Comments received on poems by dusk arising
bunch of criminals
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Morning DUSK - Thanks for an *Epic Poem* showcasing those of us who try to keep MPS afloat by posting several *Odd Odes* per week. Your comments on each *Criminal* is very Apt! Its true BRIAN & SMOKEY & I try to keep a low profile (Like Macavity - The Mystery Cat) to protect our our Spiritual Reputation - and like Fido the Reputation of MPS! All those you mention (incluing Your Goodself) are a Blessing (& Challenge!) to US with the Quality & Diversity of your Poetry. We have to remember sometimes that it is A POETRY SITE! As for the *Fifties* (30 years before Our Time) it was an *Epic Postwar Era* which will never be repeated in OUR TIME!
Thanks for caring & sharing
Blessings & Joy & Peace to You & Yours
Love - Angela & Brian & Smokey 🧡💙🤎
September 6th, 2020 03:35
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Morning DUSK - Thanks for an *Epic Poem* showcasing those of us who try to keep MPS afloat by posting several *Odd Odes* per week. Your comments on each *Criminal* is very Apt! Its true BRIAN & SMOKEY & I try to keep a low profile (Like Macavity - The Mystery Cat) to protect our our Spiritual Reputation - and like Fido the Reputation of MPS! All those you mention (incluing Your Goodself) are a Blessing (& Challenge!) to US with the Quality & Diversity of your Poetry. We have to remember sometimes that it is A POETRY SITE! As for the *Fifties* (30 years before Our Time) it was an *Epic Postwar Era* which will never be repeated in OUR TIME!
Thanks for caring & sharing
Blessings & Joy & Peace to You & Yours
Love - Angela & Brian & Smokey 🧡💙🤎
September 6th, 2020 03:35
into the woodgreen realm
Michael Edwards said:
Just brilliant - I shall print it off and keep it my collection.
September 6th, 2020 03:32
Michael Edwards said:
Just brilliant - I shall print it off and keep it my collection.
September 6th, 2020 03:32
into the woodgreen realm
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Excellent DA the woods and forests are the true cathedrals in the world where the soul can receive actual nourishment you hit the hail on the head.
Great piece today BRAVO!
September 6th, 2020 02:56
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Excellent DA the woods and forests are the true cathedrals in the world where the soul can receive actual nourishment you hit the hail on the head.
Great piece today BRAVO!
September 6th, 2020 02:56
into the woodgreen realm
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words of nature. Itoo keep some leaves that fall in front of me.
Yet another fine saxophonist d a.
Andy
September 6th, 2020 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words of nature. Itoo keep some leaves that fall in front of me.
Yet another fine saxophonist d a.
Andy
September 6th, 2020 01:27
into the woodgreen realm
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA here - GOOD MORNING DUSK - Thanks for a lovely Pic *n Poem to start the Day! Close to where we live is a small Wood with a Lake where one can commune with the Flora & Fauna and forget about COVID 19 & Boris & Trump for a while and feel that one was back in a less frenetic age.
Love the VIDEO - A very cool SAX for a quiet Sunday Morning! Love the title *Hasta Siempre Comandante ~ Until Forever Commandant* It is about Che Guevara.
Our Trees are telling us Summer is passing being replaced by the *Beauty of Autumn* not only does Mother Nature have her paintbrush out - painting the leaves - but some having done their duty are now falling to provide nutriants for the ground plants. Essex is not a Windy Couny so - as your Poem suggests they fall with such gentle dignity. Thanks for Sharing.
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey 🧡💙🤎
September 6th, 2020 01:23
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA here - GOOD MORNING DUSK - Thanks for a lovely Pic *n Poem to start the Day! Close to where we live is a small Wood with a Lake where one can commune with the Flora & Fauna and forget about COVID 19 & Boris & Trump for a while and feel that one was back in a less frenetic age.
Love the VIDEO - A very cool SAX for a quiet Sunday Morning! Love the title *Hasta Siempre Comandante ~ Until Forever Commandant* It is about Che Guevara.
Our Trees are telling us Summer is passing being replaced by the *Beauty of Autumn* not only does Mother Nature have her paintbrush out - painting the leaves - but some having done their duty are now falling to provide nutriants for the ground plants. Essex is not a Windy Couny so - as your Poem suggests they fall with such gentle dignity. Thanks for Sharing.
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey 🧡💙🤎
September 6th, 2020 01:23
bunch of criminals
Goldfinch60 said:
Being part of that \'mob\' I have had to ensure that my fellow criminals play their part and that also there will always be a way to avoid being caught. Yes we can have alibis all prepared by Fay but I have something else, I have an escape tunnel and I can see the light at the end of it.
Andy
September 6th, 2020 00:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Being part of that \'mob\' I have had to ensure that my fellow criminals play their part and that also there will always be a way to avoid being caught. Yes we can have alibis all prepared by Fay but I have something else, I have an escape tunnel and I can see the light at the end of it.
Andy
September 6th, 2020 00:58
bunch of criminals
Michael Edwards said:
Wow this was unexpected and what a grrrrreat accolade to some grrrreat poets - great stuff dusk.
