Comments received on poems by Neville
Casual Ties and Other Loose Associations
Cassie58 said:
Hope you get lots of sales Neville to support your chosen charities. I’ll be ordering my copy over the weekend. Well done you, 12 books and hopefully more will follow.
November 22nd, 2024 14:51
Cassie58 said:
Hope you get lots of sales Neville to support your chosen charities. I’ll be ordering my copy over the weekend. Well done you, 12 books and hopefully more will follow.
November 22nd, 2024 14:51
Casual Ties and Other Loose Associations
Jerry Reynolds said:
I will look nto that, Neville.
November 22nd, 2024 11:51
Jerry Reynolds said:
I will look nto that, Neville.
November 22nd, 2024 11:51
Casual Ties and Other Loose Associations
arqios said:
Your Muse like Tinkerbell in a lantern has ensconced itself in this latest anthology. Or was it ant-ology 🐜 the study of ants.
November 22nd, 2024 08:56
arqios said:
Your Muse like Tinkerbell in a lantern has ensconced itself in this latest anthology. Or was it ant-ology 🐜 the study of ants.
November 22nd, 2024 08:56
Amaterasu
Goldfinch60 said:
May that radiance never leave her or you Neville.
Andy
November 22nd, 2024 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
May that radiance never leave her or you Neville.
Andy
November 22nd, 2024 02:21
Amaterasu
Dan Williams said:
\"her halo shines brightest when I close my eyes\" indeed. Not sure why, maybe just dreams. Nice work.
November 22nd, 2024 00:06
Dan Williams said:
\"her halo shines brightest when I close my eyes\" indeed. Not sure why, maybe just dreams. Nice work.
November 22nd, 2024 00:06
Amaterasu
MendedFences27 said:
An ode to a Shinto Goddess of the Sun, and of womanly perfection. Your last line did it for me, expressing the power of her light. A wonderful poem. - Phil A.
November 21st, 2024 19:29
MendedFences27 said:
An ode to a Shinto Goddess of the Sun, and of womanly perfection. Your last line did it for me, expressing the power of her light. A wonderful poem. - Phil A.
November 21st, 2024 19:29
Amaterasu
Doggerel Dave said:
Close quarters, without an intervening veil or mist can be uncomfortable in my limited experience. In this instance the separate constituents form the perfect whole. Rounded smoothly for me, Neville.
November 21st, 2024 18:52
Doggerel Dave said:
Close quarters, without an intervening veil or mist can be uncomfortable in my limited experience. In this instance the separate constituents form the perfect whole. Rounded smoothly for me, Neville.
November 21st, 2024 18:52
Amaterasu
Cassie58 said:
Just lovely. Had to look this one up Neville. Her function to bring light to the world - the Shinto sun goddess. Reminds me of a beautiful sunset after a summer day and yet this has to be a romantic metaphor. Gorgeous poetry. .
November 21st, 2024 13:44
Cassie58 said:
Just lovely. Had to look this one up Neville. Her function to bring light to the world - the Shinto sun goddess. Reminds me of a beautiful sunset after a summer day and yet this has to be a romantic metaphor. Gorgeous poetry. .
November 21st, 2024 13:44
Amaterasu
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful write! Because it be day, and cloudy... I find myself gazing with my inner eye! And, truthfully, probably not too wise to stare directly at this goddess! LOL! Loved this poem! Great job! 👏
November 21st, 2024 11:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful write! Because it be day, and cloudy... I find myself gazing with my inner eye! And, truthfully, probably not too wise to stare directly at this goddess! LOL! Loved this poem! Great job! 👏
November 21st, 2024 11:34
Amaterasu
Jerry Reynolds said:
Looking directly at a Goddess is tricky business.
I prefer a side glance. Well done, Neville.
November 21st, 2024 10:34
Jerry Reynolds said:
Looking directly at a Goddess is tricky business.
I prefer a side glance. Well done, Neville.
November 21st, 2024 10:34
Amaterasu
arqios said:
Let’s take a dive into deep waters for a brief moment: Inner vision is a profound ability to perceive and internalize moments of transcendent beauty and significance beyond the physical realm. It allows us to capture the ethereal essence of experiences, transforming them into deeply personal, spiritual reflections that resonate within our soul. This inward gaze, like that of the observer of Amaterasu, embraces an interplay of light and shadow, presence and absence, revealing the eternal and divine within fleeting moments of our lives. Or perhaps she was just so dazzling so as to effect such a meditation.
November 21st, 2024 06:09
arqios said:
Let’s take a dive into deep waters for a brief moment: Inner vision is a profound ability to perceive and internalize moments of transcendent beauty and significance beyond the physical realm. It allows us to capture the ethereal essence of experiences, transforming them into deeply personal, spiritual reflections that resonate within our soul. This inward gaze, like that of the observer of Amaterasu, embraces an interplay of light and shadow, presence and absence, revealing the eternal and divine within fleeting moments of our lives. Or perhaps she was just so dazzling so as to effect such a meditation.
