Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Fulfilled.
Louis Gibbs said:
So gratifying, both the shape and verbiage of this poetic beauty, Fay. Kudos!
January 11th, 2018 10:52
Louis Gibbs said:
So gratifying, both the shape and verbiage of this poetic beauty, Fay. Kudos!
January 11th, 2018 10:52
Wind-Demons.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY ~ Because CORNWALL is a Peninsular She sure gets Her share of very wild weather. I have experienced it @ Tintagel I love the N Coast of Cornwall ! Our E Coast ~ Essex ~ Suffolk ~ Norfolk (because of its geographical position) is much more gentle ~ but much less spectacular ~ Love the Poem \'n Pic ! Yours as always BRIAN.
January 10th, 2018 17:31
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY ~ Because CORNWALL is a Peninsular She sure gets Her share of very wild weather. I have experienced it @ Tintagel I love the N Coast of Cornwall ! Our E Coast ~ Essex ~ Suffolk ~ Norfolk (because of its geographical position) is much more gentle ~ but much less spectacular ~ Love the Poem \'n Pic ! Yours as always BRIAN.
January 10th, 2018 17:31
Wind-Demons.
Michael Edwards said:
This is just great and have written something along similar lines - will try to remember to post it tomorrow.
January 10th, 2018 12:42
Michael Edwards said:
This is just great and have written something along similar lines - will try to remember to post it tomorrow.
January 10th, 2018 12:42
Wind-Demons.
Louis Gibbs said:
Your well penned words made us feel the raging tempest, Fay. A powerful poem, indeed!
January 10th, 2018 11:05
Louis Gibbs said:
Your well penned words made us feel the raging tempest, Fay. A powerful poem, indeed!
January 10th, 2018 11:05
Beyond Ahead.
dusk arising said:
\'Somewhere, over the rainbow, skies are blue and the dreams, that you dare to dream, really do come true. Or something very similar happens doesn\'t it. Living long enough to look back at those pleasant episodes is one of age\'s joys. Looking bback has certainly spurred me to write - as yesterdays piece - but i never stop looking forward with positivity.
Really enjoyed reading you, thank you.
January 9th, 2018 16:46
dusk arising said:
\'Somewhere, over the rainbow, skies are blue and the dreams, that you dare to dream, really do come true. Or something very similar happens doesn\'t it. Living long enough to look back at those pleasant episodes is one of age\'s joys. Looking bback has certainly spurred me to write - as yesterdays piece - but i never stop looking forward with positivity.
Really enjoyed reading you, thank you.
January 9th, 2018 16:46
Beyond Ahead.
Goldfinch60 said:
Yet another fine write Fay, the future will be wonderful for us all.
January 9th, 2018 16:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Yet another fine write Fay, the future will be wonderful for us all.
January 9th, 2018 16:41
Beyond Ahead.
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
U must be meaning the future or even hereafter in this sublime eloquent poem. I like the great wording used. Kudos. And happy new year!
Soo nice to read from u again. Pls do review comment my latest poem too, titled,\"play it on your lips\"
January 9th, 2018 14:25
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
U must be meaning the future or even hereafter in this sublime eloquent poem. I like the great wording used. Kudos. And happy new year!
Soo nice to read from u again. Pls do review comment my latest poem too, titled,\"play it on your lips\"
January 9th, 2018 14:25
Beyond Ahead.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ A picture often stirs my MUSE and you have done full justice to this one ! We are on the threshold of 2018 and as you know I am always a supreme optimist ! So I never dwell on the PAST but always CARPE DIEM and make the best of each one ! Thanks for a positive poem as we enter 2018 ! Yours as always ~ BRIAN
January 9th, 2018 12:25
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ A picture often stirs my MUSE and you have done full justice to this one ! We are on the threshold of 2018 and as you know I am always a supreme optimist ! So I never dwell on the PAST but always CARPE DIEM and make the best of each one ! Thanks for a positive poem as we enter 2018 ! Yours as always ~ BRIAN
January 9th, 2018 12:25
Beyond Ahead.
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic again Fay. I \'predict\' more super poems from you! But not in any spooky fortune-telling way of prediction.
January 9th, 2018 08:49
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic again Fay. I \'predict\' more super poems from you! But not in any spooky fortune-telling way of prediction.
January 9th, 2018 08:49
Winter Sounds.
Christina8 said:
This is great Fay, loved it! I too look forward to warmer days!
January 8th, 2018 22:11
Christina8 said:
This is great Fay, loved it! I too look forward to warmer days!
