Comments received on poems by dusk arising



silent night
orchidee said:

A fine write dusk.

October 11th, 2018 01:40

silent night
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful emotive write.

October 11th, 2018 01:32

persistence
orchidee said:

It happens \'behind closed doors\'. Makes it worse if under the guise of \'religion\'.

September 27th, 2018 01:52

harmony revealed
HangingbyaHalo said:

I love this and long for it.

September 18th, 2018 10:46

harmony revealed
Fay Slimm. said:

Spot on and with so few words - agree wholeheartedly that is where peace can heal us. Great read.

September 14th, 2018 02:31

harmony revealed
orchidee said:

A lovely write and pic dusk. Unfortunately, I didn\'t get the hang of it. It didn\'t heal me. I went in some woods and walked into a tree. It would have helped if I had not closed my eyes in meditation at the time, while walking. doh!

September 14th, 2018 01:28

harmony revealed
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write and so true. There is nothing quite as healing as communing with nature.

September 14th, 2018 01:13

harmony revealed
Michael Edwards said:

I love short punchy pieces and this is a great example - super work dusk

September 14th, 2018 00:36

keeping it to myself
Poetic Dan said:

Wow.. Thank you for sharing this part of yourself may your days go forward in harmony and as you so bravely hold that head high with a wonderful heart open can it attract what you deserve.

Much love and respect

September 12th, 2018 14:32

keeping it to myself
Fay Slimm. said:

The read from line one sears the heart - there is nothing so sad than giving love out and receiving naught back - - a write to remember D.A. - into my faves.

September 12th, 2018 12:34

keeping it to myself
orchidee said:

Yes, a sad write. But there\'s more love there, I\'m sure!

September 12th, 2018 01:33

keeping it to myself
Goldfinch60 said:

Such a sad write as there is love out there for all of us, sometimes it can be difficult to find.

September 12th, 2018 01:10

keeping it to myself
Michael Edwards said:

It might be a pie in the sky but it has sweet crust pastry - just reach for a slice.

September 12th, 2018 00:31

cookie jar
Poetic Dan said:

Thank you for sharing this as it is
Taking me to a shadowing comfort
Where my heart felt this pain
So many words felt the same

Much peace and respect

August 27th, 2018 08:39

cookie jar
sylviasearcher said:

Yes I can feel the emotion that was with you when you write this.

My son sometimes asks if I wish he did not have autism. It is such a part if who he is and what makes him unique. I tell him I would never want to change him I just wish he did not find the world so hard. I believe that he needs me to never give up hope. To be there in the way he needs.

August 22nd, 2018 04:29

cookie jar
Michael Edwards said:

Ah - tender - great work Dusk

August 22nd, 2018 01:29

cookie jar
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful loving write da.

August 22nd, 2018 01:04

into the haze
sylviasearcher said:

We were picking wild berries the other day.
Apple and blackberry pie baked and eaten!

I always enjoy nature\'s metaphors and how the seasons can ignite reminiscing

August 19th, 2018 05:07

Aretha
brooklyn6timesplus said:

Nicely penned tribute poem to Aretha Louise Franklin. May she rest in peace. Great write here dusk arising.

August 19th, 2018 01:07

into the haze
Michael Edwards said:

We still pick and - yes - they are so early this year - in fact there are now few left to pick round here and it\'s not even September yet. This is yet another example of your super work .

August 19th, 2018 00:50

into the haze
Goldfinch60 said:

We used to go blackberry picking, we even found a path where we could pick plums as well, that has now all passed, but the memories are always there.

August 19th, 2018 00:45

Aretha
Laura🌻 said:

Dusk,

I totally agree with you!
Thank you for your wonderful words about the First Lady of soul!

~Laura~

August 17th, 2018 02:11

Aretha
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful tribute to a wonderful lady who is respected by all in music and beyond.
She is now singing in heaven.

August 17th, 2018 01:09

Aretha
Michael Edwards said:

I am only vaguely aware of her and I\'m a bit surprised at all the coverage her death is receiving on the news channels - she obviously touched a lot of people.

August 17th, 2018 01:08

the op
Christina8 said:

Hope you feel better soon, dusk!

August 15th, 2018 11:20

the op
Michael Edwards said:

Currently waiting for a hernia repair 0 only diagnosed a few days ago and seeing the Consultant on Saturday so this is very apt and a fine write too.

August 15th, 2018 08:16

the op
Goldfinch60 said:

May all your tomorrows be full of relief, joy and love.

August 15th, 2018 08:04

the op
orchidee said:

Best wishes there. Hope it\'s not like the pic. They look like they\'re preparing a Frankenstein\'s monster!

August 15th, 2018 06:38

riddance
Poetic Dan said:

What an eneding my friend
I could feel my own need to still let go
Thank you are sharing your light

Much peace and respect

August 11th, 2018 05:31

in the dark
Poetic Dan said:

Got a friend who I truly did this with, thanks for sharing buddy.


August 8th, 2018 09:55



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