Comments received on poems by JWKP98



I Will Love Again
Audax said:

Such an amazing literary piece to read! Thank you for sharing!

May 19th, 2020 04:19

No More Running, No More Shame
Fay Slimm said:

Everyone has a past that maybe they want to keep hidden and thanks for presenting these honest questions when someone wants to become a friend. An engaging write and thanks for sharing it.

March 8th, 2020 09:46

No More Running, No More Shame
angmaria said:

Wow 😯! I love this piece !
Very deep and true I also have scars from my past that even scared to tell the closest of people because will that change the view they have of me . So this was a beautiful to read love it !!

March 8th, 2020 06:13

A Book By its Cover
dusk arising said:

A very long winded way of saying what the title leads us to expect.

Well established wisdom repeated here. Will it be taken on board by readers who are new to the message contained. I hope so. Our world today seems so superficially judgemental.

February 29th, 2020 11:01

Six Best
Unsub said:

Orders given & carried out without question.

This poems mentions nothing of the innocent victims & their suffering.

Nothing else need be said!

February 24th, 2020 15:05

Six Best
LAWLESS said:

I’ve had many conversations with war vets.
It’s always surprised me that they didn’t even know what the war was all about. They were just following orders.

An okay poem that needs elaboration.

February 24th, 2020 11:40

Could Be The Best
Fay Slimm said:

This caring poem would surely affect a friend to \"get up and have a good go\" - a very engaging and well-crafted read.

September 11th, 2019 04:25

What\'s It Like?
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

GOOD AFTERNOON FRIEND ~ BRIAN (UK) HERE ~ Thanks for sharing your fantasy poem ~ based on the reminicsences of an American Soldier posted overseas to fight the very elusive Enemy in the GLOBAL WAR ON TERROR ! From the perspective of the British Military (Im 35 and live in a Garrison Town ~ from whom I hear many reports) you have painted an accurate piicture. Our Troops are Bewitched ~ Bothered & Bewildered by whats going on around them and in the UK due to BREXIT & BORIS. Sometimes our Militia serving overseas ~ are only told what the need to hear. As afr as the USA is concerned (in case nobody told you !) YOU HAVE BEEN TRUMPED !

Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours B & A 💙🧡💙

August 23rd, 2019 13:43

What\'s It Like?
orchidee said:

A fine write JW. Well I\'m no help - I\'m in the UK, so I dunno!

August 23rd, 2019 03:29

Does It End?
Christina8 said:

Ok, slow down, be careful, have a little hope. Things aren\'t so bad! Keep writing and thanks for sharing!

August 9th, 2019 23:34

Regrets of Today, None of Tomorrow
orchidee said:

A fine write JW.

July 21st, 2019 01:28

Falling
orchidee said:

I don\'t see us as being good in ourselves, but through Christ we are made righteous.
Do you mean moments, or times, of self-hatred here?

July 19th, 2019 06:39

Nature High
orchidee said:

A fine write JW.

July 18th, 2019 06:54

When the English Channel was Crossed
dusk arising said:

Drafted conscripts without choice. Still unable to be non Nazi themselves to \'brother\' americans of different skin color.

June 6th, 2019 14:03

Love Like it\'s Our Last
Goldfinch60 said:

Each day is special savour them with God.

October 1st, 2018 00:16

The Patient Sea and the Mighty Mountain
sylviasearcher said:

Thank you. I think like the mountain it takes time to learn the power of patience and persistence!

September 30th, 2018 04:20

The Patient Sea and the Mighty Mountain
Fay Slimm said:

A first class example wrapped well in the tale of mountain and sea. An enlightening read.

August 3rd, 2018 06:05

Accounts From A Walmart Stockman
Michael Edwards said:

Never a dull moment eh? Enjoyed the read.

December 27th, 2017 06:26