Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Into Forever.
Lauraš» said:
My dear Poetess Fay...
It seems weāre on the
same wavelength...
Iāve been thinking and
missing a loved one!
Havenāt been able to
write about it. My muse
is silent...unlike yours!
Youāve expressed
so well what Iāve been
feeling for my loss!
Will be saved as one
of my favorites!
~Laura~
January 3rd, 2018 06:33
Lauraš» said:
My dear Poetess Fay...
It seems weāre on the
same wavelength...
Iāve been thinking and
missing a loved one!
Havenāt been able to
write about it. My muse
is silent...unlike yours!
Youāve expressed
so well what Iāve been
feeling for my loss!
Will be saved as one
of my favorites!
~Laura~
January 3rd, 2018 06:33
Colours of Change.
FredPeyer said:
It is not just the fireworks that sparkle, it is your whole poem, Fay!
January 3rd, 2018 00:01
FredPeyer said:
It is not just the fireworks that sparkle, it is your whole poem, Fay!
January 3rd, 2018 00:01
OLD INTO NEW.
FredPeyer said:
Love your poem, Fay! Now, if that \'old into new\' would apply to us too, that would be great!
Happy New Year, good health, may your pen keep moving!
January 2nd, 2018 23:39
FredPeyer said:
Love your poem, Fay! Now, if that \'old into new\' would apply to us too, that would be great!
Happy New Year, good health, may your pen keep moving!
January 2nd, 2018 23:39
Colours of Change.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for another great FUSION of Poem \'n Pics ! Because I am a chemist I have always loved FIREWORKS ~ Explosives to give propulsion and bangs and iron filings to add the sparkle to sparklers ~ and of course colour. Metal salts are mostly white crystals and give no hint of the coloured spectrum they produce when heated ! Calcium ~ Orange Strontium ~ Red Barium ~ Green Sodium ~ Yellow Potassium ~ Mauve etc. My fave as a child were always PINWHEELS I thought they were magic and I still do ! In many ways 2017 was an Annus Horribilis so we sent her out with a BANG and welcomed 2018 with the best FW Display in the World. In my experience A Firework Display always makes an occasion so it\'s ideal for MIDNIGHT on N Y E ! I have great faith in 2018 ~ we are more stable politically & economically ~ than we expected to be ~ and (especially for those of us in his Peer Group !) we are so pleased for PRINCE HARRY & MEGHAN and the ROYAL WEDDING in May. Harry is a Fun Guy and a real Man\'s Man and along with William & Kate (who they will complement !) we have two great Royal Role Model Couples for next 40 years ! Charles must very proud the way his Sons have matured and stepped in the Public Arena with all their charm blazing ! I am a ROYALIST and I think the Royal Family (especially ELIZABETH & PHILIP) give the Country great charm & charisma which is the envy of the rest of the WORLD. MEGHAN has all the qualities and experience required to SHINE ~ AMEN ~ Yours BRIAN
January 2nd, 2018 12:32
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for another great FUSION of Poem \'n Pics ! Because I am a chemist I have always loved FIREWORKS ~ Explosives to give propulsion and bangs and iron filings to add the sparkle to sparklers ~ and of course colour. Metal salts are mostly white crystals and give no hint of the coloured spectrum they produce when heated ! Calcium ~ Orange Strontium ~ Red Barium ~ Green Sodium ~ Yellow Potassium ~ Mauve etc. My fave as a child were always PINWHEELS I thought they were magic and I still do ! In many ways 2017 was an Annus Horribilis so we sent her out with a BANG and welcomed 2018 with the best FW Display in the World. In my experience A Firework Display always makes an occasion so it\'s ideal for MIDNIGHT on N Y E ! I have great faith in 2018 ~ we are more stable politically & economically ~ than we expected to be ~ and (especially for those of us in his Peer Group !) we are so pleased for PRINCE HARRY & MEGHAN and the ROYAL WEDDING in May. Harry is a Fun Guy and a real Man\'s Man and along with William & Kate (who they will complement !) we have two great Royal Role Model Couples for next 40 years ! Charles must very proud the way his Sons have matured and stepped in the Public Arena with all their charm blazing ! I am a ROYALIST and I think the Royal Family (especially ELIZABETH & PHILIP) give the Country great charm & charisma which is the envy of the rest of the WORLD. MEGHAN has all the qualities and experience required to SHINE ~ AMEN ~ Yours BRIAN
January 2nd, 2018 12:32
Colours of Change.
Lauraš» said:
My dear Poetess Fay...
A beautiful write to guide
me through the new year!
Your poetry is a gift I
cherish! A sure save into
my favorites !
HAPPY NEW YEAR!
Looking forward to
your gifts of poetry!
Thank you!
~Laura~
January 2nd, 2018 10:36
Lauraš» said:
My dear Poetess Fay...
A beautiful write to guide
me through the new year!
Your poetry is a gift I
cherish! A sure save into
my favorites !
HAPPY NEW YEAR!
Looking forward to
your gifts of poetry!
Thank you!
~Laura~
January 2nd, 2018 10:36
Colours of Change.
