Comments received on poems by dusk arising
tide
Neville said:
this is one of those poems one can feel as they read it...
I can still feel it... therefore it must be damn good... Neville
April 2nd, 2019 13:21
Neville said:
this is one of those poems one can feel as they read it...
I can still feel it... therefore it must be damn good... Neville
April 2nd, 2019 13:21
the op
Neville said:
I could never be a surgeon, but then, I could never have been a fireman either... I was not tall enough to be the latter, when height mattered, or so it was said.... now then where was I.. oh\' yes... you aint gonna forget that in a hetty are ya..... N
April 1st, 2019 06:43
Neville said:
I could never be a surgeon, but then, I could never have been a fireman either... I was not tall enough to be the latter, when height mattered, or so it was said.... now then where was I.. oh\' yes... you aint gonna forget that in a hetty are ya..... N
April 1st, 2019 06:43
i will comfort you
Fay Slimm. said:
This write pens real love and so so tenderly in such short lines - - a favourite for sure and thanks D.A. for sharing it here.
March 31st, 2019 16:26
Fay Slimm. said:
This write pens real love and so so tenderly in such short lines - - a favourite for sure and thanks D.A. for sharing it here.
March 31st, 2019 16:26
i will comfort you
Neville said:
what a luverly thought.. and how bloomin kind....and well writ..... N
March 31st, 2019 04:14
Neville said:
what a luverly thought.. and how bloomin kind....and well writ..... N
March 31st, 2019 04:14
i will comfort you
Michael Edwards said:
Nice thought - do you have plenty of glue? And a nice write by the way.
March 31st, 2019 01:33
Michael Edwards said:
Nice thought - do you have plenty of glue? And a nice write by the way.
March 31st, 2019 01:33
Mr President
Neville said:
extremely nudesworthy .. and a great chuckle sir....
March 29th, 2019 07:32
Neville said:
extremely nudesworthy .. and a great chuckle sir....
March 29th, 2019 07:32
Macabre masquerade
Goldfinch60 said:
So true d a, such a mess, why are politicians such self serving hypocrites, they are chosen by the people to sere the people but all they care about are theirselves.
March 28th, 2019 02:09
Goldfinch60 said:
So true d a, such a mess, why are politicians such self serving hypocrites, they are chosen by the people to sere the people but all they care about are theirselves.
March 28th, 2019 02:09
Macabre masquerade
Suresh said:
Those who are appointed to serve, serve only their best interest. Am I the only one who feels it, that the present is overly corrupt.
March 27th, 2019 11:35
Suresh said:
Those who are appointed to serve, serve only their best interest. Am I the only one who feels it, that the present is overly corrupt.
March 27th, 2019 11:35
Macabre masquerade
Michael Edwards said:
So apt - we will probably end up in some mid-way cesspool that is neither Remain nor Brexit. Total incompetency.
March 27th, 2019 09:50
Michael Edwards said:
So apt - we will probably end up in some mid-way cesspool that is neither Remain nor Brexit. Total incompetency.
March 27th, 2019 09:50
Macabre masquerade
Mark Maginn said:
Nicely put for such a disaster about to explode across Europe.
March 27th, 2019 07:19
Mark Maginn said:
Nicely put for such a disaster about to explode across Europe.
March 27th, 2019 07:19
Macabre masquerade
Neville said:
timely, apt and to the point... what more could we want .. well said sir.. I think most of us have had enough... I was never keen on politicians, or most of them,, decent ones are few and far between... my views have only been reinforced by the current fiasco............ Neville
March 27th, 2019 07:08
Neville said:
timely, apt and to the point... what more could we want .. well said sir.. I think most of us have had enough... I was never keen on politicians, or most of them,, decent ones are few and far between... my views have only been reinforced by the current fiasco............ Neville
March 27th, 2019 07:08
Mr President
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write da, my first smile of the day, thank you.
March 27th, 2019 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write da, my first smile of the day, thank you.
March 27th, 2019 01:13
Joey played the saxophone
Poetic Dan said:
Beautifully done just before I try to drif off!
March 26th, 2019 15:16
Poetic Dan said:
Beautifully done just before I try to drif off!
March 26th, 2019 15:16
unanswered questions
Neville said:
it is always the unanswered ones that keep us guessing... innit... relateable on so many levels from a personal, professional and poetical perspective... Neville
March 26th, 2019 13:51
Neville said:
it is always the unanswered ones that keep us guessing... innit... relateable on so many levels from a personal, professional and poetical perspective... Neville
March 26th, 2019 13:51
in dark woodland
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write d a, I was there spreading my insignificance with you.
