Comments received on poems by Neville
Signs of Things to Come
Dan Williams said:
Hard time picking which restroom to use, are you? Girls in the Boy Scouts? Arrrrrrrrrrgggggggghhhhhhhh.
December 2nd, 2024 00:40
Dan Williams said:
Hard time picking which restroom to use, are you? Girls in the Boy Scouts? Arrrrrrrrrrgggggggghhhhhhhh.
December 2nd, 2024 00:40
Unreasonable Logic
Cheeky Missy said:
Funny. Posted on my 50th birthday with the 1st stanza haunting me ever since I read it because it seemed to be my beloved late father\'s sentiment, and yet I saw him weep in losing my mother. Since they agreed among themselves [Mum and my oldest brothers] that I was the other pea in the pod to him, being remarkably similar excepting in sex, I wonder.
Rendered in characteristic style, yet hitting too close to home, tis beautifully rendered with great imagery and a very haunting poignancy.
December 1st, 2024 18:59
Cheeky Missy said:
Funny. Posted on my 50th birthday with the 1st stanza haunting me ever since I read it because it seemed to be my beloved late father\'s sentiment, and yet I saw him weep in losing my mother. Since they agreed among themselves [Mum and my oldest brothers] that I was the other pea in the pod to him, being remarkably similar excepting in sex, I wonder.
Rendered in characteristic style, yet hitting too close to home, tis beautifully rendered with great imagery and a very haunting poignancy.
December 1st, 2024 18:59
Signs of Things to Come
Cheeky Missy said:
Your \"...daughter, Dave, who--\" must surely feel kinship with Ryan [Reynolds] and Blake [Lively/Reynolds]\' daughter James, and the host of other misnamed girls....and you blame the drinking water. Hmm. Is your \"skirt\" a kilt? Either way, delightfully rendered in excellent good humor with sparkling imagery. Thank you for sharing. [To think I\'m still disgusted with my dad\'s sister who named my cousin, my female cousin, Bronte, twenty years ago, like that was acceptable.]
December 1st, 2024 16:05
Cheeky Missy said:
Your \"...daughter, Dave, who--\" must surely feel kinship with Ryan [Reynolds] and Blake [Lively/Reynolds]\' daughter James, and the host of other misnamed girls....and you blame the drinking water. Hmm. Is your \"skirt\" a kilt? Either way, delightfully rendered in excellent good humor with sparkling imagery. Thank you for sharing. [To think I\'m still disgusted with my dad\'s sister who named my cousin, my female cousin, Bronte, twenty years ago, like that was acceptable.]
December 1st, 2024 16:05
Signs of Things to Come
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I sniff something satirical about this piece, just like you might encounter another alliterative affirmation acknowledging the unquestionable quality of this wonderful work. Well done, friend. 👏 Now, I am going to my male-exclusive bathroom at home…which my wife tells me is the tree in the woods behind the house. 😂
December 1st, 2024 13:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I sniff something satirical about this piece, just like you might encounter another alliterative affirmation acknowledging the unquestionable quality of this wonderful work. Well done, friend. 👏 Now, I am going to my male-exclusive bathroom at home…which my wife tells me is the tree in the woods behind the house. 😂
December 1st, 2024 13:33
Signs of Things to Come
orchidee said:
Now where\'s my handbag - bet KP\'s got it! lol.
December 1st, 2024 10:08
orchidee said:
Now where\'s my handbag - bet KP\'s got it! lol.
December 1st, 2024 10:08
Signs of Things to Come
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Satire at its best in this gradually inverting world. The best is the touch of absurdity towards the end. I felt the adsurdity managed to convey the incongruity of the situation quite eloquently. Fantastic poem!
December 1st, 2024 08:03
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Satire at its best in this gradually inverting world. The best is the touch of absurdity towards the end. I felt the adsurdity managed to convey the incongruity of the situation quite eloquently. Fantastic poem!
December 1st, 2024 08:03
Signs of Things to Come
arqios said:
What did we identify as today... guess it doesn\'t really matter now that all is fluid and in a constant state of dysphoria... someone please respect the inner turmoil that boils and roils within me!