Louis Gibbs said:
True, nothing fascinates us more than man-created starbursts in the sky ... makes us feel god-like I suppose. Well captured herein, Fay!
January 2nd, 2018 09:47
Louis Gibbs said:
True, nothing fascinates us more than man-created starbursts in the sky ... makes us feel god-like I suppose. Well captured herein, Fay!
January 2nd, 2018 09:47
Colours of Change.
Michael Edwards said:
Fay this one is really special - saving it into Faves.
January 2nd, 2018 07:02
Michael Edwards said:
Fay this one is really special - saving it into Faves.
January 2nd, 2018 07:02
Colours of Change.
Goldfinch60 said:
I hope your New Year is sparkling with words Fay.
January 2nd, 2018 06:32
Goldfinch60 said:
I hope your New Year is sparkling with words Fay.
January 2nd, 2018 06:32
OLD INTO NEW.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Fay, nature has its cycles which will never fail. Have a great New Year.
December 31st, 2017 12:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Fay, nature has its cycles which will never fail. Have a great New Year.
December 31st, 2017 12:53
OLD INTO NEW.
Louis Gibbs said:
Nature\'s process of renewal ... the cycles of life ... beautifully portrayed here, Fay! May you enjoy a happy and fulfilling new year too!
December 31st, 2017 07:23
Louis Gibbs said:
Nature\'s process of renewal ... the cycles of life ... beautifully portrayed here, Fay! May you enjoy a happy and fulfilling new year too!
December 31st, 2017 07:23
OLD INTO NEW.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. happy New Year to you too. This seems like a hymn-poem, but with a metre of 9.5.5.5.10. or almost that. I don\'t know any hymns with this metre, from my \'repertoire\'!
All are glad then - they won\'t me me singing! heehee.
December 31st, 2017 05:42
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. happy New Year to you too. This seems like a hymn-poem, but with a metre of 9.5.5.5.10. or almost that. I don\'t know any hymns with this metre, from my \'repertoire\'!
All are glad then - they won\'t me me singing! heehee.
December 31st, 2017 05:42
OLD INTO NEW.
Michael Edwards said:
Super work and happy new year to you too Fay.
December 31st, 2017 04:36
Michael Edwards said:
Super work and happy new year to you too Fay.
December 31st, 2017 04:36
OLD INTO NEW.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for a very Beautiful and thought provoking poem to usher in 2018. Every blessing for you ~ the NEW YEAR through ! Yours as always for 2018 ~ BRIAN
December 31st, 2017 04:05
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for a very Beautiful and thought provoking poem to usher in 2018. Every blessing for you ~ the NEW YEAR through ! Yours as always for 2018 ~ BRIAN
December 31st, 2017 04:05
Locked In.
FredPeyer said:
There is a lot of wisdom in your excellent poem, Fay! Thank you, and Happy Holidays!
December 21st, 2017 21:38
FredPeyer said:
There is a lot of wisdom in your excellent poem, Fay! Thank you, and Happy Holidays!
December 21st, 2017 21:38
Reflections.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY we shall all miss YOU ! Being (by training~ experience & study) An Environmental Scientist I have a COGNITIVE UNDERSTANDING of many of the Natural Phenomena you highlight in your first verse. I would stress that my knowledge does not diminish their Wonder & Mystery ~ in fact for me it enhances it !
Your second Verse Human Behaviour and Emotions the Behavioural Sciences of Psychology & Sociology in which (unlike the Physical Sciences) there are no ABSOLUTES & CERTAINTIES and conflicting Theories can be equally true in practice. SEA SALT is always NaCl never Na2Cl or NaCl2 ~ it always has Square Symmetry and the sodium ion is always Na+ and the chloride ion always Cl - The crystal structure is so well established that it has appeared on a UK Postage Stamp ! The Behaviour Sciences are fluid and Theories change from decade to decade which is what makes them so intrinsically exciting. I have studied SOC & PSYCH with the OU (and other Courses) but I am none the wiser and much of what I learned 10 years ago is now obsolete ! I learn about LOVE & LIFE ~ through my OWN MISTAKES and (honestly) I am getting better ~ AT BOTH ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ HAPPY CHRISTMAS ~ Love under the Mistletoe ~ BRIAN XOX
December 21st, 2017 15:55
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY we shall all miss YOU ! Being (by training~ experience & study) An Environmental Scientist I have a COGNITIVE UNDERSTANDING of many of the Natural Phenomena you highlight in your first verse. I would stress that my knowledge does not diminish their Wonder & Mystery ~ in fact for me it enhances it !
Your second Verse Human Behaviour and Emotions the Behavioural Sciences of Psychology & Sociology in which (unlike the Physical Sciences) there are no ABSOLUTES & CERTAINTIES and conflicting Theories can be equally true in practice. SEA SALT is always NaCl never Na2Cl or NaCl2 ~ it always has Square Symmetry and the sodium ion is always Na+ and the chloride ion always Cl - The crystal structure is so well established that it has appeared on a UK Postage Stamp ! The Behaviour Sciences are fluid and Theories change from decade to decade which is what makes them so intrinsically exciting. I have studied SOC & PSYCH with the OU (and other Courses) but I am none the wiser and much of what I learned 10 years ago is now obsolete ! I learn about LOVE & LIFE ~ through my OWN MISTAKES and (honestly) I am getting better ~ AT BOTH ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ HAPPY CHRISTMAS ~ Love under the Mistletoe ~ BRIAN XOX
December 21st, 2017 15:55
Reflections.
