Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
STIRRING.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ You have stolen one of my fave MANTRAS \"When you really reach rock~bottom the only way is UP ~ AMEN ! You have created a very beautiful Poem from my stark Mantra ~ that is your gift ! Love the you have discovered Julian\'s Title Backgrounds ~ they are fabulous ! Love your visual ~ Phoenix holding an ATOM (of a specific element) showing the electrons in their quantum orbitals ~ an elegant piece of SCIENCE ! I\'m speechless in appreciation ! Yours very impressed BRIAN ! To my eye the ATOM looks like SODIUM which has 11 electrons in four orbitals containing 2 2 6 1 (= 11) electrons. Sodium is a very important element in animal & plant metabolism (as Na+ ions) and of course in Sea Water (2.5% sodium chloride NaCl) ! Perhaps that is why it was chosen ~ imagine Fish & Chips without SALT ! Yours B.
March 22nd, 2018 16:49
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ You have stolen one of my fave MANTRAS \"When you really reach rock~bottom the only way is UP ~ AMEN ! You have created a very beautiful Poem from my stark Mantra ~ that is your gift ! Love the you have discovered Julian\'s Title Backgrounds ~ they are fabulous ! Love your visual ~ Phoenix holding an ATOM (of a specific element) showing the electrons in their quantum orbitals ~ an elegant piece of SCIENCE ! I\'m speechless in appreciation ! Yours very impressed BRIAN ! To my eye the ATOM looks like SODIUM which has 11 electrons in four orbitals containing 2 2 6 1 (= 11) electrons. Sodium is a very important element in animal & plant metabolism (as Na+ ions) and of course in Sea Water (2.5% sodium chloride NaCl) ! Perhaps that is why it was chosen ~ imagine Fish & Chips without SALT ! Yours B.
March 22nd, 2018 16:49
MYSTIC.
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a beautiful write Fay - into favourites with this one.
March 22nd, 2018 02:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a beautiful write Fay - into favourites with this one.
March 22nd, 2018 02:10
MYSTIC.
Michael Edwards said:
And so to bed - fine work Fay - love \'day is erased\'.
March 21st, 2018 10:32
Michael Edwards said:
And so to bed - fine work Fay - love \'day is erased\'.
March 21st, 2018 10:32
MYSTIC.
Lorna said:
Gorgeous picture of twilight - that lovely time of day that is always mystic and never the same twice! Wonderful Fay.......
March 21st, 2018 10:02
Lorna said:
Gorgeous picture of twilight - that lovely time of day that is always mystic and never the same twice! Wonderful Fay.......
March 21st, 2018 10:02
MYSTIC.
Laura🌻 said:
So beautifully penned,
my dear Fay!
“...the One who such beauty maintains as light-to-dark merges in mystic twilight.”
I’m envisioning a heavenly image created by your heavenly words !
~Laura~
March 21st, 2018 09:50
Laura🌻 said:
So beautifully penned,
my dear Fay!
“...the One who such beauty maintains as light-to-dark merges in mystic twilight.”
I’m envisioning a heavenly image created by your heavenly words !
~Laura~
March 21st, 2018 09:50
ATTITUDE.
Laura🌻 said:
Wow, my dear Fay!
So much truth in this
fine write! A great
message to heed...
beautifully summarized
in the last stanza!
~Laura~
March 20th, 2018 17:45
Laura🌻 said:
Wow, my dear Fay!
So much truth in this
fine write! A great
message to heed...
beautifully summarized
in the last stanza!
~Laura~
March 20th, 2018 17:45
ATTITUDE.
Lorna said:
I love the baskets swinging between success and failure........
March 20th, 2018 06:54
Lorna said:
I love the baskets swinging between success and failure........
