Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Self-Imposed.
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Fay, those wraiths can certainly be scary.
March 16th, 2018 01:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Fay, those wraiths can certainly be scary.
March 16th, 2018 01:37
Self-Imposed.
willyweed said:
first i love that picture Fay and your interesting albeit dreary tale is superb. bravo
March 15th, 2018 09:03
willyweed said:
first i love that picture Fay and your interesting albeit dreary tale is superb. bravo
March 15th, 2018 09:03
Self-Imposed.
Laura🌻 said:
A bit frightening,
my dear Fay!
A powerful write!
So powerful that it
felt like a revisit from
one of my past panic attacks!
~Laura~
March 15th, 2018 07:09
Laura🌻 said:
A bit frightening,
my dear Fay!
A powerful write!
So powerful that it
felt like a revisit from
one of my past panic attacks!
~Laura~
March 15th, 2018 07:09
Self-Imposed.
Michael Edwards said:
really got drawn into this - super work as always Fay.
March 15th, 2018 06:53
Michael Edwards said:
really got drawn into this - super work as always Fay.
March 15th, 2018 06:53
Self-Imposed.
Lorna said:
Oh this conjured up the 1930\'s Dracula with Bela Lugosi - where the women vampires glided around in the castle to NO music....... the scariest movie ever made......\"Children of the night.... what beautiful music they make\"...........
March 15th, 2018 06:20
Lorna said:
Oh this conjured up the 1930\'s Dracula with Bela Lugosi - where the women vampires glided around in the castle to NO music....... the scariest movie ever made......\"Children of the night.... what beautiful music they make\"...........
March 15th, 2018 06:20
BIRTHRIGHT.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY For sharing ten great \"Secrets of Happiness\"
1 Free your SPIRIT
2 Spread your WINGS
3 Nurture POSITIVITY
4 Climb HIGHER
5 Be fervent in ZEAL
6 Feed moods of POSITIVITY
7 A light HEART is a satisfied HEART
8 Each Day is an opportunity for GOOD
9 LOVE & LAUGHTER ~ Ken Dodd\'s Remedy !
10 Replace HURT with JOY ~ AMEN !
You are too generous FAY ~ each homily ~ a perfect Poem
Yours as always ~ BRIAN!
March 14th, 2018 17:58
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY For sharing ten great \"Secrets of Happiness\"
1 Free your SPIRIT
2 Spread your WINGS
3 Nurture POSITIVITY
4 Climb HIGHER
5 Be fervent in ZEAL
6 Feed moods of POSITIVITY
7 A light HEART is a satisfied HEART
8 Each Day is an opportunity for GOOD
9 LOVE & LAUGHTER ~ Ken Dodd\'s Remedy !
10 Replace HURT with JOY ~ AMEN !
You are too generous FAY ~ each homily ~ a perfect Poem
Yours as always ~ BRIAN!
March 14th, 2018 17:58
No Time.
Poetic Dan said:
Wow.. As it all sank in I began well up, thank your sharing a beautifully hard write. You are wonderful soul of light
March 14th, 2018 17:36
Poetic Dan said:
Wow.. As it all sank in I began well up, thank your sharing a beautifully hard write. You are wonderful soul of light
March 14th, 2018 17:36
BIRTHRIGHT.
willyweed said:
wonderful work Fay, joy and peace does come from within. nicely done. ww
March 14th, 2018 07:28
willyweed said:
wonderful work Fay, joy and peace does come from within. nicely done. ww
March 14th, 2018 07:28
BIRTHRIGHT.
Lorna said:
You had me breathing slowly and evenly and feeling at peace Fay.....It\'s been harder to feel just sheer joy lately - which I used to feel for absolutely no reason at all! Just joy! Your first stanza says it all - if the knots would loosen, the joy is still there!
March 14th, 2018 06:45
Lorna said:
You had me breathing slowly and evenly and feeling at peace Fay.....It\'s been harder to feel just sheer joy lately - which I used to feel for absolutely no reason at all! Just joy! Your first stanza says it all - if the knots would loosen, the joy is still there!
March 14th, 2018 06:45
BIRTHRIGHT.
Nicholas Browning said:
A very optimistic view of human nature and our purpose as a species. Your way with words astounds me. Also, the fact that you don\'t stray from the message you\'re trying to portray at all is incredible. Well done.
