Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Swift Magic.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL FAY. A perfect blending of POEM \'n PHOTO in celebration of Swifts a most beautiful ~ especially in flight. You describe it perfectly. The combination of the SIGHT of the swirling FLOCK and the SOUND they make in flight is called a MURMURATION which is shortened to a MURMUR of SWIFTS (and LARKS etc) This is a collective name for a \"Flock in Flight\" Thanks for sharing it made my day complete as I had posted a Poem on Collective Nouns for \"Groups of Birds\" ! Yours as always ~ BRIAN
December 18th, 2017 18:45
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL FAY. A perfect blending of POEM \'n PHOTO in celebration of Swifts a most beautiful ~ especially in flight. You describe it perfectly. The combination of the SIGHT of the swirling FLOCK and the SOUND they make in flight is called a MURMURATION which is shortened to a MURMUR of SWIFTS (and LARKS etc) This is a collective name for a \"Flock in Flight\" Thanks for sharing it made my day complete as I had posted a Poem on Collective Nouns for \"Groups of Birds\" ! Yours as always ~ BRIAN
December 18th, 2017 18:45
Swift Magic.
Goldfinch60 said:
Swifts are magnificent birds as is this poem.
December 18th, 2017 13:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Swifts are magnificent birds as is this poem.
December 18th, 2017 13:38
Swift Magic.
Louis Gibbs said:
Your tribute poem soars and inspires like the birds of its subject. Great write, Fay!
December 18th, 2017 10:43
Louis Gibbs said:
Your tribute poem soars and inspires like the birds of its subject. Great write, Fay!
December 18th, 2017 10:43
Swift Magic.
orchidee said:
It is a magical write Fay, though I don\'t go along with \'magic\' in any spooky sense.
December 18th, 2017 09:14
orchidee said:
It is a magical write Fay, though I don\'t go along with \'magic\' in any spooky sense.
December 18th, 2017 09:14
Swift Magic.
Michael Edwards said:
They do create magical sights - great work Fay.
December 18th, 2017 04:52
Michael Edwards said:
They do create magical sights - great work Fay.
December 18th, 2017 04:52
If.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful and that last stanza is absolutely glorious.
December 18th, 2017 01:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful and that last stanza is absolutely glorious.
December 18th, 2017 01:34
If.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
This strikes a CHORD with ME ~ FAY and I can read Myself and Angela into each of these verses ! Verse 1. She fills all my voids of Ardour Verse 2. When we need assurance in Life & Love ~ we turn to each other. Verse 3. ANGELA and I have been in a serious Relationship for 18 months and already we have a store of Precious Memories which lift us up when we are separated ~ AMEN ! Thanks for your precious comments FAY ~ Blessings as ever BRIAN & ANGELA Love the PHOTO ~ JETTIES are a great place for meditation ~ B.
December 17th, 2017 17:16
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
This strikes a CHORD with ME ~ FAY and I can read Myself and Angela into each of these verses ! Verse 1. She fills all my voids of Ardour Verse 2. When we need assurance in Life & Love ~ we turn to each other. Verse 3. ANGELA and I have been in a serious Relationship for 18 months and already we have a store of Precious Memories which lift us up when we are separated ~ AMEN ! Thanks for your precious comments FAY ~ Blessings as ever BRIAN & ANGELA Love the PHOTO ~ JETTIES are a great place for meditation ~ B.
December 17th, 2017 17:16
If.
Michael Edwards said:
A Princess of the written word - Fay you are more - A Queen - Superb.
December 17th, 2017 13:45
Michael Edwards said:
A Princess of the written word - Fay you are more - A Queen - Superb.
December 17th, 2017 13:45
If.
Laura🌻 said:
Oh, My Dear Poetess Fay...
As I’m reading your write of a jewel, a love song by Michael McDonald came over the radio waves! Do I call this a coincidence?
Regardless, your exquisite poem doesn’t need background music! It beautifully stands all on its own ! Enjoyed it thoroughly! Very relatable to me of a lost love of long ago! I could never express the feeling as well as you do! You are a master of the craft! In your debt My Dear Poetess!
~Laura~
December 17th, 2017 10:41
Laura🌻 said:
Oh, My Dear Poetess Fay...
As I’m reading your write of a jewel, a love song by Michael McDonald came over the radio waves! Do I call this a coincidence?
Regardless, your exquisite poem doesn’t need background music! It beautifully stands all on its own ! Enjoyed it thoroughly! Very relatable to me of a lost love of long ago! I could never express the feeling as well as you do! You are a master of the craft! In your debt My Dear Poetess!
