Comments received on poems by dusk arising
Response to Limerick 90 from Michael Edwards
Paul Bell said:
Just hope that long stretch has kept his prostate in check.
Granted, they were glad to see him go, not for his pissing, just for his b,o.
That was funny, more please.
February 27th, 2022 06:17
Paul Bell said:
Just hope that long stretch has kept his prostate in check.
Granted, they were glad to see him go, not for his pissing, just for his b,o.
That was funny, more please.
February 27th, 2022 06:17
Response to Limerick 90 from Michael Edwards
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good fun response to Michaels limerick d a.
Andy
February 27th, 2022 01:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good fun response to Michaels limerick d a.
Andy
February 27th, 2022 01:36
Response to Limerick 90 from Michael Edwards
Rozina said:
Hahaha these limericks are so fun to read. Imagining the horror and laughing at the images!
February 26th, 2022 17:56
Rozina said:
Hahaha these limericks are so fun to read. Imagining the horror and laughing at the images!
February 26th, 2022 17:56
broken wing
Poetic Dan said:
Holly crap that hit deep, on about the 7th read I think I remembered to breathe.
Thank you for sharing my friend
February 26th, 2022 15:51
Poetic Dan said:
Holly crap that hit deep, on about the 7th read I think I remembered to breathe.
Thank you for sharing my friend
February 26th, 2022 15:51
Response to Limerick 90 from Michael Edwards
Michael Edwards said:
Good man and thanks for the accolade - it was good in response to my No 90 and it\'s even better here - keep writing dusk.
February 26th, 2022 14:51
Michael Edwards said:
Good man and thanks for the accolade - it was good in response to my No 90 and it\'s even better here - keep writing dusk.
February 26th, 2022 14:51
broken wing
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful expression of past pain and damage. It is so easy to leave imprints in what has not dried that remain forever.
February 26th, 2022 13:23
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful expression of past pain and damage. It is so easy to leave imprints in what has not dried that remain forever.
February 26th, 2022 13:23
Response to Limerick 90 from Michael Edwards
Neville said:
Okay, so what\'s funny about making an old fella piss himself laughing .. come on, out with it ................ woah steady Tiger ...............Who should I send the dry cleaning bill to eh\' ... you or Michael ............ :)
February 26th, 2022 12:54
Neville said:
Okay, so what\'s funny about making an old fella piss himself laughing .. come on, out with it ................ woah steady Tiger ...............Who should I send the dry cleaning bill to eh\' ... you or Michael ............ :)
February 26th, 2022 12:54
broken wing
Goldfinch60 said:
So true d a, some thing said in our childhood are always with us.
Andy
February 26th, 2022 01:56
Goldfinch60 said:
So true d a, some thing said in our childhood are always with us.
Andy
February 26th, 2022 01:56
broken wing
Rozina said:
Yes there are words said by various people in our lives that stick forever. Very relatable.
February 25th, 2022 18:20
Rozina said:
Yes there are words said by various people in our lives that stick forever. Very relatable.
February 25th, 2022 18:20
broken wing
spilleronsheet said:
A bag of emotions you penned dear poet
Well my interpretations seemed rising and falling like waves
A young maiden
In her youth self
Suddenly realised the burden of life
That nipped her ambitions as vast as sky
And those emotions carried over her entire life
That’s how it rang with my mind
Another exemplary work of yours
February 25th, 2022 15:10
spilleronsheet said:
A bag of emotions you penned dear poet
Well my interpretations seemed rising and falling like waves
A young maiden
In her youth self
Suddenly realised the burden of life
That nipped her ambitions as vast as sky
And those emotions carried over her entire life
That’s how it rang with my mind
Another exemplary work of yours
February 25th, 2022 15:10
broken wing
Michael Edwards said:
Well I\'ve read it several times and still unsure how to interpret it - which actually gives it its appeal.
February 25th, 2022 14:51
Michael Edwards said:
Well I\'ve read it several times and still unsure how to interpret it - which actually gives it its appeal.
February 25th, 2022 14:51
broken wing
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
I think of all your poems I’ve read thus far,this one really resonates with me most. So true! Somethings never leave us.🕊
February 25th, 2022 14:21
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
I think of all your poems I’ve read thus far,this one really resonates with me most. So true! Somethings never leave us.🕊
February 25th, 2022 14:21
broken wing
Rocky Lagou said:
Idk if it\'s just me interpreting this ENTIRELY wrong. But is this about your child\'s passing? If so, sincere condolences to you. But maybe it\'s just me reading it wrong. I\'ll re-read it to make sure I grasp the meaning. 💖
February 25th, 2022 13:25
Rocky Lagou said:
Idk if it\'s just me interpreting this ENTIRELY wrong. But is this about your child\'s passing? If so, sincere condolences to you. But maybe it\'s just me reading it wrong. I\'ll re-read it to make sure I grasp the meaning. 💖
February 25th, 2022 13:25
quench
Neville said:
I am not ashamed to say, I enjoyed the whole darn thing sir .. every bloomin bloomin bit of it ...... Neville
February 25th, 2022 11:09
Neville said:
I am not ashamed to say, I enjoyed the whole darn thing sir .. every bloomin bloomin bit of it ...... Neville
February 25th, 2022 11:09
the love which made us who we are
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true d a, but the love of my long life was taken from me but now there is another love in my life which has surprised both of us so much.
