Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Magical.
myself and me said:
Your pen like a magic wand, spell the magic words in the air, turned into this beautiful poem.
December 1st, 2017 19:57
myself and me said:
Your pen like a magic wand, spell the magic words in the air, turned into this beautiful poem.
December 1st, 2017 19:57
Magical.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for another very elegant and symbiotic Poem \'n Pic. The picture lifted us from the Mundane to the Magical and each triplet lifted our Hearts & Minds higher & higher ! You are altogether lovely ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Love BRIAN
December 1st, 2017 15:30
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for another very elegant and symbiotic Poem \'n Pic. The picture lifted us from the Mundane to the Magical and each triplet lifted our Hearts & Minds higher & higher ! You are altogether lovely ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Love BRIAN
December 1st, 2017 15:30
Magical.
Michael Edwards said:
It is indeed magical Fay and love the form in which it is drafted.
December 1st, 2017 13:33
Michael Edwards said:
It is indeed magical Fay and love the form in which it is drafted.
December 1st, 2017 13:33
Magical.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. as if a woodland walk. Erm, I enjoyed some local woods, until I fell into a bog! Did I, or is it that Orchi teasing again?! heehee.
December 1st, 2017 10:31
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. as if a woodland walk. Erm, I enjoyed some local woods, until I fell into a bog! Did I, or is it that Orchi teasing again?! heehee.
December 1st, 2017 10:31
Magical.
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Poetess Fay,
This write of yours is
an extraordinary gem...
...or should I say pearl...
Interesting style of writing!
The last four lines, in particular,
resonate for me!
Beautifully executed!
Thank you!
December 1st, 2017 08:01
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Poetess Fay,
This write of yours is
an extraordinary gem...
...or should I say pearl...
Interesting style of writing!
The last four lines, in particular,
resonate for me!
Beautifully executed!
Thank you!
December 1st, 2017 08:01
Magical.
Louis Gibbs said:
I love the way you are experimenting with different forms, Fay. This one is a unique beauty. Connecting with nature can be very healing, indeed! Well done.
December 1st, 2017 07:44
Louis Gibbs said:
I love the way you are experimenting with different forms, Fay. This one is a unique beauty. Connecting with nature can be very healing, indeed! Well done.
December 1st, 2017 07:44
Seize and See.
FredPeyer said:
Carpe diem! Beautifully expressed, interesting, incredible structure! Fay, you keep on surprising me with your excellent writing and artistic flair!
November 30th, 2017 13:27
FredPeyer said:
Carpe diem! Beautifully expressed, interesting, incredible structure! Fay, you keep on surprising me with your excellent writing and artistic flair!
November 30th, 2017 13:27
Seize and See.
Michael Edwards said:
Really struck with this - great write Fay
November 30th, 2017 10:28
Michael Edwards said:
Really struck with this - great write Fay
November 30th, 2017 10:28
Seize and See.
Louis Gibbs said:
I too love Eckhart Tolle\'s philosophy, and have read all of his work. This poem is a departure for you, style-wise, Fay. Congratulations on branching out and trying new forms! I like this one..
November 30th, 2017 09:27
Louis Gibbs said:
I too love Eckhart Tolle\'s philosophy, and have read all of his work. This poem is a departure for you, style-wise, Fay. Congratulations on branching out and trying new forms! I like this one..
November 30th, 2017 09:27
Seize and See.
myself and me said:
Live at this moment, live for now sounds simple, but most of the time, we spend too much time worry about the non-exist future. Best philosophy for living a easy life.
November 30th, 2017 08:30
myself and me said:
Live at this moment, live for now sounds simple, but most of the time, we spend too much time worry about the non-exist future. Best philosophy for living a easy life.
November 30th, 2017 08:30
Found Absent.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Fay showing the sadness and horror that was once (and may be still is (sweatshops)) part of an awful norm.
November 30th, 2017 02:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Fay showing the sadness and horror that was once (and may be still is (sweatshops)) part of an awful norm.
November 30th, 2017 02:01
Found Absent.
FredPeyer said:
A picture of a thousand words and a poem that paints a picture!
Incredible, Fay, well done!
I don\'t want to comment on the subject, there would not be enough space! It was wrong and inhuman!
November 29th, 2017 18:16
FredPeyer said:
A picture of a thousand words and a poem that paints a picture!
Incredible, Fay, well done!
I don\'t want to comment on the subject, there would not be enough space! It was wrong and inhuman!
November 29th, 2017 18:16
Found Absent.
Louis Gibbs said:
The history of humanity is grim, indeed! Well expressed here, Fay, in all its brutality.
November 29th, 2017 15:05
Louis Gibbs said:
The history of humanity is grim, indeed! Well expressed here, Fay, in all its brutality.
