
CONSTANT.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good description of those very hard working fishermen.
March 30th, 2018 07:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Good description of those very hard working fishermen.
March 30th, 2018 07:48
CHANGELING
dusk arising said:
such poetic meteorology. we are all dancers upon the winds changing mood aren\'t we.... oh to be a bird. very enjoyable
March 27th, 2018 17:28
dusk arising said:
such poetic meteorology. we are all dancers upon the winds changing mood aren\'t we.... oh to be a bird. very enjoyable
March 27th, 2018 17:28
CHANGELING
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Fay, air is so special but we take it for granted.
March 27th, 2018 08:03
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Fay, air is so special but we take it for granted.
March 27th, 2018 08:03
CHANGELING
Lorna said:
You\'ve caught the \"air\" absolutely! From it\'s lovely spring dances to the wind that blows down trees!
March 27th, 2018 06:48
Lorna said:
You\'ve caught the \"air\" absolutely! From it\'s lovely spring dances to the wind that blows down trees!
March 27th, 2018 06:48
CHANGELING
Laura🌻 said:
An exquisite write, my dear Fay!
Your usage of such great metaphors to tells us about the seasons makes your poem come alive! I can clearly visualize the changing of the seasons! I love the last stanza! It makes me want to get up and dance!
💃🏻 Awesome 💃🏻
~Laura~
March 27th, 2018 05:00
Laura🌻 said:
An exquisite write, my dear Fay!
Your usage of such great metaphors to tells us about the seasons makes your poem come alive! I can clearly visualize the changing of the seasons! I love the last stanza! It makes me want to get up and dance!
💃🏻 Awesome 💃🏻
~Laura~
March 27th, 2018 05:00
Mile-High Amour.
Laura🌻 said:
A super-duper of a write, Fay!
I definitely concur with all the comments made thus far!
I’m with you all the way about love and tenderness!
“Show me dimensions where soul contacts heart...”, is one of my favorite lines!
A delightful read! Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
March 26th, 2018 14:05
Laura🌻 said:
A super-duper of a write, Fay!
I definitely concur with all the comments made thus far!
I’m with you all the way about love and tenderness!
“Show me dimensions where soul contacts heart...”, is one of my favorite lines!
A delightful read! Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
March 26th, 2018 14:05
Mile-High Amour.
dusk arising said:
it could be said there are those of us who need to be in orbit for quite some time before we can dock in space .... so much debris out there to be avoided
March 26th, 2018 14:01
dusk arising said:
it could be said there are those of us who need to be in orbit for quite some time before we can dock in space .... so much debris out there to be avoided
March 26th, 2018 14:01
Mile-High Amour.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Fay and so true. True love is the way to go.
March 26th, 2018 07:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Fay and so true. True love is the way to go.
March 26th, 2018 07:57
Mile-High Amour.
Lorna said:
Phenomenal Fay! Love the thoughts especially weeding the men from the boys, the truth from the fake..... perfect construction. Wow......
March 26th, 2018 05:32
Lorna said:
Phenomenal Fay! Love the thoughts especially weeding the men from the boys, the truth from the fake..... perfect construction. Wow......
March 26th, 2018 05:32
Mile-High Amour.
orchidee said:
She having fun there? Should I try this? Will I only faint?! heehee.
March 26th, 2018 04:32
orchidee said:
She having fun there? Should I try this? Will I only faint?! heehee.
March 26th, 2018 04:32
Mile-High Amour.
w c said:
Very nice, Fay. I really enjoyed the \"Find me a Club that puts Love first\" line.
March 26th, 2018 02:51
w c said:
Very nice, Fay. I really enjoyed the \"Find me a Club that puts Love first\" line.
March 26th, 2018 02:51
Mile-High Amour.
Michael Edwards said:
Just brilliant Fay - a lot of tenderness behind the humour.
March 26th, 2018 02:34
Michael Edwards said:
Just brilliant Fay - a lot of tenderness behind the humour.
March 26th, 2018 02:34
Mile-High Amour.
kevin browne said:
loving your flight of love for the metaphor in you work her. Loved it from start till the end.