December 1st, 2024 06:25
arqios said:
What did we identify as today... guess it doesn\'t really matter now that all is fluid and in a constant state of dysphoria... someone please respect the inner turmoil that boils and roils within me!
December 1st, 2024 06:25
Signs of Things to Come
sorenbarrett said:
If I didn’t know that it was biological, I would think that it was being taught in the schools. Maybe it’s just a passing fashion. A fun lighthearted read that gave me a smile and that’s all it takes to be counted as good for me
December 1st, 2024 05:01
sorenbarrett said:
If I didn’t know that it was biological, I would think that it was being taught in the schools. Maybe it’s just a passing fashion. A fun lighthearted read that gave me a smile and that’s all it takes to be counted as good for me
December 1st, 2024 05:01
Lying & Truly
cellinic said:
There\'s no reason to lie, unless for the sake of salvation, Neville. Best wishes,
December 1st, 2024 04:10
cellinic said:
There\'s no reason to lie, unless for the sake of salvation, Neville. Best wishes,
December 1st, 2024 04:10
Still Art For Art’s Sake
Cheeky Missy said:
If only I\'d not initially taken up that form of art I might join you, but having already dabbled in it, I\'ll leave it to you others whose hopes in such fair prospects have still a leg to stand on. I prefer sonnets, for myself. Daintily rendered with excellent imagery and a teasing poignancy, thank you for sharing.
November 30th, 2024 18:10
Cheeky Missy said:
If only I\'d not initially taken up that form of art I might join you, but having already dabbled in it, I\'ll leave it to you others whose hopes in such fair prospects have still a leg to stand on. I prefer sonnets, for myself. Daintily rendered with excellent imagery and a teasing poignancy, thank you for sharing.
November 30th, 2024 18:10
Still Art For Art’s Sake
sorenbarrett said:
The makings of an artist. Whether paint or print the color comes through. Well done, mate.
November 30th, 2024 12:40
sorenbarrett said:
The makings of an artist. Whether paint or print the color comes through. Well done, mate.
November 30th, 2024 12:40
Still Art For Art’s Sake
Cassie58 said:
Your creative side always shines through Neville . Whether words in your poetry books or paint on canvas or pastel drawings. Once creative, you don’t lose it. It’s always there even if you haven’t painted or drawn in pastels for a while. 💜
November 30th, 2024 11:38
Cassie58 said:
Your creative side always shines through Neville . Whether words in your poetry books or paint on canvas or pastel drawings. Once creative, you don’t lose it. It’s always there even if you haven’t painted or drawn in pastels for a while. 💜
November 30th, 2024 11:38
Still Art For Art’s Sake
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Art for art’s sake sounds like a great day to me! Well done friend! I now want to pull out my charcoals and pastels and go to town! 🌹👏
November 30th, 2024 07:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Art for art’s sake sounds like a great day to me! Well done friend! I now want to pull out my charcoals and pastels and go to town! 🌹👏
November 30th, 2024 07:50
Still Art For Art’s Sake
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Stunning poem; felt like telling me that one\'s regret of dying creativity is compelling him to be uniquely creative.. beautiful perspective...loved it!
November 30th, 2024 07:04
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Stunning poem; felt like telling me that one\'s regret of dying creativity is compelling him to be uniquely creative.. beautiful perspective...loved it!
November 30th, 2024 07:04
Still Art For Art’s Sake
cellinic said:
very nice and deep, Neville! Best regards,
November 30th, 2024 06:20
cellinic said:
very nice and deep, Neville! Best regards,
November 30th, 2024 06:20
Still Art For Art’s Sake
arqios said:
Now the products of these efforts I genuinely love to see!
November 30th, 2024 06:17
arqios said:
Now the products of these efforts I genuinely love to see!
November 30th, 2024 06:17
Still Art For Art’s Sake
Goldfinch60 said:
I could let you have most of those except the canvases Neville but I could probably get them from my daughter.
Andy
November 30th, 2024 02:43
Goldfinch60 said:
I could let you have most of those except the canvases Neville but I could probably get them from my daughter.
Andy
November 30th, 2024 02:43
Still Art For Art’s Sake
Michael Edwards said:
Come join me in the studio. I\'m still happiest when trying out some new technique or explrinf different ideas. Nice one Neville.
