Comments received on poems by dusk arising
wild horses
Fay Slimm. said:
Some of your phrasing in this poem D.A. will ring true to many a heart - - - for me the phrase \"but I can\'t hide
you
...from my mind\" is creative and so inspiring and that is just one to remember - into my faves with this one for sure.
September 15th, 2020 16:16
Fay Slimm. said:
Some of your phrasing in this poem D.A. will ring true to many a heart - - - for me the phrase \"but I can\'t hide
you
...from my mind\" is creative and so inspiring and that is just one to remember - into my faves with this one for sure.
September 15th, 2020 16:16
wild horses
Neville said:
If there was a section for passion, love and regret... and prizes awarded... this would not remain unclassified for long... classy and classic DA and gold standard ... Nastrave 🍷👍
September 15th, 2020 12:27
Neville said:
If there was a section for passion, love and regret... and prizes awarded... this would not remain unclassified for long... classy and classic DA and gold standard ... Nastrave 🍷👍
September 15th, 2020 12:27
wild horses
Dove said:
Excellent formatting!
I never let anything slip away
I ran like a horse in the winds
Chased rainbows each day
Whispered sweet nothings
It was time who passed my way
September 15th, 2020 10:50
Dove said:
Excellent formatting!
I never let anything slip away
I ran like a horse in the winds
Chased rainbows each day
Whispered sweet nothings
It was time who passed my way
September 15th, 2020 10:50
wild horses
L. B. Mek said:
anyone who ever wished they had tried \'just one more time\' with a significant someone, can\'t help but relate to this words,
liked the distance in some of your lines, forces people to dwell on your words and thus reawaken their own dormant feelings they buried without confronting
September 15th, 2020 02:57
L. B. Mek said:
anyone who ever wished they had tried \'just one more time\' with a significant someone, can\'t help but relate to this words,
liked the distance in some of your lines, forces people to dwell on your words and thus reawaken their own dormant feelings they buried without confronting
September 15th, 2020 02:57
wild horses
Goldfinch60 said:
May that time come back d a and she runs back to you.
Andy
September 15th, 2020 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
May that time come back d a and she runs back to you.
Andy
September 15th, 2020 01:42
stood up
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words d a, I will meet you one day in Jake\'s Bar.
Andy
September 15th, 2020 00:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words d a, I will meet you one day in Jake\'s Bar.
Andy
September 15th, 2020 00:19
stood up
Fay Slimm. said:
Another compelling read with the scene so perfectly presented - so invitingly intriguing my friend......may we look forward to a sequel soon ?
September 14th, 2020 13:46
Fay Slimm. said:
Another compelling read with the scene so perfectly presented - so invitingly intriguing my friend......may we look forward to a sequel soon ?
September 14th, 2020 13:46
stood up
Dove said:
Well written! So that’s how it feels! Where’s the novel?
September 14th, 2020 09:43
Dove said:
Well written! So that’s how it feels! Where’s the novel?
September 14th, 2020 09:43
love beyond
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Afternoon DARK - Love the melancholy & throaty SAX ideal partner to this poem. Such Poems when put into print mode centre and look slim - we call them El Grecos.
We all experience sleeplessness from the *Tears of Yesterday* then mercifully into our Dreams come someone who brings Peace to our souls! Brian & I are still in our Honeymoon Period (6
Months!) but the Pain in our sub-consciousness\' will take time to erase! Thanks for sharing a beautiful but thought provoking Poem.
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela - Brian & Smokey !!!
September 10th, 2020 11:14
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Afternoon DARK - Love the melancholy & throaty SAX ideal partner to this poem. Such Poems when put into print mode centre and look slim - we call them El Grecos.
We all experience sleeplessness from the *Tears of Yesterday* then mercifully into our Dreams come someone who brings Peace to our souls! Brian & I are still in our Honeymoon Period (6
Months!) but the Pain in our sub-consciousness\' will take time to erase! Thanks for sharing a beautiful but thought provoking Poem.
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela - Brian & Smokey !!!
September 10th, 2020 11:14
love beyond
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a tender blessing of memories ooze from your lines - love than never gets lost in the years of loneliness deserves words like these my friend - a pleasure to read your versing of \"love beyond\" -
September 10th, 2020 05:30
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a tender blessing of memories ooze from your lines - love than never gets lost in the years of loneliness deserves words like these my friend - a pleasure to read your versing of \"love beyond\" -
September 10th, 2020 05:30
mill street bridge
L. B. Mek said:
art is at its best, when taking such a sombre and bleak subject, then creating something that transcends the tragedy it depicts
September 10th, 2020 03:23
L. B. Mek said:
art is at its best, when taking such a sombre and bleak subject, then creating something that transcends the tragedy it depicts
September 10th, 2020 03:23
love beyond
Goldfinch60 said:
May that peace be filled with the wonderful sound of the saxophone playing gently in the background.
Andy
September 10th, 2020 01:38
Goldfinch60 said:
May that peace be filled with the wonderful sound of the saxophone playing gently in the background.
Andy
September 10th, 2020 01:38
mill street bridge
MrNobody40 said:
Thats really good. I like simple, powerful. Say little but speak volumes.
September 9th, 2020 12:16
MrNobody40 said:
Thats really good. I like simple, powerful. Say little but speak volumes.
September 9th, 2020 12:16
mill street bridge
AwHec8 said:
Wow, Damn good write dusk arising. Oh and the music is kinda melancholy. Don
September 9th, 2020 09:04
AwHec8 said:
Wow, Damn good write dusk arising. Oh and the music is kinda melancholy. Don
September 9th, 2020 09:04
mill street bridge
Fay Slimm. said:
A haunt of a read and with your apt usage of short-line wording that tragic last crossing becomes ever more real. Sad but so vividly written.
