Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
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FredPeyer said:
A picture of a thousand words and a poem that paints a picture!
Incredible, Fay, well done!
I don\'t want to comment on the subject, there would not be enough space! It was wrong and inhuman!
November 29th, 2017 18:16
FredPeyer said:
A picture of a thousand words and a poem that paints a picture!
Incredible, Fay, well done!
I don\'t want to comment on the subject, there would not be enough space! It was wrong and inhuman!
November 29th, 2017 18:16
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Louis Gibbs said:
The history of humanity is grim, indeed! Well expressed here, Fay, in all its brutality.
November 29th, 2017 15:05
Louis Gibbs said:
The history of humanity is grim, indeed! Well expressed here, Fay, in all its brutality.
November 29th, 2017 15:05
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BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for reminding us FAY of the price paid in the PAST for cheap ENERGY ! The UNIONS did a lot to remove \"Child Labour\" in the UK and improve working conditions for Adults ! Today we mostly use ELECTRICITY but give scant to how it is produced ! There is always a high \"human price\" to be paid for primary sources of ENERGY ~ Coal ~ Oil ~ Gas but Nuclear Wind Power & Hydroelectricity are safer and cleaner. Your poem made me very sad and reminded me of todays refugees who often perish by escaping in BOATS ! Beautiful Structure but a sad Subject ! Please check my \"QUICKIES\" and please add a Poem to my FUSION on CHRISTMAS ~ Yours as ever BRIAN
November 29th, 2017 12:52
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for reminding us FAY of the price paid in the PAST for cheap ENERGY ! The UNIONS did a lot to remove \"Child Labour\" in the UK and improve working conditions for Adults ! Today we mostly use ELECTRICITY but give scant to how it is produced ! There is always a high \"human price\" to be paid for primary sources of ENERGY ~ Coal ~ Oil ~ Gas but Nuclear Wind Power & Hydroelectricity are safer and cleaner. Your poem made me very sad and reminded me of todays refugees who often perish by escaping in BOATS ! Beautiful Structure but a sad Subject ! Please check my \"QUICKIES\" and please add a Poem to my FUSION on CHRISTMAS ~ Yours as ever BRIAN
November 29th, 2017 12:52
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Michael Edwards said:
I went down a couple of mines many years back as part of my job following claims for injury - not a place I would wish to return so I have nothing but admiration for those who worked in them (and those who still do). This is a super work about them.
November 29th, 2017 11:38
Michael Edwards said:
I went down a couple of mines many years back as part of my job following claims for injury - not a place I would wish to return so I have nothing but admiration for those who worked in them (and those who still do). This is a super work about them.
November 29th, 2017 11:38
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orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I read some document from a place of employment of years ago. Things like - work will be 7am to 7pm. Lunch is 30mins, during which work will on no account cease.
A rota is drawn up for collection of coal from the outside shed for the office fireplace, etc.
A friend recently moaned that he worked \'late\' until 4.30pm, then did not even have to wait for a bus, as he drove home. Luxury!
November 29th, 2017 10:38
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I read some document from a place of employment of years ago. Things like - work will be 7am to 7pm. Lunch is 30mins, during which work will on no account cease.
A rota is drawn up for collection of coal from the outside shed for the office fireplace, etc.
A friend recently moaned that he worked \'late\' until 4.30pm, then did not even have to wait for a bus, as he drove home. Luxury!
November 29th, 2017 10:38
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kevin browne said:
as a man from Somerset I am well aware of the authenticity about this poem. filled with everything you could wish for in a poem and more. a great and rare write.
November 29th, 2017 10:18
kevin browne said:
as a man from Somerset I am well aware of the authenticity about this poem. filled with everything you could wish for in a poem and more. a great and rare write.
November 29th, 2017 10:18
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Syd said:
I enjoyed this Fay. My grandfather was a coal miner. He used to tell some harrowing stories of things which happened \"down the pit\" as they would call it - Syd
November 29th, 2017 10:04
Syd said:
I enjoyed this Fay. My grandfather was a coal miner. He used to tell some harrowing stories of things which happened \"down the pit\" as they would call it - Syd
November 29th, 2017 10:04
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FredPeyer said:
Fay, after reading your incredible poem, I will never look at raindrops the same way again!
November 29th, 2017 03:26
FredPeyer said:
Fay, after reading your incredible poem, I will never look at raindrops the same way again!
November 29th, 2017 03:26
In Transit.
Louis Gibbs said:
\"Eyes with keen poetic insight\" ... I really like that line! Insight is the hallmark of a poet, indeed.
Well expressed observations of the life of raindrops on window panes ... and well formed, Fay!
November 28th, 2017 09:27
Louis Gibbs said:
\"Eyes with keen poetic insight\" ... I really like that line! Insight is the hallmark of a poet, indeed.
Well expressed observations of the life of raindrops on window panes ... and well formed, Fay!
November 28th, 2017 09:27
In Transit.
myself and me said:
You are the keen poet who write everything so beautiful.
