Comments received on poems by dusk arising
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Goldfinch60 said:
Life can have all these problems thrown at you but they can be overcome when the mind eventually settles.
May 22nd, 2019 23:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Life can have all these problems thrown at you but they can be overcome when the mind eventually settles.
May 22nd, 2019 23:54
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Suresh said:
All those collections we have stored, still searching for the lost soul.
Profoundly penned.
May 22nd, 2019 11:47
Suresh said:
All those collections we have stored, still searching for the lost soul.
Profoundly penned.
May 22nd, 2019 11:47
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Fay Slimm. said:
Words filled with chances to read, feel and empathize with life on a raw, aching road and the feel of sheer aloneness -- - a sensitive write that stays in the mind and heart.
May 22nd, 2019 11:22
Fay Slimm. said:
Words filled with chances to read, feel and empathize with life on a raw, aching road and the feel of sheer aloneness -- - a sensitive write that stays in the mind and heart.
May 22nd, 2019 11:22
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Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Speaks to me of life age and how thing unravel in the end
Awesome write DA Love it
May 22nd, 2019 11:16
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Speaks to me of life age and how thing unravel in the end
Awesome write DA Love it
May 22nd, 2019 11:16
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Neville said:
it would take a very long time to get bored with these words, if at all ever... N
May 22nd, 2019 11:15
Neville said:
it would take a very long time to get bored with these words, if at all ever... N
May 22nd, 2019 11:15
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SoulMeetsBody said:
Some simple yet effective images and metaphors. Many interpretations spring to mind. Great job!
May 22nd, 2019 09:54
SoulMeetsBody said:
Some simple yet effective images and metaphors. Many interpretations spring to mind. Great job!
May 22nd, 2019 09:54
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Poetic Dan said:
So many thoughts spiral out of this.
Superb, sir!
May 22nd, 2019 08:08
Poetic Dan said:
So many thoughts spiral out of this.
Superb, sir!
May 22nd, 2019 08:08
the love poet
Poetic Dan said:
Not got much time to respond after reading a few time..... Wow & wow again my friend. Masterfully penned
May 22nd, 2019 03:57
Poetic Dan said:
Not got much time to respond after reading a few time..... Wow & wow again my friend. Masterfully penned
May 22nd, 2019 03:57
country road
Neville said:
It never ceases to amaze me what happens, what has happened and what can happen on country roads.... I been played that way before, but then.. who aint..... nice poem, most probably a great song... N
May 21st, 2019 09:11
Neville said:
It never ceases to amaze me what happens, what has happened and what can happen on country roads.... I been played that way before, but then.. who aint..... nice poem, most probably a great song... N
May 21st, 2019 09:11
they all saw it
Suresh said:
Your comments laid out the scary scene perfectly. Thats what I feel every time I see your PM on the tele.
May 20th, 2019 10:50
Suresh said:
Your comments laid out the scary scene perfectly. Thats what I feel every time I see your PM on the tele.
May 20th, 2019 10:50
they all saw it
Michael Edwards said:
Actually I found your comment just as appealing - always love your contributions - keep posting.
May 20th, 2019 03:50
Michael Edwards said:
Actually I found your comment just as appealing - always love your contributions - keep posting.
May 20th, 2019 03:50
they all saw it
Michael Edwards said:
I too was disappointed not - great read which gave me a sort of Monday grin.
May 20th, 2019 03:49
Michael Edwards said:
I too was disappointed not - great read which gave me a sort of Monday grin.
May 20th, 2019 03:49
they all saw it
Neville said:
A great tale, you certainly had me going for a minute and twelve seconds precisely... I was expecting summat else entirely but hey, not disappointed at all.... Neville
May 20th, 2019 03:18
Neville said:
A great tale, you certainly had me going for a minute and twelve seconds precisely... I was expecting summat else entirely but hey, not disappointed at all.... Neville
May 20th, 2019 03:18
country road
Goldfinch60 said:
Those yesterdays can have a great deal for which to answer, all we can do is move on towards tomorrow which will be better.
