Comments received on poems by Neville
A Hand Full of Ashes
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Neville. Haunting in a way.
December 2nd, 2024 14:58
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Neville. Haunting in a way.
December 2nd, 2024 14:58
A Hand Full of Ashes
orchidee said:
Ahh, a menu suggestion in your title of what to give KP for dinner! lol.
December 2nd, 2024 09:07
orchidee said:
Ahh, a menu suggestion in your title of what to give KP for dinner! lol.
December 2nd, 2024 09:07
A Hand Full of Ashes
2781 said:
I could hazard a guess, but I won\'t. Only to say, we all end up ashes.
December 2nd, 2024 07:12
2781 said:
I could hazard a guess, but I won\'t. Only to say, we all end up ashes.
December 2nd, 2024 07:12
A Hand Full of Ashes
sorenbarrett said:
Haunting and gets better with each read. It reads with melancholy and although as light as ashes it contains a darkness. I look too deep at times but couldn\'t help but wonder if there was meaning in the alliteration of three g\'s gulls gargoiyles and girls and the three g\'s of Masonry, A wonderful write Neville
December 2nd, 2024 06:21
sorenbarrett said:
Haunting and gets better with each read. It reads with melancholy and although as light as ashes it contains a darkness. I look too deep at times but couldn\'t help but wonder if there was meaning in the alliteration of three g\'s gulls gargoiyles and girls and the three g\'s of Masonry, A wonderful write Neville
December 2nd, 2024 06:21
A Hand Full of Ashes
arqios said:
Oh so deeply melancholic, of masks, isolation and most strikingly of inherited struggles. A superbly touching exploration of grief and deep personal loss. I salute the strength and the engagement of these that we carry hidden within us.
December 2nd, 2024 06:00
arqios said:
Oh so deeply melancholic, of masks, isolation and most strikingly of inherited struggles. A superbly touching exploration of grief and deep personal loss. I salute the strength and the engagement of these that we carry hidden within us.
December 2nd, 2024 06:00
A Hand Full of Ashes
cellinic said:
Wonderful poem, with a subtle aura of implicitly recognized meanings... Best regards,
December 2nd, 2024 04:22
cellinic said:
Wonderful poem, with a subtle aura of implicitly recognized meanings... Best regards,
December 2nd, 2024 04:22
Signs of Things to Come
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Neville but in these days and ages there seems to be a war going on about what sex we are.
Andy
December 2nd, 2024 02:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Neville but in these days and ages there seems to be a war going on about what sex we are.
Andy
December 2nd, 2024 02:19
Signs of Things to Come
Dan Williams said:
Hard time picking which restroom to use, are you? Girls in the Boy Scouts? Arrrrrrrrrrgggggggghhhhhhhh.
December 2nd, 2024 00:40
Dan Williams said:
Hard time picking which restroom to use, are you? Girls in the Boy Scouts? Arrrrrrrrrrgggggggghhhhhhhh.
December 2nd, 2024 00:40
Unreasonable Logic
Cheeky Missy said:
Funny. Posted on my 50th birthday with the 1st stanza haunting me ever since I read it because it seemed to be my beloved late father\'s sentiment, and yet I saw him weep in losing my mother. Since they agreed among themselves [Mum and my oldest brothers] that I was the other pea in the pod to him, being remarkably similar excepting in sex, I wonder.
Rendered in characteristic style, yet hitting too close to home, tis beautifully rendered with great imagery and a very haunting poignancy.
December 1st, 2024 18:59
Cheeky Missy said:
Funny. Posted on my 50th birthday with the 1st stanza haunting me ever since I read it because it seemed to be my beloved late father\'s sentiment, and yet I saw him weep in losing my mother. Since they agreed among themselves [Mum and my oldest brothers] that I was the other pea in the pod to him, being remarkably similar excepting in sex, I wonder.
Rendered in characteristic style, yet hitting too close to home, tis beautifully rendered with great imagery and a very haunting poignancy.
December 1st, 2024 18:59
Signs of Things to Come
Cheeky Missy said:
Your \"...daughter, Dave, who--\" must surely feel kinship with Ryan [Reynolds] and Blake [Lively/Reynolds]\' daughter James, and the host of other misnamed girls....and you blame the drinking water. Hmm. Is your \"skirt\" a kilt? Either way, delightfully rendered in excellent good humor with sparkling imagery. Thank you for sharing. [To think I\'m still disgusted with my dad\'s sister who named my cousin, my female cousin, Bronte, twenty years ago, like that was acceptable.]
December 1st, 2024 16:05
Cheeky Missy said:
Your \"...daughter, Dave, who--\" must surely feel kinship with Ryan [Reynolds] and Blake [Lively/Reynolds]\' daughter James, and the host of other misnamed girls....and you blame the drinking water. Hmm. Is your \"skirt\" a kilt? Either way, delightfully rendered in excellent good humor with sparkling imagery. Thank you for sharing. [To think I\'m still disgusted with my dad\'s sister who named my cousin, my female cousin, Bronte, twenty years ago, like that was acceptable.]
