Comments received on poems by dusk arising
it just wouldnt rhyme
Neville said:
its all in the words tho innit.... cheers, N
May 17th, 2019 16:40
Neville said:
its all in the words tho innit.... cheers, N
May 17th, 2019 16:40
Limerick-diculous
Neville said:
extraordinarily guffaw able to say the least..... Neville :)
May 17th, 2019 13:19
Neville said:
extraordinarily guffaw able to say the least..... Neville :)
May 17th, 2019 13:19
Limerick-diculous
Suresh said:
Well written limericks are always so \'diculous\', as are these.
Thnx
May 15th, 2019 09:52
Suresh said:
Well written limericks are always so \'diculous\', as are these.
Thnx
May 15th, 2019 09:52
Limerick-diculous
Poetic Dan said:
And we are all the better for it, as I ain\'t a pheasant plucker I\'m a pheasant plucker\'s son!
Great share
Always appreciated
May 15th, 2019 08:23
Poetic Dan said:
And we are all the better for it, as I ain\'t a pheasant plucker I\'m a pheasant plucker\'s son!
Great share
Always appreciated
May 15th, 2019 08:23
Limerick-diculous
Lorna said:
Orchi is going to have a fit! Swoon all over the place. And to add insult to injury - if you had capitalized the D in the title you would have batted 1000.
May 15th, 2019 05:16
Lorna said:
Orchi is going to have a fit! Swoon all over the place. And to add insult to injury - if you had capitalized the D in the title you would have batted 1000.
May 15th, 2019 05:16
Limerick-diculous
Goldfinch60 said:
I know that guy from Evesham, he goes to our church!
May 15th, 2019 00:21
Goldfinch60 said:
I know that guy from Evesham, he goes to our church!
May 15th, 2019 00:21
of Elspenore pt2
Goldfinch60 said:
In life there are mysteries that intrigue us and elspenore sits there awaiting us to come into its world.
May 14th, 2019 23:57
Goldfinch60 said:
In life there are mysteries that intrigue us and elspenore sits there awaiting us to come into its world.
May 14th, 2019 23:57
of Elspenore pt2
Fay Slimm. said:
Mystical phrasing attracts all the more the singing of praises to the great Elspenore - love the way your mind weaves archaic myths D.A.
May 14th, 2019 16:29
Fay Slimm. said:
Mystical phrasing attracts all the more the singing of praises to the great Elspenore - love the way your mind weaves archaic myths D.A.
May 14th, 2019 16:29
of Elspenore pt2
orchidee said:
Nope, I don\'t know these fellas, these gods. I can\'t say I\'ve met them me self! Maybe I\'m on the wrong bus?!
May 14th, 2019 14:12
orchidee said:
Nope, I don\'t know these fellas, these gods. I can\'t say I\'ve met them me self! Maybe I\'m on the wrong bus?!
May 14th, 2019 14:12
of Elspenore pt2
Lorna said:
Love the poem - very mystical and I am assuming elspenore is mythical too? A play on elsinore?
May 14th, 2019 04:58
Lorna said:
Love the poem - very mystical and I am assuming elspenore is mythical too? A play on elsinore?
May 14th, 2019 04:58
of Elspenore pt2
Michael Edwards said:
This is a super write even though I\'m not familiar with elspenore - does it exist?
May 14th, 2019 03:14
Michael Edwards said:
This is a super write even though I\'m not familiar with elspenore - does it exist?
May 14th, 2019 03:14
of Elspenore pt2
orchidee said:
I don\'t know them guys - the gods of Elspenore. Could I take the No.7 bus and visit them? Would they take me to where they live?! (heehee).
May 14th, 2019 02:06
orchidee said:
I don\'t know them guys - the gods of Elspenore. Could I take the No.7 bus and visit them? Would they take me to where they live?! (heehee).
May 14th, 2019 02:06
when out of my thoughts
Poetic Dan said:
Wow, I was unsure for second to write something or not as I try not to get to emotional.
Thank you for sharing this part of your life, that was an honour to read as it is to truly say.
I wish you all the best my friend
From me and the tear in my eye
Much peace and respect
May 13th, 2019 09:38
Poetic Dan said:
Wow, I was unsure for second to write something or not as I try not to get to emotional.
Thank you for sharing this part of your life, that was an honour to read as it is to truly say.
I wish you all the best my friend
From me and the tear in my eye
Much peace and respect
May 13th, 2019 09:38
when out of my thoughts
Lorna said:
Hardest ever is to suffer for others, especially children and the helpless.
May 13th, 2019 04:43
Lorna said:
Hardest ever is to suffer for others, especially children and the helpless.
May 13th, 2019 04:43
when out of my thoughts
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a strong write d a.
She is blessed to have a dad like you. May her joy bring happiness to all.
May 13th, 2019 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a strong write d a.
She is blessed to have a dad like you. May her joy bring happiness to all.