September 9th, 2020 02:17
Fay Slimm. said:
A haunt of a read and with your apt usage of short-line wording that tragic last crossing becomes ever more real. Sad but so vividly written.
September 9th, 2020 02:17
mill street bridge
orchidee said:
Good write dusk.
I\'m gonna be heartless - it\'s a real pain you know, these people jumping in front of trains. It makes me late home. It\'s most inconvenient.
Can\'t they jump off a river bridge or something? Yes, I know - all I think about is me, me, me (lol).
September 9th, 2020 01:49
orchidee said:
Good write dusk.
I\'m gonna be heartless - it\'s a real pain you know, these people jumping in front of trains. It makes me late home. It\'s most inconvenient.
Can\'t they jump off a river bridge or something? Yes, I know - all I think about is me, me, me (lol).
September 9th, 2020 01:49
storm
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh what a tale - - you are a born story teller my friend - - and as for the ending - -- well you had us all under your spell and to round it off with but a dream was inspired........ great read for my evening refresher on what I had earlier missed. Just got to put this one into my faves dear D.A.
September 7th, 2020 12:34
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh what a tale - - you are a born story teller my friend - - and as for the ending - -- well you had us all under your spell and to round it off with but a dream was inspired........ great read for my evening refresher on what I had earlier missed. Just got to put this one into my faves dear D.A.
September 7th, 2020 12:34
storm
Crowns4Christ said:
dusk,you sure know how to paint a vivid picture,don\'t you hate them damned alarm clocks.haha
September 7th, 2020 10:12
Crowns4Christ said:
dusk,you sure know how to paint a vivid picture,don\'t you hate them damned alarm clocks.haha
September 7th, 2020 10:12
storm
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN here -Good Afternoon DUSK! I was born near the Sea (Liverpool NE Coast) and now I am back near the Sea - Essex SE Coast! For me the Sea always invokes the most spine chilling stories - of Life & Death & Love! In some respect Stories (Poems) that recount Dreams are the best of all - because they come from our Sub-conscious and therefore always have more of a *Ring of Reality* than mere fiction. The tragedy is we always wake up before the dénouement!
Loved FINLANDIA it struck the right tone for this soporific ode.
Thanks for sharing - Love Joy & Peace to You
Brian & Angela & Smokey Cat ! ! !
September 7th, 2020 09:52
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN here -Good Afternoon DUSK! I was born near the Sea (Liverpool NE Coast) and now I am back near the Sea - Essex SE Coast! For me the Sea always invokes the most spine chilling stories - of Life & Death & Love! In some respect Stories (Poems) that recount Dreams are the best of all - because they come from our Sub-conscious and therefore always have more of a *Ring of Reality* than mere fiction. The tragedy is we always wake up before the dénouement!
Loved FINLANDIA it struck the right tone for this soporific ode.
Thanks for sharing - Love Joy & Peace to You
Brian & Angela & Smokey Cat ! ! !
September 7th, 2020 09:52
storm
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Excellent again DA you\'ve hit a golden vein this week
\"Together we drew the boat into deeper water\"
That line alone gain me shivers
Details a very bonded relationship that encapsulates so may I\'m thinking
Loved the from very readable
And a smile at the end... the perfect storm
Thank you AGAIN!
September 7th, 2020 04:21
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Excellent again DA you\'ve hit a golden vein this week
\"Together we drew the boat into deeper water\"
That line alone gain me shivers
Details a very bonded relationship that encapsulates so may I\'m thinking
Loved the from very readable
And a smile at the end... the perfect storm
Thank you AGAIN!
September 7th, 2020 04:21
storm
orchidee said:
A fine write dusk. Ahh, a cue for another song from me. \'Finlandia\' is used for \'Be still, my soul, the Lord is on your side\'.
September 7th, 2020 01:48
orchidee said:
A fine write dusk. Ahh, a cue for another song from me. \'Finlandia\' is used for \'Be still, my soul, the Lord is on your side\'.
September 7th, 2020 01:48
storm
Goldfinch60 said:
I had an evening of Sibelius a couple of evenings ago, including Finlandia.
Andy
September 7th, 2020 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
I had an evening of Sibelius a couple of evenings ago, including Finlandia.
Andy
September 7th, 2020 01:42
storm
Goldfinch60 said:
You swine d a, I was so involved in the story, waiting to hear where you were going to end up with this lovely lady and then that damned alarm clock goes off and gives me my first laugh of the day. Thank you.
Andy
September 7th, 2020 00:55
Goldfinch60 said:
You swine d a, I was so involved in the story, waiting to hear where you were going to end up with this lovely lady and then that damned alarm clock goes off and gives me my first laugh of the day. Thank you.
Andy
September 7th, 2020 00:55
storm
Michael Edwards said:
Just read this - need to come back and read it again after my morning exercises - when I\'m fully awake - reads so well.
September 7th, 2020 00:51
Michael Edwards said:
Just read this - need to come back and read it again after my morning exercises - when I\'m fully awake - reads so well.
September 7th, 2020 00:51
bunch of criminals
Dove said:
Nice humor! The MPS regulars in your poetry, are blessed to have a talented writer
like yourself!
September 6th, 2020 15:20
Dove said:
Nice humor! The MPS regulars in your poetry, are blessed to have a talented writer
like yourself!
September 6th, 2020 15:20
into the woodgreen realm
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - a wonderful read laced with admirable imagery - crying a leaf enhanced the peace of that well described scene so well my friend. Thanks for sharing that tall wooden lady and her majestic blessings.
September 6th, 2020 10:58
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - a wonderful read laced with admirable imagery - crying a leaf enhanced the peace of that well described scene so well my friend. Thanks for sharing that tall wooden lady and her majestic blessings.
September 6th, 2020 10:58
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