Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Wind-Demons.
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
i really enjoyed reading this fay .. .i love how you referred to the wind as some \'\' ravenous beast \'\', scaring people , making them want to hide.
these lines stood out for me and were my favourite !
the night heaves
with zealous wind-demons cavorting
in lace-caps, sandy-socks,
grit-filled ribbons
and the saltiest long seaweed frocks.
brilliant wording fay .. love this
April 4th, 2018 03:01
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
i really enjoyed reading this fay .. .i love how you referred to the wind as some \'\' ravenous beast \'\', scaring people , making them want to hide.
these lines stood out for me and were my favourite !
the night heaves
with zealous wind-demons cavorting
in lace-caps, sandy-socks,
grit-filled ribbons
and the saltiest long seaweed frocks.
brilliant wording fay .. love this
April 4th, 2018 03:01
Paired.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good love write Fay, that love only increases with time.
April 4th, 2018 00:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good love write Fay, that love only increases with time.
April 4th, 2018 00:58
Paired.
Lorna said:
Loved this and especially: They stood in awe
of what they knew had begun,
for outside of time
they learnt nothing but new.
What a wonderful line Fay!
April 3rd, 2018 05:46
Lorna said:
Loved this and especially: They stood in awe
of what they knew had begun,
for outside of time
they learnt nothing but new.
What a wonderful line Fay!
April 3rd, 2018 05:46
MYSTERIOUS.
Christina8 said:
Lovely write about rainbows, as only you can, Fay!
April 2nd, 2018 17:36
Christina8 said:
Lovely write about rainbows, as only you can, Fay!
April 2nd, 2018 17:36
MYSTERIOUS.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I know the day it first appeared, so I say, as I\'m millions of years old! heehee.
April 2nd, 2018 09:49
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I know the day it first appeared, so I say, as I\'m millions of years old! heehee.
April 2nd, 2018 09:49
MYSTERIOUS.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for your ever new and inventive Poets touch ! Who would have thought that the mechanical refraction of white light into (R O Y G B I V) by the prismatic raindrop ~ could ever stir such poetical musings ! But it did because FAY saw it ! Thanks for a remarkable POEM # from the pen of a very elegant Lady. I have a vision FAY of you writing all these awesome Odes on vellum with a quill pen ~ before moving into the 21st C and sharing them with us lesser Poets on your vintage PC ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours as always BRIAN. Please check my 14 Stations and my new Fusion CHOCOLATE ~ thanks B.
April 2nd, 2018 08:22
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for your ever new and inventive Poets touch ! Who would have thought that the mechanical refraction of white light into (R O Y G B I V) by the prismatic raindrop ~ could ever stir such poetical musings ! But it did because FAY saw it ! Thanks for a remarkable POEM # from the pen of a very elegant Lady. I have a vision FAY of you writing all these awesome Odes on vellum with a quill pen ~ before moving into the 21st C and sharing them with us lesser Poets on your vintage PC ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours as always BRIAN. Please check my 14 Stations and my new Fusion CHOCOLATE ~ thanks B.
April 2nd, 2018 08:22
WISELY BOUGHT.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Erm, I can\'t say the third line properly after a drop or two of s-s-s-sherry! (I\'m almost tee-total really).
April 1st, 2018 08:06
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Erm, I can\'t say the third line properly after a drop or two of s-s-s-sherry! (I\'m almost tee-total really).
April 1st, 2018 08:06
CONSTANT.
kevin browne said:
my first ever job when I left school was working with my father who owned two trawler boats at the time. I spent 5 years waving over the ocean and the sensation is great. a lot of memories for me in this poem of yours. great tribute to those men, and women too.
March 30th, 2018 15:40
kevin browne said:
my first ever job when I left school was working with my father who owned two trawler boats at the time. I spent 5 years waving over the ocean and the sensation is great. a lot of memories for me in this poem of yours. great tribute to those men, and women too.
March 30th, 2018 15:40
CONSTANT.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good description of those very hard working fishermen.
March 30th, 2018 07:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Good description of those very hard working fishermen.
March 30th, 2018 07:48
CHANGELING
dusk arising said:
such poetic meteorology. we are all dancers upon the winds changing mood aren\'t we.... oh to be a bird. very enjoyable
March 27th, 2018 17:28
dusk arising said:
such poetic meteorology. we are all dancers upon the winds changing mood aren\'t we.... oh to be a bird. very enjoyable
March 27th, 2018 17:28
CHANGELING
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Fay, air is so special but we take it for granted.
March 27th, 2018 08:03
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Fay, air is so special but we take it for granted.
March 27th, 2018 08:03
CHANGELING
Lorna said:
You\'ve caught the \"air\" absolutely! From it\'s lovely spring dances to the wind that blows down trees!
March 27th, 2018 06:48
Lorna said:
You\'ve caught the \"air\" absolutely! From it\'s lovely spring dances to the wind that blows down trees!
March 27th, 2018 06:48
CHANGELING
Laura🌻 said:
An exquisite write, my dear Fay!
Your usage of such great metaphors to tells us about the seasons makes your poem come alive! I can clearly visualize the changing of the seasons! I love the last stanza! It makes me want to get up and dance!
💃🏻 Awesome 💃🏻
~Laura~
March 27th, 2018 05:00
Laura🌻 said:
An exquisite write, my dear Fay!
Your usage of such great metaphors to tells us about the seasons makes your poem come alive! I can clearly visualize the changing of the seasons! I love the last stanza! It makes me want to get up and dance!
💃🏻 Awesome 💃🏻
~Laura~
March 27th, 2018 05:00
Mile-High Amour.
Laura🌻 said:
A super-duper of a write, Fay!
I definitely concur with all the comments made thus far!
I’m with you all the way about love and tenderness!
“Show me dimensions where soul contacts heart...”, is one of my favorite lines!
A delightful read! Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
March 26th, 2018 14:05
Laura🌻 said:
A super-duper of a write, Fay!
I definitely concur with all the comments made thus far!
I’m with you all the way about love and tenderness!
“Show me dimensions where soul contacts heart...”, is one of my favorite lines!
A delightful read! Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
March 26th, 2018 14:05
Mile-High Amour.
dusk arising said:
it could be said there are those of us who need to be in orbit for quite some time before we can dock in space .... so much debris out there to be avoided
March 26th, 2018 14:01
dusk arising said:
it could be said there are those of us who need to be in orbit for quite some time before we can dock in space .... so much debris out there to be avoided
March 26th, 2018 14:01
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