Comments received on poems by dusk arising
Sol
spilleronsheet said:
A poetry so epic
Crafted and gilded with the majestic words displaying the sunshine and a beautiful imagery takes me on a ride…
A piece of poetry giving hopes of sunrise…when I thought it was sunset…it gives me hope of sunlight…thank you so much dear dusk for arising hopes in my mind …those lines with which you open…tells me frozen hours shall pass, sunlight shall soon greet my life…loved each every stanza…thanks a ton for sharing this piece ….
February 10th, 2022 20:21
spilleronsheet said:
A poetry so epic
Crafted and gilded with the majestic words displaying the sunshine and a beautiful imagery takes me on a ride…
A piece of poetry giving hopes of sunrise…when I thought it was sunset…it gives me hope of sunlight…thank you so much dear dusk for arising hopes in my mind …those lines with which you open…tells me frozen hours shall pass, sunlight shall soon greet my life…loved each every stanza…thanks a ton for sharing this piece ….
February 10th, 2022 20:21
Sol
sorenbarrett said:
Pregnant with vivid images, and colors it beams with brightness.
February 10th, 2022 13:48
sorenbarrett said:
Pregnant with vivid images, and colors it beams with brightness.
February 10th, 2022 13:48
Sol
Michael Edwards said:
And its top marks from me - a stunner of a write.
February 10th, 2022 12:04
Michael Edwards said:
And its top marks from me - a stunner of a write.
February 10th, 2022 12:04
Sol
Fay Slimm. said:
Perfectly expressed the oncoming of dawn my dear friend - - your pen excelled in this wonderful tribute to Sol arising - - into my list of favourites this gem of a read goes.
February 10th, 2022 11:00
Fay Slimm. said:
Perfectly expressed the oncoming of dawn my dear friend - - your pen excelled in this wonderful tribute to Sol arising - - into my list of favourites this gem of a read goes.
February 10th, 2022 11:00
Sol
Rocky Lagou said:
This was so vivid. I caught every hue and every hue directed from this beautiful piece. 👍
February 10th, 2022 10:42
Rocky Lagou said:
This was so vivid. I caught every hue and every hue directed from this beautiful piece. 👍
February 10th, 2022 10:42
Sol
Paul Bell said:
You have extolled the virtue of poetry in this masterpiece. It was like you were there in person.
February 10th, 2022 09:52
Paul Bell said:
You have extolled the virtue of poetry in this masterpiece. It was like you were there in person.
February 10th, 2022 09:52
equality
spilleronsheet said:
Powerful words reign
As they speak for the justice that is strained
A beautiful poetry with wisdom
So thoughtful dear dusky
A voice for many
February 9th, 2022 23:09
spilleronsheet said:
Powerful words reign
As they speak for the justice that is strained
A beautiful poetry with wisdom
So thoughtful dear dusky
A voice for many
February 9th, 2022 23:09
equality
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
One word. Ok,more than one word,lol
\"Imagine\"-John Lennon✌
🍻✌🕊
February 9th, 2022 19:04
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
One word. Ok,more than one word,lol
\"Imagine\"-John Lennon✌
🍻✌🕊
February 9th, 2022 19:04
equality
Rocky Lagou said:
Lovely poem! Reminds me of my post today. The fight for equality needs to be fought!
February 9th, 2022 13:17
Rocky Lagou said:
Lovely poem! Reminds me of my post today. The fight for equality needs to be fought!
February 9th, 2022 13:17
downstream day
Rozina said:
This is a lovely relaxing poem to read again and again to calm the mind and body.
February 9th, 2022 06:25
Rozina said:
This is a lovely relaxing poem to read again and again to calm the mind and body.
February 9th, 2022 06:25
equality
Goldfinch60 said:
Equality is a fine concept but there are so many who just do not care about it. I know you do d a and I do as well but why do others not care of do nothing about it.
Andy
February 9th, 2022 02:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Equality is a fine concept but there are so many who just do not care about it. I know you do d a and I do as well but why do others not care of do nothing about it.
Andy
February 9th, 2022 02:29
downstream day
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words d a, we all need those days of relaxation to drift away within ourselves.
Andy
February 9th, 2022 01:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words d a, we all need those days of relaxation to drift away within ourselves.
Andy
February 9th, 2022 01:33
downstream day
Poetic Dan said:
Yes, I need at step more back to that than my own crashing waves... but you know that!
Hope you are out and about or soon to be my friend.
February 8th, 2022 15:42
Poetic Dan said:
Yes, I need at step more back to that than my own crashing waves... but you know that!
Hope you are out and about or soon to be my friend.
February 8th, 2022 15:42
downstream day
Michael Edwards said:
So original - don\'t know why but it put me in mind of a favourite track of mine - Leon Redbone\'s \'Relax\'.
February 8th, 2022 15:19
Michael Edwards said:
So original - don\'t know why but it put me in mind of a favourite track of mine - Leon Redbone\'s \'Relax\'.