December 1st, 2024 16:05
Signs of Things to Come
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I sniff something satirical about this piece, just like you might encounter another alliterative affirmation acknowledging the unquestionable quality of this wonderful work. Well done, friend. 👏 Now, I am going to my male-exclusive bathroom at home…which my wife tells me is the tree in the woods behind the house. 😂
December 1st, 2024 13:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I sniff something satirical about this piece, just like you might encounter another alliterative affirmation acknowledging the unquestionable quality of this wonderful work. Well done, friend. 👏 Now, I am going to my male-exclusive bathroom at home…which my wife tells me is the tree in the woods behind the house. 😂
December 1st, 2024 13:33
Signs of Things to Come
orchidee said:
Now where\'s my handbag - bet KP\'s got it! lol.
December 1st, 2024 10:08
orchidee said:
Now where\'s my handbag - bet KP\'s got it! lol.
December 1st, 2024 10:08
Signs of Things to Come
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Satire at its best in this gradually inverting world. The best is the touch of absurdity towards the end. I felt the adsurdity managed to convey the incongruity of the situation quite eloquently. Fantastic poem!
December 1st, 2024 08:03
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Satire at its best in this gradually inverting world. The best is the touch of absurdity towards the end. I felt the adsurdity managed to convey the incongruity of the situation quite eloquently. Fantastic poem!
December 1st, 2024 08:03
Signs of Things to Come
arqios said:
What did we identify as today... guess it doesn\'t really matter now that all is fluid and in a constant state of dysphoria... someone please respect the inner turmoil that boils and roils within me!
December 1st, 2024 06:25
arqios said:
What did we identify as today... guess it doesn\'t really matter now that all is fluid and in a constant state of dysphoria... someone please respect the inner turmoil that boils and roils within me!
December 1st, 2024 06:25
Signs of Things to Come
sorenbarrett said:
If I didn’t know that it was biological, I would think that it was being taught in the schools. Maybe it’s just a passing fashion. A fun lighthearted read that gave me a smile and that’s all it takes to be counted as good for me
December 1st, 2024 05:01
sorenbarrett said:
If I didn’t know that it was biological, I would think that it was being taught in the schools. Maybe it’s just a passing fashion. A fun lighthearted read that gave me a smile and that’s all it takes to be counted as good for me
December 1st, 2024 05:01
Lying & Truly
cellinic said:
There\'s no reason to lie, unless for the sake of salvation, Neville. Best wishes,
December 1st, 2024 04:10
cellinic said:
There\'s no reason to lie, unless for the sake of salvation, Neville. Best wishes,
December 1st, 2024 04:10
Still Art For Art’s Sake
Cheeky Missy said:
If only I\'d not initially taken up that form of art I might join you, but having already dabbled in it, I\'ll leave it to you others whose hopes in such fair prospects have still a leg to stand on. I prefer sonnets, for myself. Daintily rendered with excellent imagery and a teasing poignancy, thank you for sharing.
November 30th, 2024 18:10
Cheeky Missy said:
If only I\'d not initially taken up that form of art I might join you, but having already dabbled in it, I\'ll leave it to you others whose hopes in such fair prospects have still a leg to stand on. I prefer sonnets, for myself. Daintily rendered with excellent imagery and a teasing poignancy, thank you for sharing.
November 30th, 2024 18:10
Still Art For Art’s Sake
sorenbarrett said:
The makings of an artist. Whether paint or print the color comes through. Well done, mate.
November 30th, 2024 12:40
sorenbarrett said:
The makings of an artist. Whether paint or print the color comes through. Well done, mate.
November 30th, 2024 12:40
Still Art For Art’s Sake
Cassie58 said:
Your creative side always shines through Neville . Whether words in your poetry books or paint on canvas or pastel drawings. Once creative, you don’t lose it. It’s always there even if you haven’t painted or drawn in pastels for a while. 💜
November 30th, 2024 11:38
Cassie58 said:
Your creative side always shines through Neville . Whether words in your poetry books or paint on canvas or pastel drawings. Once creative, you don’t lose it. It’s always there even if you haven’t painted or drawn in pastels for a while. 💜
November 30th, 2024 11:38
Still Art For Art’s Sake
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Art for art’s sake sounds like a great day to me! Well done friend! I now want to pull out my charcoals and pastels and go to town! 🌹👏
November 30th, 2024 07:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Art for art’s sake sounds like a great day to me! Well done friend! I now want to pull out my charcoals and pastels and go to town! 🌹👏
November 30th, 2024 07:50
Still Art For Art’s Sake
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Stunning poem; felt like telling me that one\'s regret of dying creativity is compelling him to be uniquely creative.. beautiful perspective...loved it!
November 30th, 2024 07:04
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Stunning poem; felt like telling me that one\'s regret of dying creativity is compelling him to be uniquely creative.. beautiful perspective...loved it!
November 30th, 2024 07:04
Still Art For Art’s Sake
cellinic said:
very nice and deep, Neville! Best regards,
November 30th, 2024 06:20
cellinic said:
very nice and deep, Neville! Best regards,
November 30th, 2024 06:20
Still Art For Art’s Sake
arqios said:
Now the products of these efforts I genuinely love to see!
November 30th, 2024 06:17
arqios said:
Now the products of these efforts I genuinely love to see!
November 30th, 2024 06:17
Still Art For Art’s Sake
Goldfinch60 said:
I could let you have most of those except the canvases Neville but I could probably get them from my daughter.
Andy
November 30th, 2024 02:43
Goldfinch60 said:
I could let you have most of those except the canvases Neville but I could probably get them from my daughter.
Andy
November 30th, 2024 02:43
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