Comments received on poems by Neville
Crumbs
Accidental Poet said:
That you would speak of such things shows that for at least for a moment all was right. 🌹
September 11th, 2024 21:51
Accidental Poet said:
That you would speak of such things shows that for at least for a moment all was right. 🌹
September 11th, 2024 21:51
Crumbs
MendedFences27 said:
Wow! This profoundly sad scene was filled with longing. Trying to remember someone, but not able to reconstruct the entire image, but recalling only a small fragment, enough to bring back the sense of her \"vulnerability.\" Even the \"crumbs of \" your \"croissant\" would not cooperate. A tender and poignant moment laid out in free verse and capturing the poetic moment. - Phil A.
September 11th, 2024 21:14
MendedFences27 said:
Wow! This profoundly sad scene was filled with longing. Trying to remember someone, but not able to reconstruct the entire image, but recalling only a small fragment, enough to bring back the sense of her \"vulnerability.\" Even the \"crumbs of \" your \"croissant\" would not cooperate. A tender and poignant moment laid out in free verse and capturing the poetic moment. - Phil A.
September 11th, 2024 21:14
Crumbs
Cassie58 said:
Moments when the heart and mind are drifting in a sea of what has gone before. Someone is painfully missed. Only the crumbs remain. Beautifully penned Neville. Hope you had a fantastic holiday. Good to find you back.
September 11th, 2024 14:44
Cassie58 said:
Moments when the heart and mind are drifting in a sea of what has gone before. Someone is painfully missed. Only the crumbs remain. Beautifully penned Neville. Hope you had a fantastic holiday. Good to find you back.
September 11th, 2024 14:44
Crumbs
Cheeky Missy said:
Poetry gathers up the crumbs and tenders the same as the delicacy they truly are on the silver platter. The heartbreaking poignancy of this piece resonates and is rather exquisite. Excellently detailed and beautifully rendered. Thank you for sharing.
September 11th, 2024 14:23
Cheeky Missy said:
Poetry gathers up the crumbs and tenders the same as the delicacy they truly are on the silver platter. The heartbreaking poignancy of this piece resonates and is rather exquisite. Excellently detailed and beautifully rendered. Thank you for sharing.
September 11th, 2024 14:23
For All Those Occasions When Sometimes is More Than Enough
Cheeky Missy said:
Precisely. Thus is too true and excellently rendered in sweet brevity. Thank you.
September 11th, 2024 13:22
Cheeky Missy said:
Precisely. Thus is too true and excellently rendered in sweet brevity. Thank you.
September 11th, 2024 13:22
For All Those Occasions When Sometimes is More Than Enough
sorenbarrett said:
Neville I had to think about this one for a while and couldn\'t quite decide where it was because of the depth of your write or if my mind was out of alignment. Have missed your writtings
September 11th, 2024 06:09
sorenbarrett said:
Neville I had to think about this one for a while and couldn\'t quite decide where it was because of the depth of your write or if my mind was out of alignment. Have missed your writtings
September 11th, 2024 06:09
For All Those Occasions When Sometimes is More Than Enough
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Neville, everything must be in line for perfection.
Andy
September 11th, 2024 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Neville, everything must be in line for perfection.
Andy
September 11th, 2024 01:54
For All Those Occasions When Sometimes is More Than Enough
Doggerel Dave said:
Feels sometimes that it\'s Zen......Neville.... I\'m feeling displaced and disoriented.....
September 10th, 2024 18:45
Doggerel Dave said:
Feels sometimes that it\'s Zen......Neville.... I\'m feeling displaced and disoriented.....
September 10th, 2024 18:45
For All Those Occasions When Sometimes is More Than Enough
Tony36 said:
Great write
September 10th, 2024 14:37
Tony36 said:
Great write
September 10th, 2024 14:37
For My Granddaughter on Her First Birthday & Before He Got Broken
Neilton said:
Two poems!! I\'m impressed! Amazing work here Neville!
August 30th, 2024 16:16
Neilton said:
Two poems!! I\'m impressed! Amazing work here Neville!
August 30th, 2024 16:16
For My Granddaughter on Her First Birthday & Before He Got Broken
Bella Shepard said:
A grandfather\'s love touches this first beautiful poem. The second, the story of the effect life has upon us. The two I think inextricably entwined. Lucky you!
August 25th, 2024 10:32
Bella Shepard said:
A grandfather\'s love touches this first beautiful poem. The second, the story of the effect life has upon us. The two I think inextricably entwined. Lucky you!
August 25th, 2024 10:32
For My Granddaughter on Her First Birthday & Before He Got Broken
Goldfinch60 said:
Two good ones Neville.
Many happy returns to your Granddaughter.
Andy
August 24th, 2024 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Two good ones Neville.
Many happy returns to your Granddaughter.
Andy
August 24th, 2024 01:26
For My Granddaughter on Her First Birthday & Before He Got Broken
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic work, my friend.
August 23rd, 2024 15:16
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic work, my friend.
August 23rd, 2024 15:16
For My Granddaughter on Her First Birthday & Before He Got Broken
MendedFences27 said:
A poet\'s brain and a lover\'s heart, or is it the other way round? One year old, it\'s a beautiful time.
Too much handling can ruin the fruit. Sometimes well-intentioned people are prone to overdo it. A man eventually finds his own path, and hopes he survived it all, intact. Today\'s offering is like Chinese chicken, sweet and sour. - Phil A.
August 23rd, 2024 14:51
MendedFences27 said:
A poet\'s brain and a lover\'s heart, or is it the other way round? One year old, it\'s a beautiful time.
Too much handling can ruin the fruit. Sometimes well-intentioned people are prone to overdo it. A man eventually finds his own path, and hopes he survived it all, intact. Today\'s offering is like Chinese chicken, sweet and sour. - Phil A.