February 8th, 2022 15:19
downstream day
Crowns4Christ said:
I can picture your downstream day dusk,sounds very peaceful
February 8th, 2022 14:58
Crowns4Christ said:
I can picture your downstream day dusk,sounds very peaceful
February 8th, 2022 14:58
downstream day
Lorna said:
Oh when we give ourselves premission to relax - isn\'t it wonderful. This sounds so guilt free! Off and away.
February 8th, 2022 14:42
Lorna said:
Oh when we give ourselves premission to relax - isn\'t it wonderful. This sounds so guilt free! Off and away.
February 8th, 2022 14:42
downstream day
Rocky Lagou said:
Nicely written! I love a good poem that can express themselves with so much passion. Nice job! 👍
February 8th, 2022 10:21
Rocky Lagou said:
Nicely written! I love a good poem that can express themselves with so much passion. Nice job! 👍
February 8th, 2022 10:21
downstream day
spilleronsheet said:
I wish to visit one day
To relax by the downstream
But alas not now
Thankfully privileged could feel by reading those lines
Thanks dear dusk for always calming the mind
February 8th, 2022 08:59
spilleronsheet said:
I wish to visit one day
To relax by the downstream
But alas not now
Thankfully privileged could feel by reading those lines
Thanks dear dusk for always calming the mind
February 8th, 2022 08:59
downstream day
L. B. Mek said:
\'there\'s never much to say ..... (really)\'
\'of those downstream trees\'
\'of tickle-tongue cheer\'
\'but after a waddle\'
\'I really can recommend such a day for you too
when you haven\'t much stuff that you need to do
by the riverbank you can find your very own downstream day
and close your eyes,... relax,...... just drift away.\'
February 8th, 2022 07:12
L. B. Mek said:
\'there\'s never much to say ..... (really)\'
\'of those downstream trees\'
\'of tickle-tongue cheer\'
\'but after a waddle\'
\'I really can recommend such a day for you too
when you haven\'t much stuff that you need to do
by the riverbank you can find your very own downstream day
and close your eyes,... relax,...... just drift away.\'
February 8th, 2022 07:12
downstream day
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
And I love this . Great poem , dusk 🙂
February 8th, 2022 05:41
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
And I love this . Great poem , dusk 🙂
February 8th, 2022 05:41
cool rested solace
Goldfinch60 said:
May that solaca always be with you d a.
Andy
February 8th, 2022 02:06
Goldfinch60 said:
May that solaca always be with you d a.
Andy
February 8th, 2022 02:06
cool rested solace
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
You\'re a magician with words,..you can turn them into a beautiful image.🌄🏜🏞🏔🌋⛲️🎇🎆
February 7th, 2022 20:14
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
You\'re a magician with words,..you can turn them into a beautiful image.🌄🏜🏞🏔🌋⛲️🎇🎆
February 7th, 2022 20:14
cool rested solace
spilleronsheet said:
Which line should I call best
You led me in a dilemma
Struck with the title, the imagery and the calmness felt
As if it’s telling stop by and live in moment
A beautiful poetry dear dusk
Where my emotions played turmoil and finally a calmness reading and going through elegant lines
February 7th, 2022 15:03
spilleronsheet said:
Which line should I call best
You led me in a dilemma
Struck with the title, the imagery and the calmness felt
As if it’s telling stop by and live in moment
A beautiful poetry dear dusk
Where my emotions played turmoil and finally a calmness reading and going through elegant lines
February 7th, 2022 15:03
cool rested solace
Rozina said:
Torrential crash and then solace and calm. Wonderful image.
February 7th, 2022 08:34
Rozina said:
Torrential crash and then solace and calm. Wonderful image.
February 7th, 2022 08:34
cool rested solace
L. B. Mek said:
they say we have to reach rock bottom
before we find ourselves
and there\'s no better source of solace
than realising more of our own truth\'s..
insightful words, as-ever Dusk
I\'ll be pondering this lines
of worded acceptance, for a while:
\'crashed down as a waterfall
to the splendor of all observant
only to find cool rested solace\'
February 7th, 2022 06:41
L. B. Mek said:
they say we have to reach rock bottom
before we find ourselves
and there\'s no better source of solace
than realising more of our own truth\'s..
insightful words, as-ever Dusk
I\'ll be pondering this lines
of worded acceptance, for a while:
\'crashed down as a waterfall
to the splendor of all observant
only to find cool rested solace\'
February 7th, 2022 06:41
relax
Crowns4Christ said:
Never be somebody your not, always be genuine and don\'t get discouraged by what others.
February 4th, 2022 14:18
Crowns4Christ said:
Never be somebody your not, always be genuine and don\'t get discouraged by what others.
February 4th, 2022 14:18
within the depths of beyond
Crowns4Christ said:
It\'s always best to write from the heart dusk,which is what it looks you are doing friend, great job
February 4th, 2022 14:13
Crowns4Christ said:
It\'s always best to write from the heart dusk,which is what it looks you are doing friend, great job
February 4th, 2022 14:13
gardens of hell
Crowns4Christ said:
We all have to walk through a little hell,but the journey to heaven is surely worth it.
February 4th, 2022 14:09
Crowns4Christ said:
We all have to walk through a little hell,but the journey to heaven is surely worth it.
February 4th, 2022 14:09
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