September 5th, 2020 05:32
Michael Edwards said:
Wow this was unexpected and what a grrrrreat accolade to some grrrreat poets - great stuff dusk.
September 5th, 2020 05:32
bunch of criminals
Neville said:
How absolutely splendid old chap... every one off to a Teee .. hee hee
September 5th, 2020 02:27
Neville said:
How absolutely splendid old chap... every one off to a Teee .. hee hee
September 5th, 2020 02:27
bunch of criminals
Laura🌻 said:
D.A.,
Awesome!
You’re truly a talented writer.
An enjoyable read to say the least.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
September 5th, 2020 02:13
Laura🌻 said:
D.A.,
Awesome!
You’re truly a talented writer.
An enjoyable read to say the least.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
September 5th, 2020 02:13
bunch of criminals
Fay Slimm. said:
What an exposure of gang-play back in the day and how did you guess - you rascally knave that providing alibis was my main trade - - - a giggle a line is this my first read for which I send my very best thank you D.A. - - - - - p.s. do you work undercover for \"The Mail\" by any chance and if so how much do they pay \'ee my \'ansum ?
September 5th, 2020 02:08
Fay Slimm. said:
What an exposure of gang-play back in the day and how did you guess - you rascally knave that providing alibis was my main trade - - - a giggle a line is this my first read for which I send my very best thank you D.A. - - - - - p.s. do you work undercover for \"The Mail\" by any chance and if so how much do they pay \'ee my \'ansum ?
September 5th, 2020 02:08
bunch of criminals
orchidee said:
Good write dusk. I of course, being upper class, read about it in \'The Times\'. Fido won\'t read anything else. A dog that can read!
\'The Sun\' is far too common for me - garbage! lol.
September 5th, 2020 01:55
orchidee said:
Good write dusk. I of course, being upper class, read about it in \'The Times\'. Fido won\'t read anything else. A dog that can read!
\'The Sun\' is far too common for me - garbage! lol.
September 5th, 2020 01:55
his words
Goldfinch60 said:
Today is the tomorrow that you worried about yesterday.
Andy
September 4th, 2020 23:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Today is the tomorrow that you worried about yesterday.
Andy
September 4th, 2020 23:57
his words
Crowns4Christ said:
the funny thing is,is that tomorrow never comes,nice piece
September 4th, 2020 16:16
Crowns4Christ said:
the funny thing is,is that tomorrow never comes,nice piece
September 4th, 2020 16:16
his words
Fay Slimm. said:
A clever use of seeing time as we perceive it and when a tomorrow can be seen with anticipation we can do things never been done before..... an intriguing thought and thanks for sharing it D.A.
September 4th, 2020 16:08
Fay Slimm. said:
A clever use of seeing time as we perceive it and when a tomorrow can be seen with anticipation we can do things never been done before..... an intriguing thought and thanks for sharing it D.A.
September 4th, 2020 16:08
his words
Michael Edwards said:
Brilliant and I love the HR cartoon - he never fails.
September 4th, 2020 02:53
Michael Edwards said:
Brilliant and I love the HR cartoon - he never fails.
September 4th, 2020 02:53
his words
orchidee said:
Yes, I tried that too. But I never found it. You see, when it got to \'tomorrow\' it was always \'today\'.! Eh? lol.
September 4th, 2020 01:59
orchidee said:
Yes, I tried that too. But I never found it. You see, when it got to \'tomorrow\' it was always \'today\'.! Eh? lol.
September 4th, 2020 01:59
an interesting day
Neville said:
Seriously ... this is seriously good .. and even then some .. no kiddin ..
... an interesting day just got .... x
September 3rd, 2020 17:50
Neville said:
Seriously ... this is seriously good .. and even then some .. no kiddin ..
... an interesting day just got .... x
September 3rd, 2020 17:50
la mer
L. B. Mek said:
\'Call me Ishmael\' wrote Herman Melville as the starting gun of his leviathan of a book.
How acutely you characterised the voice of that same Ishmael: as the only survivor of that joyless tale.
Wouldn\'t we all share the same disdain for the Sea, if we had traversed the horrors he miraculously survived?
a brilliantly imaginative and empathetic write
September 3rd, 2020 02:05
L. B. Mek said:
\'Call me Ishmael\' wrote Herman Melville as the starting gun of his leviathan of a book.
How acutely you characterised the voice of that same Ishmael: as the only survivor of that joyless tale.
Wouldn\'t we all share the same disdain for the Sea, if we had traversed the horrors he miraculously survived?
a brilliantly imaginative and empathetic write
September 3rd, 2020 02:05
la mer
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write d a your lines :
\"No. For me gimmie
a day when the wind storms
and that sea boils
smashing angrily
on rocks and
wrecking coast roads.
Then tell me we\'re
masters of the planet!\"
really tell how it is, Nature is the Master of our planet and long may it be so.
I must go down to the sea again
To the lonely sea and the sky
And all I ask is a sandy beech
And firm footing to look at the sky
Andy
September 3rd, 2020 00:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write d a your lines :
\"No. For me gimmie
a day when the wind storms
and that sea boils
smashing angrily
on rocks and
wrecking coast roads.
