Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Decisive.
orchidee said:
Erm, ahh, perhaps, maybe,....now come on Orchi, be \'decisive\' and comment on a further good write!
December 6th, 2017 11:11
orchidee said:
Erm, ahh, perhaps, maybe,....now come on Orchi, be \'decisive\' and comment on a further good write!
December 6th, 2017 11:11
Decisive.
Louis Gibbs said:
As my young grandson would put it, \"Dark came\", as though it were an entity unto itself rather than the absence of light. Good write on this dark subject, Fay!
December 6th, 2017 08:33
Louis Gibbs said:
As my young grandson would put it, \"Dark came\", as though it were an entity unto itself rather than the absence of light. Good write on this dark subject, Fay!
December 6th, 2017 08:33
Do You ?
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay! \'Blackbird has spoken\' as the hymn says. Well, I dunno. I\'ve not heard a talking blackbird, but if I did, it\'s better than me singing! heehee. I heard a chirping one!
December 5th, 2017 10:09
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay! \'Blackbird has spoken\' as the hymn says. Well, I dunno. I\'ve not heard a talking blackbird, but if I did, it\'s better than me singing! heehee. I heard a chirping one!
December 5th, 2017 10:09
Springtime\'s First.
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful poem, Fay!
I don\'t even know if daffodils grow here. But we are blessed with so many beautiful flowers all year round.
December 5th, 2017 04:19
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful poem, Fay!
I don\'t even know if daffodils grow here. But we are blessed with so many beautiful flowers all year round.
December 5th, 2017 04:19
Sweet Potion.
FredPeyer said:
To use \'fragrance\' in writing about love is not only imaginative, but also romantic. And I do love the last three lines very much.
Another wonderful poem by Fay!!!
December 5th, 2017 03:44
FredPeyer said:
To use \'fragrance\' in writing about love is not only imaginative, but also romantic. And I do love the last three lines very much.
Another wonderful poem by Fay!!!
December 5th, 2017 03:44
Springtime\'s First.
myself and me said:
Daffodil, the messenger of spring..
December 4th, 2017 19:07
myself and me said:
Daffodil, the messenger of spring..
December 4th, 2017 19:07
Springtime\'s First.
Christina8 said:
Beautiful write on a beautiful flower! I always look to them to bloom at the end of winter! Wonderful write!
December 4th, 2017 17:36
Christina8 said:
Beautiful write on a beautiful flower! I always look to them to bloom at the end of winter! Wonderful write!
December 4th, 2017 17:36
Springtime\'s First.
orchidee said:
Oh yes, we brought in some cuttings from the greenhouse. They are flowering again! A fine write Fay.
December 4th, 2017 14:27
orchidee said:
Oh yes, we brought in some cuttings from the greenhouse. They are flowering again! A fine write Fay.
December 4th, 2017 14:27
Springtime\'s First.
Louis Gibbs said:
Lovely dedication to the courageous daffodil, Fay! It is a tough and brave little gift of nature, for sure.
December 4th, 2017 09:27
Louis Gibbs said:
Lovely dedication to the courageous daffodil, Fay! It is a tough and brave little gift of nature, for sure.
December 4th, 2017 09:27
Springtime\'s First.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, when we first moved into our current house we had a daffodil that was in flower on Christmas Day for many years.
December 4th, 2017 09:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, when we first moved into our current house we had a daffodil that was in flower on Christmas Day for many years.
December 4th, 2017 09:04
Springtime\'s First.
Michael Edwards said:
Still a way to go - delightful write Fay.
December 4th, 2017 08:48
Michael Edwards said:
Still a way to go - delightful write Fay.
December 4th, 2017 08:48
Sweet Potion.
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Poetess Fay...
Love the quote!
You never cease to amaze
me! This write is exquisite!
I wanted to quote a favorite
line, but I can’t. The entire
poem is my favorite. So it’s
going right into faves!
December 3rd, 2017 08:36
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Poetess Fay...
Love the quote!
You never cease to amaze
me! This write is exquisite!
I wanted to quote a favorite
line, but I can’t. The entire
poem is my favorite. So it’s
going right into faves!
December 3rd, 2017 08:36
Sweet Potion.