January 8th, 2018 22:11
Winter Sounds.
MendedFences27 said:
\"Winter sounds saddest.....when seen from behind,\" is a beautiful and true line. It is sad because it can be so quiet. Facing the winter ahead can be challenging. The bitter cold, the obstructive snow, and the cutting winds are daunting.
A beautiful poem, with a hopeful ending. I await the first \"birdsong.\"
Enjoyed this read. - Phil A.
January 8th, 2018 16:14
MendedFences27 said:
\"Winter sounds saddest.....when seen from behind,\" is a beautiful and true line. It is sad because it can be so quiet. Facing the winter ahead can be challenging. The bitter cold, the obstructive snow, and the cutting winds are daunting.
A beautiful poem, with a hopeful ending. I await the first \"birdsong.\"
Enjoyed this read. - Phil A.
January 8th, 2018 16:14
Winter Sounds.
FredPeyer said:
Interesting form, well written. Fay, you surprise us with so much talent and diversity.
January 8th, 2018 12:04
FredPeyer said:
Interesting form, well written. Fay, you surprise us with so much talent and diversity.
January 8th, 2018 12:04
Winter Sounds.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Well, for us in the UK, it can often be \'the damp fingers of winter\'! And it may not always be \'proper rain\' but that drizzle stuff. Oh well, at least it\'s milder at those times!
January 8th, 2018 10:03
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Well, for us in the UK, it can often be \'the damp fingers of winter\'! And it may not always be \'proper rain\' but that drizzle stuff. Oh well, at least it\'s milder at those times!
January 8th, 2018 10:03
Winter Sounds.
Michael Edwards said:
And I\'m with Kat too waiting for future birdsong.
January 8th, 2018 09:49
Michael Edwards said:
And I\'m with Kat too waiting for future birdsong.
January 8th, 2018 09:49
Winter Sounds.
lasergraph said:
The cold frosty fingers of winter has a tight grip. Hopefully that grip will loosen soon.
January 8th, 2018 09:26
lasergraph said:
The cold frosty fingers of winter has a tight grip. Hopefully that grip will loosen soon.
January 8th, 2018 09:26
Winter Sounds.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, mind you those winter times need not be lonely, there is always somebody with you.
January 8th, 2018 08:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, mind you those winter times need not be lonely, there is always somebody with you.
January 8th, 2018 08:59
Winter Sounds.
Louis Gibbs said:
Nice experiment with form here, Fay. And a good write to boot! Kudos.
January 8th, 2018 08:02
Louis Gibbs said:
Nice experiment with form here, Fay. And a good write to boot! Kudos.
January 8th, 2018 08:02
Applause.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY ~ For another POEM \'n PIC winner ! I love the image of QUAILS ~ like Businessmen in pin-striped suits ! This image is complemented by their lovely freckled eggs ! In my experience Girls with freckles (and especially red hair & freckles !) have a special aura ! Yours as always BRIAN
January 7th, 2018 19:22
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY ~ For another POEM \'n PIC winner ! I love the image of QUAILS ~ like Businessmen in pin-striped suits ! This image is complemented by their lovely freckled eggs ! In my experience Girls with freckles (and especially red hair & freckles !) have a special aura ! Yours as always BRIAN
January 7th, 2018 19:22
Applause.
FredPeyer said:
Simply beautiful!!! Worthy of being a favorite, and worthy of three of my exclamation marks.
January 7th, 2018 11:33
FredPeyer said:
Simply beautiful!!! Worthy of being a favorite, and worthy of three of my exclamation marks.
January 7th, 2018 11:33
Applause.
Louis Gibbs said:
Brilliant usage of words, as only an accomplished poet can, Fay! Well done.
January 7th, 2018 11:13
Louis Gibbs said:
Brilliant usage of words, as only an accomplished poet can, Fay! Well done.
January 7th, 2018 11:13
Applause.
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Poetess Fay...
You never cease to amaze me! A brilliant write simply inspired by quails’ eggs! Amazing! Enjoyed the read very much!
~Laura~
January 7th, 2018 10:10
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Poetess Fay...
You never cease to amaze me! A brilliant write simply inspired by quails’ eggs! Amazing! Enjoyed the read very much!
~Laura~
January 7th, 2018 10:10
Applause.
Accidental Poet said:
And a standing ovation applause at that. Beautiful Fay.
January 7th, 2018 07:31
Accidental Poet said:
And a standing ovation applause at that. Beautiful Fay.
January 7th, 2018 07:31
« Return to the profile of Fay Slimm.