November 29th, 2017 15:05
Found Absent.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for reminding us FAY of the price paid in the PAST for cheap ENERGY ! The UNIONS did a lot to remove \"Child Labour\" in the UK and improve working conditions for Adults ! Today we mostly use ELECTRICITY but give scant to how it is produced ! There is always a high \"human price\" to be paid for primary sources of ENERGY ~ Coal ~ Oil ~ Gas but Nuclear Wind Power & Hydroelectricity are safer and cleaner. Your poem made me very sad and reminded me of todays refugees who often perish by escaping in BOATS ! Beautiful Structure but a sad Subject ! Please check my \"QUICKIES\" and please add a Poem to my FUSION on CHRISTMAS ~ Yours as ever BRIAN
November 29th, 2017 12:52
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for reminding us FAY of the price paid in the PAST for cheap ENERGY ! The UNIONS did a lot to remove \"Child Labour\" in the UK and improve working conditions for Adults ! Today we mostly use ELECTRICITY but give scant to how it is produced ! There is always a high \"human price\" to be paid for primary sources of ENERGY ~ Coal ~ Oil ~ Gas but Nuclear Wind Power & Hydroelectricity are safer and cleaner. Your poem made me very sad and reminded me of todays refugees who often perish by escaping in BOATS ! Beautiful Structure but a sad Subject ! Please check my \"QUICKIES\" and please add a Poem to my FUSION on CHRISTMAS ~ Yours as ever BRIAN
November 29th, 2017 12:52
Found Absent.
Michael Edwards said:
I went down a couple of mines many years back as part of my job following claims for injury - not a place I would wish to return so I have nothing but admiration for those who worked in them (and those who still do). This is a super work about them.
November 29th, 2017 11:38
Michael Edwards said:
I went down a couple of mines many years back as part of my job following claims for injury - not a place I would wish to return so I have nothing but admiration for those who worked in them (and those who still do). This is a super work about them.
November 29th, 2017 11:38
Found Absent.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I read some document from a place of employment of years ago. Things like - work will be 7am to 7pm. Lunch is 30mins, during which work will on no account cease.
A rota is drawn up for collection of coal from the outside shed for the office fireplace, etc.
A friend recently moaned that he worked \'late\' until 4.30pm, then did not even have to wait for a bus, as he drove home. Luxury!
November 29th, 2017 10:38
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I read some document from a place of employment of years ago. Things like - work will be 7am to 7pm. Lunch is 30mins, during which work will on no account cease.
A rota is drawn up for collection of coal from the outside shed for the office fireplace, etc.
A friend recently moaned that he worked \'late\' until 4.30pm, then did not even have to wait for a bus, as he drove home. Luxury!
November 29th, 2017 10:38
Found Absent.
kevin browne said:
as a man from Somerset I am well aware of the authenticity about this poem. filled with everything you could wish for in a poem and more. a great and rare write.
November 29th, 2017 10:18
kevin browne said:
as a man from Somerset I am well aware of the authenticity about this poem. filled with everything you could wish for in a poem and more. a great and rare write.
November 29th, 2017 10:18
Found Absent.
Syd said:
I enjoyed this Fay. My grandfather was a coal miner. He used to tell some harrowing stories of things which happened \"down the pit\" as they would call it - Syd
November 29th, 2017 10:04
Syd said:
I enjoyed this Fay. My grandfather was a coal miner. He used to tell some harrowing stories of things which happened \"down the pit\" as they would call it - Syd
November 29th, 2017 10:04
In Transit.
FredPeyer said:
Fay, after reading your incredible poem, I will never look at raindrops the same way again!
November 29th, 2017 03:26
FredPeyer said:
Fay, after reading your incredible poem, I will never look at raindrops the same way again!
November 29th, 2017 03:26
In Transit.
Louis Gibbs said:
\"Eyes with keen poetic insight\" ... I really like that line! Insight is the hallmark of a poet, indeed.
Well expressed observations of the life of raindrops on window panes ... and well formed, Fay!
November 28th, 2017 09:27
Louis Gibbs said:
\"Eyes with keen poetic insight\" ... I really like that line! Insight is the hallmark of a poet, indeed.
Well expressed observations of the life of raindrops on window panes ... and well formed, Fay!
November 28th, 2017 09:27
In Transit.
myself and me said:
You are the keen poet who write everything so beautiful.
November 28th, 2017 09:10
myself and me said:
You are the keen poet who write everything so beautiful.
November 28th, 2017 09:10
A Thought.
FredPeyer said:
Fay, nobody could say it better than you just did!
November 27th, 2017 21:06
FredPeyer said:
Fay, nobody could say it better than you just did!
November 27th, 2017 21:06
A Thought.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for reminding us of the Ten Secrets of LOVE and endorsing them with a cautionary ODE ~ we have all taken note ! This very DAY with HARRY & MEGHAN we have witnessed and shared TRUE LOVE between Two lovely Young People ~ from very different backgrounds ~ but whose HEARTS beat as ONE ! This is the Alpha & Omega of True Love ~ Yours as ever BRIAN
November 27th, 2017 16:11
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for reminding us of the Ten Secrets of LOVE and endorsing them with a cautionary ODE ~ we have all taken note ! This very DAY with HARRY & MEGHAN we have witnessed and shared TRUE LOVE between Two lovely Young People ~ from very different backgrounds ~ but whose HEARTS beat as ONE ! This is the Alpha & Omega of True Love ~ Yours as ever BRIAN
November 27th, 2017 16:11
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