Andy
February 25th, 2022 01:38
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true d a, but the love of my long life was taken from me but now there is another love in my life which has surprised both of us so much.
Andy
February 25th, 2022 01:38
the love which made us who we are
Rozina said:
Very good poem and relatable to many. I enjoyed reading this.
February 24th, 2022 22:06
Rozina said:
Very good poem and relatable to many. I enjoyed reading this.
February 24th, 2022 22:06
the love which made us who we are
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ve ever only known two loves: the love of my family and the love of my wife and they are both as strong as they ever were - I guess I\'m blessed.
February 24th, 2022 14:48
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ve ever only known two loves: the love of my family and the love of my wife and they are both as strong as they ever were - I guess I\'m blessed.
February 24th, 2022 14:48
the love which made us who we are
Neville said:
this is one of them not exactly a love songs innit, but rather a song about the love of love ..................... nice one too sir ................................. Neville
February 24th, 2022 14:18
Neville said:
this is one of them not exactly a love songs innit, but rather a song about the love of love ..................... nice one too sir ................................. Neville
February 24th, 2022 14:18
the love which made us who we are
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:
Haven\'t had that \"love\" yet but when i do, it might be something like this (i can only hope). And i hope you have found yours!
February 24th, 2022 11:54
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:
Haven\'t had that \"love\" yet but when i do, it might be something like this (i can only hope). And i hope you have found yours!
February 24th, 2022 11:54
the love which made us who we are
Rocky Lagou said:
I love this message! Love definitely differs and as you put it, \"no two loves are the same.\" I feel that everyone has that bond with someone special that is impossible to beat. Thanks for such a beautiful message! 💖
February 24th, 2022 11:51
Rocky Lagou said:
I love this message! Love definitely differs and as you put it, \"no two loves are the same.\" I feel that everyone has that bond with someone special that is impossible to beat. Thanks for such a beautiful message! 💖
February 24th, 2022 11:51
the love which made us who we are
Christina8 said:
The one special love, sometimes it leaves, sometimes it stays (like mine ha ha) but its forever in our hearts. Wonderful write!!
February 24th, 2022 10:42
Christina8 said:
The one special love, sometimes it leaves, sometimes it stays (like mine ha ha) but its forever in our hearts. Wonderful write!!
February 24th, 2022 10:42
the love which made us who we are
Vamsi Sudha said:
Great feel and great words !! One special priceless Love will always bring the best in us and that the one we really wish for !!
February 24th, 2022 08:17
Vamsi Sudha said:
Great feel and great words !! One special priceless Love will always bring the best in us and that the one we really wish for !!
February 24th, 2022 08:17
but unbeaten
Christina8 said:
Brilliantly written! Love that you end with \"battered but unbeaten\", ending in a positive note. Great job!
February 23rd, 2022 10:33
Christina8 said:
Brilliantly written! Love that you end with \"battered but unbeaten\", ending in a positive note. Great job!
February 23rd, 2022 10:33
but unbeaten
Neville said:
one day ... maybe, I hope you realise just how good at this game you really are ................................. Neville
February 23rd, 2022 10:25
Neville said:
one day ... maybe, I hope you realise just how good at this game you really are ................................. Neville
February 23rd, 2022 10:25
but unbeaten
Fay Slimm. said:
A heart that beats with unbeatable courage and hope comes out tops in this honest account of battering happenings - - a moving write my dear friend.
February 19th, 2022 17:11
Fay Slimm. said:
A heart that beats with unbeatable courage and hope comes out tops in this honest account of battering happenings - - a moving write my dear friend.
February 19th, 2022 17:11
but unbeaten
Garth Rakumakoe said:
A sheltering write, DA, laced with so much solace and comfort for the fragile heart. I love how the emotive message unfurls...
February 18th, 2022 05:44
Garth Rakumakoe said:
A sheltering write, DA, laced with so much solace and comfort for the fragile heart. I love how the emotive message unfurls...
February 18th, 2022 05:44
but unbeaten
Goldfinch60 said:
That beating heart overcomes all problems in our lives and will go on beating for a very long time.
Andy
February 18th, 2022 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
That beating heart overcomes all problems in our lives and will go on beating for a very long time.
Andy
February 18th, 2022 01:44
but unbeaten
Poetic Dan said:
Beautifully written my friend!
Thanks for sharing
February 17th, 2022 13:35
Poetic Dan said:
Beautifully written my friend!
Thanks for sharing
February 17th, 2022 13:35
but unbeaten
Michael Edwards said:
Another top notcher dusk - never call it a day.
February 17th, 2022 12:19
Michael Edwards said:
Another top notcher dusk - never call it a day.
February 17th, 2022 12:19
but unbeaten
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow the double entendre with the last line \"my beating heart\" was very clever. This poem is glorious! ✨👏
February 17th, 2022 09:21
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow the double entendre with the last line \"my beating heart\" was very clever. This poem is glorious! ✨👏
February 17th, 2022 09:21
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