Comments received on poems by dusk arising
How many times (re-write)
Goldfinch60 said:
The love that is true tastes so sweet so the bitter fruits are discarded.
April 27th, 2019 00:45
Goldfinch60 said:
The love that is true tastes so sweet so the bitter fruits are discarded.
April 27th, 2019 00:45
evil
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderfully emotive write d a, evil is around us but we can normally overcome it but even I can think of one evil person in my life.
April 27th, 2019 00:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderfully emotive write d a, evil is around us but we can normally overcome it but even I can think of one evil person in my life.
April 27th, 2019 00:24
evil
Fay Slimm. said:
The saddest part is when evil holds its victim close enough to reject any good coming their way - - well written yet such a heart-wrenching read D.A.
April 26th, 2019 14:52
Fay Slimm. said:
The saddest part is when evil holds its victim close enough to reject any good coming their way - - well written yet such a heart-wrenching read D.A.
April 26th, 2019 14:52
four and counting
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories of childhood learning are so compelling. Great write d a.
April 25th, 2019 23:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories of childhood learning are so compelling. Great write d a.
April 25th, 2019 23:58
four and counting
Fay Slimm. said:
A lighthearted tale of sibling rivalry and told with such style. Great read.
April 25th, 2019 06:17
Fay Slimm. said:
A lighthearted tale of sibling rivalry and told with such style. Great read.
April 25th, 2019 06:17
Gad sir!
Poetic Dan said:
Ha! That was the French bulldogs I\'m currently looking after, it was like chemical warfare last night ;)
Short & sweet
With a squeak
April 25th, 2019 02:06
Poetic Dan said:
Ha! That was the French bulldogs I\'m currently looking after, it was like chemical warfare last night ;)
Short & sweet
With a squeak
April 25th, 2019 02:06
when?
Neville said:
it\'s gonna happen... just you mark my words.... shit sir, well writ sir... N
April 23rd, 2019 07:39
Neville said:
it\'s gonna happen... just you mark my words.... shit sir, well writ sir... N
April 23rd, 2019 07:39
when?
Fay Slimm. said:
Oooh - such a sad feel to these short lines - wishing you all you wish for yourself dear D.A.
April 23rd, 2019 04:16
Fay Slimm. said:
Oooh - such a sad feel to these short lines - wishing you all you wish for yourself dear D.A.
April 23rd, 2019 04:16
when?
Poetic Dan said:
Nicely done.
Had a feeling of when I was between lovers, making peace with being on my own although I would of still appreciated finding someone.
Thank you
April 23rd, 2019 03:19
Poetic Dan said:
Nicely done.
Had a feeling of when I was between lovers, making peace with being on my own although I would of still appreciated finding someone.
Thank you
April 23rd, 2019 03:19
by the window
Neville said:
how could anyone possibly not remember these fine words...
a great poem in my book Neville
April 22nd, 2019 07:50
Neville said:
how could anyone possibly not remember these fine words...
a great poem in my book Neville
April 22nd, 2019 07:50
by the window
Michael Edwards said:
What a great write. Just one thing: if she was sat alone who sat her there?
April 22nd, 2019 02:23
Michael Edwards said:
What a great write. Just one thing: if she was sat alone who sat her there?
April 22nd, 2019 02:23
tip-toeing (re-written)
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write d a, and what a way to start the day, a fabulous piece by Weather Report.
April 22nd, 2019 00:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write d a, and what a way to start the day, a fabulous piece by Weather Report.
April 22nd, 2019 00:13
tip-toeing (re-written)
Suresh said:
Salvaging the salvageable
Indeed well written
April 21st, 2019 13:10
Suresh said:
Salvaging the salvageable
Indeed well written
April 21st, 2019 13:10
tip-toeing (re-written)
Michael Edwards said:
Superbly expressed - a fave for me too.
April 21st, 2019 09:56
Michael Edwards said:
Superbly expressed - a fave for me too.
April 21st, 2019 09:56
tip-toeing (re-written)
Fay Slimm. said:
Deep and altogether a lovely reminder value can hide in memories - -- saved this little gem and thanks D.A.
April 21st, 2019 03:58
Fay Slimm. said:
Deep and altogether a lovely reminder value can hide in memories - -- saved this little gem and thanks D.A.
April 21st, 2019 03:58
now ready to depart
Fay Slimm. said:
This grabs attention from its first line - late love can come when least expected and colour every day and night dream.
April 20th, 2019 10:36
Fay Slimm. said:
This grabs attention from its first line - late love can come when least expected and colour every day and night dream.
April 20th, 2019 10:36
now ready to depart
Neville said:
everything about this poem is near perfect.. everything...N
April 20th, 2019 10:31
Neville said:
everything about this poem is near perfect.. everything...N
April 20th, 2019 10:31
move along
Neville said:
maybe you are write
maybe she was just wrong for ya...
maybe........ N
April 19th, 2019 04:53
Neville said:
maybe you are write
maybe she was just wrong for ya...
maybe........ N
April 19th, 2019 04:53
dawns delight (re-written)
Poetic Dan said:
Loving these treasures, what an ending! Thank you finding and sharing
Always appreciated
April 18th, 2019 03:03
Poetic Dan said:
Loving these treasures, what an ending! Thank you finding and sharing
Always appreciated
April 18th, 2019 03:03
dawns delight (re-written)
Goldfinch60 said:
Dawn is such a wonderful time of the day and you have more than captured that wonder with your words.
April 18th, 2019 00:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Dawn is such a wonderful time of the day and you have more than captured that wonder with your words.
April 18th, 2019 00:24
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