Comments received on poems by dusk arising
for VJ Day
Fay Slimm. said:
The very sad fact of war heroes who get forgotten or those who did not return to hearth and home is so clearly presented here with your pen painting their sacrifice with legitimate questions - what answers we give re. peace ever after can never be said of all the wars since. Thanks for this solemn reminder D.A.
August 15th, 2020 10:10
Fay Slimm. said:
The very sad fact of war heroes who get forgotten or those who did not return to hearth and home is so clearly presented here with your pen painting their sacrifice with legitimate questions - what answers we give re. peace ever after can never be said of all the wars since. Thanks for this solemn reminder D.A.
August 15th, 2020 10:10
fate hangs
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong write d a.
Innocence certainly seems to be meaningless in this day and age.
Andy
August 10th, 2020 23:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong write d a.
Innocence certainly seems to be meaningless in this day and age.
Andy
August 10th, 2020 23:59
fate hangs
Fay Slimm. said:
A shudder succeeds this haunt of a read and stays long after D.A. - - -- Fate indeed often hangs on the uncaring neck of delusional judgement. This must go into my faves.
August 10th, 2020 07:58
Fay Slimm. said:
A shudder succeeds this haunt of a read and stays long after D.A. - - -- Fate indeed often hangs on the uncaring neck of delusional judgement. This must go into my faves.
August 10th, 2020 07:58
fate hangs
Neville said:
I think stating the obvious would be far too simple .. you have clearly thought long and hard about which words fit best and how and where to place them... even the bold font and large print cry out to be not only seen, but considered ....
when the finger is pointed.. a feeding frenzy aint often far behind..... is it.
... Neville
August 10th, 2020 07:46
Neville said:
I think stating the obvious would be far too simple .. you have clearly thought long and hard about which words fit best and how and where to place them... even the bold font and large print cry out to be not only seen, but considered ....
when the finger is pointed.. a feeding frenzy aint often far behind..... is it.
... Neville
August 10th, 2020 07:46
fate hangs
L. B. Mek said:
powerful and deftly woven words of volcanic rage,
appreciated the broken bell imagery from first stanza being reinforced within the physical shaping of the poem,
brilliant!
August 10th, 2020 04:54
L. B. Mek said:
powerful and deftly woven words of volcanic rage,
appreciated the broken bell imagery from first stanza being reinforced within the physical shaping of the poem,
brilliant!
August 10th, 2020 04:54
peacemaker
orchidee said:
A fine write dusk.
Someone said Revd Ian Paisley said once: \'I\'m a man of peace; and if anyone disagrees with that, I\'ll punch them on the nose!\' Doh!
August 4th, 2020 01:43
orchidee said:
A fine write dusk.
Someone said Revd Ian Paisley said once: \'I\'m a man of peace; and if anyone disagrees with that, I\'ll punch them on the nose!\' Doh!
August 4th, 2020 01:43
peacemaker
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful tribute to a man who will go down in history as a peacemaker.
Andy
August 4th, 2020 00:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful tribute to a man who will go down in history as a peacemaker.
Andy
August 4th, 2020 00:04
Johann Sebastion Woof
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write dusk - and comments on The Adventures of Fido and I. It\'ll cost \'em - \'the cheque\'s in the post\', they say to me!
July 30th, 2020 01:47
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write dusk - and comments on The Adventures of Fido and I. It\'ll cost \'em - \'the cheque\'s in the post\', they say to me!
July 30th, 2020 01:47
Johann Sebastion Woof
Goldfinch60 said:
Fido was there at the battle
Where armour and swords they did rattle
He barked to warn Orchi
Not to point to the sky
So Harold did then lose the battle.
July 30th, 2020 00:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Fido was there at the battle
Where armour and swords they did rattle
He barked to warn Orchi
Not to point to the sky
So Harold did then lose the battle.
July 30th, 2020 00:41
pulsing fluff
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful poem d a. I don\'t say this very often but into my favourites it goes.
Andy
July 29th, 2020 23:46
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful poem d a. I don\'t say this very often but into my favourites it goes.
Andy
July 29th, 2020 23:46
pulsing fluff
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow- wheee D.A. - there could be nothing more romantic than this collection of questions to a most belovéd. This one goes into my faves of course.
July 29th, 2020 03:51
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow- wheee D.A. - there could be nothing more romantic than this collection of questions to a most belovéd. This one goes into my faves of course.
July 29th, 2020 03:51
pulsing fluff
Michael Edwards said:
A beautiful write without the possibility of any intervention from Fido - super stuff dusk.
July 29th, 2020 03:50
Michael Edwards said:
A beautiful write without the possibility of any intervention from Fido - super stuff dusk.
