Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Boisterous.
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Poetess Fay...
Super write! The metaphors
create an imagery as explosive as that
unloading ocean!
Worth reading many times!
Brilliant!
December 8th, 2017 07:38
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Poetess Fay...
Super write! The metaphors
create an imagery as explosive as that
unloading ocean!
Worth reading many times!
Brilliant!
December 8th, 2017 07:38
Seduction.
Goldfinch60 said:
The entrapment worked Fay, is there anyway out. Good write.
December 8th, 2017 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
The entrapment worked Fay, is there anyway out. Good write.
December 8th, 2017 01:13
Seduction.
FredPeyer said:
Even if I wanted to, I could not escape your incredible writing, Fay!
December 7th, 2017 20:06
FredPeyer said:
Even if I wanted to, I could not escape your incredible writing, Fay!
December 7th, 2017 20:06
Decisive.
FredPeyer said:
There is something magical about dusk and the onset of night and you captured that magic perfectly in this incredible poem.
December 7th, 2017 19:41
FredPeyer said:
There is something magical about dusk and the onset of night and you captured that magic perfectly in this incredible poem.
December 7th, 2017 19:41
Seduction.
MendedFences27 said:
The call of the siren, not to be taken lightly, but with extreme caution, for escape may not be possible. Oh, but to die a thousand deaths. To die in the fire of passion, is to live again. Sultry and sweet, a delicious poem. - Phil A.
December 7th, 2017 17:20
MendedFences27 said:
The call of the siren, not to be taken lightly, but with extreme caution, for escape may not be possible. Oh, but to die a thousand deaths. To die in the fire of passion, is to live again. Sultry and sweet, a delicious poem. - Phil A.
December 7th, 2017 17:20
Seduction.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW FAY ~ Love this cheeky poem and cheeky visual ~ a real libido raiser ! Love the invitation to UNCAP & TAP ~ BUT ~ I know I would never ESCAPE and what would ANGELA do then ~ poor thing ! Love you even more when you are being frivolous ! Yours as ever BRIAN XOX
December 7th, 2017 10:27
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW FAY ~ Love this cheeky poem and cheeky visual ~ a real libido raiser ! Love the invitation to UNCAP & TAP ~ BUT ~ I know I would never ESCAPE and what would ANGELA do then ~ poor thing ! Love you even more when you are being frivolous ! Yours as ever BRIAN XOX
December 7th, 2017 10:27
Seduction.
Louis Gibbs said:
A punctuated poem ... what an interesting departure for you, Fay! It is fun to experiment with these different forms, isn\'t it. I enjoyed this amusing one!
December 7th, 2017 08:10
Louis Gibbs said:
A punctuated poem ... what an interesting departure for you, Fay! It is fun to experiment with these different forms, isn\'t it. I enjoyed this amusing one!
December 7th, 2017 08:10
Decisive.
Michael Edwards said:
Or as my grandson once said: \'time to put the dark light on\'. Super write Fay.
December 6th, 2017 11:24
Michael Edwards said:
Or as my grandson once said: \'time to put the dark light on\'. Super write Fay.
December 6th, 2017 11:24
Decisive.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ I\'m pleased to be back and have the opportunity to unlock the meaning(s) in your latest poem ! In my experience Night has always followed Day (except once when I was in the North Cape on 21st June ~ The SUN almost set ~ and then came back up again ~ awesome !). Each ~ sentence commencing word has a different connotation of night fall ! DARK ~ does indeed descend (erupt) fast (too fast sometimes ?) ~ DUSK ~ certainly enfolds ! and NIGHT surely creeps ~ shuts out the LIGHT ~ and then ~ shuts in the DARK ! A perfect description form a very observant POET ! Love the Cornish Sunset ~ a perfect complimentary visual ~ BEAUTIFUL ~ Thanks for caring ~ Yours as always BRIAN
December 6th, 2017 11:17
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ I\'m pleased to be back and have the opportunity to unlock the meaning(s) in your latest poem ! In my experience Night has always followed Day (except once when I was in the North Cape on 21st June ~ The SUN almost set ~ and then came back up again ~ awesome !). Each ~ sentence commencing word has a different connotation of night fall ! DARK ~ does indeed descend (erupt) fast (too fast sometimes ?) ~ DUSK ~ certainly enfolds ! and NIGHT surely creeps ~ shuts out the LIGHT ~ and then ~ shuts in the DARK ! A perfect description form a very observant POET ! Love the Cornish Sunset ~ a perfect complimentary visual ~ BEAUTIFUL ~ Thanks for caring ~ Yours as always BRIAN
December 6th, 2017 11:17
Decisive.
orchidee said:
Erm, ahh, perhaps, maybe,....now come on Orchi, be \'decisive\' and comment on a further good write!