May 13th, 2019 01:12
when out of my thoughts
Suresh said:
It seems she has a secret, internal happiness, that makes her smile and giggle, unperturbed, unaffected by what others termed \"normal\". I\'d love to share her secret.
May 13th, 2019 00:25
Suresh said:
It seems she has a secret, internal happiness, that makes her smile and giggle, unperturbed, unaffected by what others termed \"normal\". I\'d love to share her secret.
May 13th, 2019 00:25
Sometimes
Suresh said:
The dread of the introverts - -----
Jumping around
Loved the image and the words as well, so totally relateable
May 12th, 2019 11:39
Suresh said:
The dread of the introverts - -----
Jumping around
Loved the image and the words as well, so totally relateable
May 12th, 2019 11:39
arrow
Suresh said:
I apologize if I am repeating myself.
My journey is made up of three questions:
Why do I exist?
What is my purpose?
How do I account for my deeds?
The answer I have concluded for the last question is - reincarnation
These words of your portray a fine image of reincarnation.
Very enjoyable
May 11th, 2019 14:36
Suresh said:
I apologize if I am repeating myself.
My journey is made up of three questions:
Why do I exist?
What is my purpose?
How do I account for my deeds?
The answer I have concluded for the last question is - reincarnation
These words of your portray a fine image of reincarnation.
Very enjoyable
May 11th, 2019 14:36
it just wouldnt rhyme
Poetic Dan said:
That was thoroughly enjoyed my friend, author note\'s had me in stitches too. You are so unperfectly perfectly you, with the ending I should pay attention too!
Like water off their back, I should stop giving ducks so much ;)
May 11th, 2019 02:28
Poetic Dan said:
That was thoroughly enjoyed my friend, author note\'s had me in stitches too. You are so unperfectly perfectly you, with the ending I should pay attention too!
Like water off their back, I should stop giving ducks so much ;)
May 11th, 2019 02:28
dear J
Poetic Dan said:
Also if that was about Mary J I\'m taking good care of her ;)
May 10th, 2019 12:19
Poetic Dan said:
Also if that was about Mary J I\'m taking good care of her ;)
May 10th, 2019 12:19
it just wouldnt rhyme
Suresh said:
There are so many ways one can share here, such as, poets bleed openly for all to see, but I cannot match your ingenuity
May 10th, 2019 10:51
Suresh said:
There are so many ways one can share here, such as, poets bleed openly for all to see, but I cannot match your ingenuity
May 10th, 2019 10:51
it just wouldnt rhyme
Fay Slimm. said:
First class writing my friend - a very inspiring read - - - - - I admire your fantastic rhyming too in this tribute to lovers of words.
May 10th, 2019 10:32
Fay Slimm. said:
First class writing my friend - a very inspiring read - - - - - I admire your fantastic rhyming too in this tribute to lovers of words.
May 10th, 2019 10:32
it just wouldnt rhyme
kevin browne said:
The poet may bleed out in many different, diversable and intrinsically crafted pieces of work. Each individual poet may be similar to another poet, yet they still appear eager to shine through their artistic flair in so many beautiful ways that the stunning effect of all poets will reveal the sunlight of perception to shine through and reveal the most wonderful landscapes of thought with the unconditional wisdom of what we all write about. You have made it very clear about wording and not having the worry of running out of them just in case you do. I love your thought and how you have captured so many angles for commenteers to reply with so many things to say and write about. 10 out of 10 for this one. Nice work.
May 10th, 2019 05:12
kevin browne said:
The poet may bleed out in many different, diversable and intrinsically crafted pieces of work. Each individual poet may be similar to another poet, yet they still appear eager to shine through their artistic flair in so many beautiful ways that the stunning effect of all poets will reveal the sunlight of perception to shine through and reveal the most wonderful landscapes of thought with the unconditional wisdom of what we all write about. You have made it very clear about wording and not having the worry of running out of them just in case you do. I love your thought and how you have captured so many angles for commenteers to reply with so many things to say and write about. 10 out of 10 for this one. Nice work.
May 10th, 2019 05:12
it just wouldnt rhyme
Goldfinch60 said:
This softy sometimes gives his poems to those he writes about, normally with a great response from the people.
Words are so important in our lives, as is the inspiration we can glean from others.
Super write.
May 10th, 2019 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
This softy sometimes gives his poems to those he writes about, normally with a great response from the people.
Words are so important in our lives, as is the inspiration we can glean from others.
Super write.
May 10th, 2019 01:08
it just wouldnt rhyme
Michael Edwards said:
Well it turned out fine - love the term \'words billionaire\'.
We have so many words at our disposal in this richest of languages - and no one can take that away from us softies.
May 10th, 2019 00:34
Michael Edwards said:
Well it turned out fine - love the term \'words billionaire\'.
We have so many words at our disposal in this richest of languages - and no one can take that away from us softies.
May 10th, 2019 00:34
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