November 28th, 2017 09:10
myself and me said:
You are the keen poet who write everything so beautiful.
November 28th, 2017 09:10
A Thought.
FredPeyer said:
Fay, nobody could say it better than you just did!
November 27th, 2017 21:06
FredPeyer said:
Fay, nobody could say it better than you just did!
November 27th, 2017 21:06
A Thought.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for reminding us of the Ten Secrets of LOVE and endorsing them with a cautionary ODE ~ we have all taken note ! This very DAY with HARRY & MEGHAN we have witnessed and shared TRUE LOVE between Two lovely Young People ~ from very different backgrounds ~ but whose HEARTS beat as ONE ! This is the Alpha & Omega of True Love ~ Yours as ever BRIAN
November 27th, 2017 16:11
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for reminding us of the Ten Secrets of LOVE and endorsing them with a cautionary ODE ~ we have all taken note ! This very DAY with HARRY & MEGHAN we have witnessed and shared TRUE LOVE between Two lovely Young People ~ from very different backgrounds ~ but whose HEARTS beat as ONE ! This is the Alpha & Omega of True Love ~ Yours as ever BRIAN
November 27th, 2017 16:11
A Thought.
Laura🌻 said:
Fabulous message
my dear Poetess Fay!
LOVE is all...
A wondrous thought indeed!
November 27th, 2017 08:53
Laura🌻 said:
Fabulous message
my dear Poetess Fay!
LOVE is all...
A wondrous thought indeed!
November 27th, 2017 08:53
Recharging.
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Fay, \"The calm of taking pause\" is something we all nee to do.
November 27th, 2017 01:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Fay, \"The calm of taking pause\" is something we all nee to do.
November 27th, 2017 01:53
Recharging.
rrodriguez said:
Excellent write... I want to recharge, but not yet. I have to write another poem. Maybe later... I\'m ready to go. Fine write. Thank you.
November 26th, 2017 11:59
rrodriguez said:
Excellent write... I want to recharge, but not yet. I have to write another poem. Maybe later... I\'m ready to go. Fine write. Thank you.
November 26th, 2017 11:59
Recharging.
Louis Gibbs said:
Beautifully balanced and structured, Fay! Such fine attention to form ... so important an element of fine poetry, adding to and enhancing its beauty. And this is a beauty! An appreciation of the in-breath of nature. Kudos!
November 26th, 2017 11:42
Louis Gibbs said:
Beautifully balanced and structured, Fay! Such fine attention to form ... so important an element of fine poetry, adding to and enhancing its beauty. And this is a beauty! An appreciation of the in-breath of nature. Kudos!
November 26th, 2017 11:42
Recharging.
Michael Edwards said:
Beautifully written Fay - but it also means cluttering up the house with a load of decorations, piles of cards to be written, parcels to be wrapped - oh for spring.
November 26th, 2017 06:15
Michael Edwards said:
Beautifully written Fay - but it also means cluttering up the house with a load of decorations, piles of cards to be written, parcels to be wrapped - oh for spring.
November 26th, 2017 06:15
Recharging.
kevin browne said:
beautifully written, FaySlimm. I\'m certainly wrapping up warm this winter. the heat has gone and the cold runs through.
November 26th, 2017 05:51
kevin browne said:
beautifully written, FaySlimm. I\'m certainly wrapping up warm this winter. the heat has gone and the cold runs through.
November 26th, 2017 05:51
Were I.
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Poetess Fay,
Another extraordinary gem of a write accompanied by a great pic! Thank you for the share!
November 25th, 2017 22:43
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Poetess Fay,
Another extraordinary gem of a write accompanied by a great pic! Thank you for the share!
November 25th, 2017 22:43
Were I.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for a very sensuous and alluring Love Poem ! Each verse draws us closer into you to fulfil your desires and share in your pleasures ! Bedded and sating need ~ Feelings unfolding ~ On fire and finding Paradise ~ TOGETHER ! Love the visual ~ a perfect trysting place for Love alfresco and \"DULUX\" would ensure your Lover behaved like a Gentleman ! Thanks for caring ~ Gentle Hugs ~ BRIAN @@@
November 24th, 2017 18:06
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for a very sensuous and alluring Love Poem ! Each verse draws us closer into you to fulfil your desires and share in your pleasures ! Bedded and sating need ~ Feelings unfolding ~ On fire and finding Paradise ~ TOGETHER ! Love the visual ~ a perfect trysting place for Love alfresco and \"DULUX\" would ensure your Lover behaved like a Gentleman ! Thanks for caring ~ Gentle Hugs ~ BRIAN @@@
November 24th, 2017 18:06
Were I.
Christina8 said:
Oh I love this poem, Fay! I hope you find Paradise! Very well written.
November 24th, 2017 16:17
Christina8 said:
Oh I love this poem, Fay! I hope you find Paradise! Very well written.
November 24th, 2017 16:17
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