Comments received on poems by dusk arising
four and counting
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories of childhood learning are so compelling. Great write d a.
April 25th, 2019 23:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories of childhood learning are so compelling. Great write d a.
April 25th, 2019 23:58
four and counting
Fay Slimm. said:
A lighthearted tale of sibling rivalry and told with such style. Great read.
April 25th, 2019 06:17
Fay Slimm. said:
A lighthearted tale of sibling rivalry and told with such style. Great read.
April 25th, 2019 06:17
Gad sir!
Poetic Dan said:
Ha! That was the French bulldogs I\'m currently looking after, it was like chemical warfare last night ;)
Short & sweet
With a squeak
April 25th, 2019 02:06
Poetic Dan said:
Ha! That was the French bulldogs I\'m currently looking after, it was like chemical warfare last night ;)
Short & sweet
With a squeak
April 25th, 2019 02:06
when?
Neville said:
it\'s gonna happen... just you mark my words.... shit sir, well writ sir... N
April 23rd, 2019 07:39
Neville said:
it\'s gonna happen... just you mark my words.... shit sir, well writ sir... N
April 23rd, 2019 07:39
when?
Fay Slimm. said:
Oooh - such a sad feel to these short lines - wishing you all you wish for yourself dear D.A.
April 23rd, 2019 04:16
Fay Slimm. said:
Oooh - such a sad feel to these short lines - wishing you all you wish for yourself dear D.A.
April 23rd, 2019 04:16
when?
Poetic Dan said:
Nicely done.
Had a feeling of when I was between lovers, making peace with being on my own although I would of still appreciated finding someone.
Thank you
April 23rd, 2019 03:19
Poetic Dan said:
Nicely done.
Had a feeling of when I was between lovers, making peace with being on my own although I would of still appreciated finding someone.
Thank you
April 23rd, 2019 03:19
by the window
Neville said:
how could anyone possibly not remember these fine words...
a great poem in my book Neville
April 22nd, 2019 07:50
Neville said:
how could anyone possibly not remember these fine words...
a great poem in my book Neville
April 22nd, 2019 07:50
by the window
Michael Edwards said:
What a great write. Just one thing: if she was sat alone who sat her there?
April 22nd, 2019 02:23
Michael Edwards said:
What a great write. Just one thing: if she was sat alone who sat her there?
April 22nd, 2019 02:23
tip-toeing (re-written)
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write d a, and what a way to start the day, a fabulous piece by Weather Report.
April 22nd, 2019 00:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write d a, and what a way to start the day, a fabulous piece by Weather Report.
April 22nd, 2019 00:13
tip-toeing (re-written)
Suresh said:
Salvaging the salvageable
Indeed well written
April 21st, 2019 13:10
Suresh said:
Salvaging the salvageable
Indeed well written
April 21st, 2019 13:10
tip-toeing (re-written)
Michael Edwards said:
Superbly expressed - a fave for me too.
April 21st, 2019 09:56
Michael Edwards said:
Superbly expressed - a fave for me too.
April 21st, 2019 09:56
tip-toeing (re-written)
Fay Slimm. said:
Deep and altogether a lovely reminder value can hide in memories - -- saved this little gem and thanks D.A.
April 21st, 2019 03:58
Fay Slimm. said:
Deep and altogether a lovely reminder value can hide in memories - -- saved this little gem and thanks D.A.
April 21st, 2019 03:58
now ready to depart
Fay Slimm. said:
This grabs attention from its first line - late love can come when least expected and colour every day and night dream.
April 20th, 2019 10:36
Fay Slimm. said:
This grabs attention from its first line - late love can come when least expected and colour every day and night dream.
April 20th, 2019 10:36
now ready to depart
Neville said:
everything about this poem is near perfect.. everything...N
April 20th, 2019 10:31
Neville said:
everything about this poem is near perfect.. everything...N
April 20th, 2019 10:31
move along
Neville said:
maybe you are write
maybe she was just wrong for ya...
maybe........ N
April 19th, 2019 04:53
Neville said:
maybe you are write
maybe she was just wrong for ya...
maybe........ N
April 19th, 2019 04:53
dawns delight (re-written)
Poetic Dan said:
Loving these treasures, what an ending! Thank you finding and sharing
Always appreciated
April 18th, 2019 03:03
Poetic Dan said:
Loving these treasures, what an ending! Thank you finding and sharing
Always appreciated
April 18th, 2019 03:03
dawns delight (re-written)
Goldfinch60 said:
Dawn is such a wonderful time of the day and you have more than captured that wonder with your words.
April 18th, 2019 00:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Dawn is such a wonderful time of the day and you have more than captured that wonder with your words.
April 18th, 2019 00:24
dawns delight (re-written)
Suresh said:
I truly believe dreams are a reality in the alternate universe. Isn\'t it strange that we rarely remember our dreams, nightmare - yes, dreams - no.
While asleep, our brain waves are transported and attuned to our alternate being in the alternate universe, and so we experience their reality.
HUMBUG! maybe, but what if it could be true, then at least we know somewhere we are truly living it.
Enjoyed this d.a.
April 17th, 2019 11:32
Suresh said:
I truly believe dreams are a reality in the alternate universe. Isn\'t it strange that we rarely remember our dreams, nightmare - yes, dreams - no.
While asleep, our brain waves are transported and attuned to our alternate being in the alternate universe, and so we experience their reality.
HUMBUG! maybe, but what if it could be true, then at least we know somewhere we are truly living it.
Enjoyed this d.a.
April 17th, 2019 11:32
dawns delight (re-written)
Neville said:
I have had a few dreams that were so dreamy I would happily have not woken... you have certainly captured and done justice to that feeling justice here..... Neville
April 17th, 2019 07:15
Neville said:
I have had a few dreams that were so dreamy I would happily have not woken... you have certainly captured and done justice to that feeling justice here..... Neville
April 17th, 2019 07:15
dawns delight (re-written)
Fay Slimm. said:
A wonderful feeling of dawn when this special smile awakens a dreamer D.A. - - you capture the ecstasy so well here.
April 17th, 2019 07:05
Fay Slimm. said:
A wonderful feeling of dawn when this special smile awakens a dreamer D.A. - - you capture the ecstasy so well here.
April 17th, 2019 07:05
know JB
Fay Slimm. said:
Lurve the rythmn in this number by JB - - - agree with every word - still tappn and movin - -- great times D.A.
April 16th, 2019 08:27
Fay Slimm. said:
Lurve the rythmn in this number by JB - - - agree with every word - still tappn and movin - -- great times D.A.
April 16th, 2019 08:27
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