March 14th, 2018 06:19
Nicholas Browning said:
A very optimistic view of human nature and our purpose as a species. Your way with words astounds me. Also, the fact that you don\'t stray from the message you\'re trying to portray at all is incredible. Well done.
March 14th, 2018 06:19
No Time.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for caring & sharing FAY ! I can empathise ~ even in my short life I remember situations where a GOOD BYE was not possible and it still hurts. BUT ~ like you ~ I have many sweet Memories of those who have been \"Called Home\" ~ sometimes tragically. The memories have softened my loss and th lack of opportunity to say A REAL GOOD BYE ! Gone but never forgotten ! Yours Friend as always ~ BRIAN
March 13th, 2018 18:55
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for caring & sharing FAY ! I can empathise ~ even in my short life I remember situations where a GOOD BYE was not possible and it still hurts. BUT ~ like you ~ I have many sweet Memories of those who have been \"Called Home\" ~ sometimes tragically. The memories have softened my loss and th lack of opportunity to say A REAL GOOD BYE ! Gone but never forgotten ! Yours Friend as always ~ BRIAN
March 13th, 2018 18:55
No Time.
orchidee said:
A sensitive write Fay.
Meanwhile - some wish there was no time to hear me sing. But oh, there\'s always time for that, unfortunately! lol.
March 13th, 2018 10:42
orchidee said:
A sensitive write Fay.
Meanwhile - some wish there was no time to hear me sing. But oh, there\'s always time for that, unfortunately! lol.
March 13th, 2018 10:42
No Time.
Laura🌻 said:
I’m reading this beautiful but sad write with a heavy-heart, my dear Fay! The imagery is remarkable! It conveys the message of the agonizing pain of missing a loved one. It can be so unbearable at times!
~Laura~
March 13th, 2018 05:18
Laura🌻 said:
I’m reading this beautiful but sad write with a heavy-heart, my dear Fay! The imagery is remarkable! It conveys the message of the agonizing pain of missing a loved one. It can be so unbearable at times!
~Laura~
March 13th, 2018 05:18
TIMED.
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Fay, those yellow trumpets are blowing in our garden.
March 13th, 2018 01:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Fay, those yellow trumpets are blowing in our garden.
March 13th, 2018 01:57
TIMED.
Christina8 said:
An absolutely beautiful poem, Fay! I wish Spring would come and begin her \"floral task\" (great words!) where I live. Loved it from beginning to end!
March 12th, 2018 11:10
Christina8 said:
An absolutely beautiful poem, Fay! I wish Spring would come and begin her \"floral task\" (great words!) where I live. Loved it from beginning to end!
March 12th, 2018 11:10
INTERLACED.
Jeremy Cohen said:
This is so beautiful! Ugh I\'m such a hopeless romantic! Well done!
March 12th, 2018 11:06
Jeremy Cohen said:
This is so beautiful! Ugh I\'m such a hopeless romantic! Well done!
March 12th, 2018 11:06
TIMED.
Ivory said:
Very descriptive piece. Spring is a magical season. I enjoyed ready this.
March 12th, 2018 06:39
Ivory said:
Very descriptive piece. Spring is a magical season. I enjoyed ready this.
March 12th, 2018 06:39
TIMED.
Lorna said:
I love this and \"her need to change to a greener dress\"........... very beautiful Fay!
March 12th, 2018 06:36
Lorna said:
I love this and \"her need to change to a greener dress\"........... very beautiful Fay!
March 12th, 2018 06:36
TIMED.
Laura🌻 said:
An awesome write,
my dear Fay!
The imagery in your poem
is immense! It conjures up
a beautiful image of Spring!
We are definitely ready for
Spring to make its debut!
~Laura~
March 12th, 2018 04:44
Laura🌻 said:
An awesome write,
my dear Fay!
The imagery in your poem
is immense! It conjures up
a beautiful image of Spring!
We are definitely ready for
Spring to make its debut!
~Laura~
March 12th, 2018 04:44
INTERLACED.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good romantic write Fay, those \'single\' went into \'duo\' but would eventually combine as a \'single\'. That is what love does.
March 10th, 2018 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Good romantic write Fay, those \'single\' went into \'duo\' but would eventually combine as a \'single\'. That is what love does.
March 10th, 2018 01:19
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