Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
COME LET US ........
Michael Edwards said:
Just flows - another winner from the Fay stable.
April 16th, 2018 06:51
Michael Edwards said:
Just flows - another winner from the Fay stable.
April 16th, 2018 06:51
COME LET US ........
Lorna said:
Yes Fay - I am all for \"unfrocking the chill\"............ we\'re getting there!
April 16th, 2018 06:39
Lorna said:
Yes Fay - I am all for \"unfrocking the chill\"............ we\'re getting there!
April 16th, 2018 06:39
COME LET US ........
orchidee said:
A fine morning, and all-day write Fay. it started me off with the hymn: \'Come let us join our cheerful songs\'.
And yet, in churches with ye olde language, there is a line: \'The burden of our sins are intolerable to us\'. So is my singing to some! heehee.
April 16th, 2018 04:16
orchidee said:
A fine morning, and all-day write Fay. it started me off with the hymn: \'Come let us join our cheerful songs\'.
And yet, in churches with ye olde language, there is a line: \'The burden of our sins are intolerable to us\'. So is my singing to some! heehee.
April 16th, 2018 04:16
NEWSWORTHY.
ron parrish aka wordman said:
either to much,or not enough,
lovely
April 15th, 2018 21:51
ron parrish aka wordman said:
either to much,or not enough,
lovely
April 15th, 2018 21:51
NEWSWORTHY.
ron parrish aka wordman said:
either to much,or not enough,
lovely
April 15th, 2018 21:51
ron parrish aka wordman said:
either to much,or not enough,
lovely
April 15th, 2018 21:51
NEWSWORTHY.
Christina8 said:
As we bemoan too much precipitation in most of the US, here they struggle without. Great write and thanks for sharing, Fay! Beautiful writing!
April 14th, 2018 12:34
Christina8 said:
As we bemoan too much precipitation in most of the US, here they struggle without. Great write and thanks for sharing, Fay! Beautiful writing!
April 14th, 2018 12:34
NEWSWORTHY.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Kenya -and elsewhere too maybe. We moan about the rain, if too much! And what\'s that bright light in the sky today? Ahh, the sun. Thought we\'d never see it again! Not seen it much this past week.
April 14th, 2018 10:48
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Kenya -and elsewhere too maybe. We moan about the rain, if too much! And what\'s that bright light in the sky today? Ahh, the sun. Thought we\'d never see it again! Not seen it much this past week.
April 14th, 2018 10:48
CONCEDING.
lasergraph said:
Repost are great and bring work to some that may have missed its first appearance. Coping with grief can be difficult and I myself find poetry to be a good tool to help. Thanks for giving us another look.
April 13th, 2018 15:29
lasergraph said:
Repost are great and bring work to some that may have missed its first appearance. Coping with grief can be difficult and I myself find poetry to be a good tool to help. Thanks for giving us another look.
April 13th, 2018 15:29
CONCEDING.
Lorna said:
Your last stanza is wonderful Fay (as is the rest) - but that reminded me that when someone dies we mourn but also feel fear about our own death....so \"conceding to mystery fear has been lost\" is a gift we hopefully come to.
April 13th, 2018 15:16
Lorna said:
Your last stanza is wonderful Fay (as is the rest) - but that reminded me that when someone dies we mourn but also feel fear about our own death....so \"conceding to mystery fear has been lost\" is a gift we hopefully come to.
April 13th, 2018 15:16
CONCEDING.
Michael Edwards said:
I can see why it was requested - fine work Fay.
April 13th, 2018 12:37
Michael Edwards said:
I can see why it was requested - fine work Fay.
April 13th, 2018 12:37
CONCEDING.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Mmm velvety galaxy chocolate! Erm, not quite the theme of this poem, Orchi. lol.
April 13th, 2018 10:21
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Mmm velvety galaxy chocolate! Erm, not quite the theme of this poem, Orchi. lol.
April 13th, 2018 10:21
CONCEDING.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for posting FAY and thanks for your comment which explains why this Poem is out of phase with your recent muses ! When one suffers a sudden loss ~ committing ones feelings to Poetry can be very cathartic ~ and I am sure this one was ! When we suddenly lose someone close ~ time & tide stop and we find ourselves in \"griefs limbo\". This feeling ~ which I share (accidental death of a Brother @ 16) is perfectly expressed in your requiem ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Love the visual ~ Yours as always BRIAN
April 13th, 2018 09:59
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for posting FAY and thanks for your comment which explains why this Poem is out of phase with your recent muses ! When one suffers a sudden loss ~ committing ones feelings to Poetry can be very cathartic ~ and I am sure this one was ! When we suddenly lose someone close ~ time & tide stop and we find ourselves in \"griefs limbo\". This feeling ~ which I share (accidental death of a Brother @ 16) is perfectly expressed in your requiem ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Love the visual ~ Yours as always BRIAN
April 13th, 2018 09:59
ALLURE.
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful write Fay, the seduction of the cliffs tantalising all.
April 13th, 2018 00:18
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful write Fay, the seduction of the cliffs tantalising all.
April 13th, 2018 00:18
ALLURE.
Laura🌻 said:
A beautiful write, my dear Fay!
Alluring indeed! An awesome poem and the view your pic shows us is beyond beautiful!
I enjoyed the read! Your personification of your homeland is so inviting. Perhaps one day my eyes will be privileged to witness its beauty!
~Laura~
April 12th, 2018 17:14
Laura🌻 said:
A beautiful write, my dear Fay!
Alluring indeed! An awesome poem and the view your pic shows us is beyond beautiful!
I enjoyed the read! Your personification of your homeland is so inviting. Perhaps one day my eyes will be privileged to witness its beauty!