November 30th, 2024 02:04
Michael Edwards said:
Come join me in the studio. I\'m still happiest when trying out some new technique or explrinf different ideas. Nice one Neville.
November 30th, 2024 02:04
Such a Waste of Fine Words
Cheeky Missy said:
Tongue in cheek and thereby excused for rousing a saucy and sassy smirk in concluding, despite the sentiment being so seemingly dour, shall we say? Nothing like the waste of sich words, the recipient unable to realize until it is far too late how very valuable they were. Charming and beautifully rendered with a touching poignancy and suitably dainty imagery. Thank you for sharing.
November 29th, 2024 14:01
Cheeky Missy said:
Tongue in cheek and thereby excused for rousing a saucy and sassy smirk in concluding, despite the sentiment being so seemingly dour, shall we say? Nothing like the waste of sich words, the recipient unable to realize until it is far too late how very valuable they were. Charming and beautifully rendered with a touching poignancy and suitably dainty imagery. Thank you for sharing.
November 29th, 2024 14:01
Such a Waste of Fine Words
MendedFences27 said:
\"Fine words,\" like fine wine must struggle to attain their sweetness. Then, the work begins, to sort them out, to refine them, to contain them within a chosen framework and atmosphere. Then, they remain quiet until the correct time for their consumption. I raise my glass to you for this vintage poem. - Phil A.
November 29th, 2024 13:21
MendedFences27 said:
\"Fine words,\" like fine wine must struggle to attain their sweetness. Then, the work begins, to sort them out, to refine them, to contain them within a chosen framework and atmosphere. Then, they remain quiet until the correct time for their consumption. I raise my glass to you for this vintage poem. - Phil A.
November 29th, 2024 13:21
Such a Waste of Fine Words
Tristan Robert Lange said:
KP and trouts aside, here’s looking at you Orchi, 😂 this is a mighty fine poem, Neville! Seriously, not a waste of words in my book, and I love how “I love you” is nestled in there without ever saying it. Not sure if this is a current love or a former one, but this poem delivers, my friend! It certainly, regardless of the words, was NOT a waste of time. 🌹👏 Bravo!
November 29th, 2024 10:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
KP and trouts aside, here’s looking at you Orchi, 😂 this is a mighty fine poem, Neville! Seriously, not a waste of words in my book, and I love how “I love you” is nestled in there without ever saying it. Not sure if this is a current love or a former one, but this poem delivers, my friend! It certainly, regardless of the words, was NOT a waste of time. 🌹👏 Bravo!
November 29th, 2024 10:41
Such a Waste of Fine Words
Cassie58 said:
Absolutely ace. Will appeal to EVERY soft hearted woman on the planet. Perfect love poetry Neville. 🙂
November 29th, 2024 08:31
Cassie58 said:
Absolutely ace. Will appeal to EVERY soft hearted woman on the planet. Perfect love poetry Neville. 🙂
November 29th, 2024 08:31
Such a Waste of Fine Words
Doggerel Dave said:
Never (or is that neva?) put it in writing - You never know what some jumped up legal eagle might be able to make of it.
(Why is it that these pieces of yours end up in your blue volumes without commentary, Neville?????)😇
November 29th, 2024 07:01
Doggerel Dave said:
Never (or is that neva?) put it in writing - You never know what some jumped up legal eagle might be able to make of it.
(Why is it that these pieces of yours end up in your blue volumes without commentary, Neville?????)😇
November 29th, 2024 07:01
Such a Waste of Fine Words
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Love the feeling of profound longing and perhaps a sense of admission that if the words were right then one might have had his dreams fullfilled. Advanced apologies for misinterpretation
November 29th, 2024 06:10
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Love the feeling of profound longing and perhaps a sense of admission that if the words were right then one might have had his dreams fullfilled. Advanced apologies for misinterpretation
November 29th, 2024 06:10
Such a Waste of Fine Words
arqios said:
Oh man, to be on the other side of that, receiving such pronouncements! Just WOW! Faved and Liked. ❤️ ⭐️
November 29th, 2024 06:01
arqios said:
Oh man, to be on the other side of that, receiving such pronouncements! Just WOW! Faved and Liked. ❤️ ⭐️
November 29th, 2024 06:01
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