~Laura~
December 17th, 2017 10:41
If.
Louis Gibbs said:
A beautiful poem without doubt, Fay, but it left me with a question: You shift from assertions in the last lines of the first and third stanzas, (\'I will\' and \'he will\'), to a question in the second, (\'will I\'). Was this shift deliberate? Apologies if I\'ve completely failed to comprehend your intent, my talented friend.
December 17th, 2017 08:40
Louis Gibbs said:
A beautiful poem without doubt, Fay, but it left me with a question: You shift from assertions in the last lines of the first and third stanzas, (\'I will\' and \'he will\'), to a question in the second, (\'will I\'). Was this shift deliberate? Apologies if I\'ve completely failed to comprehend your intent, my talented friend.
December 17th, 2017 08:40
Core-Healing.
Goldfinch60 said:
such a good write Fay, that silence within us is so meaningful.
December 17th, 2017 02:08
Goldfinch60 said:
such a good write Fay, that silence within us is so meaningful.
December 17th, 2017 02:08
Sweet Dividends.
FredPeyer said:
As you say so eloquently, Fay, it pays to invest in love!
December 16th, 2017 18:47
FredPeyer said:
As you say so eloquently, Fay, it pays to invest in love!
December 16th, 2017 18:47
Core-Healing.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
SILENCIO ES DE ORO ! Silence is Golden ! Sometimes we say it best ~ when we say nothing at all ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours as ever ~ BRIAN
December 16th, 2017 18:06
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
SILENCIO ES DE ORO ! Silence is Golden ! Sometimes we say it best ~ when we say nothing at all ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours as ever ~ BRIAN
December 16th, 2017 18:06
Core-Healing.
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Poetess Fay...
Your magical pen at its
best! Perfect illustration!
Inner peace...
profound and welcomed!
I seek to find it every day!
The last stanza truly speaks
to me! Thank you!
December 16th, 2017 11:19
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Poetess Fay...
Your magical pen at its
best! Perfect illustration!
Inner peace...
profound and welcomed!
I seek to find it every day!
The last stanza truly speaks
to me! Thank you!
December 16th, 2017 11:19
Core-Healing.
Louis Gibbs said:
Sacred silence ... no more beautiful sound. This one nails it, Fay!
December 16th, 2017 10:22
Louis Gibbs said:
Sacred silence ... no more beautiful sound. This one nails it, Fay!
December 16th, 2017 10:22
Core-Healing.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Silence, contemplation, meditation, etc. All good stuff. I\'m not a monk though! heehee.
December 16th, 2017 06:11
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Silence, contemplation, meditation, etc. All good stuff. I\'m not a monk though! heehee.
December 16th, 2017 06:11
Core-Healing.
Michael Edwards said:
So grateful you\'ve intropspected and come up with yet another gem Fay - bravo.
December 16th, 2017 03:56
Michael Edwards said:
So grateful you\'ve intropspected and come up with yet another gem Fay - bravo.
December 16th, 2017 03:56
His Last.
FredPeyer said:
And what a fine tribute this is, Fay! Grant was a master photographer, you Fay are a master writer.
December 16th, 2017 03:36
FredPeyer said:
And what a fine tribute this is, Fay! Grant was a master photographer, you Fay are a master writer.
December 16th, 2017 03:36
His Last.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ An awesome photo (says it all !) and a fine tribute ! People who Photograph ~ Paint and Write about NATURE (like William Grant) and those who Film & Televise it (like David Attenborough) bring us closer to GOD than most sermons ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Christmas Hugs ~ BRIAN @@@
December 14th, 2017 10:56
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ An awesome photo (says it all !) and a fine tribute ! People who Photograph ~ Paint and Write about NATURE (like William Grant) and those who Film & Televise it (like David Attenborough) bring us closer to GOD than most sermons ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Christmas Hugs ~ BRIAN @@@
December 14th, 2017 10:56
His Last.
Louis Gibbs said:
So well written and beautifully formed this fine tribute, Fay! He would be quite gratified, I\'m sure.
December 14th, 2017 09:40
Louis Gibbs said:
So well written and beautifully formed this fine tribute, Fay! He would be quite gratified, I\'m sure.
December 14th, 2017 09:40
Turbulence.
Louis Gibbs said:
Truly one of nature\'s greatest displays of beauty, to awe and inspire us. Great picture and ode, Fay!
December 13th, 2017 16:48
Louis Gibbs said:
Truly one of nature\'s greatest displays of beauty, to awe and inspire us. Great picture and ode, Fay!
December 13th, 2017 16:48
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