May 20th, 2019 00:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Those yesterdays can have a great deal for which to answer, all we can do is move on towards tomorrow which will be better.
May 20th, 2019 00:39
country road
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes those maybe\'s can take us over and what more apt a place to cogitate than on some country road - the flow of lament in this telling song strikes a chord with me in its final three words - - being played leaves a dubious taste in the memory for a very long time.
May 19th, 2019 16:02
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes those maybe\'s can take us over and what more apt a place to cogitate than on some country road - the flow of lament in this telling song strikes a chord with me in its final three words - - being played leaves a dubious taste in the memory for a very long time.
May 19th, 2019 16:02
through tears
Suresh said:
I\'m out of sight, and surely not on your mind
But as you so poetically claimed, MPS is a site where I too can expose my mind
May 19th, 2019 14:04
Suresh said:
I\'m out of sight, and surely not on your mind
But as you so poetically claimed, MPS is a site where I too can expose my mind
May 19th, 2019 14:04
country road
Suresh said:
And I thought, she only played me.
Mind stores and often the playback button is tapped.
May 19th, 2019 11:13
Suresh said:
And I thought, she only played me.
Mind stores and often the playback button is tapped.
May 19th, 2019 11:13
dear J
Neville said:
If I was able, I would award these few words top marks, so powerful and generous are they ... Neville
May 19th, 2019 04:12
Neville said:
If I was able, I would award these few words top marks, so powerful and generous are they ... Neville
May 19th, 2019 04:12
the love poet
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb write d a, showing what words can do when written in this way, Beautiful.
May 19th, 2019 00:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb write d a, showing what words can do when written in this way, Beautiful.
May 19th, 2019 00:54
the love poet
Michael Edwards said:
I join the applause - A super coming together of thoughts from skill with the language.
May 18th, 2019 12:34
Michael Edwards said:
I join the applause - A super coming together of thoughts from skill with the language.
May 18th, 2019 12:34
the love poet
Fay Slimm. said:
This deserves loud applause - tenderly composed and a style to which your pen is suited my friend - - words to which my mind relates easily so the recipient will surely treasure.- - very well written D.A.
May 18th, 2019 11:02
Fay Slimm. said:
This deserves loud applause - tenderly composed and a style to which your pen is suited my friend - - words to which my mind relates easily so the recipient will surely treasure.- - very well written D.A.
May 18th, 2019 11:02
the love poet
Suresh said:
Ones mindset has to completely change to think and pen this way. It urges one to read more than once to maybe understand the poets intent.
Superbly penned
May 18th, 2019 11:02
Suresh said:
Ones mindset has to completely change to think and pen this way. It urges one to read more than once to maybe understand the poets intent.
Superbly penned
May 18th, 2019 11:02
the love poet
Neville said:
for the love of seriously good love poets everywhere, this is seriously seriously good... she obviously had an impact.... Neville
May 18th, 2019 10:42
Neville said:
for the love of seriously good love poets everywhere, this is seriously seriously good... she obviously had an impact.... Neville
May 18th, 2019 10:42
of Elspenore pt2
FineB said:
Hello Dusk Arising,
Thanks.
A superb poem and very mystical.
Keep writing Fine B.
May 18th, 2019 03:52
FineB said:
Hello Dusk Arising,
Thanks.
A superb poem and very mystical.
Keep writing Fine B.
May 18th, 2019 03:52
of elspenore
FineB said:
Hello Dusk Arising,
A wonderful write that for me conjure up thoughts of knights and dragons and Camelot.
Keep writing Fine B
May 18th, 2019 03:47
FineB said:
Hello Dusk Arising,
A wonderful write that for me conjure up thoughts of knights and dragons and Camelot.
Keep writing Fine B
May 18th, 2019 03:47
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