March 22nd, 2019 15:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write d a, I was there spreading my insignificance with you.
March 22nd, 2019 15:53
in dark woodland
Neville said:
Well I can\'t argue with what Fay said down there, nor could I have said it any better.. a seriously enjoyable bit o poetry... N
March 22nd, 2019 08:31
Neville said:
Well I can\'t argue with what Fay said down there, nor could I have said it any better.. a seriously enjoyable bit o poetry... N
March 22nd, 2019 08:31
in dark woodland
Poetic Dan said:
Memories Of walking/running through the dark woods for shortcuts when younger. Really Enjoyed this
March 22nd, 2019 04:17
Poetic Dan said:
Memories Of walking/running through the dark woods for shortcuts when younger. Really Enjoyed this
March 22nd, 2019 04:17
in dark woodland
Fay Slimm. said:
So poetic and atmospheric this write of time spent in dark woodland as night brings out its secret happenings -- the final stanza brought me near tears
- - -so powerfully realized is human insignificance to such survival. A verse to save and read over again.
March 22nd, 2019 03:54
Fay Slimm. said:
So poetic and atmospheric this write of time spent in dark woodland as night brings out its secret happenings -- the final stanza brought me near tears
- - -so powerfully realized is human insignificance to such survival. A verse to save and read over again.
March 22nd, 2019 03:54
that i may face you
Suresh said:
I am imagining a hurricane, with all its imposing chaos, its internal eye is serene. The hurricane disappate as the chaos fades.
Our lives mirror
March 21st, 2019 11:32
Suresh said:
I am imagining a hurricane, with all its imposing chaos, its internal eye is serene. The hurricane disappate as the chaos fades.
Our lives mirror
March 21st, 2019 11:32
Joey played the saxophone
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write, fate can have such wonderful impact on our lives.
March 14th, 2019 01:02
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write, fate can have such wonderful impact on our lives.
March 14th, 2019 01:02
Joey played the saxophone
Fay Slimm. said:
Strange how coincidence or fate sometimes brings things together as in this surprising piece of amazing re-posting. - - thanks for sharing it D.A.
March 13th, 2019 10:04
Fay Slimm. said:
Strange how coincidence or fate sometimes brings things together as in this surprising piece of amazing re-posting. - - thanks for sharing it D.A.
March 13th, 2019 10:04
Joey played the saxophone
Neville said:
there is a beauty here and that\'s for sure.. it just had to be autobiographical.......... coincidence, karma, fate.. who knows but bloomin lovely.... Neville
March 13th, 2019 04:15
Neville said:
there is a beauty here and that\'s for sure.. it just had to be autobiographical.......... coincidence, karma, fate.. who knows but bloomin lovely.... Neville
March 13th, 2019 04:15
Joey played the saxophone
Michael Edwards said:
Your comments above do help but it stands in its own right - an amazing read in an exciting form - so glad you reposted it. It\'s a fave for me.
March 13th, 2019 03:31
Michael Edwards said:
Your comments above do help but it stands in its own right - an amazing read in an exciting form - so glad you reposted it. It\'s a fave for me.
March 13th, 2019 03:31
Joey played the saxophone
Nicholas Browning said:
Here\'s a word I learned from good ole\' Michael. \"Penultimate\"! The penultimate stanza is my favorite one. And I was a bit confused at first, but this is a story about a man who\'s wife has died, and joey is in some sort of place where he meets an old lover. Then we find out that Zoe is joey\'s daughter and that they are doing their best to move on. Is that about right? Either way, a bit sad but I enjoyed it.
March 13th, 2019 02:58
Nicholas Browning said:
Here\'s a word I learned from good ole\' Michael. \"Penultimate\"! The penultimate stanza is my favorite one. And I was a bit confused at first, but this is a story about a man who\'s wife has died, and joey is in some sort of place where he meets an old lover. Then we find out that Zoe is joey\'s daughter and that they are doing their best to move on. Is that about right? Either way, a bit sad but I enjoyed it.
March 13th, 2019 02:58
More \\\\\\\'Mary had\\\\\\\'
theNMH said:
Love the style, wish I had that much knowledge/capacity to play around with English. Very talented you are
March 11th, 2019 12:44
theNMH said:
Love the style, wish I had that much knowledge/capacity to play around with English. Very talented you are
March 11th, 2019 12:44
Veronica
Neville said:
absolutely delightful.. nowt else need be said.......... N )
March 9th, 2019 06:10
Neville said:
absolutely delightful.. nowt else need be said.......... N )
March 9th, 2019 06:10
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