March 20th, 2018 06:54
ATTITUDE.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing FAY ~ Newtons Law of Motion can be rephrased as in your Poem ~ To every BAD action ~ There can be an equal and opposite GOOD reaction or Love changes Everything ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours ~ with love ~ BRIAN
March 20th, 2018 06:47
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing FAY ~ Newtons Law of Motion can be rephrased as in your Poem ~ To every BAD action ~ There can be an equal and opposite GOOD reaction or Love changes Everything ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours ~ with love ~ BRIAN
March 20th, 2018 06:47
WAITING.....
Poetic25 said:
fay
A great piece of writing, truly in your style. Really like the story here.
M:)
March 19th, 2018 12:52
Poetic25 said:
fay
A great piece of writing, truly in your style. Really like the story here.
M:)
March 19th, 2018 12:52
WAITING.....
Christina8 said:
An absolutely fantastic poem Fay! I would have to agree with Laura on my favorite part. Just beautiful!
March 19th, 2018 06:15
Christina8 said:
An absolutely fantastic poem Fay! I would have to agree with Laura on my favorite part. Just beautiful!
March 19th, 2018 06:15
WAITING.....
Laura🌻 said:
A fantastic write, Fay!
I love the entire poem and pic. However, if I had to choose my favorite lines, they would be...
“Lipless the language that fills a blank canvas
as she bequeaths me semantics before they escape.”
AMAZING!!
~Laura~
March 19th, 2018 06:06
Laura🌻 said:
A fantastic write, Fay!
I love the entire poem and pic. However, if I had to choose my favorite lines, they would be...
“Lipless the language that fills a blank canvas
as she bequeaths me semantics before they escape.”
AMAZING!!
~Laura~
March 19th, 2018 06:06
WAITING.....
Lorna said:
Beautiful description of the page waiting for your words Fay and you waiting for your muse! Perfect picture to go with it..........
March 19th, 2018 06:03
Lorna said:
Beautiful description of the page waiting for your words Fay and you waiting for your muse! Perfect picture to go with it..........
March 19th, 2018 06:03
TROUBLE.
Laura🌻 said:
A brilliantly penned poem my dear Fay! A perfect pic to illustrate your write! Enjoyed it!
~Laura~
March 18th, 2018 16:32
Laura🌻 said:
A brilliantly penned poem my dear Fay! A perfect pic to illustrate your write! Enjoyed it!
~Laura~
March 18th, 2018 16:32
TROUBLE.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY a masterly symbiosis of POEM \'n PIC ! It is a gift especially to see the Poem in the Picture ~ Your verbalisation is perfect ! I have hundreds of PICTURES and I know each on can spawn a Poem ~ I must eat more salmon to stir my muse ! I have an idea for MONDAY and will value you comment ~ OK BRIAN
March 18th, 2018 10:27
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY a masterly symbiosis of POEM \'n PIC ! It is a gift especially to see the Poem in the Picture ~ Your verbalisation is perfect ! I have hundreds of PICTURES and I know each on can spawn a Poem ~ I must eat more salmon to stir my muse ! I have an idea for MONDAY and will value you comment ~ OK BRIAN
March 18th, 2018 10:27
TROUBLE.
Michael Edwards said:
A collection of painted picture - think I\'ll stay inland.
March 18th, 2018 09:30
Michael Edwards said:
A collection of painted picture - think I\'ll stay inland.
March 18th, 2018 09:30
TROUBLE.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Hope it\'s only mini-trouble - a temporary delay to Spring arriving? Well, tree in front garden has started blossoming again, and the hedgerows!
March 18th, 2018 05:42
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Hope it\'s only mini-trouble - a temporary delay to Spring arriving? Well, tree in front garden has started blossoming again, and the hedgerows!
March 18th, 2018 05:42
TROUBLE.
Lorna said:
So full of images! I love lemon meringue pie! You have piebalds and duns in here so I\'m off with the horses! A storm may be coming but we\'ll get on our horses, head for home and eat the pie in safety!
March 18th, 2018 04:51
Lorna said:
So full of images! I love lemon meringue pie! You have piebalds and duns in here so I\'m off with the horses! A storm may be coming but we\'ll get on our horses, head for home and eat the pie in safety!
March 18th, 2018 04:51
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