Comments received on poems by dusk arising
dear J
moordykspot2 said:
Ending relationship Always painful. Well phrased with hope as conclusion
Thankyou
May 9th, 2019 12:08
moordykspot2 said:
Ending relationship Always painful. Well phrased with hope as conclusion
Thankyou
May 9th, 2019 12:08
new world
Poetic Dan said:
Great share my friend, felt so open and wonderful ending.
May 9th, 2019 10:51
Poetic Dan said:
Great share my friend, felt so open and wonderful ending.
May 9th, 2019 10:51
dear J
Suresh said:
If part we must, why can\'t it be like this...
My sentiments as well
May 9th, 2019 10:04
Suresh said:
If part we must, why can\'t it be like this...
My sentiments as well
May 9th, 2019 10:04
of elspenore
Goldfinch60 said:
Those creatures from hell are all around us and in various disguises, at least you could recognise a dragon and so be able to slay it, not nowadays.
May 9th, 2019 00:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Those creatures from hell are all around us and in various disguises, at least you could recognise a dragon and so be able to slay it, not nowadays.
May 9th, 2019 00:32
of elspenore
Suresh said:
There are millions of fire breathing, flying dragons in our midst even today, they are cloaked in suits and ties and military uniforms, holding detonators (electronic gadgets) in their hands.
Those spawned of hell only returned to a place called home, which we know as Earth.
May 8th, 2019 10:41
Suresh said:
There are millions of fire breathing, flying dragons in our midst even today, they are cloaked in suits and ties and military uniforms, holding detonators (electronic gadgets) in their hands.
Those spawned of hell only returned to a place called home, which we know as Earth.
May 8th, 2019 10:41
of elspenore
Neville said:
Oh\' how I do hanker for those days of yore, when a spell was a spell and not the curse it has today become..... a great write sir and no messin.... but wordly true..... Neville
May 8th, 2019 05:38
Neville said:
Oh\' how I do hanker for those days of yore, when a spell was a spell and not the curse it has today become..... a great write sir and no messin.... but wordly true..... Neville
May 8th, 2019 05:38
of elspenore
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow - this reads like the start of a marvelous saga D.A. - makes me want to know more about the gods of elspenore and those other-worldly crittas.
May 8th, 2019 04:50
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow - this reads like the start of a marvelous saga D.A. - makes me want to know more about the gods of elspenore and those other-worldly crittas.
May 8th, 2019 04:50
of elspenore
orchidee said:
Well I dunno if the last line applies - if it\'s true - but I searched elspenore and ended up in Helsinki somehow!
May 8th, 2019 04:48
orchidee said:
Well I dunno if the last line applies - if it\'s true - but I searched elspenore and ended up in Helsinki somehow!
May 8th, 2019 04:48
new world
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful write, the resilience of our life as kids \'back in the day\' was astounding, home made bows and arrows catapults, sword fights, nobody seriously hurt just the odd tumble and bloodied knees, that was the norm.
Wonderful times of being outside with your friends.
I still have my grandfathers clock, bought the year I was born and inside there used to be a old penny that had been flattened by the last tram that went through Rochester in Kent, my niece still has that flattened coin
May 8th, 2019 02:52
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful write, the resilience of our life as kids \'back in the day\' was astounding, home made bows and arrows catapults, sword fights, nobody seriously hurt just the odd tumble and bloodied knees, that was the norm.
Wonderful times of being outside with your friends.
I still have my grandfathers clock, bought the year I was born and inside there used to be a old penny that had been flattened by the last tram that went through Rochester in Kent, my niece still has that flattened coin
May 8th, 2019 02:52
new world
Suresh said:
I am a brethren from those times though not the place, except for college years 67/68.
I often reminisce about my introverted childhood and in retrospect I hold very pleasant memories.
So in that spirit, I thank you for your poem.
May 7th, 2019 21:07
Suresh said:
I am a brethren from those times though not the place, except for college years 67/68.
I often reminisce about my introverted childhood and in retrospect I hold very pleasant memories.
So in that spirit, I thank you for your poem.
May 7th, 2019 21:07
new world
Neville said:
If I could find words adequate enough to thank you for these memories, I would use them.. until then, you will have to settle for a well intentioned second best.............. this is without doubt a great write......... Neville
May 7th, 2019 16:52
Neville said:
If I could find words adequate enough to thank you for these memories, I would use them.. until then, you will have to settle for a well intentioned second best.............. this is without doubt a great write......... Neville
May 7th, 2019 16:52
new world
Fay Slimm. said:
A fantastic journey down memory land with names I remember so well
- - - Tizer and Gold Leaf which I never did try but knew those who did and they survived well. - - still smiling at those \"fibreglas bums\" sliding down hills - like my brother they got a smacked one when they got home.......... such thrilling days and now gone forever. Thanks so much D.A.for your excellent verse on those unforgettable times.
May 7th, 2019 11:20
Fay Slimm. said:
A fantastic journey down memory land with names I remember so well
- - - Tizer and Gold Leaf which I never did try but knew those who did and they survived well. - - still smiling at those \"fibreglas bums\" sliding down hills - like my brother they got a smacked one when they got home.......... such thrilling days and now gone forever. Thanks so much D.A.for your excellent verse on those unforgettable times.