July 29th, 2020 03:50
pulsing fluff
L. B. Mek said:
dreamy, with a soothing lyrical tone
such a poetic lullaby
July 29th, 2020 02:36
L. B. Mek said:
dreamy, with a soothing lyrical tone
such a poetic lullaby
July 29th, 2020 02:36
promise me
Neville said:
No need to apologise DA.. as far as I\'m concerned you could keep this popping up on a continuous loop ..
Neville
July 28th, 2020 06:13
Neville said:
No need to apologise DA.. as far as I\'m concerned you could keep this popping up on a continuous loop ..
Neville
July 28th, 2020 06:13
promise me
L. B. Mek said:
well I for one am very thankful you reposted,
the kind of raw emotionality that brings lumps to readers throats and has them giving spontaneous \'just because, hugs\' to their loved ones
July 28th, 2020 03:13
L. B. Mek said:
well I for one am very thankful you reposted,
the kind of raw emotionality that brings lumps to readers throats and has them giving spontaneous \'just because, hugs\' to their loved ones
July 28th, 2020 03:13
promise me
Michael Edwards said:
And you certainly don\'t need to apologise - fine write dusk.
July 28th, 2020 03:07
Michael Edwards said:
And you certainly don\'t need to apologise - fine write dusk.
July 28th, 2020 03:07
promise me
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Morning DA - Thank you for caring & sharing a very heart braking but all too true story of the bewilderment and heart rending sobs of a Child whose MUMMY has been swept into Eternity by One Glass Too Many. The MANTRA is *Dont Drink & Drive* but thousands ignore it every week - often with deadly consequences. A Child needs both Parents because a Mummy & Daddy bring different aspects of love to the Marriage & the Children. For a Lttle Girl to lose her Mummy is the most unkindest cut of ALL. The Littlr Girl needs daily reassurance *That Daddy will always Come Home !
Joy & Peace to You & Yours
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 💛💛
July 28th, 2020 00:39
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Morning DA - Thank you for caring & sharing a very heart braking but all too true story of the bewilderment and heart rending sobs of a Child whose MUMMY has been swept into Eternity by One Glass Too Many. The MANTRA is *Dont Drink & Drive* but thousands ignore it every week - often with deadly consequences. A Child needs both Parents because a Mummy & Daddy bring different aspects of love to the Marriage & the Children. For a Lttle Girl to lose her Mummy is the most unkindest cut of ALL. The Littlr Girl needs daily reassurance *That Daddy will always Come Home !
Joy & Peace to You & Yours
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 💛💛
July 28th, 2020 00:39
promise me
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an emotive write d a.
Yes daddy must always come home.
Andy
July 28th, 2020 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an emotive write d a.
Yes daddy must always come home.
Andy
July 28th, 2020 00:38
Trump
Neville said:
I certainly preferred his predecessor.... in fact, I think I would have preferred each of his 43 presidential predecessors.... correction, I am sure I would... 😎
July 27th, 2020 10:30
Neville said:
I certainly preferred his predecessor.... in fact, I think I would have preferred each of his 43 presidential predecessors.... correction, I am sure I would... 😎
July 27th, 2020 10:30
Trump
orchidee said:
Do they vote some people in as novelties?
I told them Americans not to trust someone with such a dogy barnet, but they didn\'t listen to me! lol.
July 27th, 2020 08:48
orchidee said:
Do they vote some people in as novelties?
I told them Americans not to trust someone with such a dogy barnet, but they didn\'t listen to me! lol.
July 27th, 2020 08:48
still warm sands (rewrite)
jarcher54 said:
Nice reminder of those almost silly, almost trivial times that ultimately matter most. Here our sun shone... well, we all think it is ours at the time, but you\'ve rightfully claimed this day\'s sun! Thanks for coining a term we\'ve always needed: chanced love. You got me with \"where chanced love rejoiced in the rain\" but I invoke my right to silence for further explanation. PS Thank all you youngsters for regularly and vividly reminding us of romantic love in all its disarray.
July 27th, 2020 02:25
jarcher54 said:
Nice reminder of those almost silly, almost trivial times that ultimately matter most. Here our sun shone... well, we all think it is ours at the time, but you\'ve rightfully claimed this day\'s sun! Thanks for coining a term we\'ve always needed: chanced love. You got me with \"where chanced love rejoiced in the rain\" but I invoke my right to silence for further explanation. PS Thank all you youngsters for regularly and vividly reminding us of romantic love in all its disarray.
July 27th, 2020 02:25
moment of release
Fay Slimm. said:
A sliver of memory which intrigues more with each line - I love the draw of your first stanza and leave the read wanting more of that moment of release - another absorbing write D.A.
July 26th, 2020 10:47
Fay Slimm. said:
A sliver of memory which intrigues more with each line - I love the draw of your first stanza and leave the read wanting more of that moment of release - another absorbing write D.A.
July 26th, 2020 10:47
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