Comments received on poems by JWKP98
Silver Rail
sorenbarrett said:
A statement of poetic examination. Protection comes in many ways the armor of denial as thick as it gets if one doesn\'t feel it it doesn\'t exist. Well said.
October 31st, 2026 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
A statement of poetic examination. Protection comes in many ways the armor of denial as thick as it gets if one doesn\'t feel it it doesn\'t exist. Well said.
October 31st, 2026 04:07
Letters to Her #7
sorenbarrett said:
Here a decision has been made all or nothing, her or no one. Nicely rhymed it sends its message clearly
October 30th, 2026 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
Here a decision has been made all or nothing, her or no one. Nicely rhymed it sends its message clearly
October 30th, 2026 04:13
Letters to Her #6
sorenbarrett said:
There is conflict in this poem. Set in rhyme the desire of the author is not echoed by the one loved and the author has to settle for second best just proximity. Well written it addresses the complexities of love and life.
October 29th, 2026 04:42
sorenbarrett said:
There is conflict in this poem. Set in rhyme the desire of the author is not echoed by the one loved and the author has to settle for second best just proximity. Well written it addresses the complexities of love and life.
October 29th, 2026 04:42
Letters to Her #5
sorenbarrett said:
Good rhyme in these tercets an unusual rhyme pattern that I have used on occasion and works well here. Nicely done
October 28th, 2026 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
Good rhyme in these tercets an unusual rhyme pattern that I have used on occasion and works well here. Nicely done
October 28th, 2026 04:18
High Desert Scars
sorenbarrett said:
Majestic and powerful this poem appears a descriptive write but underneath I sense a metaphor as well with water at its core as a life force to be reconned with. Very nicely done
October 27th, 2026 04:19
sorenbarrett said:
Majestic and powerful this poem appears a descriptive write but underneath I sense a metaphor as well with water at its core as a life force to be reconned with. Very nicely done
October 27th, 2026 04:19
Letters to Her #4
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks romantically of a love relationship. Nicely worded it speaks in dreams. Well done
October 26th, 2026 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks romantically of a love relationship. Nicely worded it speaks in dreams. Well done
October 26th, 2026 04:11
Letters to Her #3
sorenbarrett said:
There is a taking charge in this write expressing the right to make one\'s own decisions. Well done
October 25th, 2026 04:03
sorenbarrett said:
There is a taking charge in this write expressing the right to make one\'s own decisions. Well done
October 25th, 2026 04:03
Letters to Her #2
Novaselic said:
I definitely feel the raw and realness to this poem and I think it was written very well. Great job :))
October 24th, 2026 09:49
Novaselic said:
I definitely feel the raw and realness to this poem and I think it was written very well. Great job :))
October 24th, 2026 09:49
Letters to Her #2
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic thank you of gratitude for help in regaining oneself. Nicely written
October 24th, 2026 03:51
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic thank you of gratitude for help in regaining oneself. Nicely written
October 24th, 2026 03:51
I\'ll Find the Meadow
sorenbarrett said:
There is a sad and melancholic feel to this write that turns into acceptance and in the end the belief that things will improve. Well done
October 23rd, 2026 04:49
sorenbarrett said:
There is a sad and melancholic feel to this write that turns into acceptance and in the end the belief that things will improve. Well done
October 23rd, 2026 04:49
Letters to Her #1
sorenbarrett said:
I love that you have named this what it is a crush, not love as many do but most accurately passion, a fixation, being smitten call it any of these. It is romantic in this sense and nicely composed.
October 22nd, 2026 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
I love that you have named this what it is a crush, not love as many do but most accurately passion, a fixation, being smitten call it any of these. It is romantic in this sense and nicely composed.
October 22nd, 2026 04:11
If I Can\'t Have It All
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reports a previous disillusionment in love preventing trust in the next and contentment in having nothing if one can not have the right relationship. Nicely crafted.
October 21st, 2026 03:40
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reports a previous disillusionment in love preventing trust in the next and contentment in having nothing if one can not have the right relationship. Nicely crafted.
October 21st, 2026 03:40
Just The Person You Bring Out
sorenbarrett said:
Here the poem begins in what seems like a rejection that is quickly turned into a compliment and grows into a worship. Nicely done in so few words.
October 20th, 2026 04:06
sorenbarrett said:
Here the poem begins in what seems like a rejection that is quickly turned into a compliment and grows into a worship. Nicely done in so few words.
October 20th, 2026 04:06
Just The Person You Bring Out
Jamiano said:
The simplicity of love in this poem is exceptional. Bravo!
October 20th, 2026 01:06
Jamiano said:
The simplicity of love in this poem is exceptional. Bravo!
October 20th, 2026 01:06
Say Ignorance is Bliss
Paul Bell said:
Yes, sometimes the rocks in the rucksack seem to drag you down forever.
Even taking them out doesn\'t change anything.
October 19th, 2026 13:40
Paul Bell said:
Yes, sometimes the rocks in the rucksack seem to drag you down forever.
Even taking them out doesn\'t change anything.
October 19th, 2026 13:40
Say Ignorance is Bliss
sorenbarrett said:
Many of this lines are recognizable from my own past and are easily identified with. Nicely written it carries the feeling of the common man. Well done
October 19th, 2026 04:23
sorenbarrett said:
Many of this lines are recognizable from my own past and are easily identified with. Nicely written it carries the feeling of the common man. Well done
October 19th, 2026 04:23
Indifferent
sorenbarrett said:
There are feelings of being used and anger at perceived past abuse in this poem. Well worded it vents this rage.
