Comments received on poems by Neville



Signs of Things to Come
Tony36 said:

Excellent write Nevilie

December 1st, 2024 13:56

Signs of Things to Come
Tristan Robert Lange said:

I sniff something satirical about this piece, just like you might encounter another alliterative affirmation acknowledging the unquestionable quality of this wonderful work. Well done, friend. šŸ‘ Now, I am going to my male-exclusive bathroom at homeā€¦which my wife tells me is the tree in the woods behind the house. šŸ˜‚

December 1st, 2024 13:33

Signs of Things to Come
orchidee said:

Now where\'s my handbag - bet KP\'s got it! lol.

December 1st, 2024 10:08

Signs of Things to Come
rebellion_in_sanity said:

Satire at its best in this gradually inverting world. The best is the touch of absurdity towards the end. I felt the adsurdity managed to convey the incongruity of the situation quite eloquently. Fantastic poem!

December 1st, 2024 08:03

Signs of Things to Come
arqios said:

What did we identify as today... guess it doesn\'t really matter now that all is fluid and in a constant state of dysphoria... someone please respect the inner turmoil that boils and roils within me!

December 1st, 2024 06:25

Signs of Things to Come
sorenbarrett said:

If I didnā€™t know that it was biological, I would think that it was being taught in the schools. Maybe itā€™s just a passing fashion. A fun lighthearted read that gave me a smile and thatā€™s all it takes to be counted as good for me

December 1st, 2024 05:01

Lying & Truly
cellinic said:

There\'s no reason to lie, unless for the sake of salvation, Neville. Best wishes,

December 1st, 2024 04:10

Still Art For Artā€™s Sake
Cheeky Missy said:

If only I\'d not initially taken up that form of art I might join you, but having already dabbled in it, I\'ll leave it to you others whose hopes in such fair prospects have still a leg to stand on. I prefer sonnets, for myself. Daintily rendered with excellent imagery and a teasing poignancy, thank you for sharing.

November 30th, 2024 18:10

Still Art For Artā€™s Sake
sorenbarrett said:

The makings of an artist. Whether paint or print the color comes through. Well done, mate.

November 30th, 2024 12:40

Still Art For Artā€™s Sake
Tony36 said:

Excellent write Nevilie

November 30th, 2024 11:44

Still Art For Artā€™s Sake
Cassie58 said:

Your creative side always shines through Neville . Whether words in your poetry books or paint on canvas or pastel drawings. Once creative, you donā€™t lose it. Itā€™s always there even if you havenā€™t painted or drawn in pastels for a while. šŸ’œ

November 30th, 2024 11:38

Still Art For Artā€™s Sake
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Art for artā€™s sake sounds like a great day to me! Well done friend! I now want to pull out my charcoals and pastels and go to town! šŸŒ¹šŸ‘

November 30th, 2024 07:50

Still Art For Artā€™s Sake
rebellion_in_sanity said:

Stunning poem; felt like telling me that one\'s regret of dying creativity is compelling him to be uniquely creative.. beautiful perspective...loved it!

November 30th, 2024 07:04

Still Art For Artā€™s Sake
cellinic said:

very nice and deep, Neville! Best regards,

November 30th, 2024 06:20

Still Art For Artā€™s Sake
arqios said:

Now the products of these efforts I genuinely love to see!

November 30th, 2024 06:17

Still Art For Artā€™s Sake
orchidee said:

Good write N.

November 30th, 2024 03:53

Still Art For Artā€™s Sake
Goldfinch60 said:

I could let you have most of those except the canvases Neville but I could probably get them from my daughter.

Andy



November 30th, 2024 02:43

Such a Waste of Fine Words
Goldfinch60 said:

Thank you dear. LOL

Andy

November 30th, 2024 02:09

Still Art For Artā€™s Sake
Michael Edwards said:

Come join me in the studio. I\'m still happiest when trying out some new technique or explrinf different ideas. Nice one Neville.

November 30th, 2024 02:04

Still Art For Artā€™s Sake
Doggerel Dave said:

En plein air?

November 30th, 2024 01:14

Such a Waste of Fine Words
Cheeky Missy said:

Tongue in cheek and thereby excused for rousing a saucy and sassy smirk in concluding, despite the sentiment being so seemingly dour, shall we say? Nothing like the waste of sich words, the recipient unable to realize until it is far too late how very valuable they were. Charming and beautifully rendered with a touching poignancy and suitably dainty imagery. Thank you for sharing.

November 29th, 2024 14:01

Such a Waste of Fine Words
MendedFences27 said:

\"Fine words,\" like fine wine must struggle to attain their sweetness. Then, the work begins, to sort them out, to refine them, to contain them within a chosen framework and atmosphere. Then, they remain quiet until the correct time for their consumption. I raise my glass to you for this vintage poem. - Phil A.

November 29th, 2024 13:21

Such a Waste of Fine Words
Tristan Robert Lange said:

KP and trouts aside, hereā€™s looking at you Orchi, šŸ˜‚ this is a mighty fine poem, Neville! Seriously, not a waste of words in my book, and I love how ā€œI love youā€ is nestled in there without ever saying it. Not sure if this is a current love or a former one, but this poem delivers, my friend! It certainly, regardless of the words, was NOT a waste of time. šŸŒ¹šŸ‘ Bravo!

November 29th, 2024 10:41

Such a Waste of Fine Words
Cassie58 said:

Absolutely ace. Will appeal to EVERY soft hearted woman on the planet. Perfect love poetry Neville. šŸ™‚

November 29th, 2024 08:31

Such a Waste of Fine Words
Doggerel Dave said:

Never (or is that neva?) put it in writing - You never know what some jumped up legal eagle might be able to make of it.
(Why is it that these pieces of yours end up in your blue volumes without commentary, Neville?????)šŸ˜‡

November 29th, 2024 07:01

Such a Waste of Fine Words
rebellion_in_sanity said:

Love the feeling of profound longing and perhaps a sense of admission that if the words were right then one might have had his dreams fullfilled. Advanced apologies for misinterpretation

November 29th, 2024 06:10

Such a Waste of Fine Words
arqios said:

Oh man, to be on the other side of that, receiving such pronouncements! Just WOW! Faved and Liked. ā¤ļø ā­ļø

November 29th, 2024 06:01

Such a Waste of Fine Words
sorenbarrett said:

Oh Neville how many discarded love poems I have written. This speaks right to the heart of it. Some seem too serious some too full of levity and others just plain corny so the floor is littered with paper.

November 29th, 2024 04:32

Such a Waste of Fine Words
orchidee said:

I never intended my writings to be a love poem for KP in the first place! My pom to here is \'The History of Trouts\'. lol.

November 29th, 2024 03:24

Green Tangents
cellinic said:

Impressive write

November 29th, 2024 02:28



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