November 21st, 2024 06:09
Amaterasu
sorenbarrett said:
The Shinto sun goddess one of the three precious children. The moon and the storm may make a mist as well. Beautifully written, Neville.
November 21st, 2024 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
The Shinto sun goddess one of the three precious children. The moon and the storm may make a mist as well. Beautifully written, Neville.
November 21st, 2024 04:18
Amaterasu
orchidee said:
Well, you can\'t mean KP, unless you mean radiance of old trouts! lol
November 21st, 2024 03:42
orchidee said:
Well, you can\'t mean KP, unless you mean radiance of old trouts! lol
November 21st, 2024 03:42
Amaterasu
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh! Rendered with a strong and lively poignancy which transports the dainty imagery beautifully adorning it to heights that leave me nearly gasping for a breath from the heady indulgence, ah, where hast thou taken me dear writer? Thank you very much for sharing.
November 21st, 2024 02:44
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh! Rendered with a strong and lively poignancy which transports the dainty imagery beautifully adorning it to heights that leave me nearly gasping for a breath from the heady indulgence, ah, where hast thou taken me dear writer? Thank you very much for sharing.
November 21st, 2024 02:44
Crushed
NafisaSB said:
such a powerful message in just three lines.
hats off to your creativity
November 21st, 2024 02:27
NafisaSB said:
such a powerful message in just three lines.
hats off to your creativity
November 21st, 2024 02:27
Crushed
Cheeky Missy said:
Delicate as the morsels which compose the snow and prettily rendered with a haunting poignancy and excellent imagery, me likes right well. Thank you for sharing.
November 21st, 2024 02:13
Cheeky Missy said:
Delicate as the morsels which compose the snow and prettily rendered with a haunting poignancy and excellent imagery, me likes right well. Thank you for sharing.
November 21st, 2024 02:13
Crushed
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ll go with the snow - or rather not.
Homeless? a careless society.
November 20th, 2024 08:58
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ll go with the snow - or rather not.
Homeless? a careless society.
November 20th, 2024 08:58
Crushed
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Homelessness is awful, and as we get to this time of year, it is deadly. Thank you for these brief, but powerful words! ❤️
November 20th, 2024 07:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Homelessness is awful, and as we get to this time of year, it is deadly. Thank you for these brief, but powerful words! ❤️
November 20th, 2024 07:40
Crushed
arqios said:
…snails in the snow 🐌 what an image! The sentiment echoes in the soul. Winter is not a season to be destitute.
November 20th, 2024 05:38
arqios said:
…snails in the snow 🐌 what an image! The sentiment echoes in the soul. Winter is not a season to be destitute.
November 20th, 2024 05:38
Crushed
sorenbarrett said:
Neville the subtlety of the third line is amazing broken homes for snails that are now homeless. Simply lovely.
November 20th, 2024 05:31
sorenbarrett said:
Neville the subtlety of the third line is amazing broken homes for snails that are now homeless. Simply lovely.
November 20th, 2024 05:31
Crushed
Cassie58 said:
It is a travesty that anyone is living on the streets. When the temperatures drop it is a nightmare for those poor souls. I am also thinking about some of our pensioners who will freeze in their own homes because they can’t afford to heat them. All stuff that could easily be rectified by a government that cares about the welfare of its own people. Your brevity here creates much thought and many images Neville. A lonely existence. Have a good Wednesday Neville.
November 20th, 2024 04:13
Cassie58 said:
It is a travesty that anyone is living on the streets. When the temperatures drop it is a nightmare for those poor souls. I am also thinking about some of our pensioners who will freeze in their own homes because they can’t afford to heat them. All stuff that could easily be rectified by a government that cares about the welfare of its own people. Your brevity here creates much thought and many images Neville. A lonely existence. Have a good Wednesday Neville.
November 20th, 2024 04:13
Crushed
orchidee said:
Homeless is horrid at any time of year, we know, but more so in winter.
November 20th, 2024 03:20
orchidee said:
Homeless is horrid at any time of year, we know, but more so in winter.
November 20th, 2024 03:20
Culled
Thad Wilk said:
👍👍
great haiku, thoughts too!
artfully expressed thank you
your message so true~
Thanks for sharing my friend!
Best regards ✌️ peace. Thad
November 19th, 2024 19:28
Thad Wilk said:
👍👍
great haiku, thoughts too!
artfully expressed thank you
your message so true~
Thanks for sharing my friend!
Best regards ✌️ peace. Thad
November 19th, 2024 19:28
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