October 14th, 2026 04:32
sorenbarrett said:
There are feelings of being used and anger at perceived past abuse in this poem. Well worded it vents this rage.
October 14th, 2026 04:32
Ruined for Sunsets
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of beauty and its relative comparison. Nicely worded it tells its story of being enamored well.
September 30th, 2026 06:52
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of beauty and its relative comparison. Nicely worded it tells its story of being enamored well.
September 30th, 2026 06:52
Hermetic
sorenbarrett said:
A sad thing to say that one has taught you that being alone is better. Well written
September 21st, 2026 14:52
sorenbarrett said:
A sad thing to say that one has taught you that being alone is better. Well written
September 21st, 2026 14:52
The Mistakes I Made
sorenbarrett said:
There is sadness and regret as well as fear and pain in this write that asks how long until one is absolved. Great emotive piece
September 16th, 2026 05:07
sorenbarrett said:
There is sadness and regret as well as fear and pain in this write that asks how long until one is absolved. Great emotive piece
September 16th, 2026 05:07
Infatuation
sorenbarrett said:
Concern over emotional well being comes through. Well written
August 16th, 2026 19:27
sorenbarrett said:
Concern over emotional well being comes through. Well written
August 16th, 2026 19:27
Thirty Second Love of my Life
Cheeky Missy said:
It wasn\'t even a classic fling, just a lively interaction sparking more than meets the eye, yet like shooting stars how swiftly gone. Beautifully rendered with an excellent refrain and haunting poignancy.
August 5th, 2026 13:59
Cheeky Missy said:
It wasn\'t even a classic fling, just a lively interaction sparking more than meets the eye, yet like shooting stars how swiftly gone. Beautifully rendered with an excellent refrain and haunting poignancy.
August 5th, 2026 13:59
Thirty Second Love of my Life
sorenbarrett said:
A most romantic write of a brief moment in time. It seems in one way or another we all have had moments like this and they become fantasies and dreams that are never fulfilled but standards against which we measure others in a most unfair manner. Well written
August 5th, 2026 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
A most romantic write of a brief moment in time. It seems in one way or another we all have had moments like this and they become fantasies and dreams that are never fulfilled but standards against which we measure others in a most unfair manner. Well written
August 5th, 2026 04:11
Tripping Over Me
sorenbarrett said:
In search of a vacancy in the puzzle of life. Well written
June 2nd, 2026 05:26
sorenbarrett said:
In search of a vacancy in the puzzle of life. Well written
June 2nd, 2026 05:26
Isn’t it haunting how neither of us cry?
sorenbarrett said:
Here division and separation are preferred and presented as more viable than union. Nicely written it pulls for independence over reliance.
February 3rd, 2026 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
Here division and separation are preferred and presented as more viable than union. Nicely written it pulls for independence over reliance.
February 3rd, 2026 04:40
Out
sorenbarrett said:
There is a sense of being unsure here in this poem and about the relationship that seems to vacillate. Trepidation is the word the fits it most. Nicely written
February 2nd, 2026 03:51
sorenbarrett said:
There is a sense of being unsure here in this poem and about the relationship that seems to vacillate. Trepidation is the word the fits it most. Nicely written
February 2nd, 2026 03:51
Always the Next Step
Doggerel Dave said:
You\'ve had trouble with your mindsets in the past I think I recall. But this one feels OK; you seem very conscious of where you are going and how you might modify your attitude to climbing.
Just be not too hard on yourself, but above all, be safe.
Good luck and best wishes.
November 16th, 2022 07:24
Doggerel Dave said:
You\'ve had trouble with your mindsets in the past I think I recall. But this one feels OK; you seem very conscious of where you are going and how you might modify your attitude to climbing.
Just be not too hard on yourself, but above all, be safe.
Good luck and best wishes.
November 16th, 2022 07:24
Mountains and Myself
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully descriptive imagery
I get the sense you\'re not only
showcasing your passion
but also, trying to light
a small trigger of interest
so that others may benefit
from this sporting culture, mentality
of challenging yourself
to be more, than you - yourself
think
you can be..
a very powerful message, thanks for sharing
(sounds like a good activity
while overcoming a breakup..) lol
January 14th, 2022 06:33
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully descriptive imagery
I get the sense you\'re not only
showcasing your passion
but also, trying to light
a small trigger of interest
so that others may benefit
from this sporting culture, mentality
of challenging yourself
to be more, than you - yourself
think
you can be..
a very powerful message, thanks for sharing
(sounds like a good activity
while overcoming a breakup..) lol
January 14th, 2022 06:33
Mountains and Myself
Caring dove said:
I wouldn’t be able to do that . Sounds like a massive effort .. lol . But if it makes you feel good about yourself ))
January 14th, 2022 02:42
Caring dove said:
I wouldn’t be able to do that . Sounds like a massive effort .. lol . But if it makes you feel good about yourself ))
January 14th, 2022 02:42
Worth It
L. B. Mek said:
\'You might leave, we might work it out, ways it could go, there are two\'..
or maybe, you can find a way
to a third solution
where friendship is no pipe dream
and all your investments
in that relationship, aren\'t simply wasted..
(hope it works out
if not
hope can end it, on a good note)
not all breakups have to be the end of a relationship
December 17th, 2021 05:29
L. B. Mek said:
\'You might leave, we might work it out, ways it could go, there are two\'..
or maybe, you can find a way
to a third solution
where friendship is no pipe dream
and all your investments
in that relationship, aren\'t simply wasted..
(hope it works out
if not
hope can end it, on a good note)
not all breakups have to be the end of a relationship
December 17th, 2021 05:29
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