August 23rd, 2024 14:51
For My Granddaughter on Her First Birthday & Before He Got Broken
orchidee said:
A fine write N. Lovely poem on grand-daughter too.
KP is broken - her botox cracked. Now she has fallen to bits. Or should it be - now she\'s all saggy - a sight I may never recover from! heehee.
August 23rd, 2024 06:25
orchidee said:
A fine write N. Lovely poem on grand-daughter too.
KP is broken - her botox cracked. Now she has fallen to bits. Or should it be - now she\'s all saggy - a sight I may never recover from! heehee.
August 23rd, 2024 06:25
For My Granddaughter on Her First Birthday & Before He Got Broken
sorenbarrett said:
The first endearing the second experience is the best learning tool. We do treat boys and girls differently as least traditionally so. Girls with tenderness and boys with toughness. Should we? I don\'t know.
August 23rd, 2024 06:08
sorenbarrett said:
The first endearing the second experience is the best learning tool. We do treat boys and girls differently as least traditionally so. Girls with tenderness and boys with toughness. Should we? I don\'t know.
August 23rd, 2024 06:08
For My Granddaughter on Her First Birthday & Before He Got Broken
Cassie58 said:
You know Neville after reading both of these poems a few times, I have come to the conclusion, that despite it all, you do have a razor sharp brain and a bloomin petal soft heart under that dark exterior. Love your poem for Astrid and The Making of a Broken Man is still my current reading. Worth every penny and knowing the proceeds are going to good causes, is the icing on the cake. Happy Friday my friend.
August 23rd, 2024 04:52
Cassie58 said:
You know Neville after reading both of these poems a few times, I have come to the conclusion, that despite it all, you do have a razor sharp brain and a bloomin petal soft heart under that dark exterior. Love your poem for Astrid and The Making of a Broken Man is still my current reading. Worth every penny and knowing the proceeds are going to good causes, is the icing on the cake. Happy Friday my friend.
August 23rd, 2024 04:52
For My Granddaughter on Her First Birthday & Before He Got Broken
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes, anywhere now - Thanks for the reminder, Neville.
These two went over my head, really, as I have managed to produce no issue...
August 23rd, 2024 02:57
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes, anywhere now - Thanks for the reminder, Neville.
These two went over my head, really, as I have managed to produce no issue...
August 23rd, 2024 02:57
About to Be Forgot
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that there will be a new light waiting for you Neville.
Andy
August 23rd, 2024 01:03
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that there will be a new light waiting for you Neville.
Andy
August 23rd, 2024 01:03
About to Be Forgot
MendedFences27 said:
Some things are best left unlit, hidden in the shadows, so to speak. However, they can rear their ugly faces into our minds when we least expect it. Depending on their impact on us they may never be forgotten completely.
Your poem says all these things in a more poetic way. And the use of candlelight is a powerful symbolism for a separated relationship. - Phil A.
August 22nd, 2024 09:49
MendedFences27 said:
Some things are best left unlit, hidden in the shadows, so to speak. However, they can rear their ugly faces into our minds when we least expect it. Depending on their impact on us they may never be forgotten completely.
Your poem says all these things in a more poetic way. And the use of candlelight is a powerful symbolism for a separated relationship. - Phil A.
August 22nd, 2024 09:49
About to Be Forgot
Doggerel Dave said:
Probably for the best............................
August 22nd, 2024 07:47
Doggerel Dave said:
Probably for the best............................
August 22nd, 2024 07:47
About to Be Forgot
Cassie58 said:
Some things are best forgotten, particularly when they end really badly. It appears here that the ghosts are out playing on the mind.
tainted, shared history - ouch
I think I would be inclined to burn some sage.
I can’t help thinking that these memories will cross pathways again. A great write Neville.Happy Thursday.
August 22nd, 2024 05:29
Cassie58 said:
Some things are best forgotten, particularly when they end really badly. It appears here that the ghosts are out playing on the mind.
tainted, shared history - ouch
I think I would be inclined to burn some sage.
I can’t help thinking that these memories will cross pathways again. A great write Neville.Happy Thursday.
August 22nd, 2024 05:29
About to Be Forgot
orchidee said:
Good write N.
That\'s what I\'m about to do with KP - the last line of your poem. lol.
August 22nd, 2024 05:17
orchidee said:
Good write N.
That\'s what I\'m about to do with KP - the last line of your poem. lol.
August 22nd, 2024 05:17
About to Be Forgot
sorenbarrett said:
Memories that prick the soul of things promoting guilt done and comfort felt. all to be lost in forgetfulness. Lovely
August 22nd, 2024 05:12
sorenbarrett said:
Memories that prick the soul of things promoting guilt done and comfort felt. all to be lost in forgetfulness. Lovely
August 22nd, 2024 05:12
Made Like a Mountain & A Brief Conversation in A Bar About Bears ..
Goldfinch60 said:
You\'ve seen that TWIX advert haven\'t you Neville.
Andy
https://youtu.be/CXxEGG1v074
August 22nd, 2024 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
You\'ve seen that TWIX advert haven\'t you Neville.
Andy
https://youtu.be/CXxEGG1v074
August 22nd, 2024 01:14
Made Like a Mountain & A Brief Conversation in A Bar About Bears ..
Cassie58 said:
You know however I read that first poem, I do believe you are being Wednesday wicked lol. As for bears, I keep thinking of the bare necessities of life. So I guess there is a link there somewhere .Happy Wednesday Neville.
August 21st, 2024 09:14
Cassie58 said:
You know however I read that first poem, I do believe you are being Wednesday wicked lol. As for bears, I keep thinking of the bare necessities of life. So I guess there is a link there somewhere .Happy Wednesday Neville.
August 21st, 2024 09:14
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