FredPeyer said:
From my inner \'I\' to your inner \'I\': Merry Christmas and a happy, healthy New Year. May the poems keep on flowing from your pen!
December 21st, 2017 12:24
FredPeyer said:
From my inner \'I\' to your inner \'I\': Merry Christmas and a happy, healthy New Year. May the poems keep on flowing from your pen!
December 21st, 2017 12:24
Reflections.
Louis Gibbs said:
Wisdom is reflected in asking the right questions, which your intriguing poem does so well, dear Fay. Have yourself a wonderful Christmas. I look forward to your return and continued brilliant writes.
December 21st, 2017 10:13
Louis Gibbs said:
Wisdom is reflected in asking the right questions, which your intriguing poem does so well, dear Fay. Have yourself a wonderful Christmas. I look forward to your return and continued brilliant writes.
December 21st, 2017 10:13
Reflections.
Christina8 said:
A simply wonderful write today, Fay! Merry Christmas to you!
December 21st, 2017 10:01
Christina8 said:
A simply wonderful write today, Fay! Merry Christmas to you!
December 21st, 2017 10:01
Reflections.
Goldfinch60 said:
We would all like to know more but if we got to know everything for what would we strive.
Have a great Christmas Fay.
December 21st, 2017 09:06
Goldfinch60 said:
We would all like to know more but if we got to know everything for what would we strive.
Have a great Christmas Fay.
December 21st, 2017 09:06
Reflections.
Lauraš» said:
My dear Poetess Fay...
Enjoyed your awesome write! The mysterious āIā within us knows. It knows and understands the beauty and generosity within YOU, my dear Fay! Bless you and yours! Enjoy the holidays! Be safe and return soon!
~Laura~
December 21st, 2017 08:13
Lauraš» said:
My dear Poetess Fay...
Enjoyed your awesome write! The mysterious āIā within us knows. It knows and understands the beauty and generosity within YOU, my dear Fay! Bless you and yours! Enjoy the holidays! Be safe and return soon!
~Laura~
December 21st, 2017 08:13
Reflections.
Michael Edwards said:
Great write and thanks for all your postings over the year - best wishes for Christmas.
December 21st, 2017 04:14
Michael Edwards said:
Great write and thanks for all your postings over the year - best wishes for Christmas.
December 21st, 2017 04:14
December Sun.
FredPeyer said:
Fay, you perfectly described a lot of our sunsets here! Magic, and so is your poem.
December 20th, 2017 20:03
FredPeyer said:
Fay, you perfectly described a lot of our sunsets here! Magic, and so is your poem.
December 20th, 2017 20:03
December Sun.
Louis Gibbs said:
Lovely picture you paint for us, Fay. Kudos on the attention to poem shape!
December 20th, 2017 12:17
Louis Gibbs said:
Lovely picture you paint for us, Fay. Kudos on the attention to poem shape!
December 20th, 2017 12:17
December Sun.
Lauraš» said:
My Dear Poetess Fay...
What a beauty of a gem! Always a delight to read your amazing poems! Many a day they pull me out of my gloomy state of being! You are my scrumptious ātiramisuā...(an Italian dessert)! (literally means āpull me upā)!
~Laura~
P.S.-just noticed Santiās comment. Congratulations for your poem of the year award! Not surprised at all! All your poems should be award winning! Brava!šš»
December 20th, 2017 11:52
Lauraš» said:
My Dear Poetess Fay...
What a beauty of a gem! Always a delight to read your amazing poems! Many a day they pull me out of my gloomy state of being! You are my scrumptious ātiramisuā...(an Italian dessert)! (literally means āpull me upā)!
~Laura~
P.S.-just noticed Santiās comment. Congratulations for your poem of the year award! Not surprised at all! All your poems should be award winning! Brava!šš»
December 20th, 2017 11:52
December Sun.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for another perfect POEM \'N PIC to start the DAY ! Thanks for getting up early to share a \"sight \'n sound\" glimpse of your beloved Cornwall Coast for those of us exiled in the East where the Coast borders on the dull ! Blessings @ Christmas ~ BRIAN
December 20th, 2017 04:42
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for another perfect POEM \'N PIC to start the DAY ! Thanks for getting up early to share a \"sight \'n sound\" glimpse of your beloved Cornwall Coast for those of us exiled in the East where the Coast borders on the dull ! Blessings @ Christmas ~ BRIAN
December 20th, 2017 04:42
December Sun.
orchidee said:
Good write Fay. The sun at its lowest, this time of year. But soon, an extra minute or two each day again. Wheee! Let\'s not spend them all at once. lol.
December 20th, 2017 04:22
orchidee said:
Good write Fay. The sun at its lowest, this time of year. But soon, an extra minute or two each day again. Wheee! Let\'s not spend them all at once. lol.
December 20th, 2017 04:22
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