Comments received on poems by dusk arising
dawns delight (re-written)
Suresh said:
I truly believe dreams are a reality in the alternate universe. Isn\'t it strange that we rarely remember our dreams, nightmare - yes, dreams - no.
While asleep, our brain waves are transported and attuned to our alternate being in the alternate universe, and so we experience their reality.
HUMBUG! maybe, but what if it could be true, then at least we know somewhere we are truly living it.
Enjoyed this d.a.
April 17th, 2019 11:32
Suresh said:
I truly believe dreams are a reality in the alternate universe. Isn\'t it strange that we rarely remember our dreams, nightmare - yes, dreams - no.
While asleep, our brain waves are transported and attuned to our alternate being in the alternate universe, and so we experience their reality.
HUMBUG! maybe, but what if it could be true, then at least we know somewhere we are truly living it.
Enjoyed this d.a.
April 17th, 2019 11:32
dawns delight (re-written)
Neville said:
I have had a few dreams that were so dreamy I would happily have not woken... you have certainly captured and done justice to that feeling justice here..... Neville
April 17th, 2019 07:15
Neville said:
I have had a few dreams that were so dreamy I would happily have not woken... you have certainly captured and done justice to that feeling justice here..... Neville
April 17th, 2019 07:15
dawns delight (re-written)
Fay Slimm. said:
A wonderful feeling of dawn when this special smile awakens a dreamer D.A. - - you capture the ecstasy so well here.
April 17th, 2019 07:05
Fay Slimm. said:
A wonderful feeling of dawn when this special smile awakens a dreamer D.A. - - you capture the ecstasy so well here.
April 17th, 2019 07:05
know JB
Fay Slimm. said:
Lurve the rythmn in this number by JB - - - agree with every word - still tappn and movin - -- great times D.A.
April 16th, 2019 08:27
Fay Slimm. said:
Lurve the rythmn in this number by JB - - - agree with every word - still tappn and movin - -- great times D.A.
April 16th, 2019 08:27
what need in me for kisses
Suresh said:
A haunting image, and just like the kisses, it too needs a loving hand
April 15th, 2019 14:43
Suresh said:
A haunting image, and just like the kisses, it too needs a loving hand
April 15th, 2019 14:43
what need in me for kisses
Michael Edwards said:
A real delight - in fact a real beauty.
April 15th, 2019 03:05
Michael Edwards said:
A real delight - in fact a real beauty.
April 15th, 2019 03:05
what need in me for kisses
Fay Slimm. said:
Very emotive this read of few lines my friend. Love all the phrasing so into my favourites with this little gem.
April 15th, 2019 01:56
Fay Slimm. said:
Very emotive this read of few lines my friend. Love all the phrasing so into my favourites with this little gem.
April 15th, 2019 01:56
what need in me for kisses
Neville said:
a most moving little miniature my friend and true..... Neville
April 15th, 2019 01:52
Neville said:
a most moving little miniature my friend and true..... Neville
April 15th, 2019 01:52
finale
Suresh said:
What we think is ours
It seldom is
Breakups leave one, in
pain, instead of bliss
Glad it was in the past
April 13th, 2019 20:10
Suresh said:
What we think is ours
It seldom is
Breakups leave one, in
pain, instead of bliss
Glad it was in the past
April 13th, 2019 20:10
finale
Neville said:
It happens & it hurts like hell, so they tell me...... unforgivable maybe, but nevertheless enjoyed, if ya get my drift..... Neville
April 13th, 2019 04:29
Neville said:
It happens & it hurts like hell, so they tell me...... unforgivable maybe, but nevertheless enjoyed, if ya get my drift..... Neville
April 13th, 2019 04:29
finale
Michael Edwards said:
A bit of an emotion tugger - hope your dry period gets wet soon.
April 13th, 2019 01:15
Michael Edwards said:
A bit of an emotion tugger - hope your dry period gets wet soon.
April 13th, 2019 01:15
happened
Neville said:
I would keep them too... until maybe one day, they will fit another moment
I think maybe they will...
N.
April 11th, 2019 16:57
Neville said:
I would keep them too... until maybe one day, they will fit another moment
I think maybe they will...
N.
April 11th, 2019 16:57
a wish
Suresh said:
Your brother is always with you in the memories you hold so dear.
As you believe in rebirth, there is a great certainty that you will be together again, and find him exactly the way you wished
April 10th, 2019 11:07
Suresh said:
Your brother is always with you in the memories you hold so dear.
As you believe in rebirth, there is a great certainty that you will be together again, and find him exactly the way you wished
April 10th, 2019 11:07
thoughts on time
Neville said:
this is very near, in its own write a treatise on time itself.... . Neville
April 10th, 2019 10:31
Neville said:
this is very near, in its own write a treatise on time itself.... . Neville
April 10th, 2019 10:31
a wish
Poetic Dan said:
This was so beautifully done my friend, as for my beliefs! I\'ll hopefully stay forever open minded until I see it my self, or maybe not but then no harm done.
Thank so much for writing and sharing his spirit with me.
Much peace and respect
April 9th, 2019 09:51
Poetic Dan said:
This was so beautifully done my friend, as for my beliefs! I\'ll hopefully stay forever open minded until I see it my self, or maybe not but then no harm done.
Thank so much for writing and sharing his spirit with me.
Much peace and respect
April 9th, 2019 09:51
Kat and Santita all at sea
Neville said:
an intriguing, humerous and compelling if not nail biting read with maybe just a tad of self woven in to the story line for good measure ... presumably the next episode is still available on catch up.....
April 9th, 2019 08:05
Neville said:
an intriguing, humerous and compelling if not nail biting read with maybe just a tad of self woven in to the story line for good measure ... presumably the next episode is still available on catch up.....
April 9th, 2019 08:05
a wish
Neville said:
This is a fine write indeed and I for one was not only moved by your words, I share your belief in reincarnation...... N
April 8th, 2019 02:40
Neville said:
This is a fine write indeed and I for one was not only moved by your words, I share your belief in reincarnation...... N
April 8th, 2019 02:40
a wish
Fay Slimm. said:
A very moving song and verse -- Love being part of the permanent cannot die and once our earthly vessel is shed I believe we shall know freedom as never before - our Spirit lives on and the best is yet to come. Your dear departed brother knows this as truth.
April 8th, 2019 00:50
Fay Slimm. said:
A very moving song and verse -- Love being part of the permanent cannot die and once our earthly vessel is shed I believe we shall know freedom as never before - our Spirit lives on and the best is yet to come. Your dear departed brother knows this as truth.
April 8th, 2019 00:50
a wish
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write d a, he is still with you.
My belief is that My Spirit will always be there for eternity.
April 8th, 2019 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write d a, he is still with you.
My belief is that My Spirit will always be there for eternity.
April 8th, 2019 00:38
a wish
Michael Edwards said:
Super tender write dusk - the depth of love and feeling
oodles through.
April 8th, 2019 00:13
Michael Edwards said:
Super tender write dusk - the depth of love and feeling
oodles through.
April 8th, 2019 00:13
stumble
Neville said:
a story told well... and a well told story, whichever way ya look at it.... N
April 7th, 2019 14:03
Neville said:
a story told well... and a well told story, whichever way ya look at it.... N
April 7th, 2019 14:03
pulsing fluff
Neville said:
Soothing and calm.. the order of the day... some words kick start the imagination... these words set it free.... Neville
April 4th, 2019 07:30
Neville said:
Soothing and calm.. the order of the day... some words kick start the imagination... these words set it free.... Neville
April 4th, 2019 07:30
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