Michael Edwards said:
Just love the way you use the language but I think I\'ve said that before - another great work Fay.
December 3rd, 2017 05:27
Michael Edwards said:
Just love the way you use the language but I think I\'ve said that before - another great work Fay.
December 3rd, 2017 05:27
Magical.
myself and me said:
Your pen like a magic wand, spell the magic words in the air, turned into this beautiful poem.
December 1st, 2017 19:57
myself and me said:
Your pen like a magic wand, spell the magic words in the air, turned into this beautiful poem.
December 1st, 2017 19:57
Magical.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for another very elegant and symbiotic Poem \'n Pic. The picture lifted us from the Mundane to the Magical and each triplet lifted our Hearts & Minds higher & higher ! You are altogether lovely ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Love BRIAN
December 1st, 2017 15:30
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for another very elegant and symbiotic Poem \'n Pic. The picture lifted us from the Mundane to the Magical and each triplet lifted our Hearts & Minds higher & higher ! You are altogether lovely ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Love BRIAN
December 1st, 2017 15:30
Magical.
Michael Edwards said:
It is indeed magical Fay and love the form in which it is drafted.
December 1st, 2017 13:33
Michael Edwards said:
It is indeed magical Fay and love the form in which it is drafted.
December 1st, 2017 13:33
Magical.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. as if a woodland walk. Erm, I enjoyed some local woods, until I fell into a bog! Did I, or is it that Orchi teasing again?! heehee.
December 1st, 2017 10:31
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. as if a woodland walk. Erm, I enjoyed some local woods, until I fell into a bog! Did I, or is it that Orchi teasing again?! heehee.
December 1st, 2017 10:31
Magical.
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Poetess Fay,
This write of yours is
an extraordinary gem...
...or should I say pearl...
Interesting style of writing!
The last four lines, in particular,
resonate for me!
Beautifully executed!
Thank you!
December 1st, 2017 08:01
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Poetess Fay,
This write of yours is
an extraordinary gem...
...or should I say pearl...
Interesting style of writing!
The last four lines, in particular,
resonate for me!
Beautifully executed!
Thank you!
December 1st, 2017 08:01
Magical.
Louis Gibbs said:
I love the way you are experimenting with different forms, Fay. This one is a unique beauty. Connecting with nature can be very healing, indeed! Well done.
December 1st, 2017 07:44
Louis Gibbs said:
I love the way you are experimenting with different forms, Fay. This one is a unique beauty. Connecting with nature can be very healing, indeed! Well done.
December 1st, 2017 07:44
Seize and See.
FredPeyer said:
Carpe diem! Beautifully expressed, interesting, incredible structure! Fay, you keep on surprising me with your excellent writing and artistic flair!
November 30th, 2017 13:27
FredPeyer said:
Carpe diem! Beautifully expressed, interesting, incredible structure! Fay, you keep on surprising me with your excellent writing and artistic flair!
November 30th, 2017 13:27
Seize and See.
Michael Edwards said:
Really struck with this - great write Fay
November 30th, 2017 10:28
Michael Edwards said:
Really struck with this - great write Fay
November 30th, 2017 10:28
Seize and See.
Louis Gibbs said:
I too love Eckhart Tolle\'s philosophy, and have read all of his work. This poem is a departure for you, style-wise, Fay. Congratulations on branching out and trying new forms! I like this one..
November 30th, 2017 09:27
Louis Gibbs said:
I too love Eckhart Tolle\'s philosophy, and have read all of his work. This poem is a departure for you, style-wise, Fay. Congratulations on branching out and trying new forms! I like this one..
November 30th, 2017 09:27
Seize and See.
myself and me said:
Live at this moment, live for now sounds simple, but most of the time, we spend too much time worry about the non-exist future. Best philosophy for living a easy life.
November 30th, 2017 08:30
myself and me said:
Live at this moment, live for now sounds simple, but most of the time, we spend too much time worry about the non-exist future. Best philosophy for living a easy life.
November 30th, 2017 08:30
Found Absent.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Fay showing the sadness and horror that was once (and may be still is (sweatshops)) part of an awful norm.
November 30th, 2017 02:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Fay showing the sadness and horror that was once (and may be still is (sweatshops)) part of an awful norm.
November 30th, 2017 02:01
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