May 7th, 2019 11:20
disappointed
Fay Slimm. said:
Purity of heart in a newborn shows the truth to us adults if only we choose to be taught. A spiritual read which leaves much to think on .
May 1st, 2019 16:12
Fay Slimm. said:
Purity of heart in a newborn shows the truth to us adults if only we choose to be taught. A spiritual read which leaves much to think on .
May 1st, 2019 16:12
disappointed
moordykspot2 said:
A fine ring my friend with so much truth expertly phrased. I ask some of the same questions you refer to. Don\'t know the answers I\'m afraid we as a planet are too far gone. Thank you
May 1st, 2019 14:16
moordykspot2 said:
A fine ring my friend with so much truth expertly phrased. I ask some of the same questions you refer to. Don\'t know the answers I\'m afraid we as a planet are too far gone. Thank you
May 1st, 2019 14:16
disappointed
Suresh said:
was, is, will be
many have tried
have paid a steep price
change only momentary
then use new instruments
to play the same tune
just louder, and more deafening
May 1st, 2019 12:01
Suresh said:
was, is, will be
many have tried
have paid a steep price
change only momentary
then use new instruments
to play the same tune
just louder, and more deafening
May 1st, 2019 12:01
disappointed
Neville said:
I am inclined to believe you have expressed the opinions of an increasing number of disillusioned individuals throughout the so called developed Western world, tho interestingly, those that follow the same faith elsewhere seem to remain as devout as ever.... Neville
May 1st, 2019 06:37
Neville said:
I am inclined to believe you have expressed the opinions of an increasing number of disillusioned individuals throughout the so called developed Western world, tho interestingly, those that follow the same faith elsewhere seem to remain as devout as ever.... Neville
May 1st, 2019 06:37
disappointed
Goldfinch60 said:
This rings so true with me at the present moment d a. as you know I am seriously questioning the Christian Faith that I have followed all my life and am beginning to realise that I have been conned.
The Faith in My Spirit will never die but it is MY Spirit and not some \'invented\' image that others would have me believe and pay towards its upkeep.
In this world there is enough money to solve all its problems but those with the money, including \'worship clubs\' will just not let go of theirs and it is the poor that try their best to help and to suffer. Rant over.
May 1st, 2019 00:52
Goldfinch60 said:
This rings so true with me at the present moment d a. as you know I am seriously questioning the Christian Faith that I have followed all my life and am beginning to realise that I have been conned.
The Faith in My Spirit will never die but it is MY Spirit and not some \'invented\' image that others would have me believe and pay towards its upkeep.
In this world there is enough money to solve all its problems but those with the money, including \'worship clubs\' will just not let go of theirs and it is the poor that try their best to help and to suffer. Rant over.
May 1st, 2019 00:52
john
Neville said:
These words have been important since the day they were first written.. I imagine they will always be important .. at least they ought to be.... N
April 30th, 2019 16:50
Neville said:
These words have been important since the day they were first written.. I imagine they will always be important .. at least they ought to be.... N
April 30th, 2019 16:50
through tears
Neville said:
penned to near perfection.... and that\'s damned good in my book ...
April 29th, 2019 07:37
Neville said:
penned to near perfection.... and that\'s damned good in my book ...
April 29th, 2019 07:37
evil
Suresh said:
Lifetime ago, you say, the pain so vividly recalled.
The enormity of your pain in this read is so strong, I shudder to think the intensity of the pain she was enduring because of evil
P.S. It\'s so difficult to get through to a family member, for its viewed through tainted lenses. I know.
April 28th, 2019 18:52
Suresh said:
Lifetime ago, you say, the pain so vividly recalled.
The enormity of your pain in this read is so strong, I shudder to think the intensity of the pain she was enduring because of evil
P.S. It\'s so difficult to get through to a family member, for its viewed through tainted lenses. I know.
April 28th, 2019 18:52
Gad sir!
Neville said:
I smile, you just loiter with a guilty look on ya face ... but knowingly...
April 28th, 2019 12:04
Neville said:
I smile, you just loiter with a guilty look on ya face ... but knowingly...
April 28th, 2019 12:04
How many times (re-write)
Poetic Dan said:
About 10 my friend but 3 or 4 I really but in and now I\'m enjoying that wonderful fruits all day long!
Much appreciated
April 28th, 2019 06:59
Poetic Dan said:
About 10 my friend but 3 or 4 I really but in and now I\'m enjoying that wonderful fruits all day long!
Much appreciated
April 28th, 2019 06:59
How many times (re-write)
Fay Slimm. said:
As many times as we are given in this short life ........... sweet will outlive any sour taste in the end.
April 27th, 2019 03:37
Fay Slimm. said:
As many times as we are given in this short life ........... sweet will outlive any sour taste in the end.
April 27th, 2019 03:37
How many times (re-write)
Neville said:
One mans sweet is another mans poison.....or summat...
enjoyed and then some.. N
April 27th, 2019 03:35
Neville said:
One mans sweet is another mans poison.....or summat...
enjoyed and then some.. N
April 27th, 2019 03:35
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