December 6th, 2017 11:11
orchidee said:
Erm, ahh, perhaps, maybe,....now come on Orchi, be \'decisive\' and comment on a further good write!
December 6th, 2017 11:11
Decisive.
Louis Gibbs said:
As my young grandson would put it, \"Dark came\", as though it were an entity unto itself rather than the absence of light. Good write on this dark subject, Fay!
December 6th, 2017 08:33
Louis Gibbs said:
As my young grandson would put it, \"Dark came\", as though it were an entity unto itself rather than the absence of light. Good write on this dark subject, Fay!
December 6th, 2017 08:33
Do You ?
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay! \'Blackbird has spoken\' as the hymn says. Well, I dunno. I\'ve not heard a talking blackbird, but if I did, it\'s better than me singing! heehee. I heard a chirping one!
December 5th, 2017 10:09
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay! \'Blackbird has spoken\' as the hymn says. Well, I dunno. I\'ve not heard a talking blackbird, but if I did, it\'s better than me singing! heehee. I heard a chirping one!
December 5th, 2017 10:09
Springtime\'s First.
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful poem, Fay!
I don\'t even know if daffodils grow here. But we are blessed with so many beautiful flowers all year round.
December 5th, 2017 04:19
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful poem, Fay!
I don\'t even know if daffodils grow here. But we are blessed with so many beautiful flowers all year round.
December 5th, 2017 04:19
Sweet Potion.
FredPeyer said:
To use \'fragrance\' in writing about love is not only imaginative, but also romantic. And I do love the last three lines very much.
Another wonderful poem by Fay!!!
December 5th, 2017 03:44
FredPeyer said:
To use \'fragrance\' in writing about love is not only imaginative, but also romantic. And I do love the last three lines very much.
Another wonderful poem by Fay!!!
December 5th, 2017 03:44
Springtime\'s First.
myself and me said:
Daffodil, the messenger of spring..
December 4th, 2017 19:07
myself and me said:
Daffodil, the messenger of spring..
December 4th, 2017 19:07
Springtime\'s First.
Christina8 said:
Beautiful write on a beautiful flower! I always look to them to bloom at the end of winter! Wonderful write!
December 4th, 2017 17:36
Christina8 said:
Beautiful write on a beautiful flower! I always look to them to bloom at the end of winter! Wonderful write!
December 4th, 2017 17:36
Springtime\'s First.
orchidee said:
Oh yes, we brought in some cuttings from the greenhouse. They are flowering again! A fine write Fay.
December 4th, 2017 14:27
orchidee said:
Oh yes, we brought in some cuttings from the greenhouse. They are flowering again! A fine write Fay.
December 4th, 2017 14:27
Springtime\'s First.
Louis Gibbs said:
Lovely dedication to the courageous daffodil, Fay! It is a tough and brave little gift of nature, for sure.
December 4th, 2017 09:27
Louis Gibbs said:
Lovely dedication to the courageous daffodil, Fay! It is a tough and brave little gift of nature, for sure.
December 4th, 2017 09:27
Springtime\'s First.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, when we first moved into our current house we had a daffodil that was in flower on Christmas Day for many years.
December 4th, 2017 09:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, when we first moved into our current house we had a daffodil that was in flower on Christmas Day for many years.
December 4th, 2017 09:04
Springtime\'s First.
Michael Edwards said:
Still a way to go - delightful write Fay.
December 4th, 2017 08:48
Michael Edwards said:
Still a way to go - delightful write Fay.
December 4th, 2017 08:48
Sweet Potion.
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Poetess Fay...
Love the quote!
You never cease to amaze
me! This write is exquisite!
I wanted to quote a favorite
line, but I can’t. The entire
poem is my favorite. So it’s
going right into faves!
December 3rd, 2017 08:36
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Poetess Fay...
Love the quote!
You never cease to amaze
me! This write is exquisite!
I wanted to quote a favorite
line, but I can’t. The entire
poem is my favorite. So it’s
going right into faves!
December 3rd, 2017 08:36
Sweet Potion.
Michael Edwards said:
Just love the way you use the language but I think I\'ve said that before - another great work Fay.
December 3rd, 2017 05:27
Michael Edwards said:
Just love the way you use the language but I think I\'ve said that before - another great work Fay.
December 3rd, 2017 05:27
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