Then tell me we\'re
masters of the planet!\"
really tell how it is, Nature is the Master of our planet and long may it be so.
I must go down to the sea again
To the lonely sea and the sky
And all I ask is a sandy beech
And firm footing to look at the sky
Andy
September 3rd, 2020 00:46
The tale of Louise rabbit and Roland the hedgehog
Poetic Dan said:
I shall need more time to practice your rhymes but when I get it right it will be a very nice flow... Blowing in the wind, maybe with the willow ;)
September 2nd, 2020 12:36
Poetic Dan said:
I shall need more time to practice your rhymes but when I get it right it will be a very nice flow... Blowing in the wind, maybe with the willow ;)
September 2nd, 2020 12:36
la mer
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Ahhhhhh DUSK in mentioning LA MER you have highlighted one of Brian & My fave Environments (see todays Poem) ! We love all types of Sailing - Near the Shore - Open Sea & Inland Lakes & Esturies & Rivers. Your Picture & Music is quite Dramatic & might put some people off Sailing & even Cruising - BUT - in essence it doesnt have to be like that. Brian & I are good swimmers and always wear Life Jackets when sailing and have survived Capsizes @ Sea. The SOLENT is the Channel between the Isle of Wight & Mainland England - It is five miles long and up to a mile wide and offers excellent conditions for Sailing ! It is warm - calm & very enjoyable this week & ALBACORS are very stable for a Four Person Crew ! All I can say is to each His Own & Brian & I are definitely *WATER BABIES* Thanks for sharing - A & B!
Blessings & Joy & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
September 2nd, 2020 11:01
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Ahhhhhh DUSK in mentioning LA MER you have highlighted one of Brian & My fave Environments (see todays Poem) ! We love all types of Sailing - Near the Shore - Open Sea & Inland Lakes & Esturies & Rivers. Your Picture & Music is quite Dramatic & might put some people off Sailing & even Cruising - BUT - in essence it doesnt have to be like that. Brian & I are good swimmers and always wear Life Jackets when sailing and have survived Capsizes @ Sea. The SOLENT is the Channel between the Isle of Wight & Mainland England - It is five miles long and up to a mile wide and offers excellent conditions for Sailing ! It is warm - calm & very enjoyable this week & ALBACORS are very stable for a Four Person Crew ! All I can say is to each His Own & Brian & I are definitely *WATER BABIES* Thanks for sharing - A & B!
Blessings & Joy & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
September 2nd, 2020 11:01
la mer
Fay Slimm. said:
Just expressed in many lines my appreciation for this ode to the sea and its power D.A. - but then pressed the wrong button and lost the lot....... ugh ! - -- -but please be assured I have listed this fervent piece in my favourites.
September 2nd, 2020 09:20
Fay Slimm. said:
Just expressed in many lines my appreciation for this ode to the sea and its power D.A. - but then pressed the wrong button and lost the lot....... ugh ! - -- -but please be assured I have listed this fervent piece in my favourites.
September 2nd, 2020 09:20
la mer
Neville said:
... Oh\' I do like to be beside the seaside..
... Oh\' I do so dig this DA...
... Not a word out of place but nigh on impossible to pre-empt .. and so glad you opted for the continental title too ... I think you are truly smitten ..
... no turning back the tide now you old poet you.....
... Neville :)
September 2nd, 2020 08:58
Neville said:
... Oh\' I do like to be beside the seaside..
... Oh\' I do so dig this DA...
... Not a word out of place but nigh on impossible to pre-empt .. and so glad you opted for the continental title too ... I think you are truly smitten ..
... no turning back the tide now you old poet you.....
... Neville :)
September 2nd, 2020 08:58
The tale of Louise rabbit and Roland the hedgehog
Fay Slimm. said:
Loud applause for this sweet love story - I have to confess it had me enthralled. Delighted to find a happy ending in this rhyme-for-all-ages dear friend.
September 1st, 2020 15:58
Fay Slimm. said:
Loud applause for this sweet love story - I have to confess it had me enthralled. Delighted to find a happy ending in this rhyme-for-all-ages dear friend.
September 1st, 2020 15:58
The tale of Louise rabbit and Roland the hedgehog
Michael Edwards said:
Well I\'m 77 but I\'m still a grandchild and I just love it - what an enchanting write - wish it was mine. More please Dusk.
September 1st, 2020 12:46
Michael Edwards said:
Well I\'m 77 but I\'m still a grandchild and I just love it - what an enchanting write - wish it was mine. More please Dusk.
September 1st, 2020 12:46
The tale of Louise rabbit and Roland the hedgehog
Laura🌻 said:
dusk arising,
A captivating tale that will enchant any child...or adult (in my case😉). Neville has a great suggestion about having it published.
I enjoyed the read.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
August 31st, 2020 06:43
Laura🌻 said:
dusk arising,
A captivating tale that will enchant any child...or adult (in my case😉). Neville has a great suggestion about having it published.
I enjoyed the read.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
August 31st, 2020 06:43
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