March 26th, 2018 02:32
kevin browne said:
loving your flight of love for the metaphor in you work her. Loved it from start till the end.
March 26th, 2018 02:32
Blown Force.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
I LOVE WINDY DAYS
It blow where it will
But ~ we cannot tell
Where it comes from
Or where it goes !
THANKS FAY Wind purifies ~ like a Hoover
Making sure that the composition of the Air
(for good or ill !) is uniform everywhere !
A Seasonal Adjective (W ~ S ~ S ~ A) gives
WIND an extra poetic dimension ~ Elegant
Thanks for composing and circulating !
The PHOTO took my breath away ~ Perfect
ANGELA love the Mountains & the Wind in
her hair ! She send her LOVE X
Yours as always ~ BRIAN & ANGELA
March 25th, 2018 01:51
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
I LOVE WINDY DAYS
It blow where it will
But ~ we cannot tell
Where it comes from
Or where it goes !
THANKS FAY Wind purifies ~ like a Hoover
Making sure that the composition of the Air
(for good or ill !) is uniform everywhere !
A Seasonal Adjective (W ~ S ~ S ~ A) gives
WIND an extra poetic dimension ~ Elegant
Thanks for composing and circulating !
The PHOTO took my breath away ~ Perfect
ANGELA love the Mountains & the Wind in
her hair ! She send her LOVE X
Yours as always ~ BRIAN & ANGELA
March 25th, 2018 01:51
MY AIM.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
IMPERCEPTIBLY
IMMACULATELY
IMPOSINGLY
IMPARTIALLY
IMMEDIATE
All these adverbs harbour Spring FAY ~ but they also describe how you pen your daily ODE. I love to comment but alas IMPERFECTLY ! Love the JOY in the picture ~ It is the dorsal view of ANGELA at Daybreak ~ JOY ! Thanks for caring and sharing each day ~ Yours as ever ~ BRIAN
March 23rd, 2018 17:09
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
IMPERCEPTIBLY
IMMACULATELY
IMPOSINGLY
IMPARTIALLY
IMMEDIATE
All these adverbs harbour Spring FAY ~ but they also describe how you pen your daily ODE. I love to comment but alas IMPERFECTLY ! Love the JOY in the picture ~ It is the dorsal view of ANGELA at Daybreak ~ JOY ! Thanks for caring and sharing each day ~ Yours as ever ~ BRIAN
March 23rd, 2018 17:09
MY AIM.
Laura🌻 said:
I concur with Tepo!
Another magical write,
my dear Fay!
Loved the opening of your write...
“From the first finger of misty light
fresh rays from day’s entrance...”
It reminds me of the first
breath we breathe in of
Spring’s fresh air...as in
your beautiful pic! All she
has to do is open that
window abundant with
sunshine and freshness!
~Laura~
March 23rd, 2018 15:06
Laura🌻 said:
I concur with Tepo!
Another magical write,
my dear Fay!
Loved the opening of your write...
“From the first finger of misty light
fresh rays from day’s entrance...”
It reminds me of the first
breath we breathe in of
Spring’s fresh air...as in
your beautiful pic! All she
has to do is open that
window abundant with
sunshine and freshness!
~Laura~
March 23rd, 2018 15:06
MY AIM.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Arghh, plunged back into dark mornings soon, when the clocks change? Depends what time we get up! heehee.
March 23rd, 2018 10:00
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Arghh, plunged back into dark mornings soon, when the clocks change? Depends what time we get up! heehee.
March 23rd, 2018 10:00
STIRRING.
Lorna said:
Oh so good for the ones with deep depression to remember Fay........ Thank goodness for the \"ups\".......
March 23rd, 2018 07:17
Lorna said:
Oh so good for the ones with deep depression to remember Fay........ Thank goodness for the \"ups\".......
March 23rd, 2018 07:17
MY AIM.
Lorna said:
Up and at \'em Fay! I love \"caught in night\'s shawl\" - the Spring juices are calling!
March 23rd, 2018 07:03
Lorna said:
Up and at \'em Fay! I love \"caught in night\'s shawl\" - the Spring juices are calling!
March 23rd, 2018 07:03
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