Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm. at My poetic side

Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.

Applause.
Michael Edwards said:

Applause for another great poem Fay.

January 7th, 2018 06:45

One More.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

YESTERDAY ~ LOVE WAS SUCH AN EASY GAME TO PLAY ~ Oh I remember yesterday ............. ! I love your nostalgic poems FAY ~ but they make me CRY ~ Saved as Favourite ! Yours as always BRIAN

January 6th, 2018 17:24

One More.
FredPeyer said:

Fay, you have a way of expressing life in beautiful terms, both the good and the bad. I think we all sometimes long for yesterday, especially if it involves a loved one who is not with us anymore. While we cannot turn the time back, we do have the memories!

January 6th, 2018 15:22

One More.
Brycycle said:

This really touched me emotionally, good write.

January 6th, 2018 14:35

One More.
Laura🌻 said:

My Dear Poetess Fay...
A sensitive and beautiful reminder of our yesterdays gone by! ...and then the reality of it all...

These are the words that speak to me at this time...
...“thrown overboard suddenly had
no chance of tomorrow “...

Now we have the memories!
Great pic!

~Laura~

January 6th, 2018 10:28

One More.
Tony36 said:

Beautiful write

January 6th, 2018 10:10

One More.
Louis Gibbs said:

Reminds me of a song lyric:
\"Yesterday, all my troubles seemed so far away, now it seems as if they\'re her to stay, I believe in yesterday\".
A beautiful, emotive write, Fay!

January 6th, 2018 09:49

One More.
orchidee said:

A fine lot of yesterdays Fay.

January 6th, 2018 06:22

One More.
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful emotive write Fay.

January 6th, 2018 04:38

His Laughter.
FredPeyer said:

Fay, your beautifully written poem made me remember my own dad. He was quite the comic! An accomplished musician too, always ready with a smile and a joke.
Thank you for writing this!

January 5th, 2018 11:53

His Laughter.
Laura🌻 said:

My dear Poetess Fay...
First poem I read this
morning! A great write!
So relatable!
I miss my dad so much!
I remember his laugh...
I remember his jokes...
He had a great sense of
humor. Beautiful memories!
Thank you for making me
smile today...
I’ve been in a depressive
state in the past few weeks!

~Laura~

January 5th, 2018 11:04

His Laughter.
Louis Gibbs said:

So fortunate to have loving memories of one\'s parents. Kudos on this fine tribute, Fay!

January 5th, 2018 10:31

His Laughter.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS FAY ~ Lovely tribute to your DAD ~ I still have mt Parents but your Poem reminded me to make sure to ring therm tomorrow. I generally go for Lunch on Sunday ~ usually with ANGELA ~ Life is too short for regrets ! Thanks for caring ~ Yours as ever BRIAN

January 5th, 2018 10:12

His Laughter.
Goldfinch60 said:

Lovely write, love the phrase ‘remembered laughter’ it was obviously so inspiring.

January 5th, 2018 09:24

His Laughter.
Michael Edwards said:

Ahh - lovely write Fay

January 5th, 2018 07:31

New Leaves.
FredPeyer said:

Great writing and stunning form/shape! And thank you for your New Year wishes, the same from me to you too!

January 4th, 2018 16:14

New Leaves.
Louis Gibbs said:

A masterful display of shaped poetry here, Fay! A most clever form. Well done, dear teacher of our art.

January 4th, 2018 10:16

New Leaves.
Tony36 said:

AWESOME WRITE

January 4th, 2018 09:34

New Leaves.
Michael Edwards said:

Great construction and write Fay.

January 4th, 2018 08:47

New Leaves.
orchidee said:

A tree-mendous write in word and shape Fay!

January 4th, 2018 08:38

New Leaves.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WOW FAY ~ Thanks for a wonderful FORM POEM and a glimpse of SPRING ! The sparkle and beauty of the NEW LEAVES a real herald of Spring ~ just like SNOWDROPS which is my Poem for today ! I think GOD must be ENGLISH because we always get four distinct SEASONS in the right order ! I\'ve had CHRISTMAS DINNER on the BEACH in OZ ~ Mexico & Florida but it does not seem right ! Winter for Christmas & New Year ~ Spring for EASTER ~ Summer for Holidays and Autumn for Bonfire Night & Fireworks ~ WE know it makes sense. Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours throughout 2018 ~ BRIAN # NEW YEAR HUGS @@@@@@@

January 4th, 2018 07:11

Into Forever.
Goldfinch60 said:

Superb write Fay, lost love is hard to deal with but your words though so emotive look forward and you know that your life will be rebuilt in love.

January 4th, 2018 01:13

Into Forever.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for sharing a POEM straight from your Loving Heart FAY ! It reflects the EXPERIENCE we all have reflecting on the DEMISE of a Loved One. However I have never \"lost\" a Soul Mate ~ which is the most unkindest cut of all ! Life deflowered ~ Days undawned ~ Hopes unfastened ~ Need denied ~ BUT (Praise God) You counter with COURAGE RETRAINED !
I love the optimism and resolve in your concluding lines !
All is not broken
Love soldiers forward
It will be victorious
Hope walks on & on & on
Thanks for caring & sharing

I have saved your Poem as favourite ~ because I know that if I lost my \"LOVE\" it would not be the end ~ AMEN ~ Yours as ever BRIAN.

January 3rd, 2018 16:24

Into Forever.
Tony36 said:

Wonderful write

January 3rd, 2018 11:52

Into Forever.
FredPeyer said:

Only you could express the feelings of the one left behind in such a beautiful, sad, but filled with hope way, Fay! Into my favs it goes!

January 3rd, 2018 09:59

Into Forever.
Louis Gibbs said:

The human spirit is indomitable, indeed. Well portrayed here, Fay!

January 3rd, 2018 09:34

Into Forever.
orchidee said:

Good write Fay.

January 3rd, 2018 09:30

Into Forever.
WL Schuett said:

Very fine poem Fay , very well composed ! You are a very fine poet !

January 3rd, 2018 08:53

Into Forever.
Michael Edwards said:

Oh Fay I\'ve come over all sad now - must reread my own posting - only joking - a fine piece as ever.

January 3rd, 2018 07:02

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