Comments received on poems by dusk arising



Charlie
Neville said:

A diamond geeza if ever there was...

A splendid account that could only be autobiographical.... and should be made into a movie at the very least... top marks sir... N

March 8th, 2019 10:39

easy
Neville said:

to truly live and feel, they say you should feel your neighbours shoes pinch... well they do around here... enjoyed walking alongside of you but in my own way and at my own pace... cheers

March 7th, 2019 16:07

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JaydeVictoria said:

This is funny. I liked it loved the style too!

March 6th, 2019 18:42

forever
Neville said:

absolutely delightful.. if you aint had one or two moments like this, then take it from me.. you just aint lived

perfectly personal but loaned out here for us all to enjoy..... Neville

March 6th, 2019 07:46

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Poetic Dan said:

Great reading

March 5th, 2019 07:08

words your eyes will never see
Neville said:

these incredibly fine words need no introduction, nor explanation.. they are simply .. spot on & here is a guy that has spent forty odd years within the field of mental health.... actually, on reflection.. I dont think I have done you enough justice sir.. I think these words are amazing... N

March 5th, 2019 06:20

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Goldfinch60 said:

Good ones d a. The last one I was involved in.

March 4th, 2019 01:27

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Michael Edwards said:

Made my evening to see these - i was going to pick out a favourite but they are all so good I thought it would do the others an injustice - great stuff .

March 3rd, 2019 14:12

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Neville said:

Very good....

I wonder what happened to Mr. Fish

March 3rd, 2019 13:47

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Suresh said:

To the point, don\'t waste words, yet lighthearted
Thnx

March 3rd, 2019 13:08

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orchidee said:

Good writes DA.

March 3rd, 2019 11:15

some facet of a stone
Neville said:

the grass is never really greener... a genuine and fond reminisce methinks........... luverly... Neville

March 1st, 2019 10:51

peace 2
Neville said:

These words read like a prayer.. and so they should........ Amen...

February 27th, 2019 15:00

Renzi
Laura🌻 said:

dusk arising,

Just wanted you to know that RENZI messaged me yesterday! She said she’s fine! She thanks everyone for their concern! and sends her regards!

~Laura~

February 26th, 2019 07:10

afraid
Neville said:

Harm done, poetically put, nuff said..

February 26th, 2019 05:22

it aint our summer
Neville said:

I am kinda glad I found this on the run up to Spring... it gives a little hope during what can be a very deceiving time of year.... N

February 25th, 2019 12:44

what makes a poet?
Suresh said:

Tragedy makes for great poets, and so does love.
I started collecting words on this very subject several weeks ago,
Nicely done.

February 25th, 2019 12:20

Sometimes
Neville said:

sometimes its not easy, often it is hard.. and when it is, my word, it can sting like hell....

February 24th, 2019 12:52

hum-drum
Neville said:

Ah\' yes.. there is a point just before sleep where anything and everything can seem real or possible .. I remember it well.. sometimes too well and certainly more clearly than any of my journeys to work.... N

February 22nd, 2019 07:28

turn back the clock
Suresh said:

You\'re right, \"turn back the clock\" for what?
Nothing will change, nothing can change and we\'ll dance the same way again.
So you\'re right, why give up the memories.
Thnx

February 21st, 2019 13:19

turn back the clock
Neville said:

who would not want to be able to turn back the clock.. and back again ....

February 21st, 2019 06:05

turn back the clock
orchidee said:

A fine write DA. I can\'t understand some folk. We all had an extra second, a few years ago I think it was. What more could we want? We could have sailed round the world 473 times in that second - going by the speed of light (186,000 miles per second)! I\'ve not checked the calculations for this. lol. Oh well, maybe half way to the moon anyway.

February 21st, 2019 02:35

turn back the clock
Goldfinch60 said:

What if? The most profound question of them all.

February 21st, 2019 02:07

what makes a poet?
Goldfinch60 said:

So true d a, so true.

February 21st, 2019 01:56

what makes a poet?
Poetic Dan said:

...... Tears
Thank you
Much love and respect

February 20th, 2019 14:57

what makes a poet?
laurenroe said:

Said how it is. Simple, and to the point. I like it :)

February 20th, 2019 13:30

what makes a poet?
Neville said:

Knock out.... :)

February 20th, 2019 12:12

what makes a poet?
orchidee said:

A fine write D A.

February 20th, 2019 10:42

what makes a poet?
Michael Edwards said:

Just how it is and so well crafted.

February 20th, 2019 10:06

what makes a poet?
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

True DA Great write

February 20th, 2019 08:17



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