~Laura~
April 12th, 2018 17:14
ALLURE.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
CORNWALL ~ A Perfect Peninsular ~ Timeless & Touched by the hand of God ! Thanks FAY for perfection in Poem \'n Pic and reminding us ~ that in essence ~ MPS is a POETRY SITE ! How a Poem ends is equally as important as its start & middle ! I love you final verse !
Storms have engraved a raw majesty
on Cornwall\'s honed face
that once gazed on draws lovers back
Angela & I have enjoyed Cornwall separately and together and it always draws us back ~ again & again ~ AMEN ! We love you FAY for being a perfect poet and sharing freely with us ALL ~ Yours ANGELA & BRIAN XOX
April 12th, 2018 06:37
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
CORNWALL ~ A Perfect Peninsular ~ Timeless & Touched by the hand of God ! Thanks FAY for perfection in Poem \'n Pic and reminding us ~ that in essence ~ MPS is a POETRY SITE ! How a Poem ends is equally as important as its start & middle ! I love you final verse !
Storms have engraved a raw majesty
on Cornwall\'s honed face
that once gazed on draws lovers back
Angela & I have enjoyed Cornwall separately and together and it always draws us back ~ again & again ~ AMEN ! We love you FAY for being a perfect poet and sharing freely with us ALL ~ Yours ANGELA & BRIAN XOX
April 12th, 2018 06:37
ALLURE.
Michael Edwards said:
Ditto everything said before me - you\'re the ultimate wordsmith Fay.
April 12th, 2018 04:42
Michael Edwards said:
Ditto everything said before me - you\'re the ultimate wordsmith Fay.
April 12th, 2018 04:42
ALLURE.
Lorna said:
Beautiful poem and I am in awe of the views of your coast that you share with us.........
April 12th, 2018 04:36
Lorna said:
Beautiful poem and I am in awe of the views of your coast that you share with us.........
April 12th, 2018 04:36
ALLURE.
Daveyboyz said:
Well described and a more than a couple astoundingly assembled lines.
April 12th, 2018 03:58
Daveyboyz said:
Well described and a more than a couple astoundingly assembled lines.
April 12th, 2018 03:58
ALLURE.
Nicholas Browning said:
A perfect title. It lived up to its name. Your sense for description and making things seem almost visible is astounding. Well done.
April 12th, 2018 03:44
Nicholas Browning said:
A perfect title. It lived up to its name. Your sense for description and making things seem almost visible is astounding. Well done.
April 12th, 2018 03:44
DECEPTION.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ideally FAY ~ Each child born into this World should enjoy a loving upbringing with its Birth Mother & Genetic Father ! Because MEN don\'t get Physically Pregnant ~ The Girls they impregnate often end us a Single Parents and have to bear the Responsibility of Child rearing alone without the support of the Father. Worse still they are often driven to choose ABORTION a the most most appropriate answer to a difficult situation ! I am PRO-LIFE Thanks for raising this dilemma which always greatly disadvantages the Female. Thanks for caring ~ BRIAN
April 11th, 2018 17:32
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ideally FAY ~ Each child born into this World should enjoy a loving upbringing with its Birth Mother & Genetic Father ! Because MEN don\'t get Physically Pregnant ~ The Girls they impregnate often end us a Single Parents and have to bear the Responsibility of Child rearing alone without the support of the Father. Worse still they are often driven to choose ABORTION a the most most appropriate answer to a difficult situation ! I am PRO-LIFE Thanks for raising this dilemma which always greatly disadvantages the Female. Thanks for caring ~ BRIAN
April 11th, 2018 17:32
DECEPTION.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ideally FAY ~ Each child born into this World should enjoy a loving upbringing with its Birth Mother & Genetic Father ! Because MEN don\'t get Physically Pregnant ~ The Girls they impregnate often end us a Single Parents and have to bear the Responsibility of Child rearing alone without the support of the Father. Worse still they are often driven to choose ABORTION a the most most appropriate answer to a difficult situation ! I am PRO-LIFE Thanks for raising this dilemma which always greatly disadvantages the Female. Thanks for caring ~ BRIAN
April 11th, 2018 17:32
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ideally FAY ~ Each child born into this World should enjoy a loving upbringing with its Birth Mother & Genetic Father ! Because MEN don\'t get Physically Pregnant ~ The Girls they impregnate often end us a Single Parents and have to bear the Responsibility of Child rearing alone without the support of the Father. Worse still they are often driven to choose ABORTION a the most most appropriate answer to a difficult situation ! I am PRO-LIFE Thanks for raising this dilemma which always greatly disadvantages the Female. Thanks for caring ~ BRIAN
April 11th, 2018 17:32
DECEPTION.
Christina8 said:
Such a sad story but very well written. SOME men!! Great job Fay!
April 11th, 2018 12:08
Christina8 said:
Such a sad story but very well written. SOME men!! Great job Fay!
April 11th, 2018 12:08
DECEPTION.
Goldfinch60 said:
So sad, these type of man should be ***************ed Enter your own word,!
April 11th, 2018 08:20
Goldfinch60 said:
So sad, these type of man should be ***************ed Enter your own word,!
April 11th, 2018 08:20
DECEPTION.
Michael Edwards said:
So cruel and sadly this situation will continue.
April 11th, 2018 06:13
Michael Edwards said:
So cruel and sadly this situation will continue.
April 11th, 2018 06:13
SUNDAY WAYS.
Lorna said:
After: more creamy helpings of sweet fruit pie...... I am now dreading back to work on Monday! Great write1
April 11th, 2018 04:59
Lorna said:
After: more creamy helpings of sweet fruit pie...... I am now dreading back to work on Monday! Great write1
April 11th, 2018 04:59
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